Shining's Glorious Fantasy
Shining Armor dashed into the guard's bathroom, hoping nopony spotted him and followed him inside. As he walked in, he quickly worked to prepare himself for what was coming. He trotted into the farthest stall, giddy with excitement about what was to happen next. He was finally going to do it. He was finally going to fulfill his fantasies that had been plaguing him since childhood. Shining glanced along the wall, looking for an out of sight shape on the stall. At last, he noticed the concealed circle, and pulled it off with his magic.
'And now we wait', Shining thought.
The first few intruders of his palace were unbeknownst to his excitement, simply traveling off into another stall or a urinal. He nearly screamed of impatience as he was denied over and over again, only wanting his fantasy to be brought to life. His mouth was drooling for what the future will hold, his body finally preparing for what he had hoped for such a long time.
His member had exposed itself after ten minutes of agonizing standby. His hoof glided over the oversensitive tip, making it twitch with satisfaction, sending enough pleasure to cause Shining to have to stifle a gasp. 'Soon', he told himself.
After another twenty minutes of waiting, Shining had nearly given up. He was just about to realign the hole in the stall and call the whole plan off. As he picked the piece of wall up in his magic, he heard the door slam open, followed by a hurried “Shit shit shit shit”. Shining was silenced as the footsteps became closer to his stall, thinking that this could be his godsend.
A hoof pushed at the door that Shining was in, and when its owner realized the stall was occupied, he gave a tremulous, “Fuuuuckkk”. He dashed into the next stall and locked the door behind him. Within three seconds, he heard a throaty moan along with a splattering of liquid hitting the porcelain of the toilet. Shining sat, breathless, as he realized his neighbor hadn't noticed the hole in the wall, and he was anxious to find out what his reaction would be.
He heard a small, sharp intake of air, along with the end of the splashing of his neighbor. Shining could feel the internal dilemma his friend was going through, and prayed to Celestia that his stallion made the right decision.
“Anyone in there?”, Shining heard in a wobbly voice. “I've never done anything like this before...”
Shining let out his breath, finally realizing that his fantasy might become reality. He almost forgot among his internal victory, that his friend was waiting for a response. As he heard the stallion about to walk away, he feverishly banged on the wall three times, while putting his hoof through the hole.
The stallion turned back, obviously questioning whether he should do this or not. Shining let his magic go under the stall, summoning a small tendril that ran up the inside of his thigh, lingering there just enough to make his friend want more. The results were immediate, the stallion let out a throaty moan.
“Okay. I'll bite.”
Shining waited as his neighbor positioned his cock over the hole. As soon as Shining saw it, he was mesmerized. His member was slightly pink in color, and looked to be a fantastic size, even as it was only half erect. Shining drooled and stared at it, knowing that it was going to be the key to his fantasy. He was finally going to do it, and he couldn't be more excited about it. Shining's member quickly grew to full mast, and Shining suppressed a groan as he fondled his balls with one of his hooves.
He was so lost in his thoughts that he forgot to please his partner. Shining was brought out of his trance as his neighbor's member started to recede back into its sheath, and the owner gave a frustrated growl.
“Hello? Anyone in there?”, his neighbor pleaded.
Outside of his trance, he brought his hoof closer to the sheath. Shining knew that he was at a guard station, in which the mares were... lacking... in numbers and enthusiasm. He knew that many of the guards were pent up with sexual frustrations, and as he remembered back to his normal guard days, he reminded himself of what he wanted the most.
Shining glided his hoof softly along the flaccid member, sending bolts of pleasure through the owner's body. He heard a faint gasp, but Shining was too far gone to listen. He needed this, and he needed it now.
He dragged his hoof along the base of the cock, making it more rigid, and grew more impressed by its size every passing second. It seemed that every time Shining thought it would stop growing, it would become an inch or two longer within the few moments. When it finally stopped growing, Shining was having his doubts. The length in front of him was at least six inches longer than his own, and it was thick enough to almost fit snugly through the hole.
'Well, only one way to find out'.
Shining licked at the large bead of precum already formed at the tip of this monster. He felt along his members balls with his magic, and discovered that his balls were swollen, just waiting to dump more of the delicious precum into Shining's gullet. The tingles of the magic gave an instant reaction to his neighbor, who let out a pleasured groan at the touch of his testes.
Shining decided that he was fed up with waiting. He wanted it now. As he took the member into his mouth, he suckled softly on the tip, trying to tease out more pre. His tongue danced in circles around the ridges of the flared cock, eliciting a moan from the other side of the wall. The owner pushed forward slowly, encouraging Shining to take in more of him. Shining obliged and started inching his way towards the wall, all the while wiggling his tongue on the bottom of the rigid cock. As he descended down the rod, he tilted his head slightly to lap at the sides of his neighbor's glory.
Eventually, he noticed that the member was tickling the back of his throat. It was then when he payed attention to his other senses. First, he noted the slightly salty taste of his friend's fuck rod. The strong taste along with the intoxicating combined smell of both of their nether rods was enough to forget his throats cries, and Shining dove down deeper.
As Shining bobbed his head, gradually getting lower, he spread the pre accumulating on his own dick, and fondled his balls with his magic. He couldn't believe how horny he was getting just from sucking someone off, and he briefly wished Cadance got this excited pleasuring him, so he'd get some more action.
Lost in his trek down the member, he was brought out of his trance by ramming his nose against the wall. Brought out of his reverie, his throat reflexively swallowed, trying to rid itself of the rock-hard intruder. As Shining gagged, the stallion on the other side of the wall groaned in pleasure, lost in the expert attention that his sausage was obtaining. He was getting close, and with the skill of his sucker, he wouldn't last much longer. He started to pump his cock through the hole, humping at his friend's mouth rapidly.
Finally, Shining controlled his gag reflex and started enjoying the strokes his throat was receiving. The tool was quickly being pumped in and out of his mouth, and all Shining had to do was rest his muzzle against the wall, his senses bombarded by the musk of his friend.
Shining heard two taps against the stall, followed by a heavy moan. Shining quickly tickled his friend's balls with his magic to throw him over the point of no return. Shining also started feverishly stroking his own cock, just waiting to be stuffed with cum.
Shining's tongue was just too much. With one flick of the appendage, it sent his friend over the dam, and started to release a torrent of cum into Shining's throat. Shining tried to keep up, but after every string of cum shot into his mouth, he realized he wouldn't be able to continue swallowing the liquid. The last few spurts landed on Shining's face, covering him with the remnants of his fulfilled fantasy.
Shining was overwhelmed with pleasure, even without cumming himself. He stroked himself feverishly, turning his magic to tease his balls and rub around the base of his shaft. He fondled at his stallionhood with both hoofs, and as the pleasure became too much, released himself. Ropes of cum landed on his stomach and floor of the stall, joining the cum of his neighbor.
As the gasps from Shining receded, he heard a quick series of taps on the stall, a click, and then a gruff “Thanks”. The godsend that fulfilled his darkest fantasy was leaving him, and he couldn't be happier.
After a few minutes of cleaning himself up, he decided it was time to leave and see what Cadance was up to. As he moved to open the door to the bathroom, he saw a photo of him, taped to the wall, sitting with his back against the toilet with cum slipping through his mane, stroking his shaft with both hooves. He inspected the note that hid under the photo.
“Next week. Same time, same place.”
“Fuck.”
Cadance walked through the hallway, casting off all of her disguise spells. As she magicked away her cock, changed her fur back to pink, and rose her voice to a higher pitch, she picked up the photo of Shining, lost in his pleasure. Candance smiled, and felt a pang of arousal course through her body.
“Fucking with him is going to be fun...”
Author's Note
So, I hope you guys at least semi-enjoyed it. I had a lot of fun making it and it's been on my mind for a while.
This is also my first story written! PLEASE tell me what I can improve on, because I really would like to improve my writing skills. Thanks for reading and have a nice day! :)
Shining's Glorious Fantasy
Shining rinsed his mouth out for the third time, hopefully cleaning his mouth of any discriminating smells as he finished up his day. After his exciting expedition, he had the opportunity to relax by eating a delicious dinner with Cadance and the Princesses. He ran some water through the fur on his stomach for the last time, removing his coat of the remnants of his friend's cannon.
He briefly thought back to the photo on the wall. It was pretty obvious he was being blackmailed, but he soon realized the predicament he was in. If he let anypony know, there would be no question that they would see the photo, and that could tarnish his reputation and relationships with his family and friends. If he was being honest with himself, he knew that the fact that he was being forced made it so much better. So much so, that he decided he was going to see how the situation played out, and he knew he couldn't resist the prospect of going back to the bathroom with his stallion.
Shining glanced at the clock, and realized he was running late. In his haste to rush out, he forgot to remove one piece of evidence. He probably should have washed his mane.
/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/-After Dinner-/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\
Finally, dinner was over. He couldn't help but think that something was out of place, making everypony slightly awkward. Nopony seemed to want to look at him in the eye. He remembered Princess Celestia staring into his eyes, but when he looked, she averted her gaze and turned slightly pink. Any questions he brought up were answered simply, without debate or deliberation. Overall, it was the most awkward dinner he'd ever attended.
Realizing the late hour, Shining decided that he should rest after the physically taxing day he had. As he laid down, he felt the sheet's gentle, soothing rustle along his entire body. The short, consistent feeling brought tingles to run throughout Shining's entire body, and reminded him of when he cuddles with Cadance. The faint tickle of her fur, running along his entire body sent little ripples of tingles all throughout his body. The tingles relaxed him, and he slowly closed his eyes, preparing himself for a great night of needed sleep. Just as sleep had wrapped around him, trying to drag him into unconsciousness, a reminder of earlier today flickered in his head.
He remembered what it felt like to be unable to swallow the constant stream of jizz shooting down his throat, slightly choking on the fluid as it overcame all of his senses. He remembered how little of a conscience he had after he swallowed the stomach full of cum, after his face and mane had been drenched in it, filling his mind with the salty musk of his neighbor. Specifically, he remembered how good it felt to finally let go of years of pent up sexual fantasy, his self-induced orgasm blossoming into an intoxicating fit of pleasure. He remembered how solemn he felt afterward, his muscles coordinating together to keep him still, letting him bask in the final flicks of pleasure that he experienced.
Shining opened his eyes to find his member to be pushing against the bedsheets, making an obscene bump in the fabric, and he could already see his precum soaking out on top of the blanket, already bleeding through. All of a sudden, Shining felt a need to relieve himself for the second time that day, in order to finalize the first meeting of his stallion.
He sat up and leaned against his soft pillow, bracing himself for the fit of pleasure he was about to go through. He faintly remembered how good the sheets felt on his body, and thought that maybe they would be soft enough to provide a fantastic sensation. As he wrapped his cock in the bedsheets, he could already tell that the feeling would be many times better than using his hoof. He wrapped his hooves around the outside of the sheets, and slowly started to tease the tip. A generous dollop of pre was already forming on the inside, being soaked in by the sheets, making the fabric chilly against the rock hard stallionhood. The contrast felt amazing, and Shining quickly started panting, thrusting his meat in and out of the sheets. He thought of the event one last time as it flickered in the back of his mind, and that final reminder brought him over the dam, his pleasure overtaking his mind and pushing all other thoughts aside.
As the third spurt hit the sheets, Shining heard a faint laughter, followed by the door opening, amplifying the giggles as they filled up the room. He quickly released the sheets from around his cock, straightening out the bed. Cadance walked by, finally calming down, her bellowing laughter reduced to a few faint chuckles. As she looked towards Shining, he gave her a quizzical look, reigniting her laughter.
“Y-...*HAHAH* Your mane *HAHAHA*”
Shining stared at her weirdly, and before his hoof even touched his mane,
'Oh shit please no Celestia please no nononono...'
'Fuck.'
Cadance lost herself to another fit of laughter, finally plopping down onto the sheets next to him. She gave him a kiss on the cheek as he blushed profusely, remembering all of the ponies he saw at dinner tonight. Shining felt the cum-stain left by his friend, and couldn't believe he was stupid enough to not wash his mane. It had to be several inches in length, and stopped right on the front of his bangs, blatantly noticeable to anyone he looked straight at. As he gave Cadance an embarrassed stare, Candence nuzzled into his neck, comforting him.
“I wouldn't be too embarrassed, Shiny. It's not like they've never seen cum before. Faust knows they've had to experience the hell to get cum out of your mane. Even if you're worried about the fact that they know you clopped, they probably couldn't care less. They've done it literally thousands of times. A lot of times, together even.”
Shining's eyes popped out of their sockets at that last part, desperately trying to keep the image out of his head to refrain from popping another hard-on.
“Oh yeah. That's a 'Princess Secret'. You wouldn't believe what they tell when they've had some wine... Anyways, I wouldn't worry about it too much. What you should be worrying about is how the hell you're going to get all this cum off of my sheets.”, she glanced under the sheets, noting just how much there was. “Jeez, were you pent up from something today, or what?”
Shining gave her a dumb smile, “Just thinking about you, sweetie”
“Aww so cute I think I'm going to be sick.”
Cadance saw right through his blatent lie. He was obviously turned on by the fact that he got facefucked by a knock-dead gorgeous stallion such as herself. She mentally gave herself a pat on the back.
“Well fuck, what are we going to do about these sheets?”. Cadance licked up a bit of the cum and savored the taste, “You know your cum is the best I've ever tasted, right?”.
Shining replied, “Yeah, from a shockingly huge sample size of one. Twilight would be disappointed in your research etiquette, Cady.”
“Yeah, well Twilight's etiquette can go screw itself. Celestia knows Twilight needs some screwing.”
“You got that right.”, Shining sighed. He just didn't understand how a mare as beautiful as Twilight can resist getting physical with a stallion for such a long time. You'd think that mare would have her limits.
“Anyways, let's get you cleaned up.”
Shining followed her into the bathroom, where she stared to prepare a bath. As she waited for the water to fill up the tub to a respectable height, she kissed her stallion, bringing them both into a romantic embrace. Their tongues danced around in each others mouth, twisting and flicking against one another. As Cadance broke away from the kiss, she grabbed Shining's hoof and pulled him into the warm water. Both of them let out a sigh, feeling the tension of working through the day lift off of their shoulders. They both sat on their haunches, letting the water soak into their coats as they relaxed in each others presence. They were relatively silent until Cadance rubbed her hoof against Shining's sheath.
“So, you couldn't wait for me, huh?”, Cadance asked as she fondled his package.
Shining groaned, “Just thinking about you makes me too damn horny to ignore”.
Cadance winked at him, while Shining pulled her in for a kiss. Soon after starting her ministrations on Shining's orbs, she started to feel his stallionhood emerge from its sheath.
“Excited already!”, Cadance exclaimed. She got close to his ear and whispered, “So eager...”
As Cadance took his ear between her teeth and bit down on it softly, Shining gave a small moan, eagerly returning the favor by rubbing his hoof between his wife's legs. Cadance grinded against his forearm, and started to lick the spot on his mane that was matted with cum. She noted that the taste was significantly different than her husband's spunk, “This tastes a little different...” She bit his neck lightly, and huskily spoke, “Have you been playing around with other stallions, Shining Armor?”.
Shining moaned his wife's expert attention, and barely was able to whimper out a, “No”. Cadance smiled, catching her husband in his lie, and moved her hoof from his balls to his cock, finally giving it the touch that he desired. She kissed him, shoving her tongue into his mouth while she stroked his shaft, sending beams of pleasure up Shining's body. Within a few moments, he was already approaching his peak. He groaned out a, “Ohhh Cady I'm so close...”
Cadance let go of his dick, leaving Shining out to dry. He opened his eyes and gave her a pleading stare.
“If you made that much of a mess while waiting for half a day, I can't wait for when you hold it for a week...”
“A WEEK?” Shining was quickly pulled out of his pleasure-fest after he'd been cockblocked by his own wife. “I haven't held it for a week for years!”
Cadance winked, “Well you'll have to find a way, my little stallion”.
“And what if I don't?”
“Good question... Let's make it a bet. You make it a week, and you get to do anything you want to me, exactly a week from now, for however long you please.” Shining's eyes lit up, “anything?”. “Yep! But, if I win, then I get to make you do anything I want. Deal?”.
“I don't have a choice, do I?”
“Nope.”, Cadance winked at him, giving him a small kiss and a stroke to his dick, just teasing him further, knowing that with every stroke, his chances of winning fell through the floor.
Shining groaned as his balls ached. He decided that he was now clean enough, and he let the water drain out of the tub. He and Cadance left with a small kiss, and went back to bed after he dried himself off, still showing a full hard-on.
Cadance internally laughed, knowing that with this plan, his load in the stall next week would be huge. And she was positive she would win the bet.
“Hey sweetie?”
“Yeah?”
“If you cum before next week, I'll know. Trust me. I'll know...”
Author's Note
Oh man, that actually didn't take too long.
I hope you guys liked it, and I'm amazed at the response that I got in terms of my first story. Hopefully this means that I'll be motivated to keep pushing to improve my writing!
On that note, if you see any errors, or things that could be improved as far as plot/dialogue structure/other writing elements, PLEASE tell me. I'll never get better without criticism! I only proofread this chapter once, so there are bound to be some errors.
Once again, thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day! :)
