Prologue : Home Forgotten
This is my first fic and the first time I write so much appreciate your comments and criticism to improve my story. Hope you like my story if only the prologue to my story I like largar least 3000 words. I wonder if anyone can help me edit my story and this translated with bing translator and that is the reason of rare words.
Between 2 worlds
prologue
'' We exist in order to die but the fact of dying is what makes us know that we exist ... ''
A group of dragons look with fury and shame to a teenager Dragon located in the middle of the cave.
"How dare you come here ? . Thou who embarrass us. " Scream oldest dragon.
"If your very existence makes us seen as inferior creatures." Another dragon shout a little younger. " And on top you wanna be part of our herd and mate with one of the females ? Please do not make me laugh."
All dragons shouted insult after insult to the dragon in the middle of the cave , he just wanted to be accepted , he just wanted to be with his family but his past was something he could not erase.
"Leave this land and do not ever put a paw on them , but the worst humiliation would be tainted by your blood not will think 2 times to delete your wretched existence. " Cry the last dragon who was a teenager.
The teen dragon came out with his head down , his last hope had died. The moonlight bathing her purple scales and green horns , the dragon looked at the moon with his emerald eyes showed that only pain and loneliness . Dragons out of the cave they saw open their wings and take flight south.
Spike was the name of the dragon I insult his species , a dragon ponies bred by inferior creatures to increase their sadness and anger of the other dragons served for years on a pony. Twlight sparkle was the name of the pony to spike attended and helped with all his might . She was his best friend and his world literally what even more painful to his words, words that would not let him sleep at night , words that pierced his heart.
Spike landed in a small cave hidden behind a waterfall home for the past 3 years I decide which devote to find other dragons . The sound of water soothed his thoughts using his claws to cross the last place on your map carved on the wall of the cave. He had tried to be part of several groups of dragons around equestria but all rejected by his past . All thanks to the group of dragons counted out as an egg phoenix except instead of eating to be one of the most coveted delicacies by dragons . He recalled how his first attack of greed destroyed ponyville mean another thing that marked his past. As the other ponies grew departed from the nobody wanted to be your friend or talk for fear . It was different in Canterlot where all the pony looked at him as a simple creature and a potential danger to their children so the only friend was Twlight tube or at least wanted to think so. He realized then that when I was little all saw it as an exotic pet , the pet of Twlight . His claws crushed a group of jewelry remember how he was treated like a dog by his sudden growth.
Sigh , remembering his days in Canterlot where lay many of their happiest moments with his mother.
Princess Celestia the ruler of the sun goddess ponies and raised him as his own son even knowing how dangerous dragons eh were even that many would question the ponies for their actions. ANQUE not really matter as it was a goddess she always do the right thing and pony asked if she would accept a new leader to leave the throne. the memories came back to her she taught him to read and write , gave him love
" Your spike know what a cutie mark ? . " Spike nodded " if the mark that shows how special the pony in an activity , something that makes them special "
" Here's spike but remember that you do not have a mark cuti not mean you're less than another pony or not you're special "
A cutie mark .... He thought to himself, he always wonder how it would have one, was supposed to be a special feeling not knowing what was your purpose in life and excitement and surprise to discover it was best. But he had just been humiliated and rejected one after another both ponies and dragons.
. Again his mind was full of happy memories that only caused him more pain and made him see reality again and again , he had no home did not have a purpose did not have friends to laugh or mourn . His worst fear had come true ... be alone. Definitely dragons Vivian million years so that one day she would see the death of your whole world , and more important to one of the few things that meant something in your life Twlight fortunately Celestia turned her into a princess making out immortal. But now she was away from her was definitely worse than death that she did not trust him, just knowing he was never a friend to her only his assistant and occasional company when others were not available , a replacement .
Spike another group of jewelry to wear mouth when something crashed against the rocks inside his cave. Quickly prepared himself to attack a dragon or predator, to his surprise he turned out to be a pegasus white blond hair and brought with still many packages. Spike immediately recognized . " Derpy " .
"Hola spike telling me " He said as he stood trying to focus her eyes but without success.
" What are you doing here so far from ponyville ? "
The pegazo smiled and pulled out a package that had a letter tied "is a package for you " he said as he smiled.
Spike furrowed his wise design of who was the package the smell was unmistakable. " Twlight " he thought to himself .
I take the package and noticed that the bag was full of Derpy had the same packages.
" For whom are all these packages ? " Spike curious wonder .
" Oh are for the dragons you see during my trip"
"And who sends them ? "
" Twlight Princess sparkle , apparently wants all dragons have a book maybe she wants to form a book club " Spike said nothing just watch the book wrapped a year after leaving twlight desperately seeking to sending many Pegazos mountains and forests , describing its features but only a Pegasus had found but judging by all the packages found derpy deliver it opened many "spikes" on their journey ..
"Well I have to go spike goodbye "
Derpy flew out of the cave to the waterfall leaving soaked , spike laughed and reminded her that she had to go south like all the years she brought him a package. But like every year she took the opposite direction to the survival as it was a mystery to single spike .
Return your attention to the book during the last 3 years Twlight derpy sent to deliver his birthday every dragon that had the characteristics of spike since she did not know its location. He sighed and threw the book at a stack of books unopened packages .
I did not want to do something with twlight anymore pain that brought him the last words in the background was afraid that she still hated him . Sigh again, when he felt a strange feeling in his stomach. A puff of green fire emerged forming a scroll. It surprised many years ago he had stopped receiving letters, watch the royal seal could only be a single pony.
Mother?
He quickly read the letter .
My dear child a long time since you left Canterlot . But eh I always had the hope that you can come visit me sometime , I miss you even Twlight reconsider after everything that happened . But now I write that something serious has occurred in recent weeks , simulators attacked Canterlot do not know why but we believe that its main objective was Twligh and the rest of the royal family for any reason related to the element of magic, neglects all city are well and we covered was a magical shield . So I ask you please to come to Canterloc because I worry that they can attack you . But they plan to look for your own family and a home so if you have already found I beg you to be very careful simulators can pose as any of us.
With love your mother Princess Celestia .
Spike dropped the letter felt a complete fool plunged both his misfortunes he had forgotten the second most important for the pony. Though knew he was hated by the upper class of the ponies and the Dragons still had a home , a home which had forgotten and was in danger.
Without wasting time I unfurled his wings. A gift from his mother and he was a dragon land but Princess Celestia use magic to give her wings using a nearly extinct ancient mineral which could create life if the spell and the right amount of magic was used but their wings were larger than the . Flew towards Canterlot leaving behind his temporary home and all his hopes of finding his place in the world with dragons , yet the bound for the place where lay the 2 most important things in your life.
Canterlot Castle
The goddess of the moon through the hall way surrounded by beautiful vidriales bathed in the moonlight is directed towards her older sister.
"Sister you contacted already "
" If at last spike will be treated as must be the Prince of Canterlot my son."
"Do you think it is wise now? , Simulators have infiltrated equestria and if they know about the spike will be the main target for the connection to Twlight "
" But those are beside me will I be able to protect you and your prepare to learn to master his magic."
"Are you sure that the magic power that could control even can Twlight Princess . Speaking of her and would you you commented on your plan? "
Celestia shook her head " No longer are things between spike and her. Though I can not hide my disgust at the way we deal understand that she is now under pressure with the issue of being a princess , also during these years suffered pretty loss spike " replied looking down. Moon approached her knowing that tormented his elder brother . "Do not worry sister do not hold any grudges against you after all acted like were supposed to stop "
Celestia sighed even though his sister had forgiven him for banishing the loneliness and oblivion it still felt great guilt . " I guess so feel Twlight . " She thought to herself .
"Alright sister prepare everything for spike train on magic. " The moon princess withdrew when turned to see her older sister " And you know as you communicate it to equestria about her new prince? " . The princess nodded positively so his younger sister retreat.
The princess sighed heavily she still had doubts about how they would react to his subjects about spike would be one of their new leaders . The princess walk down the aisle being bathed in the colors of the vidriales moonlit , her mind full of the possible scenarios . A revolt , fear, confusion , chaos, and many other bad scenarios to spike , if returning to read your letter surely had not found a home or a mate. Another remorse pressed his heart in his joy at the hope born spike her son she did not consider the consequences of raising a dragon she was sentenced to spike to live with creatures that could he never identified or at least stay with them and that would have to see them die , just like her.
Miro glaze again representing his son saving the empire of glass thoughtfully trying to find a happy solution to spike and repair all the errors but were stopped by love not being selfish .
His mind recalled the long nights you spend looking report after report looking at how to hatch the egg she found in the old mines under Canterlot . But it was useless there was no information about dragons , except that they were very dangerous creatures , look Ceslestia egg placed beside protected by their wings. Do not know what to do with it, he could not deliver the dragons and did not know the method of rearing calves abandoned surely leave at the first opportunity to die because what little he knew about dragons was that they had a complex system races fighting against each other to see which family had the purest breed. Give it some thought wildlife expert but this one would see it as a pet rather than as his son.
Many investigations and failed methods to make the egg hatch until finally the princess discovered that eggs possessed a magical force field that protected the dragon which to his surprise had been born inside the egg but was not aware . If she could find that magic could break the egg he could really born, his mind drifted to the elements of harmony the main element of magic consisted of all existing magic, but unfortunately for items no longer had magic and that all use to send his sister to the moon. Your only option I had was to find the new element of the most powerful magic and that dominates both white magic and dark hoping I could break the magic surrounding the egg. It took several years for the new carrier will appear . Twlight Sparkle was the name of the carrier element pony magic and reason his son was born .
The princess decided to raise the dragon to fill the void in his heart. Prior to Sun Princess Celestia was a mare with a happy family his fellow artist from foreign lands your name Hand Paint Shining Flare and daughter .
A tear rolled down her face as she remembered the 2 most important ponies of his life that had disappeared millennia because only her and her sister were I granted immortality .
During the following years the sun goddess avoid forming any kind of relationship with a pony and that sooner or later would have to see him go but the dragon was different on the accompany almost eternity at least until the dragon decided to form their own family and go find other dragons . she would eventually have to be alone company since the horrible day when she was forced to expel her sister for the sake of the nation that was entrusted to protect.
A group of ash formed in front of her taking it out of their memories , the letter was certainly spike joy ran to open the heart of the princess his son back to his side.
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