What Have we Learned?

by Satch
After a few weeks of dating, Dash make her move on Fluttershy, but things don't go as planned.

Firstly: Just have to mention, while it makes references to "With a Little Dash of Rainbow", it is not an "official" follow up. It's an entirely new story. (but can if so desired: be seen as a follow up. Despite technically having different plots and all that)

Can say this fic attempts to deal with romance, trusting and listening to your partner and a few other things like that. Plus trying to show "it can happen to females too"... even if it's technically not as "bad". Anyhow, onward's with my normal ramblings xP So yeah, it's basically my first (proper) attempt at a "serious fic". And I stuck at writing descriptions, deal with it, heh.

So anyhow, the story for this one is pretty much my usual "kinda bad excuse" type xP
Dash and Flutters have been dating for a few weeks, Dash has tried to reach third base several times, but has been repeatedly rejected on her advances on the queue on Shy "not being ready". Today she finally had enough of "gentle prodding" and gets a bit more pushy to get laid. (and just to clear out things for those that have read other of my work: No, no non-con in this.) It has taken Rainbow longer then expected to get under her tail, so she tries new methods this time.

Really, her plan had been simple: Get closer to Fluttershy, date her for a few weeks, maker her feel good, then loose virginity to her, then see where things goes if Shy likes it. (and I am failing to explain stuff properly right now heh) But yeah, that is basically the set up for the story.




Possible spoilers is that once she gets underneath Fluttershy's tail, she is met with something more then she didn't expect to see... (no, no goddess damned futashy. I have to much respect for her to do that xP)
But I can say this is further experimentation with "female endowment" that I first tried in my Turning Trix story.
And I really have no idea where the story turned after they went upstairs, I was seriously going to try to do a sensual romantic story with Dash having performance anxiety and Fluttershy taking the lead. Then it trailed off and here we are.
Anyhow, can tell that the whole idea for this started with a discussion about why Fluttershy always were shown as the "most gifted" (or however to put it) in every humanized or rule 43. So I went "heck, lets do that with normal Fluttershy to, and lets have Dash be jealous of it". So yeah, that was the starting idea for this whole thing.

Ps: I am still horrible at making proper descriptions xD

Complete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
Sex
 
RF

7007 words: Estimated 35 minutes to read

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