The Final War

by Cross Fire

First published

What if the world we know as Equestria was simply a bi-product of another universe? What if the energy of the place created everything we have learned today? What if it began as a battle between two brothers over jealously, heartbreak, and morales? All of these questions and more are to be answered.

Theme recommended for this Story: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qdjpclop7IQ&feature=share&list=PLJ_7rYf_SwNYeNWEW20nBtvSywVPWCByu

I'm not very good at this grammar and spelling stuff please don't be mean. Also, first attempt at a story criticism is allowed just try not to be to harsh. I have edited the first chapter so hopefully it doesn't suck as bad. i hope to try to make a sequeal for that was only the beginning. and for those who hated this before, you might like the next. Anyways thanks for the tips and I shall try to implement them.