Geoverse One-Shot #8: A Tender Moment

by GeodesicDragon

Rating: mature
Tags: Fluttershy, Sex, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Human, Romance, Original Character
Length: 4728

A mares first time has to be one of the best things she will ever experience, so it's a good thing that Fluttershy has a stallion who is willing to make sure that their first time is exactly that.

During a night out with their friends, Fluttershy and Doctor Haywick find themselves caught up in a discussion they really don't want to be a part of. After all, it's not their fault they haven't quite got to that stage in their relationship yet.

But upon arriving home, they both come to the conclusion that perhaps it's time they did...

AUTHOR'S NOTES

HEADS UP! Fluttershy is a virgin in this one, so expect some blood. There isn't much, but it's still there — and some people need to be warned about this kind of thing.

Flutterwick clop? Sure, why not.

Inspired by Greatodyer. The (cropped due to being NSFW) cover art was commissioned from Dragk (sorry, no link due to NSFW content). Also. this is my first ponyxpony clopfic!

Written in first person from Haywick's point of view. Human tag is there because humans appear in the story.

Published 2014-02-02 21:40:03 UTC
Last updated 2014-02-02 21:40:03 UTC

One-Shot

A TENDER MOMENT

By GeodesicDragon

I looked at my reflection in the mirror, nonchalantly checking my teeth for stray bits of food missed during my flossing routine. Satisfied with what I saw, I clicked my tongue and picked up a bottle of cologne in my magic.

Just as I was about to spray it, a tender voice spoke. "You don't need that, Haywick," it said. "Just go as you are."

I put the bottle down and turned to the door, where Fluttershy was standing. She looked as radiant as ever, and she was even wearing a small bow in her mane to stop it getting in her eyes. "Very well, my dear Fluttershy," I replied, walking over to her and taking the bow out. "But might I suggest that you follow your own advice? If I don't need to make myself smell any better, then you don't need to make yourself look any better." I gently brushed a few strands of her mane aside. "Besides, I think that you look absolutely adorable with your mane like this."

Fluttershy blushed. "Oh, thank you," she said. "I, um, I think you look really nice as well." I smiled, and she returned it. "We'd... we'd better go. Everypony will be waiting for us."

I nodded and followed Fluttershy outside, closing the door behind is. She draped a wing over my back and we walked into Ponyville side by side, leaning into each other comfortably. We didn't talk, simply happy to enjoy each others company, and soon our destination came into view — the Golden Oaks Library.

We approached the doors and gave our names to the guards standing outside, and we were let in without any problems. Fluttershy flapped her wings a couple of times before folding them back to her sides, and we were immediately set upon by one of the other guests — Applejack's husband, John.

"Good evening, folks," he said jovially. "How are you both?"

"Hello, John," I replied. "We're fine, thank you, but what about you and Applejack? How's she doing with the pregnancy?"

John chuckled. "You're the doctor, you tell me," he grinned. "Seriously, though, AJ is fine. But believe me when I say that you'll be the first to know if she's not." There was a brief silence before he clapped his hands eagerly. "Let's change the subject, shall we? What do you want to drink? Cider? Whisky? Martinis?"

"Do you have any orange juice?" Fluttershy asked, to which Jon nodded. "In that case, I'll have some of that."

"As will I," I added. "I'm working tomorrow, so I can't exactly show up to the hospital drunk out of my mind."

John scoffed. "You two are boring," he teased. "But all right. Two glasses of orange juice, coming right up. Feel free to go and talk to the others, and I'll bring 'em over."

He disappeared into the kitchen, allowing Fluttershy and I to trot over to where the rest of our friends were chatting. We took our place amongst them and waited for them to finish the conversation they were having.

"— so needless to say, there is still no luck in getting through to Ace," Twilight was saying. "Geo and I tried using our new-found status as royalty to get in, but those damn bots still refused to let us through, saying 'the master is the only one we obey'."

Pinkie sighed. "He'll show himself when he's ready," she said solemnly, before changing her attitude entirely. "But in the meantime — we're at a party, so everypony make sure that you're wearing your biggest and bestest smiles!"

We fixed smiles on our faces as John came back with our drinks. "Thank you, John," I said. "At least you know that if being a farmer and a spy doesn't work out, you could always be a bartender."

John chuckled and patted me on the back before walking over to talk to Geo. I looked around the room at my friends while Fluttershy leaned into my side. Rainbow Dash and Rarity were both unaccounted for, as were their respective other halves — but it wouldn't take a genius to guess what they were up to.

I glanced at Fluttershy, who saw me looking and gave me a smile and a quick nuzzle. I nuzzled her back, and we both sat back to enjoy the rest of the night.

***

As with any party I attend, a lot of alcohol is consumed. And right now, everypony aside from Fluttershy and I was well on their way to experiencing the mother of all hangovers. A few hours had passed, and we were all gathered around the table playing that ancient party game classic — Truth or Dare. John scanned the room like a hawk, searching for a victim. His eyes soon fell on Geo and he grinned wickedly.

"All right, Geo, Your Highness," he said. "Truth or Dare?"

Geo tapped his chin with a finger. "You know me," he replied. "Truth. I know what you're like when it comes to dares, and I really fancy keeping all my limbs intact."

John sighed. "All right," he said. "Killjoy. Anyway... we all know that the 'romantic' part of your and Twilight's relationship is very much enjoyed by both parties. So what I want to know is... does she have any fetishes at all?"

Geo's eyes widened while Twilight's shrank to pinpricks and her wings shot open. "I-I don't think this is a suit—" she stuttered.

"She likes it when I spank her," Geo interrupted. "Does that count?"

Our jaws dropped open at this statement as Twilight, who was blushing furiously, slugged Geo in the gut and he fell over laughing. "They asked for the truth," he defended. "So I gave it to them."

"What we get up to in the bedroom is nopony's business," Twilight said through gritted teeth. "But since they know of my little 'fetish'... did you all know that Geo likes it when I nibble his neck?" John howled with laughter while Geo's face turned bright red. "And he also likes it when I use my wings to stroke his cock."

John pummelled the floor with a fist, tears streaming down his cheeks. "Aw, man," he said. "That was beautiful. I had no idea you two could be so interesting when it came to getting laid."

"All right, sugarcube," Applejack interjected. "Ah think y'all have had yer fun. Look at 'em, they're both mighty embarrassed."

"Uh... yeah," Twilight and Geo said together. "Embarrassed..."

This only made John laugh even harder, to which Applejack simply rolled her eyes. "All right then, everypony," she said over him. "If'n that's the way he's gonna play it, Ah guess it's only right ta inform ya that John here really likes it when I sit on his face."

John stopped laughing and glared at Applejack, who was grinning smugly. "Oh yeah?" he shot back, not missing a beat. "Well what about you, Miss 'Fuck Me In The Ass?'"

Applejack turned redder than one of her apples as Geo and Twilight both took their turn to burst out laughing, though Fluttershy and I looked at each other warily. We both knew where this conversation was heading, and neither of us liked it.

"You consarn varmint!" Applejack bellowed. "Y'all said ya would keep that 'tween us!"

"Really?" John asked. "Because I seem to remember saying the same thing to you regarding the whole face sitting thing."

Geo snorted with glee and nudged Twilight. "And he thought we were freaky in the bedroom!" he guffawed. "Come to think of it... I was wondering why AJ wasn't sitting down."

John looked around the room frantically. Fluttershy and I both ducked down, trying to avoid his gaze, but unfortunately it failed and he pointed at me. "All right, Haywick," he demanded. "Please tell me that you and Flutters are into all sorts of kinky stuff."

"I-I-I... well, we... uh..." I stammered uncontrollably for a moment before I finally rebooted my brain and sighed. "We're not sure what we're into, because we've not gotten that far yet."

An uncomfortable silence fell across the room, which was finally broken by Applejack. "Really?" she tapped her chin with a forehoof. "Well, Ah guess that's understandable... so both of ya cin tell us 'bout one of yer previous conquests instead."

My face turned beetroot as I giggled like a nervous filly. "Uh... well..." I said. "About that..."

"I've, um, never done it before." Fluttershy said meekly. "I never really had time to find a special somepony before. Haywick is the first stallion I've been with since... well, ever."

"So..." Geo said nonchalantly. "You're both virgins?" Fluttershy and I exchanged a glance and nodded. "Well isn't that sweet?"

I cocked my head at him. "It is?" I asked. "You... you don't find the fact that a stallion of my age is sexually inexperienced to be the most pathetic thing imaginable?"

"Before I came to Equestria, I was a virgin too," Geo replied. "Then I met Twilight, who was one herself, and I have to say that I couldn't have asked for anypony else to be my first. I knew that I loved her, but I knew that the time would come when we would 'unite' in that way." He sighed wistfully. "I guess what I'm trying to say is: your first time has to be special. And if it's with somepony you love, then it's even more special." He put an arm around Twilight and pulled her in for a kiss, a gesture she was all too happy to return. "I can't speak for you and Fluttershy, but I for one will treasure the memory of our first time for the rest of my life."

"As will I," Twilight whispered. "I love you, Geo."

"I love you too, Twi," he said. "Always and forever."

John made a gagging noise. "Cut the sappy crap, you two," he ordered. "Look, Doc, if you and Flutters are virgins then that's no skin off my nose. But you've gotta take the plunge – which I mean literally – and get to it as soon as you can."

Applejack batted him with a forehoof. "Don't you be rushin' 'em, John," she said, before turning to face us. "Ignore him, y'all, since he's basically telling ya to rush home an' jump each others bones."

Fluttershy's wings twitched slightly at this statement and she ruffled them. "Um... I'm not comfortable discussing this with everypony," she said. "Can we change the subject?"

"Of course," Geo replied. "Sorry if we made you feel awkward. Let's see... change of subject, change of subject. Oh! How about we tell John just what to expect when Applejack goes into labour?"

A small smile graced my lips. "As a doctor, I'd be happy to," I nodded. "All right, John, listen up. When she goes into labour..."

***

I opened the front door and allowed Fluttershy to go in first. She had a small grin on her face, which had been there since I'd told John there was a big chance of him being rendered unconscious if he was to hold Applejack's hoof while she was in labour. After all, Earth ponies are exceptionally strong, and Applejack is no exception, but I still think that my advice fell on deaf ears.

"I had fun tonight," Fluttershy said softly. "Well, um, I did after that awkwardness had finally passed." She lowered her head and sighed. "I just hope that you don't hate me for not offering to... have sex with you."

I gasped. "I could never hate you for something so trivial," I chided softly. "I love you, Fluttershy, and I would never make you do something that you weren't comfortable with." I kissed her on the cheek. "I will wait for as long as it takes."

Fluttershy blushed so intensely, I could have sworn that I felt the room get warmer. "Um..." she shifted from hoof to hoof. "It's just that, I've been thinking about what Geo said earlier, and... well... I think I'm finally ready to take the next step."

I tensed up upon hearing this. "A-are you sure?" I asked hesitantly. "I don't want to feel like I'm rushing you or any—"

My words were cut off as Fluttershy leaned forward and kissed me. It wasn't a tender kiss like we usually share, but a very passionate one that nearly knocked me off my hooves. I caught myself and leaned back into it, both of us moaning softly.

As we broke the kiss, Fluttershy gazed into my eyes. "Does that answer your question?" she asked. "I love you, Haywick, and I want you to... to be my first."

"I'll be your first," I replied. "And, for as long as you'll have me, I will also be your only. I love you too, Fluttershy."

"I wouldn't have it any other way," she whispered, kissing me again. "Now... let's go upstairs."

I nodded and allowed her to take hold of one of my forehooves before following her up to the bedroom. My heart was beating so loudly in my chest I felt like one of Vinyl Scratch's speakers, but I persevered and sat next to my beloved on the bed.

"So, er..." I began. "Where do we begin?"

"I've heard Rainbow Dash talk about wing massages, but I'd rather skip that part," Fluttershy replied. "It's just that my wings are still really sensitive after my accident... and in general."

"Say no more," I said, holding up a forehoof. "Besides, I only know about how the bones in a pegasus' wing work — I know nothing about the nerves and... the 'sweet spots'. But I can't very well not do anything, my dear, because what kind of gentlecolt would I be if I didn't tend to your needs?"

Fluttershy seemed to get the hint and lay on her back. Her long silken tail – which often rested between her hind legs – moved to the side, and I got my first glimpse of her marehood. I was transfixed by its beauty and moved in for a closer look, Fluttershy letting out a small "Eep!" as my breath washed over her delicate flower — which was awash with the heady aroma of vanilla.

"Be gentle," she pleaded. "Not that I even have to ask, of course."

I nodded and then tapped my chin, unsure of what to do next.

Come on, Haywick, I thought. Think back to all the time you spent in medical school — and all those nights you spent listening to the other stallions in your dorm talking about their 'conquests'.

I dug through my memories, thinking about everything I had heard during those awkward nights in the dorm, and eventually remembered something that I could use. After repositioning myself on the bed, I leaned in closer to Fluttershy's marehood — and drew my tongue slowly and gently across it.

"Oh... oh, my," she squeaked, her breathing quickening slightly. "I-I never knew that w-would feel so... strange." She paused for a moment. "That's not to s-say that I don't like it, o-of course."

She dug her forehooves into the mattress as I continued licking her, letting out the occasional moan or gasp of pleasure. I could feel myself getting aroused, my erection leaving my sheath. It proved to be rather uncomfortable, so I lay on my side — which in turn allowed Fluttershy to see it.

"Wow," she breathed. "I've never seen a stallions... penis before." She spoke the word 'penis' as though it was foreign to her. "I-I'm not sure I'll w-what to d-do when it c-comes to o-oral."

Her stammering was growing more frequent, which told me that she was getting more excited by the minute. More memories of my time in the dorm came back to me, and I soon found myself probing her inner walls with my tongue. It was like I was operating purely out of instinct, and perhaps a little bit of desire.

"You've either s-studied this," Fluttershy whimpered. "Or you were lying when y-you said you were a v-virgin." She let out a long and throaty moan as my tongue slipped deeper inside her. "I c-can only hope that I'm j-just as good at pleasing you."

"You'll be fine, my dear," I assured her in between licks. "I have every faith in you. And I can assure you that I'm new to this — it's the stallions I was in a dorm with at Manehatten Medical Academy who are to blame for my sudden influx of knowledge." I sighed, Fluttershy letting out another gasp at my breath washing over her. "I can't tell you how awkward it was listening to them talk."

Fluttershy placed a forehoof on my head. "Don't think about the past, Haywick," she said gently. "Just focus on the present and the future, as they are more important — especially, at this moment in time, the former." She giggled at her little joke, and I laughed with her. After a while, her tone became more... I guess 'sultry' would be the only word I could use. "I think you've paid enough attention to me. Now it's your turn."

"But..." I started. "But I didn't finish 'getting you off', as they say."

Fluttershy waved a hoof dismissively. "There will be plenty of time for that later," she replied. "I just want to make you feel as good as you've made me feel... if you, um, don't mind."

I reached out and caressed her face, giving her a loving smile before I rolled onto my back. I was slightly nervous about fully exposing myself, but that soon vanished when I saw the look on Fluttershy's face — one of wondrous excitement. She tentatively reached out and brushed a forehoof along my length, giggling softly at the groan I was unable to suppress.

I lay there for a while, simply enjoying the feeling of Fluttershy running her forehooves gently along my member. She took her time, gliding up to the top and then back down to the hilt — I took it to mean that she was simply getting used to how it felt.

She eventually leaned forwards and – with the same amount of hesitation I had shown – kissed the head, before opening her mouth and taking in a little of my girth. I could feel her using her tongue to make it wet — a prelude of things to come.

Fluttershy bobbed her head back and forth, being careful not to take too much of me at once. For her first time, I can safely say that what she was doing didn't feel wrong at all. She let out a moan as she worked, the vibration from which I felt as it cascaded down my shaft. My tongue lolled out of my mouth, and I became content to just lie there and let her do her thing.

But, alas, all good things must come to an end — and so Fluttershy removed me from her mouth with a wet slurp. "I, um, I didn't do anything wrong, did I?" she asked timidly, noticing the half-dazed expression on my face, to which I responded by shaking my head. "Oh, that's good. But... I'm ready to move on now."

With those words she stood up on the bed and lay on her stomach, her flanks still in the air. I got into position behind her, my forehooves on either side of her, and gave her a warm smile. "Are you ready for this?" I asked. "Because – and I hate to be so brutally honest – it's going to hurt. A lot."

"I know it will," she replied. "But I know that one, you wouldn't hurt me intentionally and two, the pain won't last for very long."

I smiled, giving her a quick nuzzle before guiding myself to her entrance. The time had finally come for the two of us to finalise our love, and I for one was going to make sure we enjoyed it. I pressed the head of my penis against her entrance and then, with final confirmation from the mare beneath me, I pushed myself inside.

It felt incredible. Fluttershy's walls clamped around me and I hissed in pleasure — but I was quickly snapped out of my stupor by Fluttershy screaming in agony. I stopped and looked down to see blood trickling out of her. "I'm sorry, Fluttershy," I said. "I didn't mean to be that forceful."

"I-it's okay," she whimpered. "I knew that this was going to happen eventually. P-please, just give me a moment to get used to it." I nodded, staying firmly in place while Fluttershy gently manoeuvred herself underneath me — desperately trying to get used to the feeling of her walls stretching to accommodate my length.

After a while she stopped moving and nodded at me, a signal to resume doing what I was doing. I gently moved my hips back and forward, not wanting to hurt her any more. And at least this way we could both enjoy the pleasure for longer.

We both moaned quietly, savouring the feeling of being so close to one another, letting ourselves get lost in the moment. I finally hilted within her, our hips meeting as one, and she let out a small yet appreciative whine. "I-it's not as bad as I thought it would be," she said. "I'm so glad I could do this with somepony as kind and caring as you, Haywick. I love you."

"I couldn't have said it better myself, Fluttershy," I replied with a contented sigh. "I love you too."

"Y-you can go a bit faster if you want," she continued. "The pain is all but gone now." Sensing my hesitance, she gently nuzzled my leg. "Don't worry, I trust you impeccably."

I swallowed my nervousness and slowly started to increase the speed of my thrusting, watching intently for Fluttershy showing any signs of pain or discomfort. When she instead moaned louder than before, it spurred me on to greater speeds — though it wasn't anywhere near as fast as the sex our friends boasted about.

"Oh... oh, my!" Fluttershy squeaked. "I n-never knew this would be so good! Why did we wait so long?!"

"I d-don't know," I grunted. "I guess we were just c-clever enough not to rush into it like the rest of our friends no doubt did."

Fluttershy didn't reply as another, and much louder, moan left her mouth. She grabbed a pillow and buried her face into it, muffling the sounds of her pleasure. I, on the other hoof, had no such help in quieting my own groans of pleasure — which were now reverberating throughout the small cottage.

My hind legs suddenly began to wobble and I fell onto my back, my member leaving Fluttershy as I did so. She gasped in surprise at the sudden dismounting and turned around. "Oh, dear," she said. "Are you all right, Haywick?"

"I'm fine," I said, waving a forehoof dismissively. "I guess I'm just not used to standing on my hind legs for so long."

Fluttershy crawled up the bed towards me before coming in for a passionate kiss. "You stay there then," she cooed as she pulled away from me. "And let me see what I can do to help you."

She positioned herself above me and gently lowered herself onto my throbbing shaft, an adorable squeak leaving her as I hilted. As she sat there, I looked up at her. The moonlight was flowing through the window and illuminating her body. Her soft green eyes twinkled like the stars above, and the flowing pink mane hanging limply around her head only served to accentuate her beauty.

She dove in for another quick kiss and then took hold of my forehooves, laying them to rest on her sides. With a sly wink she started moving again, allowing me to run my forehooves along the sleek contours of her body. I couldn't help but think that the night had taken an interesting turn — we had both progressed so far in our relationship, and I was loving every second of it.

Fluttershy placed her forehooves on either side of me and leaned closer. I looked into her eyes the entire time she was grinding her hips against mine, both of us wearing a smile that Pinkie Pie would have been proud of. Our moans and gasps of pleasure bounded around the room and then some — I could have sworn that I heard the animals downstairs chattering to each other in confusion at the strange noises that were coming from their caretaker's bedroom.

I changed my hold on Fluttershy and pulled her down on top of me, wrapping my forelegs around her and pressing her tightly against me. She returned the gesture fondly, wrapping her own forelegs around my neck — which she proceeded to lick. I gasped and responded by placing several small kisses on her chest, trying hard not to giggle at the feeling of her fur tickling my lips.

"Thank you," she whispered. "Thank you for being my first."

"No," I replied. "Thank you for being my first."

We both smiled and kissed passionately, moaning into each others mouths as I thrust into Fluttershy's warm and inviting depths. The minutes ticked by slowly, while the pressure in my loins began to build up. I was eager for release, and Fluttershy new it.

"If you want to, um, 'finish', then feel free," she panted. "I won't think any less of you."

"But what about you?" I grunted. "I have to get you off as well, don't I? And I doubt I can do that if I come first."

Fluttershy laughed timidly. "I... I'm actually resisting the urge myself," she confessed. "M-maybe we can... finish together?"

"I would like nothing more," I replied.

With those words, Fluttershy straightened herself up and began matching my speed. Our bodies came together with a satisfying smack, our moans became louder and more frequent — and then, with an Equestria-shattering force, we both climaxed. Crying each others names I emptied everything I had into her entrance, our fluids combining as one. Her wings flapped erratically while the orgasm rocked her to her very core before she collapsed – exhausted and panting – onto my chest.

I eased myself out of her, ignoring the mess now forming on the sheets, and held her close. "That was wonderful," I said, kissing her on the cheek. "Thank you, my love."

Fluttershy sighed contentedly. "They say that good things come to those who wait," she said, nuzzling my cheek. "I'm so glad that we did. I have to admit that I was scared about doing that. I guess I'm just lucky to have somepony as sweet and caring as you, Haywick. I love you so much."

"I love you too, Fluttershy," I replied. "Let's get washed up and go to sleep. But I dare say that we have quite a story to tell our friends, the next time they start talking about their sex lives."

Fluttershy giggled as she got off the bed and walked into the bathroom with me close behind. I was so happy to be with her, and even more so to have finally cemented my love for her once and for all. As she turned the shower on, I looked to the stars and thanked every deity I could think of for blessing me with the love of my life. And with that thought in mind, I walked into the bathroom and closed the door behind me.

But had I been paying attention, I would have noticed a certain little rabbit hiding underneath the bed...

With a look of complete and utter terror fixed firmly upon his face.

Author's Note

And so concludes the first time I've written clop for my OC.

To those of you thinking that the sex was a bit... meh... it's supposed to be. It's their first time after all, so of course they're not going to be experts at it.

Then again, I can't really say that I'm expert at writing clop. :rainbowlaugh:

Thanks to Greatodyer for John's 'Truth or Dare' question. He asked it as part of a Q&A session — and I loved it SO MUCH, I just had to use it properly.