The Will of the Bon Bon

by Duke of Canterlot

The Point of No Return

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Author's Note

I feel like my third chapter was weaker than the first two and, without spoiling anything, weaker than this chapter. Do you guys agree? If so, I would be interested in hearing why.
I am considering revising that chapter somewhat - so I would love to hear on what I can do to make it better.

I hope I did a decent job with this chapter though.

If you guys think it is simply the lack of Lyra which made the third chapter more dull (and possibly this one).. don't worry, she'll be back in chapter 5.


The Point of No Return

"My assistants have worked very hard", said Iron Will, "especially Bleater and Billy."

Bon-Bon saw two goats staring intently at Iron Will with fascination.

"Bleater and Billy, as we go back to Iron Will's lodgings, you may pick a pony to ride."

What? She was going to have one of those things on her back!

Bleater and Billy approached Bon-Bon. She watched as the two were fighting. It appeared that they both wanted to ride on her and not Cherry Berry. Bon-Bon giggled, they must have not wanted to catch herpes.

"Oh, come on you silly goats! I am so strong that I can totally carry both of you", boasted Cherry Berry.

Bleater bleated.

"My friends, what do you think", Iron Will asked the goats.

"Baaaaah", said Billy.

"Ah, Cherry Berry. Iron Will has just learned that they would both be happy to ride you.. so..."

"Uh, yeah, I guess..."

The two goats happily jumped on Cherry Berry's back. Bon-Bon could hear Cherry groan.

"Looks like you won't have any burdens, Bon-Bon", said Iron Will.

Bon-Bon nodded back.

The two walked ahead of Cherry Berry who was struggling to keep up with two goats on her back. Bon-Bon was in heaven.

"Iron Will would like to learn more about you."

"What? About little old me?"

"Yes."

Bon-Bon couldn't believe it but was confused at the same time. Why was Iron Will wanting to make small talk with her?

"I am just a simple pony from Ponyville."

"You don't seem simple to me.. definitely not simple."

"What do I seem like to you then?"

"You're different than most of the other ponies in that audience. A lot of meek sissies in there tired of being walked over. However, I could tell you were different. In fact, Iron Will suspects that you were playing him."

"Well, Bon-Bon suspects that she had good reason for doing whatever it is she did."

"Don't be too proud of yourself though, lady. I understand goat. They weren't fighting for who could ride you. Neither one wanted to ride you."

"Not my problem."

"Do you want to know why?"

"I don't really care."

"Well, I do. It's because they see you're an assertive pony. A pony who has already mastered Iron Will's techniques before even meeting him. They do not want to ride such a tough pony. Your friend, Cherry Berry, is a different story."

Bon-Bon laughed. She knew Iron Will was full of shit.

"Iron Will is not amused."

"I think I see something of you that is amused", said Bon-Bon while pointing at the large bulge in Iron Will's pants.

"Oh, my little Iron Will. He is getting ready for tonight."

"What is happening tonight", asked Bon-Bon innocently.

"You'll see."

"I know on nights like these, my marefriend Lyra and I would walk through the park and hold hands. Is that what your little Iron Will is excited about?"

"No. Be careful there, Bon-Bon, or you are going to make him shrink."

"He looks big enough already."

Bon-Bon watched as the little Iron Will grew larger.

Bon-Bon turned around. She could see Cherry Berry far in the distance. Iron Will didn't seem particularly interested in that.

The two of them made it to the Ponyville Motel. It was in a dumpy area of Ponyville and kind of simple. For such a powerful celebrity, Iron Will was cheap. They made it to Iron Will's motel room. It was very spartan in nature. Bon-Bon noticed there was no bed. There was simply a blanket on the floor.

"Oh, that. Iron Will demanded that the bed be taken away. He found it to be such low-quality for a creature of his stature."

"Is that a minotaur thing?"

"It's an Iron Will thing."

Bon-Bon saw the little Iron Will was definitely not so little anymore.

What Iron Will did next was a surprise to Bon-Bon. The next second, Bon-Bon could see Iron Will's big and hard cock. It must have been over a foot long. Iron Will pushed Bon-Bon to the ground and pulled her legs apart... the pain... oh ow.... but Bon-Bon felt excited.

She could feel the monster cock pump in and out of her asshole. It was an ambitious one too going as deep inside as it could. She swore that her asshole was bleeding from Iron Will's cock. He had her arms pinned down so she couldn't move. She simply had to take it all.

"You fucking conniving bitch! I will teach you to not mess with Iron Will."

Bon-Bon thought to herself, "I am a bad girl, aren't...", but the thoughts stopped when Iron Will thrusted the hardest he thrusted yet. Ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....... she had never felt so much pain in her life. He didn't cum yet. Iron Will likely had the willpower to hold it in.

Suddenly, she could feel her pussy lips spread open. The "little Iron Will" was now making its way inside. No mercy for Bon-Bon.

"You think you are so assertive and do not need Iron Will. However, you are just like the other ponies... a slave to Iron Will!"

She was Iron Will's slave, wasn't she? Oh my... Bon-Bon was so turned on right now. This was what she dreamed. She felt the cock go in and out of her pussy. She had to endure the pain. Bon-Bon wanted to scream. However, she wanted to show Iron Will that she could take whatever he gave her. She was a tough one. She felt a sense of irony that her toughness came from her ability to surrender to Iron Will. She had an orgasm and let out a moan of relief.

"You came before Iron WIll? Wow, you are weak!! You are not strong. When Iron Will bursts, he knows exactly where he is going to burst!" Iron Will pulled out of Bon-Bon and let her go. She watched as he methodically rubbed his cock. It looked ready to burst. Bon-Bon got up from the floor.

"Iron Will never told you that you could get up!"

Oh right, thought Bon-Bon, how could she disobey her master like that?

She could hear a knock. It must have been Cherry Berry. Fuck her.. oh yes, Iron Will will fuck her.

"You ponies are all the same!!", shouted Iron Will as he pointed his cock above Bon-Bon's mane.

He shot the first load of cum right onto her name. Then another load on her face. Then another load on her back. Finally, Iron Will pinned her down again and poked his cock inside her vagina. The last load went inside. Could all minotaurs do that? Control when they came so easily? No stallion could do that.

"You disappoint Iron Will, Bon-Bon. However, you are worthy of this sexual discharge. Iron Will thinks you need to clean yourself up. Start licking."

Bon-Bon rubbed her mane with her hands and began to lick the salty and viscous cum off of them. She made sure to get her face and back as well. It had a terrible taste to it. However, Bon-Bon supposed it wasn't her choice. Her master demanded it. She got it all.

"You are a hungry one. This is good. Consider that your dinner, courtesy of my cooking." Yea.. Iron Will cooked alright, thought Bon-Bon.

This was Bon-Bon's dream, right? Then why did she feel so bad? Was all of this for nothing? She closed her eyes and thought of Lyra... her sweet and witty marefriend.. her beautiful coat and mane.. her musical talents.. oh my, what did she do? Bon-Bon began to cry. She wasn't so tough after all. Bon-Bon finally got what she wanted but she realized that she just probably lost everything else. Bon-Bon began to sob heavily. She looked up and saw that Iron Will was talking with Cherry Berry. Bon-Bon cried some more. How could she have been so stupid? She was always one of the smartest ponies in school, but when it came to shit like this... she was probably the absolute dumbest pony in all of Equestria. The sex was over and that was it. Bon-Bon kept her eyes closed and laid on the blanket. She could hear a scream from Cherry Berry and then, "Iron Will thinks you are awful! Your beige-colored friend was much more pleasurable."

This made Bon-Bon smile. He did like her. However, Iron Will certainly didn't like her in the same way Lyra did. Bon-Bon's smile turned back into a frown. She kept her eyes closed and must have drifted off to sleep.

Bon-Bon opened up her eyes. It was morning. Oh shit. Bon-Bon never told Lyra where she was. She saw that Iron Will was sleeping next to her. Cherry Berry was at Iron Will's other side. She stuck around too, huh.

Bon-Bon got up. She went from satisfied to terrified. What did Lyra think happen to her? Lyra might have been worried. Lyra might have been angry. Lyra might have been relieved. Bon-Bon didn't know. She just knew that she wanted to get back to her sweetheart as soon as possible. Iron Will treated her the way she wanted to be treated but it was all over and meant to be forgotten.

Bon-Bon did a pretty good job of getting Iron Will's spunk off. She couldn't even feel any dried-up cum on her body. She needed to get back home. Bon-Bon got her things and walked towards the door. She was going to be able to sneak out...

However, she heard, "Now that you have slept with Iron Will, you must take out his garbage!! Each of you take a wagon now and pull it out of Ponyville!"

Wait... what?

"Bon-Bon and Cherry Berry! Iron Will has shown each of you a grand old time and now you must repay the favor!"

Bon-Bon kept her hoof on the doorknob. She was going to get out of here. She turned it but she could feel Iron Will grab her. He picked up Bon-Bon and threw her over his shoulder.

"You will take out Iron Will's garbage... NOW!!"

"Come on, Bon-Bon. It's the least you can do. I can even tell you some jokes I am planning to tell at my next show", said Cherry Berry.

"I am sure I will laugh my head off.."

"You better laugh. Lyra and I have a girl talk coming up soon. It would be a shame if I told her that you were sleeping with Iron Will."

"Oh yes, try your jokes on me. I laugh at everything", Bon-Bon rolled her eyes at Cherry Berry.

Bon-Bon was put down softly onto the ground. She could see the giant wagon with the absolutely horrendous garbage. She clasped herself onto a wagon as did Cherry Berry.

"You will take these away from Ponyville and into the nearest landfill. You will take the route which has you go across the Ponyville town square. I am sure everypony would love to see that you two are doing manual labor."

Bon-Bon and Cherry Berry each took a wagon and began to make their way to Ponyville. What the hell was she going to do if Lyra saw her? Bon-Bon needed to obey Iron Will though at this point, not because it satisfied her anymore but because she knew that he wouldn't hesitate to harm her if she disobeyed.

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