My little pony: The rewritten history

by RubenYo_Historias

Rating: teen
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Main 6, Original Character, Trixie, Spike, Comedy, Other, Adventure, Crossover, Tragedy
Length: 3039

What if a twisted mind changes MLP? the answer is, action, comedy, tragedy, new allies, new enemies, slenderpony, Surprise and Pinkamena.

It started as a sabotage at the hands of Rubén, but we will see how their lives change from now.
They try to live well, their new lives are not like before, but for them there before.
They see your friends, as they fall, fighting against all that comes.
I included.

Published 2013-12-21 22:20:04 UTC
Last updated 2013-12-24 21:18:46 UTC

Playing with history

"Once upon a time, in the magical kingdom of Equestria, two noble sisters who ruled together and created harmony in the region. To do this, the elder sister, using the power of the unicorn, brought the sun at dawn. The youngest sister brought the moon at dusk. So, they gave balance to the kingdom and his subjects, all varieties of ponies. But over time, the younger sister was filled with jealousy. The ponies playing in the day the older sister gave them, but slept over beautiful night. One fateful day, the younger refused to lower the moon to make way for the day. The elder sister tried to reason with her, but the bitterness of the younger, transformed her into a wicked mare: Nightmare Moon. She swore she would swamp into the realm into eternal night. Regretfully, the older sister used the most powerful magic known to ponies: The Elements of Harmony. Using the magic of these elements, defeated her younger sister and sent to the moon forever."

—The older sister became responsible, of the sun and moon, and harmony lasted in Equestria for generations. —ending of narrating one sitting unicorn on the grass.
—Elements of Harmony?, I've heard of them, but where?

Hello!, i'm the narrator, i wonder if you like to hear the same old story, if that's what they expect, I recommend you stop reading not spend view here.
I'll tell you something, if I narrate the story, how they want, narrate them chapter 1 and 2 complete."
"I'll cut to the chase, started from the moment they are known."

—List of preparations for the celebration, number one: Banquet, Sweet Apple Acres —Spike said.

Suddenly, an orange pony kicked a tree that brought down the apples.

—We'll, finish this —Twilight said—.

"Twilight I feel the same way, I will not do anything here skip down Rarity"

A jump on Mario Bros after.

"I will explain, i will eliminate love Spike to Rarity

Spike was dragged into a kind of portal, a portal to another dimension.

—NO!, SPIKE! —Twilight shouted, as she struggled to leave the gate open, but the magic that created the portal was more powerful.

Spike was within the portal, facing two land ponies, they were dressed in costumes.

—Hello little one!, call me J, this is my partner. —said one of them was a black colt.
—I am the agent K — said the other was a white pony.
—What do you want from me? —Spike said.
—A friend asked us a favor —said the black pony.

The white pony pulled a strange device.

—This is called neuralizer, erase some memories and implements other —K said, immediately afterwards a light blinded Spike and leave dizzy—. Well, you'll never fall in love with ponies, okay?
—Understood —Spike answered.
—Well, I guess that: Mission Accomplished —J said.

Good work, but sorry to tell you that Galaxy 9 is a conflict of Predators and Aliens

—No shit, seriously? —J said
—Calm down J —K said—. R, Can you teleport us?

Sure.

—Thanks —J said.

Back to Twilight

The portal opens again, and threw out Spike. Then he turned to close

—Spike, are you okay? —Twilight wonder worried.
—Yes, but my head hurts. —Spike said.

Well, no more changes here, so ...

—Oh, my dear subjects, I have not seen their precious faces who worship the sun does much. —Nightmare said.
—What did you do to the princess? —said Mayor.
—I don't think you will like the answer. —Nightmare said—. I wonder if they know who I am?.
—Oh, more puzzles —Pinkie said—. La Reina Mala, no, I know, maybe.
—She is Nightmare Moon —Pinkie hear a voice in your mind.
—Eh?, Nightmare Moon? —pinkie said aloud.
—Hahahaha! —Nightmare scoffed—. How is that pony your silly face you know my name?
—DO NOT MAKE FUN OF ME! —Pinkie cry.

Nightmare and Pinkie stared at each other. Pinkie's eyes was challenging. Nightmare's gaze was as if not taken seriously. Suddenly Pinkie's eyes turned red and his look change to hate, in a split second, return to normal.

—What the devil! —Nightmare said surprised.

Suddenly a beam of light would hit Nightmare, but the mane of this protected her.

—I know who you are, you're Nightmare Moon, or rather, Luna —Twilight said.
—Do not call me that —she said, throwing an electric beam on Twilight.

She stopped him with a magical field. This was easy because it was not a magic attack.

—Go go, see if you can do that with this. —Nightmare said.

A laser was sent from a horn of dark mare. Twilight attempt to block it the magic attack, but the magic of Nightmare was stronger.

—CARE! —Pinkie said, as he pushed.
—Thanks Pinkie —Twilight said.
—You guys alone can not stop me, And you, little pink pony, because you risk your life for she. —Nightmare said referring to Pinkie
—Why?, Because she is my friend, and the friends are not left alone. —Pinkie answered—. Besides, I never said to be alone.

Then came the other ponies, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rarity and Rainbow.

—Well, Do you already you give up? —Applejack said.
—Please —Fluttershy said.
—Dear, do not fear. —Rarity said.
—Well said, resignation or you'll see —Rainbow said.
—Have no mercy! —was heard inside Pinkie again.
—Again —Pinkie thought.
—Stop Her, she knows where the princess. —said Mayor.

Meanwhile, elsewhere, Rubén watched this. He watched from a TV what was happening, lying on a couch and drinking a milkshake.

Hey, give me my space. Well, I can not expect more than a great battle, is not it?

Suddenly, Nightmare turned into mist and escaped.

—How to stop Nightmare without the elements of harmony? —Twilight said.
—Can't we just look for them? —asked Rainbow.
—We do not know who they are, nor where they are, or even what they do. —Twilight responded.
—Maybe this helps —Pinkie said, took a book (you know which), and gave it to Twilight.
—Where did you get it? —asked Twilight.
—I do not know — Pinkie responded.

I bet I know who gave it the book.
To finish this already, finally see the epic fight.

—Well, we have the elements in our necks, now what? —Applejack said.
—I do not know, already we should be beating Nightmare —Twilight said frustrated.
—Do not have instructions on use? —asked Rarity.
—Mine if, we have to fight a battle —Pinkie said.
—Well, perfect for me —Rainbow answered
—But I don't like fighting —Luisa said in panic.
—Do not worry —Pinkie said.
—Pinkie did not know you knew how to fight —Applejack said.
—No need to know how to fight, the collar gives you that ability. —Pinkie answered.
—That said ... —Rarity said.
—Rarity, do you too? —asked Twilight.
—No raisins school if you do not learn spells of all kinds, I know some. —Rarity answered.
—Let the party begin —Pinkie said, pulling out her hair two artifacts.
—Wow Pinkie, what's that? —Rainbow said.
—These are just my guns —Pinkie answered.
—And what do they do? —asked Twilight.
—They shoot a shock wave that hits as hard as a beam at close range. —Pinkie answered.
—And why do you have that? —asked Applejack.
—If you press this button throws confetti — Pinkie said.
—Can I stop waiting? —asked Nightmare.

The battle begins. Nightmare released a beam at Twilight, but Fluttershy the pushed.

—Pinkie was right —Fluttershy said.

Rainbow attacked quickly, but Nightmare created a tornado, tornado caught Rainbow, Twilight try to stop the tornado, but failed. Pinkie shot their guns to tornado, this sent flying to Nightmare, and Rainbow left the tornado. Nightmare threw a huge rock, but Twilight and Rarity created great protection, but Nightmare released another much larger, they tried to block it, but could not. Pinkie shot their weapons several times, until he broke the rock and again gave to Nightmare.

The elements of harmony began to glow, then threw a rainbow to Nightmare and turned Luna.
That cute, right?
So far I have changed the story, but I need more.

next chapter: What happens to Pinkie?

What happens to Pinkie?

"Something happens with that pony, i can see in their eyes that something is not right."
"Oh well, I guess I will not do harm to see your past."

After snooping in your files

"Mother of Lauren Faust"

Meanwhile, in Sweet Apple Acres

Big Macintosh and Applejack were looking apple trees, it was a great season of harvest, perhaps the largest in Equestria.

—The harvest season this year is great. —Applejack said.
—That is correct —Big Macintosh replied—. Too big for you care of her by yourself.
—Quiet older brother, you need to rest and recover, there has not been an apple orchard I can not handle. —said, as he touched the wound of his brother by accident—. Ups, i sorry. I bite this work at the end of the day.
—I do worry that manypony work, you do you alone. —he said.
—Do not worry brother, of my account runs. — Applejack said.

Later

—I better start to work —Applejack said —. These apples will not drop from the trees alone.

Suddenly, an apple falling on his head.

—Eh?, What happens? —asked Applejack.

The ground began to shake.

—Oh no —Applejack said.

Meanwhile in Ponyville

—Stampede!!!! —scream Rainbow Dash.

A herd of cows was speeding, just to Ponyville.

God, not want to know what I read. Well, what if we follow the story where Twilight goes to see Applejack

Mary was kicking trees, this make to fall tree apples. She looked tired, inasmuch as, instead of kicking the tree, kicked the basket with apples.

—What happens to this pony? —Twilight said.

Applejack is suddenly fall asleep. Twilight attempt to draw your attention, calling aloud.

—APPLEJACK! —scream Twilight.
—Eh?, ah, hello Twilight —Applejack said.
—What is all this? —asked Twilight.
—It is the harvest season for the Apples. —Applejack answered.
—But why do you the do your alone? —asked Twilight.
—Big Macintosh is hurt —Applejack answered.
—And what of the others, when I get there, you had shown me more Apples —Twilight said.
—That day was the great meeting of the Apples. —Applejack answered—. Today I'm alone.
—Need help? —asked Twilight.
—Help?, no, or joke —Applejack answered.
—But there's no way you can do it alone —Twilight said.
—Is that a challenge? —asked Applejack.
—Eh?, no —Twilight answered.
—I'll prove that I can do —Applejack said—. If you'll excuse me, I have to harvest apples.

Meanwhile in Ponyville

—Hey, Rainbow, you can help me on something? —Pinkie said.
—Eh?, Pinkie Pie?, I'm sorry, I'm too busy. —Rainbow lied.
—Please —Pinkie said.
—No —Rainbow answered.
—Please —Pinkie said.
—No —Rainbow answered.
—Please —Pinkie said.
—No —Rainbow answered.
—Please —Pinkie said.
—No —Rainbow answered.
—Please —Pinkie said.
—No —Rainbow answered.
—Please —Pinkie said.
—No —Rainbow answered.
—Please —Pinkie said.
—No —Rainbow answered.
—Please —Pinkie said.
—No —Rainbow answered.
—PleaseI just want to have fun
—No —Rainbow answered.
—Please —Pinkie said.
—All right! —is surrendered Rainbow—. But you have to overcome me in a game, his name is, the trapped.

Suddenly she went flying too fast. She much trust in their ability to fly, you maybe too.

—Here you will not find me —Rainbow said.
—Hello! —Pinkie came out of nowhere—. Already get caught, now, can you help?
—Okay —Rainbow said—. What do you need?
—I just want to prepare cupcakes with you. —said ¿Pinkie?

Okno, that does not happen in this story.

—I want you to help me to make a joke to Spike —Pinkie said.
—Now you're talking my language! —Rainbow answered.

A journey into the future later.

—Pinkie that was fun, but I gotta go —Rainbow said—. I have to practice my stunts, to enter The Wonderbolts, Applejack help me.
—Okie Dokie Lokie —said, while he was jumping—. See you later!

Later

—Finally arrived! —Rainbow replied.
—Sorry, but tell me, what is your new trick? —asked Applejack.

One explanation after

—What's not a little dangerous? —asked Applejack.
—Ha! —Rainbow laughed—. Not for a pegasus.
—In that case all right —Applejack said.

When climbing, Applejack was dizzy, for of height. She began to falter, this brought down a horseshoe, this beat up Rainbow in the head.

—Here I go —Applejack said.

She jumped, throwing to Rainbow into the air.

—APPLEJACK!!!!! —Rainbow scream, while flying through the air.
—you're welcome —Applejack said.

Rainbow crashed in the library, there was Twilight.

—Need help? —asked Twilight.
—No thanks, I already helped a lot today. —Rainbow answered—. But, then another pony needs your help.
—Applejack? —asked Twilight.
—Yes —Rainbow answered
—I talk to her —Twilight said.

After a scolding

Twilight offered her help again, but Applejack refused.

—If you'll excuse me, I have to help Pinkie. —Applejack said.

And it was.

Meanwhile, with Rainbow

—Best had asked for help to Pinkie, sure gave me a one of catapults —lamented Rainbow.
—Why so sad Rainbow? —said a voice.
—Eh? —Rainbow said.

Turning around she saw a Griffin.

—Hi Gilda! —Rainbow greeting.
—Hello Rainbow —Gilda answered
—What do you do in Ponyville? —asked Rainbow.
—Passed by here and wanted to say hello to my old friend Rainbow —Gilda answered.
—You have not changed at all —Rainbow said.
—I hope your not, if you want to beat me in a race —Gilda said.
—Anytime —Rainbow answered.

Meanwhile, in Hospital in Ponyville

—Arrive as I found out —Twilight said.
—Thanks Twilight, we need all the help —said a nurse.
—Why did this happen? —asked Twilight.
—Apparently he got sick for a few intoxicated cakes —said the nurse.
—No There were pies, were death —Pinkie said with dizziness.
—I love that flavor in the cupcakes —was heard within Pinkie
—This is beginning to worry me —Pinkie thought.
—How long must rest? —asked Twilight.
—Generally, it would take days, but being Pinkie Pie, will be only a few hours more —said the nurse.
—Okay, I have to talk to someone —Twilight said.

Meanwhile, with Rainbow

—Well, Gilda, if you want to give a solo ride —Rainbow said—. See you in a moment, I have to see someone.
—According Rainbow —Gilda said.

Rainbow went to see Pinkie home, since they found out she was sick. Upon arrival, the room was dark, she go because she was said to be the most rugged pony.

—BOO! —scream Pinkie.

Rainbow hit a cry of fear.

—PINKIE!!!!! —scream Rainbow

Later

—And so we have to suspend our activities —Rainbow said.
—I understand, recalls a friend is a friend —Pinkie said.
—Thanks Pinkie —Rainbow said —. Maybe i you show to Gilda, later.

I will summarize what will happen. Pinkie saw Gilda being a bully, and decided to solve the problem the only way they know, with ...

A party!!

A party that was planned a long time.

Too bad I do not have all day to tell you about it, because, I was not invited.

During the party, you were too many jokes performed at Gilda, She was full of anger, but remained silent until the end of the party.
After the party, Pinkie was elsewhere, the place was totally alone. It was the frontier of the Everfree Forest and Ponyville.

—I guess you thought that was funny —Gilda said.
—Eh?, Ah, hello Gilda —Pinkie said.
—Answer me —Gilda said.
—The party?, Because if I found it very funny —Pinkie said.
—Let me tell you something, those jokes that have prepared me, did not seem funny —Gilda said.
—I did not do any jokes, I just joked with people I know —Pinkie said.
—Tell you what, I want you to go —Gilda said.
—Eh? —Pinkie said.
—I'll fight with you, whoever loses, it will go of Ponyville —Gilda said.

Quickly, Gilda lunged to Pinkie, smashed on a rock, this made occurs dust.

—Have you had enough? —asked Gilda.

Suddenly a hoof left the dust and hit to Gilda.

—Not me, thanks for worry. —came a voice from the dust.

Pinkie Pie left the dust, but it looked different. His fluffy hair turned straight, and her mane bright pink had turned grayer, like his skin.

—You've tousled my mane. —Pinkie said.

She shook her mane and tail.

—Far better —Pinkie said.

Gilda pulled away a little, inside she knew it was not the same Pinkie.

—All are equal, think very hard, but they are only a few chickens. —Pinkie said—. In your case, it is more literal. —Pinkie said.

—I'm not a chicken —Gilda said.
—Your face and you peak, you accuse —Pinkie said.

Gilda lunged to Pinkie, but she kicked.

—You're weak —Pinkie said.

Gilda stood and flew around Pinkie. Pinkie sack their guns pointed at the sky and Gilda was before it collapsed.

—Pinkie forgive me, please —Gilda said.
—Pinkie is not here call me Pinkamena —Pinkie said.

She shot to Gilda, suddenly, the sky appeared a white pegasus. Was placed between the trigger and Gilda, she raised a hand and exploded at this time.

—What the hell? —Pinkamena said.

The Pegasus emerged from the dust cloud created the explosion.

—Arrive just in time, right? —pegasus said
—That you did, was it not magic? —asked Pinkamena.
—Correct —pegasus said
—How to use it without a horn? —asked Pinkamena.
—You know it —replied the pegasus
—Eh? —Pinkamena said.
—This time stay in the seal —pegasus said

Pinkie's cutie mark began to shine and Pinkie back to normal. She had fainted.

—You better go, I'll take her home —pegasus said

Gilda went, Pinkie Pie woke up as if nothing had happened, the white pegasus disappeared, everything back to normal.

Applejack and Twilight were missing, including two all apples harvested and everything returned to normal.

—This was a crazy day. —Twilight said.
—And do not just —said a voice
—Eh?, I recognize that voice —Twilight said.
—Who is he? —Rarity said.

The speaker was a white-blue unicorn.

—Brother! —Twilight said.
—Hello little sister —said the Unicorn
—You came to visit me? —Twilight said.
—That would —said the Unicorn.
—Hello, my name is Star Hunter —said a pegasus.

He spoke as blue pegasus, which could hide in the sky at night.

—Twilight Sparkle, you have a letter to Princess Celestia —pegasus said

next chapter: The Dragon and Star Hunter.