I Promise (Part One)

by -MahLeetlePanties-xD

Rating: everyone
Tags: Slice of Life, Sad, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Original Character, Tragedy, Big Macintosh
Length: 1074

Big Macintosh goes for a walk and finds someone

Big Macintosh goes for a walk and finds someone. The person that he finds has a short time left to live and he wants to be sure and help her forgive her past before the end...

Published 2014-01-16 06:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-16 06:30:01 UTC

The Promise

Today was a sad day for Big Macintosh, his cousin had just died, so he decided to take a walk to get things off his mind. He always liked to walk to a specific place...The old tree by the orchard. Something was different today, The tree was looking as lively as ever. He got closer to see what had happened but before he could get close enough a beautiful young mare stepped out from behind it. She had big blue eyes and the shiniest coat, She looked a little sick so he had to check it out. He aproaches her to greet her.

"H-Hello ma'am. Are you alright?" he asks her walking up to her slowly.

"Hello my name is" she coughs and suddenly faints.

"Oh no! Miss are you alright!?!?" he says as he runs up to her and catches her before she hits the ground.

He carries her in and lays her down on a soft bed and waits there for her to awaken so he could ask her why she was so sick. He had hoped it wasn't nothing serious because even though he just met her he was already falling for her, it was her beautiful eyes and her voice...It was so sweet and inoccent. He waited there for hours and hours until finally she woke up, he quickly ran to get her a glass of water. She raises up and looks around confused while rubbing the side of her head.

"Are you okay? You never finished your sentence while introducing yourself," he says.

"Im sorry...Did i faint again? Oh my...Name....My name is...its....Hmm i can't seem to remember." she says.

"How about we call you Melony Lisette?" he says smiling and scratching his head.

"Why what a beautiful name. I love it!" she yells as she jumps into his arms and hugs him tightly.

"Ummm thanks." he says smiling and blushing.

"Your the first person that has actually talked to me after the accident." she says sadly.

"The accident? Don't mind me asking but what exactly happened?" he asks.

"Well...Me and my mother, we were just on our way home from the store because i wanted to pick her something out for her birthday we were just minding our own buisness...When out of now here someone comes from behind us and grabs my mother by her throat and starts choking her...I sat there and watched them choke her..I didn't do nothing! I couldn't do nothing! I just sat there crying and watched my mom die. They turned to me and injected me with a large amount of toxins into by leg with a needle. I dont know what they injected in me but it has been making me weaker and weaker every day. The thing that bothers me the most about the accident is that we didn't do anything to deserve that! We didn't say anything! They just killed her right in front of me for no reason! I didn't help or nothing! I just sat there like the good for nothing mare i am!" she yells as she cries in his arms.

"Im....im so sorry. Your not good for nothing. I just met you and i already think your an amazing person! Even if this thing that he injected into you kills you...I will be by your side forever! I promise to help you do everything you can to forgive your self. I promise!" he syas as he kisses her fore head.

I Confess

After the little talk they had in the room they got a little hungry and decided to go somewhere and eat to get to know each other a little better. On the way there he showed her so many places to go and things to do, she loved them so much. He loved her smile so he wanted to see it as much as he could. He was gonna confess his love for her but he just didn't know when to do it so he would just d it when he felt the time is right. Finally after walking all around Ponyville they came to place they liked, the Bakery. It seems a little weird to eat there for lunch but that's what she wanted. They walked in and sat down a to a table for two and ordered their food. Her blue eyes lit up when she say all the choices on the menu. He just wanted to make it to where it wasn't so awkward so he started a conversation.

"Sooo...How about that weather?" he asks,

"Seems pretty nice outside to me. Why ask such a obvious question?" she says giggling.

"I don't know. Just trying to lighten up the moment." he chuckles.

"Oh boy i cant wait to sink my teeth into these yummy pastries!" she says excitedly.

"Me either it smells so good in here. You smell better though." he says while saying the last part under his breath.

"Huh? I didn't quite catch that last part?" she says looking at him.

"I didn't say nothing silly." he says smiling at her.

The waitress brings the food to the table and we dig in. She was even beautiful when she was eating and she always had the biggest smile on her face no matter what. He felt so bad for her after everything that has happened to her but he had to try his best no to bring it up to often. He sat there watching her and blushing but she noticed and knew something was up.

"Do you have something important to tell me?" she asks while playing with her hair.

"Well....Umm...Yes." he says blushing hard.

"Well go ahead and say t then." she says smiling big.

"Well where do i begin...You're so beautiful, You're eyes they are so big and joyful They are like wet stones falling, they're beautiful, just like you. . You're smile really brightens up my day....Ya' know that? Also your laugh...Its like music to my ears. Your personality its out of this world. I know i just met you but i like you so much and i just couldn't hold it in anymore....I think..I think..I...Love..You." he says blushing and covering his face.

"Big Macintosh.....I didn't know you felt that way. I like you alot to. When i saw you i thought you would hate me but..You accept me. Thank you." she says as she hugs him and cries.

-To be continued