War with Yourself

by MagicalFlyingWonderTaco

Rating: mature
Tags: Princess Celestia, Dark, Alternate Universe, Human, Sad, Main 6, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Other
Length: 1703

Fluttershy wakes up in a weird world

Fluttershy wakes up in the land of Teiwar, a civilization in the middle of war, and her and her friends have to try and End it

Published 2014-01-16 01:40:04 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-16 01:40:04 UTC

Civil War in Teiwar

Today was a typically rainy day in Equestria. Although Fluttershy was getting ready to go out to Twilight's house for her birthday party. She grabs a purple box with Twilight's birthday present inside. She puts a raincoat and heads out. However, on her way there she gets struck by lightning and blacks out. When she wakes up, she hears a familiar voice. "Fluttershy... Fluttershy wake up. Come on Fluttershy, you gotta get up." said the voice. Fluttershy opens her eyes, and sees Twilight, but only it doesn't look like Twilight.

"T... Twilight?" said Fluttershy.

"Yeah", asked Twilight.

"Where did your fur go?" asked Fluttershy.

"Fur? Fluttershy, we've never had fur. We would look strange with fur." said Twilight.

"Also, what are you wearing" asked Fluttershy.

"I'm wearing the bear pelt coat you made me" said Twilight. A coat made of a bear? That's crazy, No pony ever harmed animals. Why now?

" Also Where are we?" Fluttershy asked.

"We are in the middle of nowhere. We should probably leave, we have a meeting to attend to, and the Snow Devils get feisty in this part of Teiwar" Said Twilight. "Snow Devils?" asked Fluttershy. "Come on, we gotta go." said Twilight.

All of a sudden, a voice comes in Fluttershy's head. "Don't go with her... It's a trap... She will take you to your death," said the mysterious voice. This voice startled her, but she ignored it and moved on. They arrived in the town of Greysol, and passed through the Festival of Life. Fluttershy looks down at her feet and notices she no longer has hooves, but unlike Twilight, she had nothing on her feet. She sees a mirror and sees she has a small mussel, and her ears are small and out of place.

"Fluttershy, come here, we're at the meeting place", called Twilight. Fluttershy obeyed and ran towards Twilight. They walked inside and Fluttershy followed Twilight into a large conference room.All of her friends were sitting at a large conference table waiting for their arrival.

"There you two are, I was beginning to think that the wolves have gotten you guys." said rainbow. Then a tall woman wearing combat armor walked in the room.

"Alright everyone, we need a plan to attack Fort Eivaslav, any suggestions?" asked the warrior woman.

"Twilight, who... who is this woman?" asked Fluttershy. "You know who she is, she is General Yalaka." explained Twilight.

"Why do we need to take over that fort, hasn't it been getting attacked by dragons lately?" asked Applejack.

"Yes, but is is very important because we can stop the Union from getting any more war supplies. The fort is not far from Quarrelstone. The city in which Queen Celestia is in hiding." Explained the general.

"I know, I know, I know!" exclamed Pinkie.

"We are not gonna dress up as Ghouls!" yelled everyone except Fluttershy. "I know, why don't we start a skirmish. We can have cannons surrounding the area, and have soldiers run in with swords and muskets attack the inside." said Rarity. They all looked at each other and agreed that that would be a good.plan.

"Twilight... why are we at war?" asked Fluttershy.

"It all started five years ago when Queen Celestia became Queen Celestia. She became mad with power, created laws that were unreasonable. The law that started the revolution was the no weapons law. Everyone already had a lot of weapons, and a lot of people when to jail. Until the one day, when the guards were arresting someone, they found this one person was selling weapons to locals, and the man was sentenced to death . But when they went to hang the man, a mysterious figure pulled out a musket and shot all the guards and freed the man. The figure had vanished, but left a mark. The mark of our army, The Prowlets. This war is to overthrow out terrible leader." explained Twilight.

"Why would Celestia do such a thing. I mean if she knew this would make people mad, why would she create the law." said Fluttershy.

"Nobody knows. We should probably go, we need to takeover Fort Eivaslav." said Twilight. They grabbed their muskets and Great swords and took off. When they got to the fort, they saw the cannons ready to fire. The first cannon fires, and takes down the shut doors.  Fluttershy and her friends enter the fort to kill the forts leaders.

When they enter they find a jail hall, and inside were rebel soldiers. They were tortured to death, as can be told by the marks on their bodies.They continue onward and find a room filled with enemy soldiers. They sneak attacked all of them, slitting their throats. They tried to move onward, but they came to a locked door.

"Oh Damn it! The door is locked, what are we gonna do now?" said Rainbow. "With the key, Duh." said Pinkie, lightly slapping Rainbow with a small gold key. They open the door and they find a large dark room. Fluttershy walks in first and within seconds, they hear a gun being readied. A flame was lit and they saw the fort's general, aiming his musket at Fluttershy's head.

"One more step, and the bitch loses her brains!", exclaimed the general. Out of nowhere, a gunshot was heard. The general looked around, and then collapsed on the ground. He was shot in the back, and it was General Yalaka who shot him. "We have almost defeated the enemy! Keep attacking!" shouted Yalaka. After about an hour of fighting, the battle had ended.

"Close the roads, and the war is in our hands." shouted Yalaka. Then Fluttershy hears the mysterious voice again. "You know nothing of these people, and you help them. The more you help, the faster your death is coming." said the voice. "They're using you, they know you have a power that can stop anything, they just don't want to tell you." said the voice.

"P.. Power? What do you mean by power? And I doubt my friends would ever betray me." said Fluttershy. "You will find out in time young girl." said the mysterious voice. "Now we need to invade Quarrelstone." Exclaimed Yalaka.

Then, Fluttershy walks to all her friends and says "Hey.. you guys, can I uhm... ask you a question?" "Yeah, you can ask us anything." said everyone else. "Do I have a special power that you guys need?" asked Fluttershy.

"No, why do you ask?" questioned Applejack.  "I... I heard a voice and it said you were just using me." said Fluttershy. "Aww sugar, you know we would never use you, we all are your friends." said Applejack.

"You should probably get some rest, we have to invade Quarrelstone tomorrow." said Twilight. "Ok." said Fluttershy. Later that night, Fluttershy had been woken up by the sound of screams. She found Twilight and had asked what was going on. "Twilight, what's going on?" asked Fluttershy.

"Snow Devils have gotten in and they are angry." explained Twilight. All of a sudden a white, winged creature that had blood red eyes, chased soldiers down the hall. Fluttershy grabbed a sword and ran towards the creature, and stabbing it.

"I... I'm sorry little guy, you were hurting everybody." Whispered Fluttershy. All of a sudden, the corpse jumped on to Fluttershy, and went inside her through her chest, and closing the wound as if it never appeared.

"What the hell just happened." said rainbow.

"She... She is a frother." said Twilight.

"What in all of Teiwar is a frother?" asked Rarity.

"A frother is an ancient warrior that could get rid of a corpse of an animal or monster before it reanimates and can use it's corpse to learn abilities." explained Twilight. They all looked at each other, and departed back to bed.

The next day everyone went about fifty feet away from Quarrelstone. "Soldiers, this day, we will go down in history. Children will see us as their savior. Go Free Teiwar!" shouted Yalaka. After the little speech, they attacked the city. They tore the wall down around the city, and killed all the guards in the surrounding area. They started heading towards the castle and had no problem getting there,

"Celestia!" shouted Fluttershy. "I'm here to defeat you. You have put this Province into utter chaos. It is time your reign comes to an end."

"You fool, these rebels are nothing but trouble, and they would do worse than what I have done, so you are the problem my dear." said Celestia.

Fluttershy pulls out a sword and starts to attempt to attack Celestia, But Celestia fights back. Then a dragon attacks the castle and they find a way out before the dragon kills the both of them. They go to the top of a hill, where a rock wall was. Then the dragon breathes a fireball at the two fighting warriors. Both of their swords break, and they are both on the ground. Celestia gets up and pulls out a steel dagger.

"Well, you never should have crossed with the union." said Celestia. Celestia takes the dagger and drives it through Fluttershy's stomach.  Twilight and her friends rush to the top where they find them both. "

You monster, your sins will never be forgiven, BURN IN HELL, SHE DEVIL!", shouted Twilight. Then Twilight cuts off Celestia's head.

"Well, we won... The war is over." said Rarity.

All of a sudden they look at Fluttershy's dead body, and sees her body glowing, and slowly floats up. Then a beam of light shines in the sky, and the stone wall shows words.

"In the year 1412, an evil ruler will rise and only someone who can prevent the resurrection of the ruler can send the evil soul into eternal damnation." read Twilight. Then Fluttershy's body merged with the Body of Celestia and they both dissapear. All of a sudden, Fluttershy wakes up and sees her friends. They are in the hospital visiting Fluttershy.

"Oh thank Celestia you're awake. We were afraid you were gonna die." said Pinkie.

"We were all worried when we heard you were struck by lightning." said Twilight.

"You guys would never guess the experience I've had." said Fluttershy.