The Last Crusader

by Chief loves ponys

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark
Length: 461

This is my first fic pls tell me what you think

Apple Bloom has been riticuled for years about not having a cutie mark. In one day this all changes.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-20 17:18:58 UTC

Chapter 1

Halfway through her freshman year in highschool, Apple Bloom just left for home after a long day of school.  She was walking alone as it had been since Scootaloo and Sweetie Bell got their cutie marks.  She had been the only one not the get her's.  Than Sweetie Bell and Scootaloo came from behind and stopped her.  "Sooooo, still a blank flank I see?", taunted Sweetie Bell.  "Yeah your the only one left in the stupid cutie mark crusaders thing, why don't you just give up?", Scootaloo said.  "Its just not cool to hang around with you anymore because of your lack of a cutie mark.  Sorry.", Sweetie Bell said in a sarcastic tone.  "Oh well looks like we cant hang out with you because of, you know...".  She pointed at Apple Bloom's clear flank.  "Blank flank, Blank flank" the two of them chanted.  This had been going on for years but this was the last straw.  Apple Bloom lunged at Sweetie Bell with her two front hooves yelling,"STOP IT STOP IT!".  Before the unicorn had time to react Apple Bloom's hooves connected with Sweetie Bell's neck causing a sickening cracking noise that ended with a snap.  There laied Sweetie Bell, dead on the ground.  Scootaloo stared in horror as Apple Bloom looked at what she had done.  Apple Bloom ran off crying, leaving Scootaloo there in horror frozen with fear.  Apple Bloom was so shocked she didn't even notice that her flank was bare no more.

Applejack was doing her usual chores when she saw Apple Bloom coming this way.  When Applejack saw that she was runign she knew something was wrong.  When she got closer she could see that Apple Bloom was crying.  AB ran into Applejack's embrace and told her everything.  Applejack was having a hard time processing what she had just herd.  Listen , you need to rest this isint something that we can ignore.  But now I need to think.", said Applejack.  That night Apple Bloom couldent sleep.  "No, no, no! Please tell me that this isint actually happening.  Please tell me that this is just a bad dream!".  The scene just kept replaying in her head.  She was scared and asking herself why she had done that.  "I-I just lost control.  After hours of questioning, Apple Bloom passed out from tiredness. She fell into a dream in which she found herself at Scootaloo's house.  She found that she coulden't control her own actions.  Aginst her will she opened the door to Scootaloo's room and before the sleeping pony could react Apple Bloom found herself pounding her own hooves in to Scootaloo's head.  She finally stopped to realize that Scootaloo's face was mangled beyond reckignission.  AB woke up on the floor next her own bed.  She was in a cold sweat and breathing heavily.  She looked at the clock on the wall. It red 1:18.  She sighed and looked down to find that her hooves were covered with fresh blood.