Luna Eclipse Presents: A Creepy Tail of Equestria

by DJLunaEclipse

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Dark, Romance
Length: 1971

Equestria has many creepy tail's this is just one of them: A serial killer in Equestria is on a bloodlust and has sent their lackey to Ponyville to seek out fresh victims.

A serial killer in Equestria is on a bloodlust and has sent their lackey to Ponyville to seek out fresh victims.
Can Twilight and friends find out who the lackey and killer is before it's too late?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-31 02:10:05 UTC

Chapter One

"I need more!" she demanded as she slammed down the champagne glass shattering it into pieces.

"B-bu-but that's all I could get"I explained as I swept the broken glass pieces into a garbage bag.

"Nonsense!" the mare responded spluttering the red liquid ,that she was drinking, onto my face and mane.

A small drop of the liquid trickled down into my mouth, I wiped the rest of the blood out of my mane and coat.

The metallic taste allmost made me sick, as I was about to spit it out when I heard.

"Stop!" "Swallow it swallow it now" the mare ordered.

I did as she asked and gulped hard as her deranged face grew a demonic smile that showed her teeth which drooled blood "good" she said as she leaned in to whisper "now bring me more".

"I told you I don't know anything" Rainbow Dash said as she stamped her hoof on the interview room's floor.

"Now Miss Dash we're not trying to accuse you of anything" the police officer pony responded trying to calm

her down.

"Its just you knew the victim personally and we want to know where she was the last time you saw her"

"which was when?".

"Around 4 days ago" Dash replied calmly "at the train station".

"Do you remember what time?"The officer responded whilst writing down down her last statement.

"Emm I don't know I was so wasted" Dash said while she chuckled nervously.

"So you where intoxicated at the time?"

"Yes" she responded rubbing her hoof against her head.

"I see would you say it was around 8 PM" the officer asked.

"No it was more like 10 that's when we hit the club"Dash reply's.

"I remember us quickly downing a couple of ciders and shots and before we knew it we where

completely wasted. all that I could remember after that was dropping her off at the train station then

flying home and falling asleep on my sofa".

"And that's all you remember?" the officer asked.

"Yes" Dash responded.

"OK no more questions Miss Dash you can go now" the officer said "oh if you remember anything else come to the

station and show them this" he passes Rainbow a card with the officer's name on. She puts the card in her backpack

and leaves the police station then takes off towards sweet apple acres.

"I hope Applejack forgives me for being late" she thinks to herself.

"Are you awake" a voice said softly, I groaned as I turned in a bed and I open my eyes as they met with hers.

"Well good morning you sleep well?" The mare asked fluttering her eyelashes flirtatiously.

"Yea" I answered as I yawned.

"That's good I'll see you downstairs I've made some breakfast for you" she said.

"Thanks" I responded, the mare smiled as she walked out of the room.

When she left I got out of the bed ,which was a mess, and stretched my legs. I proceeded to head down the stairs and entered the kitchen/dining room where I saw the breakfast that the mare had made for me. I sit down to eat and as I do the mare asks me "so do you remember anything?" I look at her for a couple seconds then stare down at the food.

"N-n-no" I say before taking a bite out of a piece of toast ,that was neatly cut into two triangles, "All I remember was you helping me inside last night then you waking me up this morning". "Thanks by the way for taking me in and letting me sleep here" I add..

She then looks at me and says "no need to thank me I'd do it for anypony" "especially for somepony as handsome as yourself" she says while blushing.

A smile then grows on my face as I also blush as she looks at me in silence with those lovely blue eyes.

Suddenly the silence was cut short when she asked another question "so what's your name?"

"My-my name?" I ask back.

"Yes" she responds" "err I-I don't know" I say after thinking for a second.

"You can't even remember your own name?" She asks. But before I could respond the mare adds "well this is just awful".

"Wha-what's your name?" I say trying to break the unbearable tension, again there was another pause of silence.

"Rarity" she finally responds "my name is Rarity" a smile grows onto her face as she looks into my eyes and adds "and don't worry I know just who too ask to help you".

"Rainbow where in equestria have yah been?" Applejack asks with a mean look on her face "ah thought y'all be here an hour ago" she adds.

"Yea sorry AJ I was err err slept in" Rainbow Dash said in a nervous chuckle. Applejack looks at the blue Pegasus with disbelief.

"Well ya here now so ya can help me with the apple bucki'n"

About two hours later Applejack and Rainbow Dash had only a couple trees left to pick apples out of. "So what's the real reason why ya late Rainbow?" The orange mare asked as she adjusted her hat "you meet sompony?" She teased.

"NO" Dash snapped back "I was just--overslept".

"that's not even a sentience Rainbow" Applejack said with a smug look on face, Rainbow Dash turned away from her.

"Look ah don't mean to upset y'all but you can tell me the truth" she added as she put her hoof around the blue Pegasus.

"Let's get the rest of these trees done y-you know before it gets late" Dash said trying to change the subject.

"Fine" Applejack responded as she groaned.

They approached the last tree in silence Applejack turns round and bucked her hind legs into the trunk. When the apples fell Rainbow Dash caught them in the basket she was given then proceeded to land and put it on the ground.

"Err see you later Applejack" she said quickly as she took off towards her home.

"What's gotten in to that girl?" Applejack thought.

I walked beside her, her mane flowing in the gentle wind as we approached what looked to be a tree with a wooden door and windows. Rarity and I walked up to the door and she knocked on the door with her hoof while saying "Twilight are you in?" Suddenly the door opened to reveal a small purple dragon standing in the door way.

"Oh hello Spike is Twilight in?" Rarity asked. The small dragon looked at Rarity then me then Rarity again.

"Ehh yea I'll just get her" he responded I looked at Rarity in confusion.

"Oh" she said "that's Spike he helps Twilight out with... well pretty much anything".

"So like a housekeeper or a maid?" I ask She pauses or a minute.

"Well yes you could put it that way" "but we think of him more than just that".

Before I could ask what she meant a purple alicorn appeared in the wooden door way. "Hey Rarity nice to see you, who's this?" The she asked.

"Well that's why we have came here to find out Twilight" Rarity responded.

"We'll come on in" Twilight said invitingly "I don't bite" she chuckled.

When she said this a voice echoed through me mind "Bite, bite, bite her".

"HEY are you ok?" A concerned Twilight asked snapping me out of the trance that the voice put me under.

"Y-yea" I responded.

I entered the tree house and was greeted by books lots and lots of books "what the hell?" I thought. They looked like they had just been organised and where in bookshelves that resembled that of a library.

"So what's the problem?" Twilight asked.

"Well I-I can't remember anything since last night not even my own name".

"What happened you have one too many at the club last night, passed out and smacked your head on Rarity's doorstep or was it crazy night at Rarity's?" She asked while winking at Rarity making her blush.

"What do you mean a crazy night at Rarity's" a voice said from the kitchen as the dragon peeked out from behind the door.

"Nothing Spike I'm just pulling their legs and what have I told you about eavesdropping?"

Spike closed the door with a slam "don't worry about Spike he's just a little sensitive when ponies talk about Rarity" Twilight whispers.

"OK Twilight enough small talk what can we do to help our friend here?" Rarity asks whom is still blushing and trying to change the subject.

"I don't know well just have to trigger his memory with things amnesia is a tricky thing to cure" Twilight states. "Let's start with his cutie mark which is a-a....question mark?" They both looked at my puzzled.

"So-so you cutie mark is a question mark what dose that stand for?" Rarity asked still looking confused "well that's just it I don't know" I responded. Then it came to me.

"M-my name its John Doe".

.

"John Doe?" Twilight said questionably "isn't that a generic name?" she asked.

"Yea but I swear I've been called that before".

"Well at least its a start" Rarity stated. "Can you remember anything from last night and in mean anything?"

I couldn't tell if Rarity was hinting at something with that question.

I looked at her and responded with "no I really don't remember anything accept waking up in your bed".

We spent the next couple of hours trying to get my memory back (and failing) until it was getting dark and Rarity and I where getting tired so we decided to leave.

We stayed for about another five minutes before we left and headed home. When we got to Rarity's house I was already tired so I went upstairs to bed, Rarity followed.

"So do you want me to sleep in the bed with you, you know just as friends?" Rarity asked.

"No thanks" I said. She looked at me in disappointment "maybe tomorrow if I'm still staying here" I said. She smiled at me and said

"Good night see you in the morning".

I waved and said the same back, got into my bed, closed my eyes and went to sleep.

"Rainbow Dash, Rainbow Dash are you in". Rainbow Dash woke up, got out of bed and opened the door and saw a figure of a mare on her door step. "Hey you're awake" the mare said excitedly.

"Pinkie, what are you doing here?" Dash said yawning and stretching her legs.

"Applejack sent me over she said you looked troubled yesterday.

"Oh yea that, tell her I'm sorry I'm just a bit on edge lately" Rainbow explained.

"I will anyway have you seen that colt that Rarity's been hanging around with?" Pinkie Pie asked.

"No I haven't" The Pegasus said while starting  to snicker.

"I don't know I'm going over to Rarity's soon to find out want to come along?" Pinkie asked.

"No thanks Pinkie Pie I'm busy" Rainbow Dash responded.

"Oh Okie dokie see ya" Pinkie Pie said as she ran off. Rainbow Dash shook her head then suddenly a voice came from her bedroom.

"Is she gone?" The voice asked, Rainbow Dash froze and a cold sensation went down her spine.

"Err yes" Dash answered nervously "who are you and what are you doing in my house and in my bedroom?" She asked with assertiveness.

"Come up and find out" the voice answered, Rainbow Dash gulped and started ascending the stairs.

Dash entered her bedroom only to see nothing was there she turned to check another room when suddenly she felt some kind of blunt object hitting her on the back of her head knocking her out just after hearing a chuckle and seeing some pony in a black cloak.