Flight Camp

by Im_Best_Pony

Rating: mature
Tags: Alternate Universe, Thunderlane, Sad, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Other, Romance, Scootaloo, Sex, Rumble, Slice of Life
Length: 3465

When Rumble goes to Ponyville flight camp, but can't fly, he learns that there is more to life. (sex. it's sex.

Rumble goes to flight camp and gets more than he bargained for. He expects to be taught to fly but gets taught a bit more. (also sex)
Clop Ensues.

Story takes place about 5 years in the future. If you do not like clop then leave now. *You have been Warned*

Published 2014-01-27 13:10:03 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-27 13:10:03 UTC

The Flight Camp Blues

Rumble had always wanted to do this. His brother had finally enrolled him in flight camp even though they both knew he wasn't a good flyer. In fact, Rumble had never been very good at anything. He was always the last person to pick something up. He tried in school, but still ended up with strait C's and D's. He learned to walk a half year longer than most newborns. He never had a girlfriend because he wasn't very "smooth". But that was all going to change today, Rumble thought to himself. He wanted to be a great flyer and his brother always told him that if you want anything hard enough, you will get it.

As soon as Rumble arrived with his brother he felt out of place. It was a bright day and they were on a luscious green field with a track and multiple obstacles set up.

"Bye, Rumble," said Thunderlane, "and good luck," he said with a bright smile on his face.

"Bye, Thunder," he said returning a smile to his brother. He turned and trotted over to the large group of pegasi surrounding a pegasus with a greyish-blue coat and a coal colored mane as well a black pair of shades. He had a rather feminine cutie mark of a rainbow.

"Welcome to Ponyville flight camp!" he said with tough voice that made up for his cutie mark. "I'm Spectrum, but you will refer to me as Coach or Coach Spectrum. Today is the first day in which we will see who has what it takes and who doesn't. Now, does anyone want to demonstrate their speed by doing a lap around the track?" Everyone shuffled to get the Coach's attention on someone else. Everyone averted making eye contact and all looked at the ground or up at the sky. "How about you there?" He said. Everyone looked up at him to see who he had chosen. When Rumble looked up he saw the pegasus staring at him. Rumble pointed at himself with his hoof and the Coach simply replied with a, "Yes, you." Buck. Rumble thought to himself.

Before Rumble could protest, a path was cleared for him to walk through by the other ponies. Rumble slowly came forward with a very hesitant gait.

"Come on now," Spectrum said, "we don't have all day." Rumble progressed forward not moving any faster. When he arrived at the front he was simply asked, "Take a lap." Rumble took a large stance and stretched his quite large wings. He closed his eyes and thought to himself. I can do this. I can do this. I can do this.

Rumble's silent trance was broken by a familiar voice, one he despised, "Get on with it, Fumble!" The voice said mocking his name. This familiar voice was Jetstream. The one he hated more than anypony. Jet was a cyan pegasus with fiery-red hair that was slicked back. He had a Lighting Bolt as a cutie mark similar to Rainbow Dash's. He was muscular and a few inches taller than Rumble.

"Whenever you're ready!" said Coach Spectrum, once more encouraging the young pony. He closed his eyes again and sat still until his wings started buzzing very quickly like a humming bird. He came off the ground with a face of struggle and a bead of sweat breaking from his forehead. His midsection that was connected to his wings was higher in the air than the rest of his body. Soon enough his body fell back to the ground with a thump. When he regained focus, he was rubbing his forehead whilst all the other ponies (including the coach) was laughing at him.

The coach stopped the laughing with a harsh tone, "Okay, that's enough. Now kid, get back with the other ponies." Rumble turned red and blushed out of embarrassment and as he walked back, he heard the coach mumble, "pathetic excuse of a pegasus..." under his breath. If it had not been for his pride he would have broken into tears.

"Good try, Fumble!" Jet said. Rumble grew steaming red and wanted to punch him but knew he would loose a fight with him. "Might as well go to the rainbow factory yourself and save them the trouble you pathetic pony."

"Ooooooh!" the class responded. Rumble ignored what he just said because everypony knows that the rainbow factory stories are only pony tales.

"Hey if you're so good then why don't you give a show?" said Spectrum with a hoof pointed towards Jet. Jet only smirked before stepping to the front.

Jet stared down Rumble and said, "Watch and learn," which was audible to the whole crowd. Jet cocked his body back before taking off down the track. He was half way around the track in a little less than 5 seconds with a trail of red following his lap. It was a lap that would of made Rainbow Dash jealous. Spectrum lifted his sunglasses and stared mouth agape in awe. When Jet came around to the other side he landed knocking over a particular pegasus at the front of the group into the mud. Rumble looked up and saw Jet standing dominantly over him followed by a sarcastic, "Oops."

Rumble sat there. Tears beginning to well in his eyes but not yet flowing. Covered in mud he stared at Jet with a fiery glare. Jet saw his watery eyes and took advantage and let out a cruel insult, " Is wittle Wumble gonna cwy?" he said as if he were speaking to a puppy. The entire class broke out in laughter. All Rumble could hear was the laughs echoing in his ears and all he could see was ponies pointing at him.

A loud outburst of crying was made by Rumble before he started weeping harshly. Sitting there, tears pouring out his eyes, covered in mud, and miserable, Jet said, "Look at the bitch cry like a little fucking filly," followed by laughing. That was the tipping point for rumble he had had enough and knew he had to do something. But he could do nothing. He had two choices. Stay
there and cry and get laughed at.Or, get the hell out of there.

He took off running in the opposite direction of the field towards home.

Rumble heard a harsh yell directed at Jet by the coach, "See me after class!"

"Awww, come on!" Jet replied in a grumble.

Author's Note

This was my first story and my first clop so criticism is very much encouraged, just don't be a dick. The story was inspired by the story Detention by Skythorn. A.K.A. The best clop I ever read. I got Jet from direct inspiration out of that story. I encourage you go read that pony smut now...bye.

Scootaloo?

Thunderlane heard the door burst open followed by loud crying. Thunderlane quickly sat up and went to go see what was wrong.

"Rumble!" he yelled trying to get the young one's attention as he ran off up the stairs and completed his journey by slamming his door shut.

Thunderlane ran up the stairs and tried to open the door to Rumble's room which he almost completely expected to be locked. But oddly it opened easily so he assumed that Rumble either forgot to lock his door or his hoof slipped in the quick moment. The sound of cries echoed in his ears. He sat down on Rumbles bed next to him and ran his hoof up and down his back in an attempt to try and sooth him. Rumble was face down in his pillow crying and was getting mud all over his clean sheets and pillow case. But neither of them cared. Rumble was too distraught and Thunder only wanted to calm him down and try to figure out what's wrong.

"Rumble can you please tell me what's wrong?" Thunderlane asked desperately still rubbing his back. Rumble lifted his head and wiped the snot from his nose with his hoof followed by a sniffle.

Rumble inhaled deeply before he spoke. With a long exhale out of his mouth, Rumble muttered a long explanation, " I was picked to demonstrate flying and I couldn't get off the ground for more than a second. Then because of that, everypony made fun of me. Then on top of that Jet knocked me into the mud."

Thunder was shocked at what he had been through in the past 30 minutes. "Rumble it's okay, ponies can be cruel to eachother sometimes. And just because you fail once does not mean you should ever give up."

Thunderlane said these words but knew they were just a load of bull. In actuality Thunder was a little upset that Rumble was such a pathetic flier, but he couldn't say that to his little brother. Instead he kept saying words of encouragement.

"You know when I was your age I was the worst flier in my class." Thunder knew this wasn't true. He was just hoping Rumble didn't.

"You were?" Rumble asked in a bit of disbelief.

"I sure was. And now that I think about it, so was dad when he was in school!"

Rumble looked with a confused face at Thunder and responded with, "How could you know? You were only 8 when he died."

Thunder looked with a face of nervousness as he thought he was caught and just said, "Because he told me when I was 7" He let out a cheesy smile. Luckily, it looked like Rumble had bought it. Thunder continued, " When I was young he told me that he used to do the flutters." Thunder's face scrunched as he put together a puzzle in his head. He had never seen rumble fly, but he thought might have the flutters like many young pegasi do. "Do you have the flutters?" Thunderlane asked Rumble careful not to offend him.

"What's that?" he asked.

"It's when young pegasi flutter their wings instead of flapping them." Said Thunder thinking he had found the source of his incapability to flying.

"Well when I fly my wings flutter and I fly but not very well." Said Rumble

"Well next time try to flap them slowly then speed up. It shouldn't be hard for you, seeing as to that you have those large wings. And you know what they say about large wings too, right?" Rumble smiled at his brother's quirky compliment.

Their conversation was interrupted when the doorbell rang. Thunder got up and went to see who it was while Rumble got up and went to the bathroom to wash some water over his face.

While Rumble was washing his face, his brother yelled that it was for him. Rumble thought to himself Who would wan't to see me? Rumble dried his face on a towel and went down the steps and was greeted by a familiar face. But this time it was one who he didn't hate but rather fancied. Her purple mane and orange fur was bright and a little dirty from the flight camp she had just come from.

It was Scootaloo. Why is she here? He thought staring into her beautiful eyes.

His stare was broken by her greeting, "Hey Rumble, the coach wanted to see us both." He wondered why but didn't speak up about it for she continued talking, " He wants to talk to the pegasi who cant fly well."

Rumble looked in confusion, " You're not a good flier? But I thought Rainbow Dash was like your big sister or something like that?"

Scootaloo simply looked flattered. "No, Rainbow is not my sister. We are just friends. We aren't related." She sat simply amused at what seemed like a compliment to her.

"Well are we gonna get going or what?" Rumble spoke up.

"Oh, Right" she responded after being broken out of her focused gaze on what seemed to be the ground.

Author's Note

This was my first story and my first clop so criticism is very much encouraged, just don't be a dick. The story was inspired by the story Detention by Skythorn. A.K.A. The best clop I ever read. I got Jet from direct inspiration out of that story. I encourage you go read that pony smut now...bye.

Defeated Now, Bitch? (Clop)

"Sorry about what happened with Jet. I saw the whole thing. He is quite the jerk at times." She said

"At times?" Rumble added, "It seems like he is always a jerk to me." Scootaloo snickered at the statement.

"I like you Rumble, you are such a nice pony, you are smart, open, funny, and strait, which means I could be you special somepony." She smiled avoiding eye contact and turning her head, blushing as they passed all the carts full of merchandice. Rumble was flattered at what she had said. He also started blushing and avoiding eye contact. Then he realized what she had said. Strait? He thought. Does that mean that...

"Did you just say Jet is gay? I never knew he was in the closet...maybe that's why he is a jerk." He Said

"Well I thought most had it figured out by now, he has had a big crush on you for the longest time." She replied. Rumble blushed at the strange new feeling of being liked by another guy.

"You know what?" She said, " Wanna go to my place?" The thought of not going to Camp and ditching sounded fun and exciting to him so he agreed. The two giggled and ran off galloping to her house.

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When they arrived, Scootaloo brought Rumble up to her room. He gasped at the sight of her gaming system. He was in love now that he realized she played video games. They sat on her bed and Rumble quickly jumped up when he remembered he still had dried up mud on his coat.

"It's okay, you can sit. I have to wash my sheets again soon anyway." She started up the video game system. Bending over intentionally giving him a good view of her big, round ass.

"You know what? I think I'm gonna go wash up anyway" He said trying to get out for some fresh air as he got really nervous to the sight. He ran out of the room and went towards the bathroom and opened the door only to be greeted with the sight of Jet with his cock in his hooves and his eyes closed, clearly tantalizing about something. He clearly didn't notice because he didn't say anything. He just grunted while some seed shot onto his stomach. Rumble turned white as he quickly got out and went back to Scootaloo's room.

When he returned he quickly yelped, "Did you know Jet is in your bathroom?" He intentionally left out the part about him jacking off.

"Yea...What about it?" she asked.

"WHY IS HE IN YOUR BATHROOM?!" He said clearly distressed.

"Jet is my brother. Why are you so shocked? Did you not know? I mean seriously, it looks like you have seen a ghost." Though she didn't know the real reason he was so freaked out over this.

"What?" he replied in huge amounts of shock.

"How do you think I know he's gay?" She said, " I walked in on him making out with pipsqueak." Rumble covered his mouth in shock and embarrassment as his cheeks turn rose red at the thought of this heated moment. He felt his penis unsheathe and he started to freak out inside his head saying Oh my Celestia, not now, not now! He tried to cross his legs to hide it and to keep it from growing any larger. But to no avail as it was already too large to cross his legs around.

It was too late, Scootaloo had already noticed and was getting wet at the sight of his large member standing almost a whole ft and a half in length. Scootaloo blushed and tried to cross her legs to hide her moisture and in embarrassment as well. But as she crossed her legs, she felt her slippery folds slide a bit and let out a soft, muffled moan

"Wow Rumble, you've got quite the large cock," she said as she covered her mouth and smiled. Rumble stared into her eyes and blushed at the comment. He felt himself almost involuntarily moving forward until their lips locked together. Their tongues jabbing and rapping around each other while they swapped saliva. After their kiss broke, Scootaloo whimpered, "Oh Rumble, I've always had a crush on you since I first laid my eyes on you," she whispered in his ear, "I want you to rut me like their's no tomorrow"

Following those works rumble laid her on her back and stared at her pink, wet, folds. He pulled them apart, revealing her to himself. He heard a muffled moan above his head. He dipped his tongue in her vagina and was greeted by slight pelvic thrust upward. He got into a rhythm where he stuck his tongue into her tight lips and up to her clit and repeated. Scootaloo started to let out muffled moans.

"Don't stop Rumble!" she cried as he dug deeper into her now soaked folds getting his mussel all wet with a sweet and salty taste. Scootaloo was in heaven and just before she came, she grabbed the back of his head and pushed him deeper into her pussy before she screamed and came. Her love juices squirted into his face and they both loved every second of her large wave of pleasure. Her hooves let loose after she lost all control over her body as he sent her into a rocking orgasm. He sat back and watched in pride as her body shook and spasmed in pleasure uncontrollably as if she was possessed.

As she came down from her orgasm Rumble looked at her with a smirk, "How was it?" He asked

"Great" She moaned and gave a dirty smile.

"Then you should be excited for round two!" He said as he positioned his large phallus to her awaiting lips.

"Oh Rumble, fuck me! Make me yours! I want your huge cock inside of my tight pussy! Rut me like a manticore!" She yelled loud enough for the whole town to hear her. That was all the approval rumble needed before he pushed his his cock in the first few inches in. He grunted as he got the first bit inside her tight pussy due to his giant girth. She yelped and let out a breathy moan before he bottomed out into her. He slid out easily as her juices lubricated his huge cock. She felt his 16 inches empty out of her.

"YES!" she yelled. He pushed back in quickly and his balls made an audible clap against her big round ass. He fucked her as hard as he could and she almost cried in pleasure each time he bottomed out his massive cock. Her moans were in sync with the loud slap of his balls on her plump ass. She screamed as she was rocked into her second orgasm, squirting all over Rumble's chest.

Just as this happened, Jet walked in and said, "I thought I head som..." He was cut off by his sister's cries of pleasure. He stared right at Rumble's huge cock. Rumble knew Jet wanted his cock. Jet's stomach dropped as he saw his sister get rutted with a monster cock twice the size of his. This scene sent Rumble over the edge as he squirted ropes of cum out of his giant balls, filling her up. Some of the cum came out the sides of her vagina as she was now being overflowed with cum and her own juices.

She came down from her pleasure, eyes closed, and said "Wow, Rumble that was great. I love you so mu..." She opened he eyes and saw her brother and made awkward eye contact, still filled with Rumble's huge cock and large amounts of seed. Jet turned as red as an apple. Scootaloo was already red from the best orgasm in her life.

"I love you too, Scoots." Rumble said

Rumble then turned to stare at her brother in the eyes, "DEFEATED NOW, BITCH!?"

Fin

Author's Note

This was my first story and my first clop so criticism is very much encouraged, just don't be a dick. The story was inspired by the story Detention by Skythorn. A.K.A. The best clop I ever read. I got Jet from direct inspiration out of that story. I encourage you go read that pony smut now...bye.

also ~ egoraptor pokeawsome 2 is what the last line was if you were worrying.