The Candies

by LokiBooty

Rating: teen
Tags: Princess Celestia, Slice of Life, Main 6, Princess Luna, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Comedy
Length: 1089

Rainbow Blitz and his friends are having a harmless sleepover, until Bubble Berry brings out the candies.

Rainbow Blitz and his friends are having a harmless sleepover, until Bubble Berry brings out the candies. Not just normal candies, but ones that make him teleport to a new dimension! Will Blitz be able to survive in a world filled with mares, or will he die trying?

Contains: R63, Language, Terrible jokes, and more

EDIT: This is under construction, probably gonna rewrite a lot of it, so sorry for the inconvenience.

Published 2013-12-28 05:10:06 UTC
Last updated 2013-12-29 00:11:25 UTC

Chapter 1: Introduction

"Woot! This is going to be the best party ever!"
Rainbow Blitz had been hovering alongside Butterscotch as they walked to Sweet Apple Acres, where the six friends were staying the night. Both had a sleeping bag on their backs.

"Sleepover, Rainbow." Butterscotch corrected.

"But that sounds WAAAAAYY girlier Butts." Rainbow Blitz stated. "But of course you would know what girly is like." He whispered in Butterscotch's ear teasingly. Butterscotch blushed profusely and tried to hide in his short mane. He put his hoof to his face as he slowly walked away from Blitz. "Hey, we're here." Rainbow Blitz started flapping his wings harder as he sped towards the acres. Butterscotch started walking faster, trying to get to the door of the house faster. Rainbow Blitz got there before Butterscotch,but didn't have to wait long before he moseyed up. Rainbow Blitz knocked on the door, and in the briefest of moments, it opened and revealed A.J.

"Howdy there! Come in!" He stepped aside as the two pegasai walked into the living room of the house. Dusk Shine, and a bouncing Berry Bubble. Dusk Shine looked up from his book and smiled.

"Hey guys." He said as he drifted back into reading his book.

"Hey guys! Do you know how long we were waiting? Well of course you wouldn't know unless I told you, duh! Well we've been waiting abou-" Dusk Shine put a hoove to Bubble Berry's mouth.

"We get it. " Rainbow Blitz set his sleeping bag right next to Dusk Shine's. Butterscotch put his next to Berry Bubble's.

"Are we missing somepony?" Dusk Shine asked as he actually set down his book and looked around the room.

"Ah don't think so..." A.J. trailed off as he counted everypony. 1,2,3,4,5... "Actually we are missi-" Three sharp knocks on the door cut him off. "Ah think that's the pony we're missin'" A.J. said as he opened the door, revealing a fabulous looking Elusive.

"Sorry I was late, I had to make some double checks." Rainbow Blitz crossed his forelegs and scoffed.

"Elusive, you always have to be, 'fashionably late'." You could practically hear the quotation marks.Elusive shot him a glare, and so did Dusk Shine and Butterscotch. A.J. and Berry Bubble were stifling their laughter. "What? It's true." He shrugged as A.J. And Bubble Berry were on the ground, laughing with tears in their eyes. Elusive 'harumph'ed as he closed the door and stuck up his nose. Put his sleeping bag on the floor next to Butterscotch's.

"So what're we gonna do first?" Asked Dusk Shine. Before anyone could speak, Berry Bubble piped in.

"Truth or Dare!" Murmurs of agreement echoed throughout the room.

"Okay, who goes first?" Asked A.J.

"Ooohh! Memememememememememeeeeeeeee!" Yelled Berry Bubble, waving his hooves in the air like a maniac.

"You can go first Berry." Elusive chuckled. Berry Bubble took out a small green bag out of seemingly nowhere.

"I dare Rainbow Blitz to eat one of these candies." He opened the bag for all to see, and the candies were green, glowing almost, with a pink center. He tossed one to Rainbow Blitz, who started to look it over.

"What flavor are these?" He asked.

"I dunno," shrugged Berry Bubble. "Never tried 'em."

Rainbow Blitz's eyes snapped towards him. "Then why do you want me to try them?!" Berry looked confused.

"I thought you were the best flier, and best athlete in Equestria. Surely you could take on something like a candy. Unless you're scared." He elbowed Rainbow Blitz on the side.

"What?! Of course I can take on a candy!" He argued.

"Um.. Guys, I don't think this is a good idea..." All heads snapped to look at Butterscotch, causing him to yelp and hide in his mane.

"I agree with Butterscotch." Piped in Dusk Shine. "It might not be safe."

Berry laughed. "It's not like he'll teleport to some unknown place where we won't be able to find him for a long time." Just as Rainbow Blitz popped the candy in his mouth, he teleported to some unknown place where they won't be able to find him for a long time.

"BERRY!" They all screamed in unison. Berry Bubble yelped.

"Berry, just WHAT was in that candy?!" Screamed Dusk Shine.

"Well, I was making some new green candy, when I dropped the measuring cup and broke it! So I went to the store to buy another, and as I was walking back I saw this pink crystal and I was like, 'WOAHHH' so I picked it up and it smelled like cotton candy and then I was like, 'I can add this to my candies, WOAHHHH' then I added them in my candies and then A.J. invited us to his house so then I was like, 'I can show them my candies, WOAH-" an apple silenced him.

"Berry, let me see the candies." Dusk Shine held out his hoof, and Berry looked hurt. He spit out the apple and spoke,

"You aren't gonna take them away right? I didn't even get to name them! They're too young!" He wailed. Dusk rolled his eyes. He took the bag of candies from a wailing Bubble Berry. Butterscotch wrapped a wing around Berry trying to calm him down. Dusk Shine used his magic to scan the bag of candies, finding high levels of radioactivity. Then something stopped him. The candies had not only teleported Rainbow Blitz somewhere else, but had teleported him to another universe! His magic stopped, and the rattle the candies startled the other four ponies.

"Berry, you do know that you just teleported Rainbow Blitz into another universe right?" Time seemed to stop altogether. A loud groan and thump signaled Elusive had fainted.

"Does that mean we won't see him again?" Asked a freighted Butterscotch.

"We might, but only if we use there candies. But we are talking to Prince Solaris first." Stated Dusk Shine. A small voice made them turn heads, because it wasn't Butterscotch's voice.

"Will I ever get my candies back?"

Author's Note

I really hope you like this story, for I really like writing it. Constructive criticism is allowed (and needed of course), this is my first story. And you can hate,, if you really find the need too. And no matter how many likes or dislikes this has, I will keep writing. Soooooo, WATCH OUT.
P.s. I kept spelling Dusk Shine Dush Shone
P.p.s. Please tell me if I made any mistakes, (cause I'm not good at that kind of stuff)