Red Ash: The Struggle

by RedAsh714
When a semi psychotic teenager learns at his 17th birthday party that the girl that he loves but never got the chance to tell so is dead,he does what most other teens in this situation would do:attempts suicide.But fate has other plans for this one.F

When a semi psychotic teenager learns at his 17th birthday party that the girl that he loves but never got the chance to tell so is dead,he does what most other teens in this situation would do:attempts suicide.But fate has other plans for this one.Follow Devon as he learns who and what he truly is but had never known.


Hey there fillies and gentlecults!Look I know that the description probably sucks but could you at least give this story a look at.This is my very first fanfic ever so I could really use any and all CONSTRUCTIVE criticism you can give.

Also could really use a cover art of a symbol for Chaos Control.Any submissions will be looked at and considered but as always sadly only one will be used.(BUT the others might be used for future stories.)

Thanks a ton and I hope you enjoy.

The OC Nyx belongs to the great Pen Stroke,so go and check out his stories.And especially read Past Sins if you haven't already so you understand the references to it.Or if you are just looking for a good read.

Teen
Incomplete
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Alternate Universe
Romance
Tragedy
Slice of Life
Human
 
ONT

7483 words: Estimated 37 minutes to read

3 Chapters:

  1. The Loss Of Everything But Pain. Is This The End...Or The Begining? 2013-12-24 19:41:17 UTC
    1274
  2. A Complicated Arrival 2013-12-25 06:13:28 UTC
    3258
  3. Preparations (wip) 2013-12-25 23:18:23 UTC
    2951