metal solitude

by Isaaclover

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Tragedy, Adventure, Alternate Universe
Length: 1021

When rainbowdash kills herself from her broken wing that could not be fixed, Fluttershy decides to make a large group dedicated to her, which they take the wings off of many pegasus and replace them with mechanical robot wings and are forced to work.

When rainbow dash kills herself from her broken wing that could not be fixed, Flutter shy decides to make a large group dedicated to her, which they take the wings off of many Pegasus and replace them with mechanical robot wings and are forced to work.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-18 21:13:03 UTC

Prolouge

Fluttershy Held Angel in her hoofs. She smiled as she sang her lullaby.

“Hush now quite now it's time to lay your sleepy head”

Fluttershy smiled as she set angel down next to her on the two pillows.

“hush now quite now it's time to go to bed.”

Fluttershy had heard a knock at the door. She flew over and opened the door slowly. She had saw a small slip that read...

Dear, Flutter shy

CloudsDale is in danger

Please restore it.

Your faithful friend,

Rainbow Dash

“Oh no!” Fluttershy said, dropping the small slip on the ground.

“Oh, Angel my dear.” Fluttershy said in a whisper as she slowly shook Angel, her white bunny.

“I have to go to cloudsDale, ask Spike to baby-sit” Fluttershy flew out the door in a hurry and looked up at the large cloud with a small city on it.

The large post were falling down, trying to be carried by the many Pegasus.

Fluttershy gulped, then she flew up towards CloudsDale. It was a wreck. Rainbow dash stood next to her home. Her father, crammed into the ground and impaled by a large post.

She was shocked as she remembered all he done. He let her see the wonder bolts, let her make friends, he was very proud of her until now.

“Dad!” Rainbow dash yelled, flying over to him. She tried to lift the pole but fell. There was a sudden large crack coming near Rainbow Dash.

“AH!” Rainbow Dash screamed, clenching her hoofs on her wings. They were split in half like a crack. Blood spilled across the cloud. Rainbow dash took her chance and tried to fly.

She then creamed again and she started to fall in tears.

“Rainbow!” Fluttershy yelled, flying over to her.

“I can't fly!” Fluttershy gasped at her reply then she picked her up.

“Keep tight on my back!” Fluttershy said, flying her to a more safer distance. “I'm gonna get Twilight.” Fluttershy said, as she flew halfway down before being stopped by a large scream.

“Rainbow!” Fluttershy yelled again. She flew back over to her then sighed. “I guess I have to stay.”

“Help save my father.” Rainbow dash said, pointing down the large stallion impaled by a pole.

Fluttershy saluted then flew down.

“I'll help you!” Flutter shy calmly said, as she tried to lift the pole.

“Th-thank you!” The stallion stuttered to say.

Fluttershy then yelled, “I can't!” Fluttershy started to pant as she hollered, “TWILIGHT!”

Fluttershy then whimpered as she slowly shushed rainbow dash's dad.

“I'm sure there will be help soon!”

Fluttershy watched to other ponies live their life normally. She then saw Twilight, running across the ground, looking for Fluttershy.

“UP HERE!” Fluttershy yelled again, waving her hoof in the air.

Twilight sighed then flew up slowly and calmly.

“This looks like discord trashed this place!” Twilight said, walking around.

“Twilight, Rainbow dash broke her wing!”

“Mother of celestia!” Twilight said, flying up to rainbow dash.

“Rainbow, are you okay? I'll get the others-” Twilight was stopped by rainbow dash's sad sigh.

“No use Twilight, I know you know me as that brave girl, but I'm just weak without my wings.”

Twilight shook her head in disagreement. “Together, we can work together as a team-”

“No we can't Twilight, don't you see!”

   Rainbow dash sighed as she dug her hoof into the cloud.

“Rainbow, don't!” Twilight said, as rainbowdash broke the cloud.

“Let me fall, my time was already there.”

“Rainbowdash! This isn't like you!” Fluttershy said, as she caught rainbowdash.

“Can't you listen! My home is crumpled and my friends left me!”

“Were right here!” Fluttershy and Twilight both said.

“You guys, where are the others? Not caring. Just let me fall. They will all remember me as a legend.”

“Legend or not! Were not leaving!” Fluttershy said, placing her back down on the cloud.

“Rainbow, what's gotten into you?” Twilight said, placing her hoof on hers. Rainbow dash started to get up and trot away.

“Where are you going Rainbow!” Fluttershy said, chasing her.

“No where!” Rainbow dash said, speeding up.

Fluttershy then started to fly to her.

“GO AWAY!” Rainbow dash said, starting to go faster.

Twilight's horn glowed and she appeared in front of rainbowdash. They stumbled into each other, making twilight fall off the large cloud.

“AH!” She screamed, trying to fly.

“I GOT IT!” Fluttershy said, flying down to twilight.

Fluttershy didn't make it then Twilight fell to the ground. She started to scream and cry as she tried to get up.

“Fluttershy!” She murmured, trying to get up.

Fluttershy started to tear up as she said, “This is too much drama in one day! Twilight needs help and Rainbow is running away! What next-” Fluttershy was stopped by a large rampaging noise of hoofs clattering.

Clouds dale was falling. The cloud has disappeared. The columns and houses crumbled down to ponyville.

The earth ponies screamed and ran In terror as the building and things fell to the ground.

Fluttershy gasped at the sight and she flew down to pick up her bunny angel who was chasing after her.

“Run!” She told him as she pushed him.

A large column pole was falling onto her.

She screamed as she was crammed into the pole. Dust and wind came from it. Blood was splattered everywhere and everybody gasped.

“Fluttershy!” Twilight said, trying to get up from the large piles of dirt clashed onto her. She trotted over to her and hollered, “RAINBOW DASH!!!”

Rainbow dash was covered in large piles of rubbish. A cloud held her onto it, but she was stabbed by a crack in a pole.

Twilight used her horn to lift the large pole off of Fluttershy.

“Are you okay??” Twilight asked, crouching down to her.

Fluttershy's wings were torn, her mane was dirty and her left hind hoof was broken.

Twilight shook her head at the sight the used her horn to lift her.

“Oh Fluttershy, wake up.” A tear rolled down Twilight's eye as she put her down onto a large cloud.

“She will never be the same.”