Neo's Inventions

by NeovilusAlpheim

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Dark, Alternate Universe, Human, Romance, Comedy
Length: 1116

This is a story of a Young, Optimist, and Brilliant Scientist who traveled far...faaar away to another galaxy identical to Milky Way

Before I start, I wanna let you know that if this story similar to some other story, then I am so… sorry
K! let's begin

Neo…The only good guy who escaped Earth's Destruction which was caused by his own brother and his men with the very weapon he gave him. The Young Inventor also suffered amnesia due to some error with in his invention . What is his Invention? What happened to him? and How did it happen? Join his adventure of Friendship, Love, and recovery from his amnesia and saved Equestria from his brother's Wrath.

some part of the story will require you to watch the fighting scene from HERE! since I dont really know how to describe fighting so much also check out stickpage.com they have awesome videos!
But I will put the specific link later in the story.

P.S.
Earth will be Like Asgard in THOR [ again I do not own this ] where they combine Magic with Technology Also Neo will be much more like Tony Stark from IRON MAN [ again….I don't Own this ] which mean he is smart n' stuff also good at martial arts
This is my first HiE fic. so please…. be gentle
this will happen in around season 3 but it may have some part from season 1/2 anyway the point is Twilight is not Princess yet and not EG yet.
I do not own MLP : FiM
I do not own stickpage.com or any of their animations their animation belongs to each of their animator

P.P.S.

Teen tag is for maybe some bad words but not so much though
Gore tag is because I'm gonna explain some injuries in a very gruesome way possible
Sex tag is I'm planning to make Princess Celestia / Luna / anypony else somewhat 'Slutty' but Do not fret because this is a NO CLOP story
I wouldn't call it Alternate Universe I'm more to….. Different Planet

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-17 19:10:04 UTC

Prologue - What is That Thing?!

<=======[--- Prologue ---]=======>

Today in Ponyville, Twilight Sparkle is really excited because she will be having a picnic while watching a meteor shower with her friends, which is gonna happen Tonight, and now she is preparing for stuff she is going to need later. ”Spikeee~” she called, ”Spike?” She’s beginning to worry, ”Spike Where Are You?! If you don’t come down here, I’ll take all of your gems away for a week!” the shout of the word gems causes Spike, who is sleeping under the table to avoid chores, to bump his head, ”WHA--*bump*--Ouch! Okay, Okay, Jeez Twilight, can’t you just let me take a nap for 15 minute…” Spike groaned while thinking about 'Avoiding Chores FAIL', ”I’m sorry Spike, but today is the day for--” before she could finish, Spike immediately cut her off and said, ”The Meteor Shower, I know…” still in a half asleep tone while going down the stair, ”Well then do we have everything?” Twilight asked Spike ”I told you We do ! I already double chec--you know what fine let’s triple check it, shall we?” Spike said with an annoyed tone because of Twilight’s always-triple-check habit ”Carpet Check. Telescope Check.---” and so on until all things are triple checked. ”Okay so that’s that ‘til--” Spike said then looked at the clock, the time is 6 PM ”--8 PM, so at least you have 2 more hours to spend...” Spike said, before he yawned while going back upstairs, then Twilight replied ”me? Don’t you mean we?” Spike just replied before…”Yeah you, cause I’m going back to my dreamworld,  or more like Rarity World” with a small giggle, he goes back to his ‘Rarity World’ again. Twilight shook her head and giggled, then Twilight decided to read a book to spend her time.

============== 1 hour 50 minutes later ==============

Just as Twilight finished her book, she heard somepony knocks her door then looked at the time before opening the door, ‘it is 10 minutes to 8 PM’ she thought, then she opens the door and see her 5 friends standing outside her Library-in-a-Tree House “Sup Twilight!” Rainbow Dash said “Hi Twi, are y’all ready ta go?” Applejack asked, “And also where is Spike, darling?” Rarity also asked “As usual, he is sleeping waiting ‘til you guys come” Twilight said with an excited tone “Spike! Let’s go!” Spike groaned “Five more minutes…” with a really tired tone, then Rarity rolled her eyes and said “Spike, dear, you do know it is rude to keep a lady waiting?” Rarity half shouted, but enough for Spike to hear from upstairs, Then in a blink of an eye he is holding Rarity’s hoof and kissed it and said “I hope you forgive me for waiting” Rarity rolled her eyes and everyone started to giggle followed by a burst of laughter, then Pinkie said “Okie Dokie Lokie, now that everypony is awake, let's go to our meteor-shower-at-night-picnic!” Pinkie shouted happily while bouncing to the direction of the hill they are going, then Twilight said “Ok then, let’s go!” then the dragon and The Mane 6 is off to the hill following Pinkie Pie.

========== at top of the hill ===========

Everypony was all enjoying some games while having some Cupcakes and Fruit Punch, brought by Pinkie Pie, under Princess Luna’s beautiful full moon. Then as they were playing some games then they stopped when Twilight saw the first meteor light shooting down which was followed by thousands of other light, The group was smiling in awe some says ‘ooh’ ‘ah’ ‘whoa’ Twilight magically levitate her book and quill getting every information about The Meteor Shower. When she’s done she said “Wow isn’t it beautiful girls?” all of them said in unison “yeah…”

==============  A few minutes later ===============

Then Applejack suddenly said with a half-panic and worry tone “Am ah’ ta only pony here that think one of the light is headin’ towards us?” Then Twilight shouts “Oh no! Everypony Run AWAY!” Twilight used her magic to levitate Spike, who was sleeping, to safety.

Then with a large ‘BOOM’ something crashed and made a 25 meter wide and 2 ½ meter deep hole with an unknown object in the middle of it. Everypony was looking at each other with concern then Applejack said “What in Tarnation jes’ happened?!”  Fluttershy was hiding behind Rainbow Dash and said “W-what i-i-is t-that?” Twilight’s horn glows with purple aura, she is charging up an attack spell, in case something inside about to attack, then she said “Anypony There?! Show yourself !” then the Meteorite releases steam which made a ‘hisss’ sound then an door opened upward and downward, then everypony realized it was some kind of transport, then a creature stepped out, it walked 3 steps then collapsed to the ground, The Mane 6 watched in horror when they noticed that the creature is wounded, Blood is coming out from creature’s deep cuts on its body, small holes in its right shoulder and left thigh, and more blood is slowly going down its forehead.  Fluttershy then she started to shed tears and turned around because she couldn’t bear to watch it, she then hugged Rainbow Dash's Back while whispering in fear

“ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh” Then Spike started to wake up "--*yawn*-- hey guys, what did I missed?" when he noticed the wounded creature then Spike panicly said “What is that?! Oh no! Its dying, Twilight we should help it! And what is that BLOOD?! Uh… I think I’m gonna--” Spike then fainted "Well C'mon ! let's bring this thing to hospital, PRONTO !" Twilight nodded and cast a healing spell to stop the bleeding, then The Mane 6 bring The…Thing to Ponyville Hospital. Everypony in town was kinda' freaked out when they saw The Girls running towards the Hospital carrying A Strange Looking Creature. By the time they got there, some nurses and doctors were freaked out, then Twilight told the Nurses and Doctors what happened and they agreed to take care of The Thing.

Then Twilight sent a letter to Princess Celestia about what happened, then she got a reply that says she will be coming to Ponyville as soon possible to see this…Thing, then she also told Twilight to prepare ‘The Elements’ just in case of The Thing is a hostile creature. She understood and about to go back to the Library where she put The Elements are, before she left Twilight told everypony to stay at the room to keep an eye to 'The Thing', then everypony nodded and Twilight left to get The Elements and some pillow and blankets since they are going to stay there for the night.

To be continued....... [Lol 'Teh cliché']