The story of Whiplash

by Wagonwheel

Rating: everyone
Tags: Slice of Life
Length: 1083

Scootaloo can't sleep so she wrote the story of Whiplash

Scootaloo can't sleep so she wrote the story of Whiplash. Don't know why I put this all In one chapter I just did

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-12 07:18:35 UTC

The Story Of Whiplash

It was midnight Scootaloo couldn't sleep. She was so restless she decided to wright the story of Whiplash.

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Whiplash was a young filly around 6 years old when her mom died. Whiplash's mom was The Pony In Black, a stealthy thief who wore all black. She made a suit of black for her daughter and matching saddlebags.

When the pony in black died Whiplash ran away. She grabbed a locket of her and her mom, a photo with a frame, and her moms lock-pics, a trick knife, got into the suit and saddlebags her mom made her and ran. She didn't want to go to the orphanage so she ran stealing from ponies in the middle of the night.  Whiplash stopped running when she got to a side path in the road. She took it. Then she smelt it. The aroma of apples.  She walked into the orchard. It was full of apples and it was empty.  "Easier than burgling fruit from a fruit stand." Whiplash said to herself. She found a tree with a low branch and climbed up she took one apple and leaped to a new tree. When she was done she had a bag full of apples and the orchard didn't look touched. She was about to leave when she smelt fresh apple fritters. Whiplash went inside in full costume. She looked around. Fritters, fritters  where were the fritters.  "Bingo!" she said she grabbed the tin of apple fritters and started to leave when a voice said

" who are ya? Why are ya takin our fritters?" Whiplash turned to see a yellow filly about her age standing in the kitchen with her.

"Because I am ,and I am the pony in black's daughter."  She picked up her trick knife  and pointed it at the filly. The filly's amber eyes shrunk to pinpricks. Whiplash jumped out the window, and seeing the nearest town  galloped towards it hoping it had a ally where  she could eat in peace.  After eating lots of apples and a fritter Whiplash went to sleep halfway  through the next day. She woke up and she went and explored the town. She learned the town was called Ponyville thanks to a huge sign on the outskirts that said 'Welcome to Ponyville ' and other stuff like that. That night she stole 10 bits. The following day she went to a place called Sugercube Conner a pink pony was at the cash register.

she walked up and asked for a milkshake. " ohh new pony. I'm Pinkie Pie and I know every pony in Ponyville and I've never seen you before so you must be new."

" uhh yeah I'm new." Whiplash said.

"Oops sorry your chocolate milkshake." Said Pinkie Pie disappearing to the back room. Whiplash was confused. She got her milkshake and sat down. When she left, Pinkie Pie called after  her" I didn't catch your name."  That night Whiplash snuck into a house full of animals she was rather proud of that.  She didn't wake one animal until she tripped over a bunny bed.  The bunny was angry she disturbed his sleep. Whiplash recoiled as the bunny shrieked at the unknown intruder suddenly a  yellow pegasus with a pink mane and tail fluttered down the stairs.

" um Angel do you think that maybe um you could uh quiet down." Angel pointed at Whiplash. "Oh my are we being robbed?" In response Whiplash threw open a cabinet door and grabbed a jar of cookies. The yellow pegasus smiled. Foals liked cookies even robber foals. The yellow pegasus grabbed two glasses from another cabinet and milk from the fridge and poured two glasses of milk. ( total shock) and offered one to Whiplash. Whiplash took the milk glass on her hoof and set it down and opened her hood just enough so that her muzzle was showing. She dipped a cookie into the milk and ate it. "Why don't you um spend the night there's a spare bed in the um other room. My names Fluttershy by the way. Now take the cookies and go to bed."

"Thank you" Whiplash said in a English accent "it's been a while since I slept in a bed."

"Oh poor thing were do you sleep at home?"    Fluttershy asked.

" don't have one or I did until mom died."

"Oh " Fluttershy didn't know what to say to that.

then Whiplash went to bed. The next day Fluttershy went to the orphanage and a staff member came back to pick Whiplash up.

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"Well what's your name?" They were at the orphanage and asking Whiplash her name.

"Umm scoots uh loop"

"Scootaloop? "

" no Scootaloo .  "  she said reaizing how stuipd scootsaloop sounded

. "well Scootaloo you need to start school soon on Friday."  A few weeks later Scootaloo made a friend called Sweetie Belle and dropped the  name Whiplash entirely. A few years later she got adopted by a nice couple. A few months after that she was making a daisy sandwich when her parents brought home a young white pegasus filly with a light pink mane and tail and electric blue eyes named Sugar Crisp. Scootaloo offered her a daisy sandwich and she said yes. ( not that I blame her the food was terrible.) Scootaloo smiled. Life was good.

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Scootaloo put down her pen and glanced at the clock 1:30 it said. Scootaloo was debating with herself weather to bring the apple fritter tin back to Apple Bloom with a note from 'Whiplash', tell Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle her story in the morning, or do nothing and go back to bed when her door opened "Scootaloo?" Said a voice.

"Yes Sugar Crisp?" She replied without turning around.

"I can't sleep."

" why not?"

I'm nervous about the new school." Sugar Crisp stated.

Scootaloo smiled. "At least you start when everypony else does. I had to start in the middle of march." " thanks Scootaloo." She went back to her room and back to sleep. Then Scootaloo slipped out her window in full costume with a apple fritter tin and a note taped to it that read : 'Apple Bloom sorry I took this and pointed a fake knife at you. Forgive me , The Pony In Black's Daughter.'

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Apple Bloom heard noises downstairs. She waited until they stopped and went down. When she got there she saw a apple tin stolen years before with a note Apple Bloom smiled.

Nopony sleeps the night before school starts.