the big day

by darkwolf5925

Rating: everyone
Tags: Romance, Alternate Universe, Human, Sad
Length: 858

wedding doesn't goes as planned

the wedding of fluttershy and big mac does not goes has planned (this is my first story hope you like.
if you don't like it that's OK)

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-03-01 23:28:39 UTC

Chapter 1

Today is finally the big day the wedding day of Fluttershy and big Mac.  Fluttershy is nervous and excited at same time. She can still remember the day he propose to her. It was at her 21st birthday were pinkie pie threw a surprise party of course.  Big mac came and gave  her a necklace and then he got down to his knees said "you are the most beautiful girl ah ever met so Rachel shyer (her real name) will you merry me. Fluttershy eyes winded.  Butterflies in her stomach. She to speak but every time she open her mouth she got nothing. Finally she had a the courage to say "I-I got to think about it." "yes!" She answered quickly  then start hugging big Mac. the whole  crowed started clapping. It took six months but they finally mange to set up the wedding all she has to do is get her wedding dress from Rarity.  Rarity has beg her to make the wedding dress.  She arrives at rarity's 2:00 "hi rarity." She says." "Hello darling  I just finished your dress. "But I want you to see it when your wearing it.  So put on this blind fold." Fluttershy with awkward face puts on the blind fold. Rarity takes her hand and walks to the mirror.(20 seconds later.) Alright darling its finished now removed the blind fold. Fluttershy remove the blind fold just to see herself in a embellished tulle strapless dress with small sparkling diamonds . Fluttershy covering her mouth then uncovered it. "oh my." "Its look beautiful!" rarity always loves to hear someone to reacted like this about her dresses "I knew you will love it of course." "But i  also asked for long sleeves." fluttershy noticed. She probable would have notice it

earlier but she was too distracted admiring her wedding dress. rarity knew she was going to say that."i know that you wanted sleeves

but you keep covering that perfect skin and a beautiful body . Its make me little jealous sometimes i have to admit. Fluttershy blushes a little

and does not know how to react. " I been waiting for this day darling. You finally with a man who didn't cheat on you.

all the painful memory's coming back. three guys turned her down one even mean it.  Leaving rarity's place with her wedding dress in a bag. Now get the cake form pinkie   Returning to her home 3 hours has pass fluttershy noticing that its almost time for the wedding and suppose to meet applejack texted her about  something. when she arrive at sweat apple acres she spotted applejack "there's Mah soon to be sister in law." Applejack greed. "hi applejack." fluttershy greed back hugging her going inside the house then upstairs to applejack room. where she saw applebloom. "fluttershy!"applebloom said running to hug her. "hey applebloom." fluttershy hugging back. Applebloom release the hug and  the three sat on the bed. "flutters there's something ah want give y'all something appleboom holding in hands is what appears to be a small case. and give to applejack. Applejack opens the small case then carefully pickups a golden necklace with green emeralds on it. Applejack now speaks. "This here necklace belong to our ancestor as a give from her husband right before he left to fight in the civil war it was a given done to family member to family member now  i'm given this here necklace to you. Fluttershy does not know what to say giving their family value to her "I don't understand why are you given it tome?" Fluttershy says in confusion. "As a weddin gift you deserve it. thinkin Y'all might wear it the wedding." "Speakin of the weddin"

Big mac in his suit waiting for his bride. fluttershy now walking down the brown church carpet. to face her husband

"we are here now to see these two  young people  (after the everyone said their lines)

Marcus (his real full name.)  would you take Rachel to be your loving wedding wife?" the priest said  "i do" answer big mac

Rachel do you take mac to be your loving wedding husband                     "i do"

I now pronounce...  at this fluttershy can feel pain in her chest starting to sweat a little and then started to vomit. the crowed looks at  in disguised.  fluttershy who can now barely stand knew the caused of it. she was about to say something but she started to vomit again till she finally collapse

big mac catches her  before she hits the ground  Rachel! Rachel! he lays her on ground gently. and on his knees lifting her head up.   Big mac put his head down on her chest. She havin a heart attack!! he shouts paincing

"someone help!" everyone started standing  her friends coming closer. don't just stand their call a ambulance! twilight quickly pull out her cell phone and dial 911. Big mac put his head down on her chest to see if she still breathing and with luck she is but heavily breathing. "thank you so much!" twilight before hanging up the phone. "They said their on way." Twilight says but still worried

that fluttershy might not make it before the ambulance gets here. " just hang on Rachel. Y'all will OK. Outside of the church were