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Cloudburst

by Xaigatomon
Nopony is exactly sure where he came from, but when a strange newcomer 'arrives' in Ponyville, things are certain to get interesting.

Without a past, without memories, without a name or even a cutiemark, a mysterious pony appears. Dubbed "Cloudburst" by Rainbow Dash, he quickly adjusts to life in Ponyville, no, in Equestria. Cloudburst sets out on a journey to find out where he came from, and to get used to living as a pegasus. never could he have imagined in his wildest dreams... just how deep the paths he was about to embark on would go.

But it would certainly be a time... that he would never forget.
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Hey all. so this is my first proper Fimfiction and also is the first one I started writing. I've been working on it on/off for a while.
I probably won't be able to update on a periodic regular basis but if i can get back into actually writing it again I could upload every week or couple of weeks.
I have been things planned for this story that stemmed from a romantic fantasization of Rainbow Dash and my OC, so I hope I can keep the drive going to see it through.
(Also, in loosing my phone on Christmas eve, I have also lost with it my story outline for this. i am 90% sure it is somewhere in my house so hopefully I can get it back at some point.)

I am really nervous about this as i automatically assume nopony will care about a story with an OC >.< but let's give it a shot!

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Main proofreaders:
Mixtrak
Cro_the_Stray

ch 3 proof read by Dartrunner

Everyone
Incomplete
Comedy
Romance
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
RPTMO

18664 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

5 Chapters:

  1. 1 - First Contact 2014-01-21 00:35:24 UTC
    3724
  2. 2 - Cloudburst 2014-03-12 21:18:57 UTC
    2113
  3. 3 - Enter the party pony 2014-05-17 21:35:39 UTC
    2739
  4. 4 - End of the first day 2014-05-29 18:00:31 UTC
    5456
  5. 5 - How the farm ponies trot 2015-09-18 19:11:47 UTC
    4632