Apple of my eye

by Eros

Rating: teen
Tags: Caramel, Big Macintosh, Sex, DJ P0N-3, Twilight Sparkle, Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Sad, Romance, Octavia
Length: 6194

When Big Macintosh meets a strange pony at the Summer Sun Celebration, he begins to feel things he knows he shouldn't.

Caramel usually doesn't get out much. But the Summer Sun Celebration is not something anypony should miss. Little does he know the plans fate has in store for him and that odd farmpony he meets.

Contains M/M shipping and various degrees of cuteness (I hope.)

Cover by the lovely apertureindigo

Published 2014-01-22 10:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-27 07:12:34 UTC

Chapter 1

The cold night air ruffled the fur of everypony present, but they didn't care. The Summer Sun Celebration was a big deal all over Equestria, and none of Princess Celestia's loyal subjects would be put off by a few gusts of wind. The normally dark expanse of sky that hung over Ponyville was full of glittering lights and thumping bassy music permeated the ears of every equine gathered.
The streets bulged with ponies swaying, dancing to the music, drinking and just having a good time. Sweet Apple Acres had had a good harvest that year and the apple family had generously given at least half their orchard to the bakers, who had outdone themselves with the variety of applely treats heaped on table all around town. There were fritters, pies and various pastry-based products. This was the one night where foals stayed up all night and everypony had fun dancing with their partners, or by themselves. Vinyl Scratch, the resident DJ had prepared an entire night of electronic music that carried with it a sense of surreal meaning. The bass would twist the insides of anypony and induce euphoria among the crowd.

Not to mention that Princess Celestia was quite fond of such musics herself. She sat on her impromptu throne in the center of the stage, nodding her head to the beat. It was a strange sight, to see the ruler of an entire country enjoying herself in such a simple way.

Down in the center of the flashing town, one small tan pony giggled as the resonating bass slide over his body, making him tingle in ecstasy. Caramel closed his eyes and let the music do whatever it wanted with him, allowing the synths to guide his path as he danced around the town square without a care in the world. He couldn't dance to save his plot, but tonight wasn't about being good at dancing. This was the only night that Caramel ever felt safe, mostly due to the communal atmosphere. It was the only time he came out of the usually very closed in shell he kept himself in. Also, the cider helped a lot. A wide grin was plastered across his face. This was the happiest night of the year.

Not however, for a certain large red stallion watching the proceeds from a lonely lamp a few meters from the mass of dancing ponies. Big Mac idly kicked pebbles about and tried to stay out of the way. If there was one thing Big Macintosh didn't like, it was painfully loud electronic music and large crowds of ponies he didn't know. He really saw no point to it, it was just a mess of effects to him. He sipped his 4th bottle of cider. His inner voice piped up, as it always did when he was bored.

"Why did Ah come tah this? T'ain't nothin' important happenin.'"

He trotted over to a table laden with apple pies and casually bit into one. It tasted good, but it lacked a certain something Granny Smith's pies always seemed to have. Big Mac wasn't really concentrating on the taste much anyway.
Out of the corner of his eye, the bored steed spotted a brown pony who seemed to be experiencing a state of elevated happiness. His carefree smile intrigued Big Macintosh. He seemed to enjoy the music a lot. The way his soft brown mane bounced in time to his gyrating body, the way his flank moved incredibly out of time with the music was really silly. It was obvious that he couldn't dance, yet even more obvious that he didn't care.

It was almost... cute.

This admission that he found a stallion cute was slightly unnerving. Must just be the cider.

The copious amount of cider he had consumed was certainly taking a toll on Big Macintosh's better judgment. The night air suddenly didn't feel so cold and the way everypony was dancing did look kind of fun...

Especially that colt with the three blue horseshoes for a cutie mark. The one who couldn't dance to save his life.

"Hmm... it is pretty easy tah dance tah this kind o' music" Without even realizing it, he was swinging his hips to the music, allowing it to caress his very soul. Booze seemed to have a very good way of lowering inhibitions, although anypony could have told you that.

Closing his eyes, the farmpony allowed this new sense to overlap all his other senses and simply followed the beat. He was normally into a more country style of music, but this random mess of effects was upbeat and exciting, something Big Macintosh didn't get much of working on a farm. Here he was, slightly drunk and having fun. And it was going well, really it was.
Until he bumped into a certain beige stallion with a blue horseshoes cutie mark. Both of them were too stuck in the music to realize where they were going, and as a result they crashed into each other. Hard. They fell on the ground painfully, while the rest of Ponyville danced. Pebbles embedded themselves in Caramel's soft fur.

"Uhhhhhh" Caramel rubbed his aching snout while Big Mac comforted his throbbing shoulder. Big Macintosh stood up and turned to his attacker meaning to apologize, until he saw who it was and blushed. Caramel looked up from the ground into the eyes of the pony above him. Those deep, apple green eyes were so alluring, so full of life and strength.

"... His eyes..."

Shaking himself out of Caramel's ice blue eyes, those beautiful pools of radiance, Big Mac offered a bare hoof to the colt. Caramel placed a hoof in Big Macintosh's and used the red pony to stand up and steady himself. Big Mac was thankful for his fur, or his cheeks would have been redder then something that's really red. He nervously rubbed a hoof behind his head. "Ah'm real sorry 'bout that. Ah guess I got kinda caught up in the moment."

Caramel giggled. His eyes screwed up as he laughed in a somewhat feminine way.

"No worries, I was kind of a slave to the sound myself." It surprised Mac to hear such eloquence from a pony who had a reputation of being rather klutzy.

They stood staring at each other. Neither of them could think of anything to say, yet neither could find the strength to stop staring. The way the flashing multicolored lights played over Big Macintosh's muscle-bound figure was intriguing. Likewise, Big Mac couldn't tear his gaze from Caramel's almost glowing cyan irises, a color Big Macintosh would never be able look at the same way again.

"I-I'm Caramel" Caramel offered a hoof to Big Macintosh, giving him a wide grin, his cheeks puffing out with what appeared to be joy. A light blush tinted his cheeks. Big Mac shook the hoof in front of him.

"Ah'm Macintosh, but everypony calls me Big Mac." Somehow, touching Caramel's hoof made Mac's stomach weak and his legs trembled. Caramel's eyes took in his size.

"I can see why. Nice to meet you Big Mac."

Macintosh apple suddenly felt sheepish of his size. He was almost twice the size of Caramel, a fact that was evidently not lost on the smaller stallion. Big Mac had no idea what to say. He was generally a very silent pony at the best of times, and now, surrounded by noise, and an entire town and staring at somepony he.... well it was true, Big Mac wasn't very talkative.

"Eeyup"

Caramel gestured vaguely around the mass of ponies.

"Great party huh?" he yelled over the music, that had chosen that particular moment to increase in volume. Big Mac shook his head as he shouted back.

"Ah'm not much inta this sorta music."

Caramel's eyes took on a wicked glimmer. "You sure seemed to be enjoying yourself earlier." Finally, Big Mac gave in and smiled warmly at him.

"Okay okay, yah got me. Ah guess Ah like this music a lil more than Ah'd like tah admit. Ah always assumed it was jus' a mess o' instraments." The torrent of words surprised Caramel. Being a small town, most everypony knew about each other, if not knew each other personally, and Caramel had come to understand that this huge red steed was usually quite quiet. Caramel gave him a toothy grin as he unconsciously started moving with the lights and music again.

"I love it. This type of music can represent almost any emotion at all. Without lyrics, the mood of the music is up to you. It's great!"
Just then, the music faded. Everypony turned to the hastily erected stadium to see Princess Celestia watching her little ponies with pride. It made her glad to know that her subjects were capable of having fun and relaxing. That made one less town to worry about, one less town fawning over her and her sister. She smiled royally at her ponies.

"My little ponies, we are gathered here tonight to celebrate another wondrous summer. My thanks go out to the Pegasi for the amazing weather, the Earth ponies for the delicious food and the Unicorns for the management of everything else. It is truly an honor to be your Princess and I look forward to many more years of peace."

Everypony shifted and sat down. Caramel just sat where he was, next to Big Macintosh. The Princess's wings unfurled and she elegantly lifted herself into the air, her horn glowing with a sparkling yellow aura. The sun peeked over the horizon and as it made it's ascent into the air, Big Macintosh's hoof somehow made it's way into Caramel's. Their hooves delicately made contact for the whole of the sunrise, and it was only after the Princess had touched the ground that Caramel realized Big Mac was holding his hoof.

"Umm... Big Mac?" The apple turned his gaze from the ruler to Caramel. It took him a moment to register where his hoof was. His stomach flipped. He jerked it away.

"Ah-Ah'm sorry." Caramel gave him a trademark smile.

"No worries."

The crowd around them started to dissipate. Tired foals - most already asleep in their parents forelegs - cantered around the town square in a desperate attempt to stay awake. Ponies trotted home to sleep. It would be around midday before anypony went out again. The amount of full apple trees still in need of bucking made Big Macintosh regret staying out so late. He stretched and yawned.

"Ah'd better go. Got a lot a' work tah do later today."

Caramel was self-employed. He ran a small bakery on the far side of town, although he didn't get much business due to the presence of Sugarcube Corner. Still, he made enough to get by and being a generally nice pony, he was never bitter about Sugarcube Corner getting the majority of customers. Of course, being both self-employed and not very well known, he could afford to sleep as late as he wanted.

Something about this stallion with the apple cutie mark interested him. Maybe it was the way his heart had fluttered when he looked into his eyes, or maybe it was the shyness and the air of mystery Big Mac seemed to possess.

"You work at Sweet Apple Acres right?"

Big Macintosh chuckled. "Ah pretty much own the place. Applejack - mah sister - ain't around too often, what with her bein' an Element o' Harmony an' all. Mah granny's too old and mah other sisters too young to work, so it's jus' me." Caramel risked another glance at his impressive physique. It definitely looked like he worked a lot.

"From what I've seen of it, that's a lot of apple trees. It must take you forever."

"Nah, t'ain't so bad. Does take a while though."

The gears turned in Caramel's head. This was silly, he really didn't need to do this.

"I really should be working today. I need the bits. Although..."

"Mind if I swing by and give you a hoof later today? Applebucking sounds like fun." Big Macintosh looked at Caramel's figure. He looked pretty average in the muscle department, nothing like himself. Which wasn't too great, due to the muscle required to buck apples.

"It would be nice tah have somepony tah talk to, but Ah wouldn't want tah keep yah. Ah'm sure you have your own stuff tah do." Caramel gave him a smile that was almost as infectious as a Pinkie Pie smile.

"Nonsense, I wouldn't have offered unless I was free." Which he wasn't.

"I really wanna spend more time with him."

Big Mac shrugged, trying to maintain his nonchalant attitude, despite the fact that his heart pounded at the thought of getting to know Caramel better. "Sure Ah guess. If yah really want to."

"Great. I'll see you around 2?"

"See yah then." A very tired Big Macintosh and an even tireder Caramel parted ways. Big Mac slowly plodded off in the direction of the apple farm and Caramel went up to the back of the stage to help Vinyl pack up her equipment. Vinyl Scratch saw him coming and waved an energetic hoof at him. Sometimes her energy rivaled Pinkie Pie's.

"Hey there Melly. Wicked party huh?" He got onto the stage and bumped her shoulder with a hoof.

"Yeah it was. You were great. I think even the Princess liked your music." Vinyl smiled widely and Caramel smiled with her, seeing himself reflected in her purple goggles. She enjoyed it when she was able to make other ponies have fun. "You need some help packing up?"

"Yeah. I could use it." Vinyl had really gone all out with this party and there were lights and speakers everywhere. Caramel gathered up a few cables and started twisting them around his hoof. Vinyl did the same.

"So Caramel..."

"Hmm?"

"I saw you with that red guy from the apple farm." Caramel almost dropped the cables.

"You did?"

Vinyl Scratch smiled eagerly.

"You two looked like you were gettin' along reeeeeaaaaal well." Caramel almost dropped the cables. Again.

"It's nothing like that. We just bumped into each other."

"Suuuure. Then why are you blushing?" Caramel only just realized that she was right, he was indeed blushing.

"I don't... I don't know." Vinyl laughed. Her voice took on a teasingly singsong accent.

"Caramel's in looove, Caramel's in looove." Caramel gave her an irritated look.

"Stop that."

"With Big Macintosh."

Caramel suddenly remembered something. With a devilish grin, he turned to look behind Vinyl.

"Oh hey there Octavia, how nice to see you." Vinyl Scratch started and spun around, only to find thin air. Caramel on the other hoof was laughing his flank off. Vinyl glared at him before blushing and resuming her work with the cables.

"That wasn't funny. I-I hardly even know her!"

"But you liiiiiike her." The tables had indeed turned.

"N-no I don't I... just think she's... kinda nice."

"Well, it's the same for me. I don't know if I like Big Macintosh yet. I don't know if I'll ever like him like that." At this point, he was mainly talking to himself.

“Well I think you guys'd look cute together.” This statement carried a surprising amount of seriousness from the usually very immature pony. It seemed everypony was out of character that night. Still, it was strange of her to say that. Same sex relationships were tolerated in Equestria, but just barely. For that reason nopony but Caramel knew about Vinyl Scratch's attraction to Octavia.

“Like I said, I don't like him like that. Yet.” Caramel added that last part to himself under his breath.

They finished cleaning up in around half an hour and when Caramel got home he was so tired he considered just sleeping all day. But no, he had a Big Macintosh to see. A Big Macintosh he really wanted to see.

Applejack greeted her brother as he walked into their house.

"Howdy Big Mac, yah hungry? Ah got some pie left over from the celebration." Big Mac remained stoic.

"Nope"

"Well, alright then. Ah'll see yah later on then at the south field."

"Eeyup." Big Macintosh climbed the stairs to his room, noting that the third one was squeaking. He closed his door behind him and collapsed on his bed in exhaustion. His thoughts turned to Caramel. "Ah can't wait tah see him tomorrow. Ah wonder why that is?" Big Macintosh wanted to take this time to try to sort through his emotions but unfortunately, it was super early in the morning, which is when your brain decides to remind you about every embarrassing thing you've ever done.

Caramel flopped onto his bed. The walk from the town center had taken half an hour and having stayed to help Vinyl clean up, he had gotten too tired to fall asleep. He lay on his back and gazed around his fairly plain room. He had a few books he had been meaning to read, but 6 a.m in the morning, having spent the entire night partying, didn't seem like a good time to read a book. He thought of the stallion he had met.

“Big Macintosh.”

“Big Macintosh.” Caramel liked saying his name. It rolled off the tongue quite nicely. “God I'm weird. Why do I enjoy saying somepony's name?” Just has he was beginning to think about what exactly his feelings were towards the big red pony, his mind interrupted him with the perfect comeback he could have used against an angry customer he had had earlier that day.

Of course, lying awake while trying to sleep is always the best time to think about what you should have said to somepony who was mean to you.

Neither of them slept very soundly.

Chapter 2

A throbbing headache greeted Big Macintosh. What a perfect way tah start buckin' apples A quick glance at the clock told him it was 1:00 in the afternoon, an hour before he would see Caramel.

Caramel. That weird little pony his stomach seemed to be allergic to. The one he sort of maybe liked a little. Liked more then a friend. Though Ah don' know if he even wants tah be friends. But he wouldn't have offered tah help unless he was wanting tah be mah friend. Right?

Forcing himself out of the comfortable bed, he trotted downstairs. Applejack seemed to have already gone out to the fields. She would be out there before him, only to prove that she was better then him at something. This sibling rivalry was a sort of competition between them, something they never spoke about but were always aware of. It was actually quite fun in a way.

Applebloom was still eating breakfast. She wouldn't be at school today, due to the Summer Sun Celebration being a sort of holiday. An apple farmer couldn't take holidays though, especially now with harvest season upon them and apples by the thousand.

Applebloom gave him a tired look, completing the bags under her eyes. A look that said "No, mah cutie mark ain't stayin' up late or partyin'."

"Mornin' Big Mac."

Big Macintosh couldn't help but smile at the way his little sister had to force herself awake. This kind of thing happened every year, and the celebration would always mess up the inner clocks of everypony for a few days.

"Hey there Applebloom. Yah alright?"

She hung her head, her bow almost coming undone. "Not really. Ah'm real tired."

"Yah better get some more sleep then."

Applebloom shook her head. "Ah gotta help you an' Applejack with the apples."

"Don't you worry 'bout that sugarcube, we got it. This ain't our first harvest. 'Sides, Ah got a friend comin' over later tah help."

"Ah guess..." Her sentence trailed off as her head slumped onto the table comically, narrowly missing her bowl of oats.

Leaving his sister to her slumber, the eldest Apple made his way out into the fields. It felt like it was the next day, yet he knew it wasn't. A very disconcerting feeling, but one that would vanish after a few hours.

Caramel had a slightly better morning. He hadn't drunk that much cider, so his headache was significantly smaller then Big Mac's. In a befuddled state, he fumbled for his keys next to his bed and went downstairs to unlock the bakery, before remembering where he was supposed to go. It was 1:00 now, and Caramel judged that he should be able to get to Sweet Apple Acres by 2, give or take a couple minutes. Why am I even going through this much trouble for one pony?

Not wanting to disappoint Big Macintosh and because he was a pony of his word, Caramel set off at a steady canter to Sweet Apple Acres. I doubt it'll be that hard to get to.

Traversing through town took at least 40 minutes. Leading out from the edge of town were 3 paths, each bearing a sign. One read 'Everfree Forest.' Well I really don't want to go there. Caramel turned to the path on his left, one that read 'Sweet Apple Acres'.

Trotting along the dirt pathway to Sweet Apple Acres, Caramel took a moment to smell the heavy scent of apples in the air. It was slightly intoxicating, and it made his head swim, probably due to the fact that the hot summer sun was heating up the apples and making them release a far more pungent smell. It was very pleasant.

Apple trees flanked the path, but these looked laden with fruit that hadn't been picked in ages. It didn't look like this part of the orchard was used, which Caramel found strange as the trees seemed to have nothing wrong with them.

The tan steed was happily walking along the path when, in true Caramel style he tripped over apparently nothing. A muzzle full of dirt was NOT the best way to start the afternoon.

"Ahh... buck, that hurt." His right hoof stung as he inspected the small scratches on it. Turning around expecting to find a rock, Caramel frowned. The object he had tripped on was certainly not a rock, but a raggedy doll, almost in pieces. It seemed to be in a state of decomposition so advanced, it would have made him sick if there was anything but stuffing coming from the large rip in it's back.

"Huh. Weird."

He left the doll on the path and continued up towards a large house on a hill, surrounded by hundreds of apple trees. Knocking on the door, he was greeted by a very tired little yellow filly. Her voice cracked with fatigue. "Can Ah help you?" Caramel suddenly felt awkward. He wasn't good with social things at all, and even going out to the Summer Sun Celebration was a stretch for him. There wasn't really any reason behind it, he was just a socially awkward pony around ponies he didn't know.

"Yeah umm... I'm here to help Big Macintosh with the apples."

Pointing a hoof in a vaguely westerly direction, she gestured slightly. "Him an' Applejack are out in the west field. Don't know where."

Caramel looked at the immense size of the field she was pointing to and gulped. There had to be at least 2000 apple trees.

"Is uh, is that the whole west field?"

She sounded exactly like Big Mac in her answer. "Eeyup" She shut the door, somewhat rudely.

Well, I guess that explains the doll.

Caramel sucked up his exhaustion and made his way over to the west part of the orchard. He only had to walk for a few minutes before he came across Big Mac and Applejack bucking. Big Macintosh would kicked the tree and shake the apples off, and Applejack would scoop them up in wooden tubs and load them onto a nearby cart. Applejack noticed his presence first.

"Can Ah help you?"

Big Macintosh paused mid buck and found himself experiencing more stomach abnormalities as he took in the sight of Caramel's scared expression. One that made Big Mac want to just pick him up and protect him from anypony nasty enough to hurt him.

What the buck am Ah thinkin'?

"Umm... well I..."

Applejack got impatient. She had been bucking apples for the past 2 hours and was not in the mood for bull. "Jus' spit it out." She came off rather gruffly.

"Applejack, t'ain't no need for that kind of behavior. This here's Caramel, he's helpin' us out today." Applejack eyed Caramel suspiciously.
"Now why would he wanna do that? Ah sure as hay ain't payin' him." Caramel felt indignant. Did she just assume he wanted money? Evidently.

"I don't want any money from you Applejack. I'm just helping out my friend." He pointed to Big Macintosh, who knew better then to get into an argument with Applejack.

"Hmpf" Applejack swung her mane almost haughtily and grabbed a basket of apples. "Since you two seem tah be so eager tah work, y'all can do this without me. I gotta see Raridy anyway." She turned and walked back in the direction of the Apple Family house.

Caramel and Big Mac stood in silence for a few minutes. Big Macintosh broke their silence with a well rehearsed sigh of irritation.

"Ah'm sorry 'bout her. Ah think she's on her 'Moon Cycle' if yah know what Ah mean. Even so, she's the stubbornest mare Ah ever did meet, an' she don't take too kindly tah folks she don't know." Caramel nodded sympathetically.

"It's fine, I understand. I have an older sister, so I know what they can be like. Applejack and my sister, Toffee Cream would get along... well swimmingly." This surprised Big Macintosh. Ah always thought of him bein' an only foal. Caramel continued.

"Speaking of sisters, I met yours earlier. Is she alright?"

Big Mac chuckled. "She's pretty darn beat from last night an' all the dancing. She wasn't too rude was she? She can be mighty straight up sometimes."

Now it was Caramel's turn to giggle. "She was nice. I don't think she had the energy to be very straight up, or anything that involves being awake." Big Macintosh had to remind himself to breathe after hearing Caramel's adorable giggle. Adorable?

"Hey Caramel?" he asked.

"Yes?"

"Why did yah come anyway?"

Caramel pondered this a moment. "Well I said I would, and I don't like to go back on my word. But truthfully? I was sort of hoping we could be friends."

The vermillion colt was silent. Does he mean that? Well it's a start Ah guess .

"So what do we do exactly? I've never bucked apples before."

Now that he thought about it, Big Mac realized that he didn't really know how to explain the art of applebucking. It was something he had always just done and never had to explain to anyponyelse. Applejack knew how to buck just fine, and Applebloom would soon be strong enough to do it herself, but nopony had actually taught Big Macintosh what to do. You just kick your hind-legs against a tree right?

"Ah guess yah just... sorta face away from a tree an' kick it."

"An' try not tah stand under any large apples." he added with a wry grin, remembering the exact reason why you should not buck apple trees while directly under apples. The grin was not unnoticed by Caramel.

"So why shouldn't you stand under apples?"

Big Macintosh twisted his body and tapped his cutie mark. "Ah was only 10 when ah decided Ah was old enough tah buck apples. So bein' a smart colt, Ah decided to try to buck the biggest tree. Well, the one Ah chose had fruit almost the size of mah hoof." Looking at his large hooves, he looked at Caramels.

"Well, maybe the size o' your hoof. Anyway, Ah bucked the tree, an' an apple hit me right on the noggin'. Knocked me clean out it did, for almost a whole day. When Ah woke up, Ah had mah cutie mark." That was probably more words then Big Macintosh had ever spoken in his life. But with Caramel, he felt like he really wanted to speak, more so then with anyponyelse.

"I got mine by making horseshoes. I was around 9 and my dad had left the forge on. He used to make and mint bits for the Crown back in Canterlot, which is where we lived before we came here."

Big Mac's ears pricked up at that. Canterlot? He doesn't seem as pompous as folks from Canterlot usually are.

"Anyway, he left his forge open and I went in there and saw a mold for horseshoes. Don't know why, but I just decided to pour some molten metal into the mold. The next morning I polished it and yeah. My cutie mark just appeared, and I didn't even notice until Toffee Cream pointed it out." Caramel smiled warmly at the memory.

"Course', she was pretty mad that I got my cutie mark when she was 2 years older then me and still didn't have hers."

"Sisters aye? They can be nice, but sometimes they can be a right pain in the plot." They shared a mutual chuckle of understanding.

"Okay then. Lemme try this." Caramel lined himself up the same way Big Mac had and gave the tree a mighty kick. Nothing fell. He tried again, this time bucking with all his might. Still nothing. He looked over at Big Macintosh quizzically.

"Am I doing this right?"

Big Mac sighed. "Ah'm not too sure. Ah jus' started buckin' apples and they fell. Never had to teach nopony before." Caramel tried once more, slamming his hind hooves into the tree, which shook with the force it received. For a small pony, Caramel certainly could kick, but it still didn't seem to yield any results.

"I guess applebucking isn't really my thing huh?"

"Nnope." With that, Big Macintosh walked over to the tree Caramel stood under and bucked the trunk. Several apples fell, one of them hitting Caramel's head on the way down. It left a red mark on the very top of his snout, which stung for the second time that day. Big Mac was instantly apologetic.

"Oh mah, Ah'm real sorry 'bout that. Y'alright?" Before he could stop himself, the red steed bent his head down and lightly kissed Caramel's aching muzzle.

"Hey wha-"

Big Macintosh pulled away and avoided Caramel's eyes. "Ah... Ah'm sorry. Ah just..."

"You just what?"

Crap, why'd Ah do that?

Big Macintosh's fur barely hid his blush. "Ah just thought that looked like it hurt."

Caramel stared at him a few minutes, then smiled. "Well thanks, but it really didn't hurt that much."

All was quiet. Until Caramel spoke again.

"So, can I help you with anything else? Obviously, I can't get the apples out the trees, but I could maybe pull the cart for you?"

It took Mac a second to form a coherent thought. "Ah, yeah that would be good. You can jus' put the baskets in the left corner of the barn."

"Aright then. I'll take this load, then come back for more later then?" Caramel's eye's glowed with an unexpected exuberance. Truthfully, he felt awkward that he had offered to help, and then was unable to. I hope he doesn't think I'm incompetent.

"Eeyup."

The rest of the day continued in much the same manner. By the time Caramel had gotten the apples unloaded and made it back to Big Mac, he had already bucked plenty of apples to go back, so they didn't talk much. They got a system going. Big Macintosh would buck the apples, and Caramel would pick up any stray ones and put them in baskets. Then, he would haul the cart full of apples to the barn and carefully place the apples in a growing pile. At one point, Caramel thought he was doing far more work then Big Mac, until he actually watched the larger stallion.

The way his muscles had to twist to gather the strength for the bucking, the pure force that slammed the tree and made it shiver and the sweat that rolled down his forehead with every kick made it evident that he was working very, very hard.

Caramel found his eyes drawn to Big Mac's powerful legs and chest, in a way that felt... good?

Finally, at 6.30 in the afternoon, Big Macintosh signaled for him to stop.

"What's wrong Mac?"

Big Macintosh wiped a foreleg across his forehead. "Ah reckon we done plenty for today. 'Sides, it's starting tah get dark, an' you wouldn't wanna walk home in the dark."

Looking up, Caramel noticed that it was indeed getting darker. It had only been summer for one day so far anyway, so it made sense that the days still weren't quite longer yet.

"True, I don't really want to walk home at night."

Big Mac scratched the back of his head nervously, ruffling his mane. "Well uh, you did a real nice thing for me today. Without you, Ah woulda only gotten half as much done."

Caramel shrugged. "It was nothing really. You did most of the work anyway."

"Still, Ah wanna repay yah for all your help. How about we go get somethin' tah eat, on me?"

That's really nice of him. Still, It'd be rude to accept. "Thanks, but I couldn't possibly make you spend your hard earned bits on me."

Caramel hated it when ponies did nice things for him. Well, maybe not hated, but disliked it, as he always felt obliged to pay them back somehow, which always resulted in an endless loop of "I'll get that" and "It's fine, I owe you." And in Caramel's opinion, friendship wasn't something where ponies buy each other things to stay friends with them.

Big Macintosh shook his head good happily. "Nnope, Ah insist. You don' have tah give me nothin' in return, your work today was what Ah wanna thank you for. Ah'm not payin' yah, Ah'm jus' doin' somethin' nice for a friend."

Well he certainly seems adamant. I guess there would be no harm in a simple meal. Caramel gave Big Mac the biggest smile he could, without looking sarcastic.

"Well when you put it that way, sure. But I'd rather not do anything tonight, if that's ok. My internal clock's still kinda messed up, and I'm sure if I sleep early enough tonight, it'll go back to normal."

Big Macintosh smiled knowingly. He had the exact same feeling and most ponies in Equestria did as well. "That's fine by me. Mine's kinda out o' whack to. Tomorrow then?"

Big Mac had to fight to keep the look of disappointment off his face. It was true that he still felt a little out of time, but any time with Caramel would be worth less sleep. Celestia knows, he had already lost sleep over the beige stallion, and he had only known him a day.

Caramel turned in the direction of the path back to Ponyville. He looked back at Big Macintosh in the soft light of the sunset, the last rays of the day playing across his thick red fur.

"Tomorrow for sure. See you then!" He waved to Mac as he made his way back to the path through the orchard to Ponyville.

Ah miss him already.

It was colder now then it had been when Caramel had walked among the apples trees that had smelled so sweet. The smell was weaker now, but ever present, a constant reminder of where he was. There was still plenty of sunlight to see bye though, which was why Caramel was somewhat surprised that he tripped again. Seemingly in the same place he did before. He once again bit dust.

"Mother of Celestia, what the hell?" There behind him sat the same raggedy doll he had tripped over earlier. It still looked like it had been run over by multiple carts. He bent down and picked it up. I should stitch this back up. I bet Mac's sister would appreciate that. Caramel had learned how to knit when he was around 13, and he hardly ever did. But it was the kind of knowledge that didn't fade over time, and he had on occasion had to mend some clothes.

With the doll resting on his back, he trekked through town. Thankfully there was barely anypony about at this time, so nopony would think the doll was his. Caramel didn't want anypony thinking that he, a grown stallion, played with dolls.

Author's Note

Well this didn't kick off like I hoped it would. Oh well, I guess that's not the important thing. What's important is that I might have given anyone reading this the feels. If not yet, I swear I shall deliver you many feels. Author's Honor.

Also, in this story, Caramel is less shy and awkward. I thought it would be nice to make him a bit more confident then he usually gets portrayed as. I must admit though, Awkward Caramel is bucking adorable.