Not What You would Expect?
Note that this my first fanfic, and my writing would be sub-par than others. But I do love to write stories, so here's my story with original characters, created by me! Also, any creative criticism is welcomed, and if you have any pointers on how to write good stories, I'm all ears.
Hope you enjoy!
There are things out there in the world, that you'd never expect. Sometimes those experiences are the most amazing thing you'd will ever have, while sometimes they would be the one thing that you'd wish had never happened. But, deep within one way or another, we're actually glad that such an experience had happened.
"Mondays are the devil's child." I exclaimed, as I remove my bed sheets off me at a very sluggish speed. I never really cared that much, since it was summer. I never really had that many friends, you could say I was a loner, never really had myself or for that matter anyone else meddle in the business of others. Still I had a very active lifestyle, until two weeks ago where strange and there I say it, SUPERNATURAL! happen every time I interacted with anything. So, I just stayed in my home trying hard to figure out what was wrong with me. The closest thing I got to anything was magic, but really that's not even possible! magic isn't even possible.
"What to eat?" I thought to myself.
Still, it doesn't really matter anymore. After almost five years of being alone, I soon began to not care about it. All I want is to live my life in peace. Besides, what can possibly change my life and have me do something, I have no school!?
"hmm?~" All I saw was some eggs, milk, apples, oranges, and meat.
"I guess a plate of stake and eggs, won't be bad. I think?"
Cooking as always been my state of peace. Something about creating food, that just made me calm. I never knew why exactly, but it never really hurt me so why bother.
"Sometimes it's good to be a loner!" I whispered, knowing that there were was not a single soul other than me.
Suddenly, I notice two things.
A. I wasn't making sense as I thought to my self, sudden thoughts began pouring in me, like water running through a river.
and B. Suddenly my kitchen is suddenly shaking and every single electronic device begins to go crazy, some even catching on fire as sudden sparks of lightning appears all around them.
Then, similar to the scene in The Terminator a ball of blinding light begins to appear right before me! As I cover my eyes I did notice that instead of a bluish to white tint, it was... purple?
"What in Great Gatsby is going on!"I yelled, being all terrified for my life right now.
Then stood three creatures in the middle of my kitchen. Oh, but it gets good, but as I looked upon closer expection, not only were they creatures, but they were PONIES!
.... Just what is going on!?
Earlier in Ponyville
Equestria! The land of beauty, peace, and harmony. A land of mystical and magical creatures, all whom live in harmony, thanks to the legendary keepers of the Elements of Harmony.
It has been over fifty years since the elements of harmony were used. The mares had now grown, and even have families to care for, and most notably they are still friends. Their children have grown to be quite special, they're all similar and yet different from their mothers. All except one, Firefly, Twilight's daughter.
Over at ponyville's library, there inside a beautiful deep violet mare is reading a book on teleportation. She has lived in ponyville since she was born. As a filly she always was quite a literary geek. But, her most beloved reading was on music. Though she loved music, she was even a fairly powerful unicorn, similar to her mother. Now, she's living the same way her mother did when she first moved in Ponyville.
"hmm. Interesting. I wonder if it's possible to teleport in different worlds?" wondered Firefly.
As she read in silence, she noticed a windy sound was coming out of her door front. Then."
BOOM!!
"Fy!!!!!! I did it! I did it!~" yelled an enthusiastic gray-white stallion with a neon blue-white streaked mane.
"Gah!"yelled, Firefly.
"What do you want, Stormwind?!" questioned, Firefly as she attempts to pry her self from Stromwind's tight hug.
"Didn't you hear me? I got in! I've been excepted to be with the WonderBolts!"bellowed, Stormwind.
As Stormwind quiets down from his excitement, he spots several books on the floor, each having some sort of connection about teleportation. He was never much of a genius, but he knew the necessary things, when it called for it.
"Another project for Princess Luna?"
Firefly stopped for a moment to get her self settled.
"Yeah. She asked me to search on it just yesterday. Wanna help?"
"Nah~ I need to get started on my training for the wonderbolts!" As stormwind spoke these words, a cute earth pony walks in the room carrying a basket full of oranges on her head, and an apple pie on her back.
"Hey guys! how yah doing?" Asked the mare.
Firefly turns her head to see, Aurora swirls, Ponyville's farmer in Sweet Apple Acres.
" Aurora! glad to see you, so how's the farm? Also did you get those oranges I asked for?" asked Firefly.
"yep!, and the farms doing just fine. Also, Applejack just finished baking some apple pie, wanna have some?"
"Can I have some!" yelled, stormwind whom came back, once he smelled apple pie.
Noticing Stormwind coming in, Aurora began slicing the pie into seven pieces.
"As always Storm, you always come whenever there's food."exclaimed Aurora.
"Oh come one! you'd think I'm that heavily influenced by food. Besides I do need to be in shape if I'm going to be with the WonderBolts." exclaimed Stormwind.
"Hey, that's awesome! Now you could go and live your dream, right." added Aurora.
From then on, the small group of friends ate and talked about certain things that happened during their time in Ponyville. As they finished eating, Firefly told asked Aurora and Stormwind to be her assistants in the teleportation project. They reluctantly agreed, knowing that Firefly will just convince them anyways.
"You know Fy, me and Aurora wondered why you always ask us to help in your crazy experiments?" questioned Stormwind.
"Easy, because its fun to do things with you guys!" answered Firefly.
"Well thanks, but that's not what we meant." Noted Stormwind, but he knew that's not going to work anyways so why bother.
When the oranges were placed in their spots, the ponies readied themselves, as Firefly began concentrating on the oranges. For a short while, the energy in her head began to build up, giving Firefly an immense headache.
But, it wasn't until a ball of light began swelling and forming around the orange. Aurora and Stormwind were surprised to see what was happening in front of them. It wasn't as quick as Firefly's normal terleporting, instead it was more powerful, more stronger than usual. Then, the orange disappeared, all was quite. Stormwind was about to congratulate Firefly, when suddenly the orange appearing all over the place, sporadically.
Firefly opened her eyes quickly, only in shock to what is happening around her.
"Fy do something!!" Yelled Stormwind.
"Hurry Fy!" Yelled Aurora.
Firefly kept thinking on what had happened, but she didn't have time to think, the orange was teleporting everywhere.Firefly decided to use a a time cancellation spell, learned from her mother.
"Okay, everyone stay with me, right from where I'm standing." Ordered Firefly.
The other ponies ran to Firefly, and began clutching her shoulders. She began to conjure up the spell, and in no time the orange stopped, dead in its tracks. Everypony looked, and all seemed fine. Except now the library's main floor is covered in a slimey substance of what used to be the orange.
"Looks like we're safe. Well, except the room." mentioned, Stormwind.
"Yeah, that was propably the most threatening thing I have ever experienced." added Aurora.
"Be glad that we're all safe. Right?"Wondered Firefly.
Firefly's suspicion was answered, when a sudden ball of light appeared around her, Stormwind, and Aurora.
"Fy, what the buck is going on!?" requested, Stormwind.
" I don't know! But this energy is the same as when I was trying to teleport the orange!" Answered Firefly.
The ponies were now stuck in one spot, and they were now engulfed in the orb. Little did they know that they'll find soon enough.
I'll be writing in small bits, since I only just started this and I have school. So, more will be coming soon, but would only be made during breaks and weekends. Hope you enjoy!
Chapter 2: This shouldn't be possible?
You know, sometimes you got to stop and think. Think how and what are you supposed to do when three creatures, in the shape of equines, laid on your kitchen floor.
Well. I guess for me, it started out as an overwhelmed headache. "Gah!, for goodness sake not now!" I yelled, as I collapsed to the floor in front of my new guest. Things couldn't get any worse now, can it?
As my hold of consciousness withered away, I motioned myself towards the ponies. Sadly to say, that attempt failed. But, no matter! Soon enough, they had to wake up, and so they did. Albeit to they, it was more of a shock to them than me, since they must have come from somewhere. So, finding yourself in an alien world was rather a surprise.
"Hello John! It has been quite a while seen each other?"
"Emerald! It has been quite some time. But, that's not why I asked you to come over".
" What do you mean?"
"My son seems to exhibiting some odd abilities, for a eight month old infant. By which, I mean he's able to manipulate objects at will!"
"What!? What are you talking about?"
" I'm saying that somehow the very essence of that world is now in him!"
" But!? But, that can't be possible!? Unless?"
" Unless?"
" Well. Unless, maybe during our travels there. It might be possible that the energy that was building up around us might have altered our very make up. I'm starting to think that we aren't even human anymore."
" What are we going to do now?"
" We leave. Except, we can't bring your son."
" What!! I'm not leaving my son! He has to come with us!"
" I'm sorry, but he can't. You know that! You, me and Chrystal know that the more we travel between both worlds there's a build up of radiation, and that same radiation could kill us! If he is able to do on what you're saying then, he can't come. Besides, at his current state, that large quantity of radiation and the energy within him, will KILL him!
" I really hate it when you use the truth against."
" Glad I can help! But, when should we leave?"
" We leave in two weeks. If we can use magic then I'll prepare a spell that'll protect my son. I'll also give him some false memories, and put him at an orphanage. He should be safe."
"Okay! Tell Chrystal about our talk and get ready."
" She won't like it. But, I'll see if I could convince her. But, I do wonder how much has changed, since we've left."
" A lot would have changed. I know the Princess is still in charge."
" Emerald! have you been visiting Equestria again? You know that could kill you, or even worse!"
" Like what? Turn me into a monster Johnathon, you know that'll never happen."
Yeah, I guess not.
I found myself in a darkened area, just seconds I saw visions. But, no they were not visions, instead they were memories. But were they mine, or were they someone else's?
I kept thinking and thinking, till I saw a ball of light shining before me, and along with it came talking. I don't know whose's voices were they from. So, out of curiosity I touch it... Nothing happened. Nothing happened except for me waking up in my bedroom, with three ponies beside my bed. The first one had a look of worry and excitement on its face. the second looked pretty pissed off about something, so I'm guessing that one carried me to my room. The third one seem to have an almost excited look to it, as if it won the one million dollar jackpot.
"Uhm? can I help you with something?"
" Oh my! it talked!" said pony number 1.
" Awesome. I have a bone to pick with this creature!" said pony number 2.
" OH! ask it if it has any apples n' oranges?" said pony number 3.
" hey! Can any of you tell me if this is a dream, before I start slapping myself, trying to wake my self up?" I groaned as I got up from my bed."
"Uhm? yes, well I assure you that this is no dream. Well at least for you I think."
"And I'm supposed take that from a talking horse?"
" Look buddy we ain't horses! who's to say you're the dream!?"
"Hm?~ you're correct one that. If I'm the apparition of your subconscious mind, therefore making me your dream figure. Though it could also be the other way around. For which I'm the one experiencing a dream. Though, If this were a dream then it would be totally impossible for the smoking hot and sexy Andrea Sanchez to be bursting in my room?!"
At that very moment came pure silence.
"OKAY! Then I guess this really isn't a dream. So that means you guys are not part of my "dream". So, who or what are you?" I exclaimed towards the creatures.
They looked at each other for a short moment, and the violet one moved forward.
" Hi my name is Firefly! This is my friend Stormwind; pointing her hoof towards the velvet blue winged horse. She then pointed towards the light-brown horse, " and this is my other friend Aurora! "
"Uhm? Hello?" Looking at these creatures side by side, was just too weird for me to even comprehend. So I just had to ask. " I know this is probably a good time or not, but what are you Creatures doing in my house. Also, how'd you get in here?"
" Oh, well, Me and my friends were experimenting on a teleportation spell, which had failed, and after that a similar spell had came out of nowhere and well.....here we are!" Explained, Firefly.
"Once we got here, we saw you on the floor unconscious. So what happened to you?"
I try to remember what had happened, and slowly I recounted my side of the story. "Well, I trying to make breakfast, until one of my "flares" began to act up. It was a total surprise as well. Sometimes a weird white-gold aura would appear for a split second, and something odd and random would occur. To some people, I guess they would see it as magic."
Firefly looked at me with a sort of curious gleam in her azure eyes. She said, " You could do Magic!?"
