Goodbye Fluttershy

by Rarity Rose

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Angel, Fluttershy, Applejack, Gore
Length: 1112

Apple Jack feels that it's a great day for a murder and Fluttershy is the first pony she sees...

Applejack woke up to singing birds, bright sun and a gentle breeze. The day was perfect, but she couldn't ignore the weird feeling in her head. She took a small canter through the acres, hoping the beauty of nature would clear her head of this strange feeling. She stopped as she noticed something small and shiny on the ground. A small apple cutter she thought. Imagine holding that sharp, pointy blade... Cutting... Slicing... Stabbing.... Yes, she thought This would be a perfect day for a murder

Published 2014-01-15 05:30:13 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-15 05:30:13 UTC

Fluttershy

Oh my, to any pony that can possibly be hearing this, please get me out of here. I have been in this torturous cell for days and I have had no food, I have hardly been able to stretch, and it is so painfully dark. I hear an animal in pain, oh dear I think it is poor Angel. Oh no, oh dear Celestia I can't take this anymore... No Fluttershy, you mustn't think like that... Just... HELP MEEEEeee....

Apple Jack trotted down the stairs to the basement in the barn, the apple cutters clanging together as she carried them down.
"Fluttershy..."
she called. All Fluttershy could manage was a painful moan and Apple Jack could hear chains scraping the cold concrete ground as Fluttershy tried to move. Apple Jack let out a small laugh.
" Alright, let's get started."
She put the apple cutters on the ground by Fluttershy.
"Stay still now, Flutters..! Hahahahaha...."
Apple Jack put her hoof on one of Fluttershy's hind legs and picked up an apple cutter with her other hoof.
"See these Flutters? These are called apple cutters! Can you say apple cutters?"
Fluttershy cried out in desperation and pain. Apple Jack laughed.
"Do you want to see what apple cutters do?"
Fluttershy's face had a small tear rolling down it.
"Apple Jack.. Why.. Why would you scare meeee like this...?"
" I guess..."
Apple Jack said
"it was a great day for a murder"
Apple Jack started singing creepily
"It was a great day for a murder... a great day for a murder... a great day for a MURDER!!!"
Apple Jack slashed a cut into Fluttershy's cutie mark. Fluttershy screamed out in pain but couldn't manage to say anything as she was crying too hard. She could feel the warm sticky blood flowing down her flank.
"ST... S s STO..."
Fluttershy couldn't say anything over her screaming and sobbing. Apple Jack laughed.
"You've got a new cutie mark now, Flutter! Bloody slashes!"
Apple Jack put her hoof under Fluttershy's wing.
"Such soft, beautiful wings you have there. I have always been so jealous of you pegasi, carelessly flying, soaring... Well I guess I can get some wings now!"
Apple Jack put the blade on the edge of Fluttershy's wing.
"No... Please not..."
Fluttershy whispered, her voice all croaky from crying and screaming.
"Please don't disturb me Fluttershy,"
Apple Jack said.
" This will be hard work I'm gonna need to concentrate."
She lined up the blade then started cutting, easily cutting through the skin. Fluttershy was screaming and crying in pain and fear, shivering as the burning pain shot through her body. She could feel her blood flowing down her back and bits of her skin falling on her.
"aw crap"
she heard Apple Jack say. Apple Jack held up a bent and cracked blade.
"I guess it wasn't strong enough to cut through after all! Hehe."
Fluttershy was shocked with pain every time her half cut off wing moved.
"Anyway Flutters, I've got some else to show you."
Apple Jack walked over to the other side of the cell, and picked up a small animal in her mouth.
"Hey Fluttershy guess who came to say hello!"
She dropped the rabbit by Fluttershy's head.
"a.. Angel?" she croaked. "Angel!"
Fluttershy felt a sudden warm rush of happiness through her. Angel was making pathetic squeaking noises, not able to say anything because of the tape around his mouth. Fluttershy stared at angel.
"Angel bunny... wh.. what's wrong?"
Fluttershy gasped as she saw the duct tape around Angels mouth and the hoof cuffs on his paws.
"STOP!!!" Fluttershy screamed. "PLEASE NO, NOT HIM!! LEAVE HIM ALONE PLEASE NO DONT DO ANYYTHING!"
Fluttershy was crying.
"Okay then Fluttershy, if it really hurts you to see Angel being tortured then I won't."
Apple Jack put her hoof on Angels stomach.
"Ha! Just kidding!"
Apple Jack bent her head down and put her tooth on Angel's ear and started pulling. Fluttershy was letting out pained ear-piercing screams.
"NOOO! NOO! STOP! PLEAAAASE!!!"
Apple Jack grinned and kept pulling. Angel started screaming out in pain, and this caused Fluttershy to scream and cry even louder. Angel's ear was half off, the skin ripping and tearing and the veins and flesh being stretched to breaking point. Sunddenly there was a loud, sickening pop as Angel's ear tore off and fell on the ground. Fluttershy's voice was so croaky and broken she couldn't say anything, just moan and cough.
"Okay, how about the next ear!"
Apple Jack laughed. She pulled out another apple cutter and placed it under Angel's ear.
"Dont expect much Fluttershy, this one will be short and easy."
And it was, just a quick slice, a small burst of blood and that was all.
"Oh don't be so sad Fluttershy, your stupid little rabbit will be put out of his misery!"
Apple Jack put her hoof on Angel's body.
" Three Two One!"
Apple Jack started slowly mauling Angel to death. Angel let out muffled screams and squeaks of pain. Fluttershy was sobbing, using all her strength she tried to talk.
"appl app u y st o no..."
she was cut off as she suddenly spat out blood.
"Oh Fluttershy, I'm afraid we have to leave our little session here. My family are probably preparing dinner now!"
Apple Jack picked up Angels dying body and threw it against the wall, leaving him to slowly die of blood loss.
"Goodbye!"
she called as she pushed Fluttershy's cell door closed. Fluttershy could hardly hear her hoof steps up the stairs over the blood roaring in her ears. Angel, the most precious thing in her life was gone. She was sliced and bloody, afraid of what was to come. Tears started rolling down her face again.

WHY CANT I JUST GO HOME?! Fluttershy was screaming on the inside. WHY WHY WHY! Please! She has taken my Angel out of my life, I do not want this pain! I thought good things came to good ponies! I TRIED!!! What did I do? What did I do to disappoint everypony. How did I fail them!? I TRIED MY BEST!!! I am SO SORRY I didn't mean to hurt anyone! I thought people liked me!!! PLEASE LET ME GO!!!!

Author's Note

I know it's really bad but I wrote this on an iPad :( It's really hard to type it all up and it's my first big fanfic I promise there will be bigger chapters and more gore and torture to come. This story is based of a picture I drew of a tortured pony so there is a lot more to come!