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A Song of Storms: The Summer Lands

by The 24th Pegasus
The problems between the three tribes didn't end with the founding of Equestria. As the nation faces race riots, assassinations, and the threat of a civil war, it will take everything Commander Hurricane has just to see it survive the years.

AUTHOR'S NOTE: This story has been cancelled because I wasn't happy with how things were going. The largest problem came from trying to jam what should have been two books of material into one. So, for the time being at least, the original Summer Lands will remain on my user page, at least until I eventually get around to writing the two stories to conclude Hurricane's tale, as it should have been from the start. Do not consider any material contained within to be canon to the Price of Loyalty universe.


By writing these words, we hope that we can honor the spirit of our father, and remember him in the way that he truly was, not in the way that Celeste and Lūn wish for him to be. Long after we die and the world moves on, what really happened will have been forgotten to time, but as long as this last piece of evidence remains, then the truth can still be separated from history’s truth.

May our father, Commander Hurricane, rest in peace, knowing that we remember him and, through us, others may as well.
Ante Legionem nihil erat, et nihil erit post Legionem.

Commander Typhoon and Commander Cyclone.

After the founding of Equestria, Commander Hurricane, Queen Platinum, and Chancellor Puddinghead laid down the framework for the fledgling nation and migrated their respective ponies to new lands to escape the eternal blizzard. But the problems and tensions didn't end there; no, in just a few short years, Equestria faces race riots, mysterious assassinations, and the looming threat of a civil war. With no end in sight and the paradise he had worked so hard to attain splitting apart at the seams, Commander Hurricane desperately searches for some way to save it. What he found was nothing short of divine.

Officially part of "The Price of Loyalty" storyverse, in collaboration with LoyalLiar

Coverart provided by Ruirik
Editing provided by LoyalLiar, Ruirik, Solidfire, Pega-Ace, and Dusk Watch

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164666 words: Estimated about 14 hours to read

25 Chapters:

  1. Prologue: The Journal 2014-01-12 20:07:59 UTC
    4533
  2. Chapter 1: Turmoil 2014-01-12 20:07:55 UTC
    10694
  3. Chapter 2: Whispers 2014-02-04 03:14:24 UTC
    11748
  4. Chapter 3: Red Knives 2014-02-17 18:51:08 UTC
    9054
  5. Chapter 4: Sun and Stars 2014-03-04 23:18:03 UTC
    13025
  6. Chapter 5: Sisters 2014-04-04 21:51:12 UTC
    15101
  7. Chapter 6: Bring Them Home 2014-05-13 00:04:34 UTC
    17407
  8. Chapter 7: The Knife that Cuts Deepest 2014-07-12 23:44:05 UTC
    16269
  9. Chapter 8: Turn Not Thy Face from Me 2014-09-16 03:48:41 UTC
    15687
  10. Chapter 9: The Rising Sun 2014-12-01 22:02:28 UTC
    14102
  11. Chapter 10: Mortality 2015-01-18 19:42:15 UTC
    10487
  12. Chapter 11: Ponies of Glass 2015-03-19 02:56:56 UTC
    15411
  13. Chapter 12: A Feast for Ponies 2015-06-02 20:15:24 UTC
    11148
  14. Chapter 13: The Brink 2015-09-11 22:13:56 UTC
  15. Chapter 14: The Breaking of the Storm 2015-09-18 20:53:16 UTC
  16. Chapter 15: Ice Cage 2015-11-01 01:43:58 UTC
  17. Chapter 16: Si Vis Pacem... 2015-12-25 05:02:53 UTC
  18. Chapter 17: ...Para Bellum 2016-01-01 04:05:41 UTC
  19. Interlude I 2016-01-24 05:55:10 UTC
  20. Interlude II 2016-01-31 01:57:42 UTC
  21. Interlude III 2016-02-05 05:30:58 UTC
  22. Interlude IV 2016-02-27 01:38:01 UTC
  23. Chapter 18: Crimson Fangs 2016-03-10 03:43:59 UTC
  24. Chapter 19: Fear and Loathing in Everfree 2016-03-22 06:11:46 UTC
  25. Chapter 20: Cherish the Thought 2016-04-15 16:59:27 UTC