Balthazar's Might: Revenge of the Elements of Harmony

by Balthazar

Rating: teen
Tags: Comedy, Fluttershy, Sex, Twilight Sparkle, Anthro, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Nightmare Moon, Romance, Original Character
Length: 1340

Balthazar becomes the best pony

My OC, Balthazar, goes to Manehattane and meets his new beste friends! Together, they defeate Nightmare Moon after she rises once more! Looke Upon My Workes, Ye Mity, And Despaire!

NOT dedicaterd to twow cuz he's a hateerr

Published 2014-01-03 00:20:04 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-03 00:20:04 UTC

The Main Chaptre

Balthazar woke up one winter morning...

My name is Serenity. I was all alone, wondering around on my own. My parents were unacorn supramasists and I am earth pony, so I was all alone on the streets. As I wondered down the forbidding streets, I found a leaflet on the floor. "Come to Manehattan! It is the best. You will find loads of new friends and understanding people. Maybe you'll even be crowned Prince!"

Oh, I thought to myself, I'd love to be Prince! So I set out to Manehattan!

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I was very nervous. I had never gone to Manehattan and I wondered how they would treat me there.

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I arrived in Manehattan and waited for a taxi to bring me to my new housing. As I was waiting for a taxi, I saw I think a mysterious figure hididing in the shasows.

It was as if he was looking at me!

I of course ran towards him and said, "What do you wnat?"

"For you to die!" the mysterious figure said and took out a knife and with a flash it came towards me.

I feared I was going to die. And as I was about to yell, and braced myself for the wound to appear on my side. Nothing happened.

I looked up and I stared straight into his beautiful eyes. They were so pretty and round and I delved right into them. Like soaking in a comfortable batch . His hair looked like the softest of velvet and encapsulated his face perfectly.

I had completely forgotten the assailant. All I could think of was him.

He looked at me with a smile as he brought the assailant down to his knees. "Looks like I was right on time."

"Who was that?" I asked.

"It must have been one of Nightmare Moon's hedgeman" he said.

"Nightmare Moon!" I gasped, "I thought Nightmare Moon was defeated!"

"So did we... so did we." said he.

"But who are you then? OMG... you're not..." I gasped in asphexiation.

"It is true," he, "I am no one else but Balthazar.

I had dreamed to meet Balthazar at some point in my lifetime. But it always was a distant dream. One that when you wake up, all you remember is Balthazar's dreamy eyes and wonderful complexion. It was such a dream that I never thought could become real! But here he was, right before me.

"I could never dream of meeting you," I said dreamily.

Balthazar grinned sheepishly, "Well, I had never thought of meeting such a great person like yourself."

I blushed manly.

"Hey," He said, "seeing as you're involved already, would you like to join me and the others to defeat Nightmare Moon for good?"

"that sounds great! When do I start?"

"now!" said Balthazar and he led me towards the others. And there we started planning to defeat Nightmare Moon!

A/N plez review!
'But then, it turned out Balthazar's lover had been secretly sleeping with Nightmare Moon.

'The pain, the incredibly agonizing suffering he felt going through his heart, down his spine, into his collon and leaving his body through his anus once more.He was going to take revenge, on both of them, on everyone.
He grabbed his dessert eagle, his barretta and his AK-74 with M6 bullets loaded. And of course, his trusty rocket launcher.
There he went, onto the streets, scaring everyone in sight. Everyone knew, he was out to take revenge.
The cops hide, so did the thieves and the beggers and the laddies, until there wasnt a single living being on the steet. He went into his flying helicopter, and forced his pilot at gunpoint to fly him to the base of Nightmare Moon. There he would take his revenge. The base of Nightmare Moon' was crowded with thugs, all baring heavy arms and weapons. And those that didnt have weapons, had big twin machetties and double egged katana's.
The helicopter came closer and Balthazar grabbed his semi-automatic rocketlauncher, pointed and fired at a group of thugs who were outside for a smoke.

"Shoulda dodged that," he said manly.
"You are challanging me?, Im invisible," said Nightmare Moon
"Oh I beat you rotten egg, youll run back crying to your momma.

"Mhuahahaaha I dont need no mother, I am after all very big".
After that, Balthazar leaped down onto the vulcano plato
He was in luck because he just managed to jump on it but didnt fall in it. It would have been a short story if he fell in it.

Nightmare Moon stood looking at our hero with his cape flapping in hotness.
He beared an expression of smugness. "I had told you, I am invincible, I cannot be killed, I cannot die, I cannot breath. And I have this!!!"'
Suddenly she held the The Elements of Harmony aloft.
"This is what you want!

This is what you need! But its mine now. You cant stop me.'
"Noo....not the The Elements of Harmony"
"Yes. The The Elements of Harmony"
"The The Elements of Harmony!" gasped Twilight Sparkle
"Yes. The The Elements of Harmony"
Suddenly a bolt of lightning went through in the air, strikking left and right but not hitting the lava plato they were all standing on.
The Villain lit up dark in the flash of lightning. His features scary.
Laughing as she stood there, she approached Balthazar, "Give up and go home, Twilight Sparkle doesnt love you anyway."
"Thats not true!
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Balthazar ran forward and fought him (by slashing into him while Nightmare Moon evaded his attack and shoot fire from his fingertips)
But every time he hit Nightmare Moon, she just smiled and hit him back.
In between dodging lava ejectulations, Nightmare Moon said: "You cannot beat me"
"NEVERRRRRRRR!!!!" He YELLED HARD!
"Then you will lose, and I will win and destroy everything you care for."
"I HATE YOU!!" said Balthazar and ran towards him with hisweapon drawn.
"Pathetic human, you can not beat me since I have this Incinerator!""
"No?! You have created it?! What have you done?!"
"Oh it was just a simple thing. With the help of your friend," She said while dodging another lava ejactulation, "I finished it just yesterday. Oh my, a lovely night we had.

"Your a monster and you will die, you monster!"
Balthazar ran towards Nightmare Moon, just dodging a fire ball, leaping towards a plato in the lava, dodging a lava ejaxtualatuion, landing on a rock
He surfed like Legolas in Lord of the Rings on his skateboard towards the villain again, who in turn laughed out loud and smirked and took another fireball in his hands because he really wanted to kill the Balthazar

"NOW!!!" SHOUTED our hero and his female companion lifted the base of her skirt and Nightmare Moon was distracted by seeing her ankle.
Using this to his outmost tactical advancement Balthazar grapped The Elements of Harmony from Nightmare Moon and stabbed him in her mouth .
"Owch! While I had the The Elements of Harmony I could not be harmed. But now it was taken from me I can and was and it hurt"
He staggereed around and grabbed into the air, he was dying. "You are all dooomed, doomed! You will die and I will see your death come to you and your family and your families family family."
Suddenly an ejacturalition of lava sprung up and whooshed him with its flames, leaving behind only ashes .

"Balthazar , Balthazar, I love you! But we only have 48 hours to escape before this volcano erupts!!!"
"Then quick, we must leave and leave this place behind, said Balthazar and left this place behind."
Just in time, when the last second of the clock was about tick, Balthazar and the sidekicks got out and everything crashed behind him, leaving only smoke and dust and stones behind in the rubble."

The End

Author's Note

Hey guys if this htis featured while I'm away can u screen cap it 4 me thanks!!