Mistress Do Well: Submission

by milesprower06

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Fluttershy, Sex, Slice of Life, Twilight Sparkle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Rainbow Dash
Length: 9820

Having forgiven her friends for the events of a year ago, Rainbow Dash now looks to her developing relationship with Twilight, and tries to figure out a way to handle the direction which the alicorn wishes to take it.

Having forgiven her friends for the events of a year ago, Rainbow Dash now looks to her developing relationship with Twilight, and looks for advice on how to take it in the direction the alicorn wants.

Trigger Warning: BDSM

Published 2014-04-21 00:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2014-05-13 20:55:12 UTC

Prologue

Mistress Do Well: Submission
by milesprower06

Prologue

Every step felt like a mile. Every minute, an hour.

Rainbow Dash trotted down a forest path through the eastern region of Equestria, headed south. She felt her new earring as it hung from her ear. Her saddlebags weighed her down, the majority of which was the 19,200 bits she had barely begun spending, and it had already been a month since leaving.

Beginning a gradual uphill climb, Rainbow saw a wagon kiosk start to come down from the top, about a quarter of a mile away. The pony pulling it wore a purple cloak, much like the brown one she was currently wearing. She lowered her gaze to the ground in front of her, and did her best to conceal her features as she and the kiosk crossed paths halfway up the hill.

“You're the last pony I expected to run into out here.”

Rainbow turned, and laid eyes on the blue-coated unicorn owner of the kiosk.

Trixie Lulamoon.

Rainbow, in no mood to dig up another piece of the past, began to walk around the kiosk, trying her best not to make eye contact.

“Are you okay?”

The words gave off sincere concern as they came to Rainbow's ears, making her stop in her tracks, but not turn around to face the unicorn.

“I heard about what happened. A lot of ponies have. There are Missing posters everywhere.”

“Exactly. So why would you wonder if I'm okay?” Rainbow asked, turning around. “Every time I want to buy something to eat... Or if I want to sleep indoors for a night... Or whenever I pass a pony on the road... I have to wonder if these vendors and desk clerks and passers-by know me, and if they've heard about what my friends did to me... And if they're going to alert the royal search parties out looking for me, and if I'm going to wake up surrounded by guards. So don't even ask if I'm okay, because I'm not! You have no idea how badly I just want to disappear!”

Trixie saw the tears prick the pegasus' tired, defeated eyes. She saw the clipped primaries when her wings flared out in anger, and how she shivered underneath her ragged cloak.

“You're right. You're absolutely right. I know that none of what happened is okay, or why they would ever even think about doing what they did to you. You want all of Equestria to forget about you. What if I could give you a way to?”

Rainbow scoffed, wondering why she was still standing here listening to this.

Trixie turned back to her kiosk and shuffled several items around. She came back around to Rainbow with a neatly folded article of dark gray clothing.

“Even as a showmare, I did a little artifact collecting on the side. Once I got out of doing traveling shows, I stepped that hobby up a bit. This is the Cloak of the New Moon. It's enchanted with incredibly powerful magic. You just put it on, bring the hood up, and nopony will ever recognize you. Only powerful disillusion spells can break the enchantment, but then again, why would any unicorn of that experience have any reason to? After all, you're anonymous. Just a face in the crowd. You could even tell somepony your name directly, and they still wouldn't have a clue. Go anywhere you want. It was very hard to come by, so even for you and what you've been through, I'm going to have to ask 5,000 for it.”

Rainbow scoffed again.

“Right. Like you can prove to me that it even-”

“Look, over there! You, stay right there!”

Rainbow and Trixie both looked up towards the top of the hill, where two Royal Guard pegasi were galloping down to their location.

Dash's heart crept up to her throat. She knew she couldn't outrun them, and she couldn't fly, either.

Out of the corner of her eye, Rainbow saw Trixie's horn light up. By the time she turned to see what was happening, the unicorn had unfurled the cloak, took a step forward, draped it over her shoulders, and pulled the hood up. Before she could object, the approaching hoofsteps became loud enough to bring her attention back to the two guards, now standing directly in front of her.

Rainbow gulped, unsure what to do. The situation grew tense and awkward as the guards also were unsure what to do, as they just stared at the now hooded pegasus.

After a nervous clearing of the throat, the guard on the right spoke up.

“Um, I'm sorry ma'am. I thought for sure that you were somepony we've been looking for.”

With several more seconds of staring, the two guards exchanged a glance and a shrug, and continued walking down the path. Once they were out of sight, Rainbow turned to Trixie with a look of disbelief, tears of relief running down her face.

“Trixie...”

“Do you want it?”

After a moment of silence, Rainbow nodded.

“I only recognize you because of this spell. Wait until I stop casting it, then hand me the bits, thank me, and be on your way. Best of luck to you, Rainbow Dash.”

The glow on the tip of her horn dimmed and went out. Rainbow dug into her saddlebag and got out a small bag of bits, which she had pre-portioned into certain amounts. She handed these to Trixie.

“Thank you.”

Trixie smiled in return.

“Enjoy, thank you for your patronage.”

As the cyan pegasus galloped off towards the crest of the hill, Trixie set the bag of bits into the center drawer of her kiosk, then closed and locked it. She wasn't sure what she had just sold to the mysterious mare, but she was confident that she had just made a fortune, and that was perfectly fine with her.

The Art

Mistress Do Well: Submission
by milesprower06

The Art

Fluttershy awoke to a fluffy tail brushing under her chin, following by a purring in her ear as Opal nuzzled the side of her face, letting her know that it was time for her to get up and provide breakfast.

'Dogs have owners, cats have staff.' Applejack had jokingly told her a few days ago. She still smiled at the joke.

Getting out of bed, seeing her house renovated and clean still brought warm feelings to her heart. The five of them working together, and it looked better than new. Better yet, she had an increasing number of animals living with her. It wasn't nearly as much as she had more than a year ago, but it was a great start.

Opal hopped off the bed and waited impatiently by the door as Fluttershy ran a comb through her mane. Setting the brush down on the dresser, she glanced just to the left, where a letter and white gold heart pendant rested.

To the kindest, sweetest, and most gentle pony I have ever known.

Love,
Your Secret Admirer

Fluttershy's heart still skipped a beat every time she read the letter, which she had done at least fifty times in the week since she received it. She took the necklace and carefully hooked it on, staring thoughtfully at the reflection of herself wearing it in the mirror, fiddling with the shimmering heart pendant for a few moments, before Opal's meowing finally got her attention.

“Alright, I hear you sweetie. Breakfast time.”

It took tending to the needs of numerous animals to keep her mind occupied throughout the day, because when she had time to herself, all she did was wonder who had sent the letter. It had made sleep difficult the first night after she got it. Would this admirer show up at her door? Who could it be and... Could she ever get that close to somepony ever again?

She couldn't answer that question, and she doubted her ability to reach a conclusion to that dilemma until she was looking her secret admirer in the eyes.

Opal snaked around on the floor between her legs as she opened the can of cat food and put it in the dish by the entry to the kitchen. About to make herself some breakfast, that plan was put on hold as there was a knock at the door. Setting the frying pan on the burner, she left Opal to her breakfast and went to greet her morning visitor. The front door opened to reveal Rainbow on the doormat, a scooter and helmet resting against the fence.

“Oh, good morning Rainbow. You've been riding with Scootaloo, I take it?”

“Yep. We just finished up an early morning run. Thought I'd come by, because I've been wanting to ask you about something.”

“Well, come on in. I was just about to start breakfast, but that can wait.”

Together, the two of them sat across from each other at the dining room table.

“That's a beautiful necklace. Where'd you get it?” Rainbow asked.

“Oh, this? I... I got it in the mail. Somepony sent it to me.”

“Wow. Who?”

Fluttershy brought her hoof up to fiddle with the white gold heart.

“I... I don't know. It came with a letter, but it didn't have a name on it, it was just signed 'Your secret admirer.'”

“Oh.” Rainbow said, now understanding, causing Fluttershy to lightly blush at the cheeks.

“Aren't you curious to find out who it is?”

“Yes, very.”

“How are you going to do that?”

“Well... I haven't exactly worn this out in public yet.”

Rainbow watched as Fluttershy averted her gaze and fiddled with the necklace for a few more seconds.

“So, what did you want to talk about?” the timid pegasus asked, aiming to change the subject.

“Actually, if you don't mind... I'd like to ask you about Rarity. About your relationship.”

Fluttershy stared silently for only a moment.

“What would you like to know?”

“Whose idea was it? You know... The BDSM?” Rainbow asked.

Fluttershy shifted around in her seat before answering, enough for Rainbow to notice.

“I mean, if you don't feel comfortable with-”

“No no, it's alright. It... It was my idea.”

Rainbow knew the answer could have gone either way, but she honestly wasn't expecting this one. She had always imagined that Rarity had coerced her into it.

“So... What did you get out of it? Did you enjoy being hurt?”

Fluttershy shook her head.

"It's not just about the pain. It's about trust. Letting go. Not being in control. Putting yourself in somepony else's hooves."

“So how did it start?”

"We were safe. That always came first. In the beginning we didn't have a safe word, I was supposed to just ask her to stop, but I never had to, she never crossed any lines. At the end of every session, she'd look me over, ask if I was okay, and check me over for injuries herself, then she'd wrap us up in a blanket. Comfort was always important to her afterward.”

Keeping a keen eye on Fluttershy to make sure she was still comfortable with the conversation, Rainbow pressed on.

“So where did everything start to go wrong?”

Fluttershy sat back in her chair, and reflected on the past, carefully constructing her reply.

"Thinking back, we both felt it had started to get a little boring. So we started focusing on the thrill more and less on the safety. We started using a safe word so we could act like I didn't like it sometimes. Over the course of about a year, the sessions got longer. Eventually, we thought we had gotten to a level of trust where we didn't need a safe word. A little bit after that, she'd just ask if I was okay, she wouldn't check me over. A few months after that, she stopped doing that too. Before I knew it... Pleasing her was all that mattered.”

Fluttershy couldn't help but feel guilty about how far things had progressed because of her lack of assertiveness. This whole thing could have been avoided if she remained in control. Pushing her limits was one thing, breaking them entirely was quite another.

“W-why are you asking me this?”

Now it was Rainbow's turn to seem uncomfortable. She leaned down to her saddlebags that she had put beside her chair, opened the right flap, and came up with a small white box. She set it on the table, and slowly and silently slid it across to Fluttershy. Fluttershy pulled it across the last quarter of the table, and lifted the lid off.

“Oh...” she said, trailing off, staring at the magic limiter inside.

“Twilight gave it to me last week. She said it was how she got through some of her nights alone, and if I was comfortable with it, she wants me to use it on her.”

“I see...” Fluttershy began, putting the lid back on and sliding it back across the table. “Are you comfortable with it?”

“I... I honestly don't know. On one hoof, I don't know if I can treat her like that, and on the other... I want to make her happy.”

“She must want it badly, if she gave it to you. Especially with what happened down in-”

“Don't.” Rainbow cut her friend off. “That's what I've been trying to get out of my head all week, because that's what I'm afraid of most. I have to stop thinking about what happened down there whenever I consider dominating her. Because what happened down there wasn't domination. BDSM, from what you just told me, is all about trust and consent. That was sexual abuse and torture.”

Fluttershy immediately nodded, agreeing wholeheartedly.

“I'd say you should definitely take the time to decide if you're comfortable with doing this.”

“That's kinda why I came over here. I've been thinking about it all week. I don't want to keep dancing around it, and make her think I forgot about it.”

“You don't want to rush it.”

“I know, but at the same time, I don't want to take so long that I... Ugh, fine, let me put it to you this way. Let's say you wear that necklace out in public. You find your secret admirer. What if they know what happened? What if they knew what you were into? What if they wanted to help you try BDSM again? Would you?”

Fluttershy was not expecting this kind of question. Her gaze fell to the table as she pondered an answer.

“If it was somepony I felt I could love and trust... Yes, I think I would. I think we've all learned from our mistakes.”

With this answer, Rainbow looked at the small white box once again.

“I was hoping to decide by tonight. I've already got most of the stuff I need. I was hoping if I got enough of it, that it would push me to finally do it.”

“How about a friendly bet? If you really feel like you have to stop dancing around and make a decision by tonight, do it. Make a commitment one way or the other, and I'll wear my necklace out when we all go for drinks tomorrow night. Deal?”

Rainbow smiled. Maybe that was the 'oomph' she needed. A friendly dare.

“You're on.”

The Act

Mistress Do Well: Submission
by milesprower06

The Act

Friendly competitions did absolute wonders for Rainbow's decision-making process. What was once hesitation and trying to plan out for every possibility now turned to a streamlined 'this is what's gonna happen' once someone dared her to do something she was unsure of.

But now that she was sitting up in Twilight's room, reading the latest Daring Do book waiting for Twilight to come home, she was all pins and needles again.

'Come on, Rainbow. You're supposed to be the dom. Do you think Twilight wants a Mistress who hesitates every two seconds?' she asked herself. She had never done anything like this, but even she knew that the dom asking “Oh my gosh are you okay?” every two seconds would destroy the atmosphere completely. Fluttershy explained that's why there are safe words, so a scene could proceed believably until one or the other felt unsafe.

But there was also the risk of one or both of them breaking their limits. That was how Fluttershy became the broken pet; that was what sent Rarity on her unstoppable power trip. So the question ultimately was, did Rainbow trust Twilight to know her limits, and to stop once they were reached?

She heard the front door open downstairs, and knew Twilight had come home. She did a quick glance over on her side of the bed, and made sure she had all the equipment she needed. With a gulp, she simply waited as the hoofsteps got louder as they came up the stairs. Once her marefriend came into view, she greeted her with a smile.

“Hey there. I see you're all ready for bed,” Twilight said, a hint of seduction in her voice. This slightly relieved Rainbow. This would be a bit easier if she was in the mood. Twilight climbed into bed, and snuggled up next to Rainbow.

Without the slightest hint, Rainbow sprang into action. She grabbed Twilight, rolled her onto her belly, and sat on top of her before she even managed to gasp.

“Hey, what-” Twilight began to object, but then she felt the limiter being placed on her horn, and her mind seized up.

Rainbow leaned down as Twilight stopped struggling.

“Do you still want to do this?” she whispered in the alicorn's ear.

Beginning to breath a bit more heavily, Twilight nodded.

“Then listen up, and listen good. No safe word. Just ask me to stop, and it's over. Don't you dare push yourself past your limits. I mean it. If I don't think you're being safe, I'll put a stop to it myself. Understood?”

Again, Twilight nodded.

“Yes.”

With that answer, Rainbow gave Twilight a hoof slap on her flank, eliciting a gasp from her.

“I'm sorry, what was that?”

“Y-yes, mistress.” Twilight corrected herself.

“Don't move.”

With that, Rainbow got off of her and fetched the equipment from the floor on her side of the bed. First came the bridle. She brought it around Twilight's head and quickly fastened it on, draping the reins down her back. She kept the bit in her mouth loose, letting her keep the ability to speak semi-clearly. Then came the black blindfold. She tied it around her eyes, effectively blinding her. Next, she took the leather belt and began to wrap it around her torso.

“Fold your wings in,” Rainbow commanded. It took some considerable willpower, but Twilight managed to bring her spread wings in with some help from Rainbow's front hooves, so that she could bind them down to her torso with the leather belt. Just having them tied down like that turned her on even more. Hearing the leather strain against them wasn't helping any either.

Last came the spreader bar. Rainbow picked it and a short leather strap up from the floor, giving Twilight a light swat on her cutie mark.

“Up. Present, pet.”

Rainbow saw just how aroused Twilight was already as her tail twitched from side to side. Keeping her front half down on the bed, she got up on her two back hooves and raised her rump. The pegasus put the spreader bar between her back legs, adjusted the length, then slipped her hooves into the leather cuffs, spreading her legs even further in the process.

Twilight felt Rainbow's weight leave the bed. Her ears twitched when she thought she heard the lighting of a match. Rainbow returned to the bed shortly after, and Twilight felt something rubbery poke at her marehood, she moaned, both at the teasing ministrations, and at the thoughts of what Rainbow was planning for her. She felt Rainbow's weight on her back as she mounted her proper.

“M-Mistress, do you want a s-sound dampening spell?”

Such a question earned her a considerably harder slap from Rainbow's chosen implement, and she let out a yelp.

“Why would I want that? Don't you want all our neighbors to hear how much my slave loves getting fucked?”

“But what if... They're trying to sleep?”

“They'll have peace and quiet when we're good and done.”

Upon finishing that sentence, Rainbow hilted the strap-on dildo in Twilight.

“Aaaaah!” Twilight screamed, having her breath taken away as she felt like her nether region was going to explode.

Ever so slowly, Rainbow began to pull out, as Twilight's dripping marehood squeezed to keep it inside her. Her wings pressed even tighter against the leather keeping them down at her sides. When just the head of the rubber stallionhood remained, Twilight gave a moan.

“Please Mistress, more,”she said in a normal volume.

“I'm sorry, I couldn't hear you. Did you want me to take it out?”

“No! No Mistress, please put it back in. Rut me!”

Satisfied for now at her volume, Rainbow once again slid it all the way in. She pulled out just as fast and began thrusting.

“Ohh! Yes, thank you Mistress!”

But as Rainbow continued over the next minute, Twilight once again quieted down, and Rainbow heard the wet squelching of her marehood over her moans. She slowed her pace, and came to a stop, the head barely inside. Twilight moaned in protest, earning her another strike from the strap.

“Strike one. Are you not enjoying this enough? You seem awfully quiet.”

“Mistress... Everypony's going to hear us...”

Her objection earned her yet another strike. Rainbow, without sliding into her again, leaned down close to her ear.

“Strike two. If you don't let me really know how badly you want this, I'm going to put a vibrator in you, and leave you like this overnight. I speak from experience, so trust me when I say it'll start to hurt after an hour or so. Then you'll start blacking out with each orgasm, waking up just long enough to cum again.”

Twilight breathed heavily as her heart began to pound against her chest. Would Rainbow really do that? Use her experience from down in the basement against her? Or was this a trick? Was she trying to get her to stop the session? As she felt Rainbow lean up off of her to prepare for the third and final strike, she decided that she didn't want to take any chances. She asked for this, after all, even if she didn't know quite what she was getting into.

“UGH. PLEASE FUCK ME, MISTRESS! PLEASE! FUCK ME HARD SO I CAN CUM FOR YOU!!!”

Rainbow smirked, and slammed into Twilight again, keeping up the pace as long as she couldn't hear herself.

“AH! YES! HARDER! UNNNH! PLEASE, MISTRESS, AH, HARDER! FUCK ME HARDER AND MAKE ME CUM!!!”

Twilight's words eventually devolved to moans and screams as Rainbow mercilessly rutted her as she kept her volume up. It wasn't as one-sided as it appeared, either; the strap-on had a pouch for an egg vibrator or two to hold against the giver's clit, giving them more stimulation the harder they rutted the receiver.

Needless to say, both of them were getting close.

Rainbow hilted in Twilight again, then broke her pace, pulling out maddeningly slowly.

“Oh, please Mistress, please don't stop I'm so close!”

Rainbow leaned down again, whispering in her ear.

“I know.”

She gave her hardest thrust of the night, brushing the flared head of the dildo against Twilight's g-spot, making her scream and finally pushing her over the edge. Rainbow also came, with how hard the vibrators were pressing against her. She pulled hard on Twilight's reins, making her arch her back.

When it was all said and done, Rainbow slowly pulled out, and saw how hard Twilight was blushing. Dropping the harness from around her legs, she let the slick strap-on fall to the floor, and leaned down to release Twilight's legs from the spreader bar. Setting that next to the dildo on the floor, she started to go for the belt restraining her wings, and received an objection from the panting Twilight.

“No, please Mistress, leave the rest on. I... I can sleep comfortably like this.”

Rainbow gave it some thought, and relented.

“Very well, pet. It'll come off in the morning.”

With that, Twilight laid down on her side, and slipped under the covers, quickly falling asleep.

Rainbow smiled softly. She knew she had been nowhere near perfect, and it probably could have lasted a bit longer, but she was very satisfied for the first time. She walked over to the windowsill, leaned towards the candlestick, and blew out the flame of her enchanted Candle of Silence.

That had been her final purchase for tonight. After Fluttershy encouraged her to make a decision, something clicked inside. She knew that with somepony like Twilight, the physical pain of a paddle or strap would have been nothing compared to the cruelest of mind games. Here she was, embarrassed, thinking everypony within 500 feet of the tree heard their session, when in reality, the magic candle kept everything contained. No one downstairs would've even had a clue what had just happened.

But it's not like she needed to know a detail like that when she went out on her errands tomorrow.

Rainbow looked down at her saddlebags next to the night stand, where the Cloak of the New Moon lay folded inside. That was the one thing she had decided against. All week, she thought about adding that as a portion of the mind game, but ultimately judged it to be a bad idea. The special part wasn't so much about what the two of them were doing, but that they were doing it with each other, and the last thing Rainbow wanted was for Twilight to freak, thinking she was getting raped by a complete stranger.

Her mind began to slow down from the excitement that had just taken place, so she gently climbed into bed next to Twilight, snuggled up next to her, and welcomed the sleep that took her.

Rainbow began to stir, stretching slightly, unsure of how long she'd been asleep.

“Mmmm, well that was fun, wasn't it?” she heard Twilight say.

“Mmhmm...” Rainbow nodded, and then began to realize that something wasn't quite right. She opened her eyes, and saw that she wasn't in the library, but in a location she recognized all too well.

Rainbow bolted up into a sitting position on the mattress in Rarity's basement, and noticed her right leg chained to the nearby wall.

“What the-?” she asked, tugging at the chain to no avail.

“Well don't ask me, it's your mind.” Twilight said again.

Rainbow looked up from the chain to see Twilight, clad in leather, leaning against the wall next to the stairs, magically grasping a whip. Getting a sense of dejavu, she looked to the opposite wall, and saw empty chains dangling from the cobblestone.

“Where's... The other one?”

Mistress Twilight shrugged, getting off the wall.

“Wow, Applejack was right about you not listening well down here. Or maybe you really are that clueless about your inner conflicts.”

“Inner conflicts?” Rainbow asked.

She reflected on that. The last time she had this dream, there were two Twilights. One was submissive, hanging from the chains on the wall, begging to be punished. Both of them had pressed her with the question of whether she truly loved Twilight. Rainbow had woken up in tears when this 'Mistress' Twilight put her whip into her hooves and forced her to administer said punishment.

But Submissive Twilight wasn't here. Why?

'Of course,' Rainbow thought to herself, finally clicking. 'I just dominated her. But then why...?'

Rainbow's eyes widened as it finally dawned on her.

“No... No... No, you're crazy.”

“I'm crazy? When you're the one arguing with a figment of your imagination?”

“You think I want to return to anything close to what it was like down here?!?” Rainbow yelled incredulously.

Mistress Twilight scoffed.

“As if these are my thoughts. This is your dream, egghead. You're the one keeping me in here. If you really didn't want to, you wouldn't be chained to the wall right now.” she mocked, circling the mattress.

This remark made Rainbow attempt to futilely pull against her chain. Mistress Twilight stepped over it, and sat next to Rainbow on the bed.

“Are you saying you've buried it down that deep? You've never thought about it since? You've tried to completely ignore the fact that there were a precious few seconds that you enjoyed the way you were treated down here? Those rare moments where you craved orgasm over escape?”

Rainbow said nothing, her lips trembling. She wanted to lash out and take a swing at the leather-clad unicorn beside her, but she recalled how she had effortlessly winked out of reach every time. Tears pricked her eyelids, and Mistress Twilight put a hoof around her shoulders, as she gently grazed the whip over her cyan thighs, causing her to shudder.

“It was against your will, without your consent, and yet you managed to steal fragments of pleasure from it. Now imagine how much longer those fragments, those precious seconds could be, if I had your consent... with the pony you love and trust. Come on, be honest with yourself. Doesn't that entice you?”

Mistress got up as the tears trickled down Rainbow's cheeks. Crying silently, she nodded, as Mistress Twilight walked away from her, ascending the stairs.

“So you can admit it to yourself and go after what you really want, or you can keep it inside, and you can visit me in here every night. It's your choice.”

For several silent moments, Mistress simply stared down at Rainbow from the top of the stairs.

“I guess there's no arguing with you. It is my mind after all.”

“Now you're getting the hang of things. Oh, this is going to be SO interesting! I can't wait to see how you do it!” she said with a sudden injection of glee, standing at the railing at the stairs.

“How I do what?”

“Why, how you're going to convince me to do it! I'm the one who got you out of here. I can't even begin to imagine my reaction when you figure out a way to ask me to do this again. It'll be quite the show! Well, I'll let you get some rest. A good pet can't think while she's tired after all!”

Mistress Twilight turned and exited the basement, shutting and locking the door behind her. After several moments, Rainbow laid back down on the mattress, and the moment her head hit it, the basement melted away, and she found herself in the library, next to a soundly-sleeping Twilight, bridle still secure around her head, and limiter still fastened on top of her horn.

The pegasus slowly and quietly got out of bed, and walked over to the balcony door, opening it and stepping outside. After quietly closing the door, the crying she had done in the dream transitioned to reality as tears streamed down her face.

Why did she want this so badly? It was supposed to be horrific and traumatizing. It was supposed to be something she was barely able to forgive her friends for.

Taking a deep, shuddering breath, she looked back into the window, seeing Twilight sleeping, with the bridle, the belt around her wings, and the spreader bar and strap-on beside the bed.

'Is this something you went through, too? Were you disgusted with these desires until you decided to stand up and accept them as a part of you?'

Seeing how peaceful Twilight was sleeping inside helped some of the frustration melt away.

'Mistress Twilight' was right, but so was she. It was going to be something akin to what it was like in the basement, but not really. It was going to be with her consent. She was going to want it, and it was going to be given by a pony she loved and trusted.

But she also had no idea how Twilight was going to react when she was asked something like this. How in Equestria was she going to bring it up?

The Offer

Mistress Do Well: Submission
by milesprower06

The Offer

“Hey there, Twilight. About time you got here.” Applejack greeted the alicorn as she stepped inside the sparsely populated bar. It was a Friday night, and they wanted to have these drinks together before the more lively crowds started to arrive.

“Sorry I'm late, I was finishing up a book report,” Twilight explained her tardiness as she walked up to the table where Applejack, Pinkie, and Rainbow were seated, each enjoying a drink.

“That's alright, Fluttershy's running a bit behind too,” Applejack told her. As soon as Twilight was seated, a waiter was there ready to take her order.

“What can I get for you, ma'am?” he asked, ready with a quill and order pad.

“A non-alcoholic apple cider for me, thanks.”

With a quick jot on the pad, the waiter was off to the bar. He returned two minutes later with a mug of cider.

“There she is,” Rainbow said, motioning towards the door, where Fluttershy had just come in. Rainbow waved to get her attention.

“Oooh, what a pretty necklace, Fluttershy!” Pinkie exclaimed. As she got closer to the table the others noticed that she did indeed have a brilliant white gold heart pendant necklace on. Fluttershy gave a sheepish smile.

“Thanks, Pinkie.”

The waiter came and took Fluttershy's drink order. Once all five of them had either new drinks or refills, the conversations began. It was mostly lighthearted talk, with Fluttershy looking around occasionally, checking to see if anypony was eying her. When it got darker, and the rowdier crowds began to file in for a night of partying, they started to wrap things up, but not before Applejack got up.

“Well, before we put an end to this little get-together, I just wanted to do something. A toast, to Rainbow. The pony who brought us all back together. A pony whose undying loyalty and love is more than we deserve.”

With those words, AJ raised her glass, followed by the other three, each giving Rainbow a smile. She gave an awkward smile back, and downed the last half of her drink all at once before putting her glass on the table, giving a short hiccup.

“Well, gang. This place is getting rather lively, what do you say we head out for the night?” Rainbow asked.

“Yeah, sounds good to me, the music is making it hard to hear.” Twilight agreed. They went out to the front of the bar, where the sun was setting in the sky, shared a few hugs, and everypony went their separate ways, with Pinkie of course heading back inside to party it up with the rest of the bar patrons.

“Hey, Rainbow, I'm gonna swing by Quills and Sofas and pick up some more quills before they close. Meet you back at the library?”

“Yeah, sure thing, Twi.”

Rainbow gave the alicorn a peck on the cheek, and turned towards the library, while Twilight galloped to Quills and Sofas, to try and get there before they closed for the night.

Fluttershy wanted to kick herself for her naivety, as she got ready for bed, about a half-hour after leaving the bar.

It had taken a lot of courage to wear her necklace out in public, so ideally she wanted to find her secret admirer as a reward for that courage. But of course, it was only one hour in a bar. As she stood in front of her dresser mirror, she admitted to herself the real reason she wanted to find them tonight; deep down, she wanted it to be one of-

Knock knock knock.

Opal's ears perked up at the sound coming from the front door downstairs. Wondering who would be visiting her at this hour, she left her room, went downstairs, and opened the door to greet them.

Applejack met her with a gentle, nervous smile.

“Evenin' Fluttershy. Hope I'm not here too late. I... I just wanted to come over, since I saw you got the necklace I sent ya.”

Fluttershy's heart skipped a beat, as Applejack's cheeks began to blush red.

“Applejack? You... You sent...?”

“I... I didn't say anything at the bar, because I know how ya are, and I didn't want to embarrass you or nothin'. But the truth is, I've had feelings for you for quite awhile, sugarcube. Even before you asked Rarity out all that time ago. When you did, I decided to respect it, and kept my distance. When all that insanity happened last year, I figured you wouldn't want to get that close to anypony ever again. But when Rainbow brought us all back home, and I saw how close she and Twilight were getting, I just... I had to take a chance. That's why I sent ya that necklace anonymously. I was afraid of what your reaction would be. Then when I saw you wear it tonight, I figured you were looking for your secret admirer.”

“It was Rainbow's idea,” Fluttershy said, giving a small smile.

“Well, I'm here, if you'll have me.”

The next few seconds seemed like hours. Then Fluttershy burst forward, throwing her front legs around Applejack, hugging her tight, on the verge of tears.

“I... I was so afraid that it... It would be someone I wasn't sure I could love. I'm so glad it was you. Thank you so much, Applejack...”

Applejack smiled, relieved as she returned the hug.

“I love you, Fluttershy.”

They stood there in the front door, holding each other for several moments. Afterward, Fluttershy broke the hug and took a step back.

“Would... Would you like to come in?”

Applejack nodded with a smile, stepping inside. She took a seat on the couch while Fluttershy quickly ,made some tea, and brought it out. She gave a cup to Applejack, and sat down next to her with her own cup. Taking a sip, Fluttershy cleared her throat.

“Listen, AJ. Before we get too far down the road, I have to say something, so it doesn't derail everything if I save it for later.”

Applejack listened intently, as Fluttershy ran her hoof around the rim of her teacup.

“That whole mess a year ago... I want you to know it hasn't changed... What I like. I just wanted you to know that... That I still like BDSM...”

Applejack took a drink of her tea, wondering how to reply.

“I'd say that's just fine, sugarcube. If it's still part of who you are, you shouldn't deny yourself.”

This answer gave Fluttershy a smile, and a warm feeling in her stomach.

“So... So that means that you wouldn't mind...?”

“Well, it depends. I mean, sure, I can be the marefriend who ties you up every now and then. But make no mistake, sweetheart; I am still very ashamed of what we participated in down there. Not even in a role play, will I ever hit you or hurt you in any way.”

“Thanks, Applejack. I wouldn't want to take it that far anyway. Not after what happened.”

She finished her tea before continuing.

“Would... Would you like to stay with me tonight?”

Her new marefriend gave a warm smile.

“If you want me to, hun.”

The pegasus gave a soft nod, and proceeded to get up from the couch, leaving her teacup on the coffee table. The farmer followed suite, and got up and followed her to the stairs. Shutting off the lights, they went up to her room, where Fluttershy opened the door, trying her best to look like she wasn't on pins and needles.

AJ noticed it almost right away, but Fluttershy tried anyway to get over to the bed and subtly take the coil of rope that had been laying on her comforter and slip it under the far side of the bed.

“Were you gonna do a little playin' tonight?” Applejack asked her, as Fluttershy froze, half-bent over the bed in her attempt to slip the rope out of sight. She came back up, cheeks beet red.

“Well... I... Yeah.”

“Do you still want to?” Applejack asked plainly.

Fluttershy was a bit taken aback at Applejack's lack of surprise in her first question, and her followup. Maybe she was half-expecting to see something like that when she had been asked if she would want to role play.

She nodded sheepishly, bringing the rope back up to the bed. Applejack walked over to the bed and hopped up. She took the rope expertly in her tail, and uncoiled it.

“Alright, give me your hooves, darlin'.”

Still blushing like mad, Fluttershy offered the workhorse her two front hooves. Applejack draped the first length of rope over the pegasus' stretched out hooves, going under and coming back around 5 times before knotting it off, securely binding her front legs together. As there was quite a bit of length remaining, she brought the rest down to her midsection, quickly throwing it around her wings, and tying them down.

“And there we go. I don't think you'll be going anywhere tonight.”

Fluttershy was shaking with anticipation, and AJ noticed this quickly.

“Ya alright, hun? Need me to loosen anything?”

Fluttershy quickly shook her head.

“No, no, it's not that. I just don't want to move too fast, that's all. Do you think maybe we could, well, just cuddle tonight?”

It was then that Applejack admitted to herself that Fluttershy looked pretty cute tied up like that. Well, realistically speaking, she was cute in anything. She smiled and nodded at the request.

“Hun, I don't want to rush you into anything. Of course. That's more than I was honestly expecting tonight.”

With that, Applejack helped guide Fluttershy down into a laying position on the bed, her back to her. Then, having her properly situated, she went to go turn off the light, then returned to the bed, covering them both with the comforter, and wrapping her front hooves around the bound Pegasus, snuggling into her.

Twilight came trotting into the library just as the sun disappeared below the horizon. She set her bag of new quills down on her desk before heading upstairs.

“Rainbow, I'm back!” She announced.

She ascended the stairs, and when she laid eyes on the bed, she wasn't sure if she was dreaming or not.

There sat Rainbow, nervously looking at her, ears flat against her head. Directly in front of her, on the bed, was the bondage equipment that she had used on her the night before. The bridle, bit, wing belt, spreader bar, and strap-on. These items alone would not have concerned the alicorn, were it not for the item currently around Rainbow's neck.

It was the collar from the day she was rescued. 'BITCH' was prominently engraved on the tag.

“Rainbow? What...?”

“I.... I thought we could switch it up tonight.” Rainbow said, her voice soft and submissive.

Twilight stared, not quite sure how to react. So many thoughts were colliding in the middle of her brain.

“After... After everything that's happened, you expect me to-”

“I did it for you.” Rainbow interrupted plainly.

“Yeah, but...”

Rainbow had her there. They had never explicitly agreed that this would be one-sided. Still, part of Twilight hoped that she was dreaming.

“Twilight, please?”

Twilight closed her eyes, and swallowed. She couldn't deny her. It wouldn't be fair.

“No safe word. Just ask me to stop. Turn around.” Twilight said, opening her eyes and walking towards the bed. Rainbow did as she was told and turned towards the head of the bed, facing the wall.

Twilight's horn lit up as she magically took hold of all the straps and restraints. First up was the belt for the wings, which she promptly fastened tightly before she got a chance to get excited. Once that was done, she fit the bridle on, opting to not include the bit.

She noticed Rainbow started to shiver a little.

“Are you alright?” Twilight asked softly, getting a nod in return.

“I'm fine, keep going.”

As she tried to imagine why in Equestria Rainbow was asking her to do this, she was also trying to keep her own dreadful memories at the farthest corner of her mind. When she took hold of the spreader bar, she couldn't hold them back any longer, as she remembered how she had tried to treat Dash with some kindness in the basement, before Rarity came down and took control. With a shudder of her own, she took a deep breath and gently got the bar in between her legs and got the leather straps at each end securely fastened. She heard her wings strain against the leather as she got the last item for herself, the strap-on. She forced her reluctance to the back of her mind, and got it securely fastened. With that done, she climbed up on the bed.

The moment Twilight's weight began to settle on Rainbow, and she felt the tip of the strap-on poke at her, something in her mind screamed at her.

No.

“Stop,” she gasped. “Please stop.”

Twilight immediately pushed off of Rainbow, her horn lighting up, and within half a second, all of Rainbow's restraints were removed, and placed at the side of the bed.

“Are you alright?” Twilight immediately asked.

Rainbow remained on the bed, in her presenting position, shivering.

“Rainbow...?”

With a sharp intake of breath, the pegasus began to quietly weep.

“I'm sorry, Rainbow. Are you okay?”

“It's not you... It's me.” Rainbow whimpered.

“What do you mean?”

“I want this. I know... I know I want this. I trust you. I know I do. And...”

Rainbow took a deep breath, trying unsuccessfully to get her tears under control.

“I need this. Applejack's toast tonight really hurt inside. My mind has been tormenting me at night. I've been feeling more and more guilty the past couple weeks, and a dream last night was the tipping point. I got the Cloak of the New Moon about a month after I left. Trixie sold it to me. Once I was anonymous, I worried less about being recognized, so I had more time to think about other things. I did an awful lot of crying when I was out there, alone. I lied to myself that all of it was because of what you all did to me, but no. Now that I look back, and now that my mind has been looking at things a bit differently...” Rainbow paused, once again taking a deep breath.

“I was angry at myself. Angry over what a terrible friend I had become. I had wronged all of you, and part of me still feels that even though you all overreacted, that I still haven't been punished for the things I did. The truth is, I was the first one to no longer be worthy of my Element of Harmony.”

Twilight took several moments to process what Rainbow was telling her.

"You still feel guilty that you weren't loyal, even though we overreacted?”

"That pony you punished in the basement... That was the Rainbow with the disastrous ego. By the time I was broken, your project had completely fallen apart. I was so wrong, I didn't care about anypony but myself. I know Rarity went too far... but I still have to be punished. Somepony has to hold me accountable for what I did."

Twilight gulped, ready to attempt the idea that had just come to mind.

“Are you absolutely sure?” she asked her marefriend. Rainbow slowly nodded.

"Alright then, I'll hold you accountable.”

Rainbow turned to look at her, tears pricking her eyelids.

“Wait right there.”

With that, Twilight left the bedroom and trotted down the stairs. Rainbow could hear her open the basement door, but nothing beyond that. Her curiosity was peaked as her heart continued to ache, wondering what her marefriend had in mind.

Twilight descended the stairs to the basement, and went over to a chest near the back wall. Her heart pounded as she magically unlocked it and opened the lid.

That had been the major flaw in the plan a year ago. The egotistical shell around Rainbow convinced her that she had done no wrong. By the time that shell had been broken, the ponies who were still interested in helping her had become too afraid of Rarity's sadism. If she had been wandering Equestria all this time, thinking she was still at fault...

At last, Twilight could do this the right way, on her terms, free from the influence of others who may have other goals. The fact that she wanted this meant that she could do this out of love, in a matter of minutes, and not days.

Even though Rainbow was sure, Twilight wasn't, but she was willing to give this a try. She knew all too well how guilt could eat away at you, and the last thing she wanted was for her marefriend to still feel guilty about the things that happened over a year ago, and if this could help melt those feelings away, she was willing to give it a shot.

Rainbow sniffled, as she was nearly shivering with anticipation. The next five minutes stretched out considerably, but then she heard the basement door open, and hoofsteps slowly come up the stairs.

"T-twi?" Rainbow asked, and then her eyes widened, as her marefriend slowly came into view above the stairs.

The first thing she saw was the hat. Then the masked face and eyes. Then the cape.

"You've been a disloyal pony, Rainbow Dash, and now you'll pay for it,” Twilight began. She was fully clad in her Mare Do Well costume, her voice was only muffled by the mask, and not magically altered like it was down in the basement.

“You still have your safe word, but you won't use it, because you know you deserve to be punished for the way you treated us. You can ask me to stop if you absolutely have to, but I urge you to accept your punishment tonight. You'll feel less guilty about the way you treated me, Scootaloo, Fluttershy, and the others..."

Dash gulps and nods. "I... I do need to be punished, by somepony I trust, who knows where to draw the line..."

"Then don't speak again unless spoken to," Twilight ordered, revealing a strap from under her cape, and giving Dash's right flank a hard whip, getting a yelp out of the pegasus. She went over to the windowsill, where Rainbow's Candle of Silence sat. That had been quite clever of her for using such an enchantment. But the minute the magic limiter came off, Twilight knew what it was. Now it was going to be used against her. She lit her horn, and the flame sparked to life. With that step done, she turned back to Rainbow.

"Here's what's going to happen. You're going to tell me how you wronged one of your best friends, and I'm going to administer the proper punishment. You will count each one as they come, and then we'll move on to the next one. Understood?”

Rainbow nodded, shifting her weight, and presenting her rear again.

“Begin.”

“I forgot to feed Fluttershy's animals while she was away. *crack* Ah! One... *crack* Two... *crack* Three... *crack* Four... *crack* Five!”

There came a pause in the lashes.

“And what happened?”

“Her animals ran away. *crack* Yahh! One! *crack* Two... *crack* Three! *crack* Four! *crack* Five...”

Dash was gritting her teeth by now, fighting against the pain.

“Next.”

“I... I started ignoring Pinkie's party invitations when they came for me in the mail. *crack* One! *crack* Two! *crack* Three! *crack* Four! *crack* Five!!!”

She was at 15 now, and those hadn't been as bad, having steeled herself first, preparing for the strikes.

“And what happened?”

“I... I forgot her birthday party!”

Rainbow once again tensed up, and wondered what was going on when nothing came. Her ears twitched, and Twilight waited, letting Rainbow shiver in anticipation.

*crack*

“Fffff- One! *crack* Two!! *crack* Three! *crack* Four!! *crack* F-five!!!”

Tears were now pricking her eyes, and her flanks began to show the red lash marks.

“Next.”

Rainbow sniffled, trying her best to stop the tears from coming any farther before replying.

“I didn't set the correct weather pattern above Sweet Apple Acres when I was in a hurry! *crack* Ahhhahhh!!! One! *crack* Two!! *crack* Three!! *crack* F-f-four!!! *crack* Fiiiiiiive!!!”

The tears were flowing. She was crying now.

“And what happened?” Twilight asked, seemingly unfazed by her marefriend's quaking rear legs, her-beet-red behind, nor the tears and whimpers coming from up front.

“O-o-other pegasi had to pick up my slack, and correct the weather. Part of her south field got too much heat and got sp-spoiled. *crack* Onnnnne! *crack* T-t-two!! *crack* Th-three!!! *crack* Ow ow ow, four!!! *crack* Fiiiive!!!”

Absolutely bawling by this point, Rainbow couldn't remain in her presenting position, and fell to her back knees. For a split second, she fought through the burning on her flanks, and realized that she had not even come close to using her safe word. She couldn't believe it, this was working.

“Next.”

Taking a deep breath and steadying herself, she brought the last major offense she could think of to her mind.

“I... I abandoned a very close friend after sh-she rescued me and a friend from an overzealous, sadistic punishment. She admitted her love for me, and... And I ran away...” Rainbow cried.

Expecting more strikes, she instead heard the strap hit the ground, and felt weight added to the bed.

Twilight pushed Rainbow all the way down to the bed, onto her stomach, and rolled her over, crawling over her and sitting on her chest.

“And what happened?”

“I... I...”

Rainbow could no longer form words, the guilt washing over her in full force now as her shoulders heaved as her waterworks continued.

When Rainbow managed to open her tear-filled eyes, Twilight removed the hat and mask, and looked down at her with a stern, but loving gaze.

“I did a lot of things to myself out of guilt. Harmful things. You should have told me. I would have understood. I would have gone with you, if you had let me. But you left me here with nothing but an angry rejection. I watched as our friends left one by one. I waited day after day of hearing nothing from the search parties. I drowned my guilt in alcohol. I had constant nightmares that you killed yourself, or you came back here, still as broken as the day you left. Did you love me all along, and it just took you a year to admit it to yourself?”

Rainbow swallowed, and nodded, sniffling.

“I'm so sorry. P-p-please forgive me.”

Twilight slid forward one more time, her marehood right in Rainbow's face.

“Prove it. Prove to me you're sorry, and that you're ready to make up for the year you left me here.”

Rainbow, sniffling, tears running down her face, licked her lips before leaning her head up and diving in to Twilight's marehood, eager to meet her mistress' challenge.

A flame sparked in Twilight's nether region. She breathed in deeply, as pleasure began to flow through her veins. She expected Rainbow to speed up, but she didn't. Seconds turned to minutes as Rainbow slowly and expertly used her tongue to please her.

“Mmmm, yeah, that's it. Apologize. Apologize until you swallow my forgiveness.”

Using her magic, Twilight gave Rainbow a few light taps on her rear with the crop, which had not seen any use yet. Rainbow gasped, but didn't break her contact with Twilight's sex. As Twilight began to lightly thrust towards Rainbow's licking, the pegasus opened her mouth a bit wider and began to suck lightly, causing the alicorn to gasp out loud. That was one of her weak spots.

The increasing pressure in her stomach rose to a peak, and Twilight was initially disappointed in herself as Rainbow drank down the juices that her marehood gave her. But the pressure didn't die down too far or too long, as Rainbow didn't stop. The slow, steady ministrations of her tongue soon pushed Twilight higher than her first climax, and sure enough, a minute later, she came again with a short scream as the pressure once again release.

Twilight was breathing heavily now, and still, Rainbow didn't pause in the slightest. She looked up at her mistress with tear-filled eyes, as she didn't even offer anything as simple as a moan of pleasure as she worked.

Her mouth's maneuvers now came stronger, as it took considerably more effort to push Twilight even higher. She glanced behind her, at Rainbow's moist, unattended snatch. For a moment, she considered returning the favor with the egg vibrator, but then decided against it. This was supposed to be a punishment, after all. Her sucks became more vigorous, her tongue went deeper and reached farther.

Her breathing came faster, and she moaned in lust with every breath. Sensing the edge, her horn glowed brightly, and she magically gave Rainbow's flank one last swat, screaming as she pushed Rainbow's head into the pillow with her groin, as she spilled into her mouth for a third and final time.

Rainbow drank in all that Twilight offered, her tears finally drying up. After sustaining her mistress' orgasm for another minute, she finally ran dry, and hung over her head, her front hooves leaning on the headboard, mane almost falling into her eyes, as she gasped for breath.

“Good... Good girl...” Twilight said, catching her breath. She pushed off the headboard and slid down off of Rainbow, checking her flanks, which were beginning to bruise considerably. She also noticed Rainbow's wanting marehood. Her horn lit up, and Rainbow immediately objected.

“Mistress, please don't.” Rainbow said softly, averting her gaze, knowing Twilight was about to fire up a healing spell. “Punishment doesn't do much good unless you give it time to sink in.”

Twilight was unsure, but figured that Rainbow had a point. The healing spell would be just as effective in the morning. With a smile, she scooted back up next to Rainbow, grabbing the hat from beside her on the bed, and put it on the pegasus' head.

“That, and I don't think just one spanking's gonna teach you your lesson. No doubt there will be more down the road.”

Using her magic, Twilight wrapped the cape of her costume around the two of them, and brought the blankets up and over them. Still wincing a little, Rainbow never the less accepted her mistress' embrace, and let sleep take her.