Thunder

by Jackthunder

Welcome to Ponyville, Jack

Previous Chapter

Jack waked up as always early in the morning. Not by himself like normally, but of some kicking noises about a mile away. He did go out from he's tent and did some stretching. The sound seemed to come from on of the apple trees he saw between the overgrown bushes and trees. After a quick pickup he walked out of the entrance of the Everfree forest. With a fast look at the sun he smiled and said with a low voice.

”Hello old friend”

He heard the sound again and started to walk against it.

”Applejack when can I buck the trees? I wanna help you and Big Mac!”

Applebloom stated as she collected the fallen apples that missed the barrel.

”You know you're too young to be doing anything like that.”

Applejack said as she bucked the tree again. Applebloom looked down onto the ground looking kinda sad. ”Come on there sugercube turn that grin upside down I got something to show you.”

Applebloom shined up. ”What is it? Are you going to let me buck my first tree?”

”Not really.”

Applebloom sighed deeply. ”I'm going to show you a record. Most apples on one tree. It's just at the edge of apple field”

They walked for a bit and came to the end of the field. There Applebloom saw the the tree, so many apples she could barley see the leaves. She just stood there with her mouth open.

”Quite a view right? And now I will try to break a personal record. Most apples bucked down at once.”

”The sound stopped” Jack thought. He was walking to a big field of apple trees. A movement in the corner of his eye that caught his attention. It was someone under a apple tree with the biggest number of apples in it that he has ever seen. He started to walk to the tree. As he came closer he could hear someone cheering, a younger voice. When he walked up to it's side he could hear that someone kicked it and then he got buried in apples.

”Wow Applejack that most be for sure the most apple bucked at once” said Applebloom.

”Sure is” answered Applejack. ”Let's go see if we can find a cart for all this apples”.

Suddenly something started to move under the apples. ”Another one of Discords silly tricks” Applejack though. She spun around and kicked at it as hard has she could. When she hit it Applebloom screamed so she turned around fast and saw a white male unicorn lying a few meters away.

”I-is he dead?” Applebloom asked.

”I'm not dead yet” the unicorn answered. ”That was a real horse kick” He said while sitting up.

Applejack run over to him and asked ”ya good there sugar cube?”

”nothing to worry about i have taken one or two hits in my life” He replied why Applejack was taking a look on his forehead. ”I'm sorry sugarcube thought you where someone else.” Applejack continued.

”Good to know that you don't hate me in particular. I'm Jack by the way.” The unicorn said.

”I'm Applejack and that over there is my l'l sis Applebloom.”

Applebloom just stood there and starred at Jack ”Nice to meet both of you but i got someone to see so i need to go.” Jack said while and walked away into town. Before Applejack could say anything Applebloom asked ”Can i go home sis 'I'm not felling well”.

”Sure sugarcube but wha....” Applejack didn't get any further before her sister ran of.

”Wonder what that was about?” She thought and walked to get a cart.

”Uhk! It's dirt all over the place.” Complained Rarity while trying her best to avoid the mud. She had been out to get some textile and the mud pools seems incresed in numbers under the short time she was out. When she was almost home she noticed that her entire walkway was soraunded with mud. ”Why in Celestias name does this dirt be all over the place?” She almost screamed.

”Let me help you.” Someone said while hovering a piece of cloth onto the mud so she could pass.

Rarity walked over and turned around to see a white unicorn picking up the cloth again and trying to get the worst mud of it. ”Thank you mister...?” Rarity started

”Jack” The unicorn filled in.

”Thank you mister Jack nothing rises a lady's mood more than finding a real gentlecolt.” She continued.

”Nothing to talk about, and please just say Jack” Jack said.

”It's indeed something to talk about, Jack. It's so rare to... ” She didn't got to finish before a voice yelled.

”WHATCH OUT!!!”

Jack quickly looked to the left and got hit by something ranibow colored. And they both rolled around in the dirt for a few meters. ”Oh my gosh are you guys alright?” Rarity asked while running over.

”I'm fine” Jack said while standing up. He then looked over to the pegasus on his back and said.

”Thats also a way to meet someone.”

The pegasus flew fast off from his back and said. ”Sorry about that it's a little windy today, and who are you?”

”I'm Jack” Jack answered. ”Who are you?”

”I'm Rainbow Dash the fastest pegasus in Ponyville”. Rainbow dash answered.

”And soon to be all of Eguestria.” A orange pegasus filly said.

She came up behind Rainbow dash with a white unicorn filly who looked like Rarity's sister.

”That's right kid now who want to see me break my lap record?”

The fillies didn't answer they just stared at Jack who was cleaning himself with a towel he got from Rarity. ”Um..guys? Are you ready to go?” Rainbow dash asked when she didn't get a answer.

The orange one said ”We have something to tell Applebloom” And they both ran off.

”Huh. Weird. I'll be going” Rainbow dash said and flew off. Jack looked after them with a raised eyebrown and then said. ”Well i guess i should continue too. Thanks for the towel” He said and gave it back.

”My pleasure.” Rarity answered.

Jack turned around and begun to walk deeper into the town.

Back at the library Fluttershy and Pinkie had come to Welcome Twilight home.

”We are so glad that you are home safe” Fluttershy said in her low voice.

”YEA! We thought you would be lost forever ” Pinkie Pie almost screamed while jumping around.

”Girls you know me. I won't leave you for anything.” Twilight Answered. ”And i also got some help”

”Of who?” Pinkie asked looking puzzled.. Before She could answer someone knocked on the door. When she opened it a familiar face meet her. ”Jack?” Twilight said.

”Twilight?” said Jack with an eyebrow raised.

”What are you doing here” she continued.

”Well i was just checking out the town before i would visit you in the hospital. Can i come in?”

”Oh yes please come in.” she said while moving out of the way, still a little shocked over that he showed up here.

”Looks like I don't have to go there after all” He said while cheking out the books.

”OH MY GOSH! You must be new here is really need to throw you a welcome to the town party!!” Pinke almost screamed and talked almost to fast for anyone to understand a word. Both Fluttershy and Pinkie noticed at the same time that he didn't have a cutie mark which left a akward silence.

”Um.. okay! Never been on a party before.”

Before Pinkie could continue Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Rarity burst into the house.

”There he is girls” Rarity said.

Rainbow flew up to him and said.

”Who do you think you are?” With and angry voice.

”What?”

”My sweet little sister hasn't stopped crying since you showed up.” Rarity continued.

”Same with my sister and Scootalo.” Applejack filled in.

Jack was forced to back down since the three mares was yelling at him and advancing. He bumped against the wall and was trapped.

”What do you have to say?” They all yelled at him at the same time.

Jack sighed deeply and looked at the floor almost whispering.

”Why does it always turning out like this?”

He then looked at Twilight and said.

”Nice to meet you Twilight.”

The room lit up for a split second when Jack teleported away.

”What a rude stallion.” Rarity said after a while

”Ye like what does he think he is doing?” Rainbow dash continued.

And then they where all talking how bad he was to this city.

”Girls,  GIRLS, GIRLS!!” Twilight had to scream to get there attention.

”What was that about?” she continued with an angry voice.

”Didn't you hear? He made Scootalo, Applebloom and Sweetie bell cry by showing of that blank flank of his.” Rainbow dash hissed back.

”Did you ever took a moment to think that maybe it wasn't intended?”

Before anyone could answer they heard a scream.

”Scootalo!, Applebloom!, Sweetie bell!” They all yelled at the same time and run out from the house.

They continued to run towards the Everfree forest where the screams came from. There on the other side of the river they saw the girls surrounded by four timber wolfs. It looked like the entire town was there but no one was fast enough to get there in time ,not even Rainbow dash. A wolf whistling was heard and everyone's attention turned to the source of the sound. There stood Jack in a torn cloak and a hat that looked like Applejack's but a far more torn.

”Why don't you mess with someone your own size?” He said while gritting his teeth.

The wolfs growled and started to surround him instead.

”Run.” Jack hissed and the wolfs attacked. He kicked back crushed the first wolfs jaw. Then he jump to the side, did a spin and hit the second wolf in the head which made it detach from the body. In a matter of seconds he had ended two of the four wolfs. Jack started to back away to get a better view of the last two but noticed that only one was following him. The other was running after the three fillies. So he quickly ended the third one with a magic blast from his horn and started to run towards the forth. On the other side of the river they saw the timber wolf getting closer to the fillies. They started to cheer for them to run faster. But i didn't help the fillies was to tired to run any faster. The timber wolf was getting closer for every second. A split second before he could snap his jaw around the fillies a white shadow collided with it's side and it flew to the ground and shattered.

”T-thank you.” The three exhausted fillies said.

”It's not over yet.” He replied.

And immediately the remains of the timber wolf searched out each other and formed a even bigger one. The fillies screamed and started to run again with the wolf charging after them. Jack placed himself between the wolf and the fillies. The wolf didn't show any indication that it would stop. With a yellow light Jack's horn lighted up. Everything looked to go in slow motion when the wolf did get all closer to him and then it blew in a sphere of yellow light where jack stood which surrounded both him and the wolf , it splintered to pieces by the force. When the dust finally settled jack stood there and shook his head for a second to get rid of the dizziness. He looked over to the fillies seeing them being hugged by there loved once and he smiled. His hat was lying a bit away from him so he hovered it onto his head and started to walk back to the everfree forest.

”Jack!” Someone shouted. He turned around with a raised eyebrow and saw the entire village standing there.

”Where are sorry, sugercube.” Applejack begun.

”We shouldn't have been so mad at you.” Rarity continued.

”Ye we should have thought a little before we acted.” Rainbow dash finished. ”Even thought you are weird  since you don't have any cuti...”

”Rainbow dash!” Twilgiht cut off. ”What she is trying to say is that you are welcome to stay here as long as you pleases.” A big smile got visible on his face, first one Twilight has seen, and he said.

”Thank you.”

”LET'S HAVE A PARTY!!!” Pinkie pie screamed and threw confetti  all over the place. And all the ponies started to stomp their hooves and scream of joy.

The party continued into the night when a pair of ear caught up the sound of singing  ponies. He opened his eyes and gritted his teeth in anger as he hissed. ”found your civilization  my pretty nieces.”