Disciplinary punishment.

by Kye Clifford

Rating: mature
Tags: Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Sex, Random
Length: 2554

What is Disciplinary punishment in the royal guard? Why are guards getting promoted so quickly? So many questions ran through Red's mind, yet, he was about to find out on that very day.

//This story is a NSFW M/M fic I wrote on /mlp/ under the name of 'TobaccoCocoMako', It was written entirely as it came along under two-three hours. This is a short little clop fic for all of you M/M lovers who hate to read longer stories ^.^

Red is simply a guard working for now three days as a royal guard. He finds his job a little bit nagging and boring, and soon realizes that even being distracted will lead to punishment. Commander Jackhammer is to see to Red's disciplinary punishment. Yet, Red never knew what kind of punishment was exactly disciplinary punishment, and what happened next completely knocked him off guard.

Published 2014-01-31 18:50:11 UTC
Last updated 2014-01-31 18:50:11 UTC

Disciplinary punishment.

Author's Note

Please enjoy, and feel free to criticize! ^.^

Disciplinary punishment.

Being a guard in Canterlot, you really have to learn how to be stone cold up to the point you're a breathing statue. Cadets always think that their fellow guards are emotionless outside of duty too, but there is always that makes them think otherwise. One of the cadets was named Red. Asides from being cold, you also need to learn how does a guard promote so quickly, because here is the thing...Don't you think it's odd how almost under a month you see that a guard has ranked up so much? Yeah...About that...

Red was just like the other guards, sporting a blue mane and a white coat, not even living up to his name at all. So, it was his third day on duty, and he was already having regrets. Why do his guards say that guard duty is amazing? What is so amazing about standing around all the time doing nothing? Were his friends not telling him about one certain part of guard duty?

"Red, even if you're facing one direction without any emotion, I still know when you're distracted." Commanding officer Jackhammer said. Jackhammer was a large stallion who was one of the higher ranked guards and had command over all cadets. Red shook his head and was knocked out from his thoughts. He quickly saluted.

"S-Sir, my apologies sir!" Red exclaimed in near panic, fearing that the guard could be cross with him after even the minor muck-up.

"Cadet, disciplinary punishment this evening at seven during the evening. Do not be late." Jackhammer simply said and walked away...was he...smirking?

After Jackhammer left, Red sighed. Third day at work, and was he already failing? He wouldn't ever make it to at-least the next rank, not in centuries at that rate, maybe the disciplinary punishment would actually help him learn how to actually do his work? He couldn't tell because he doesn't even know what disciplinary punishment is...Cleaning toilets? Carrying equipment around? Writing 'I will not be distracted on duty' on a chalkboard fifty times?...All he could do was go there, maybe he'd learn to be a a proper guard.

It was five...so two more hours until it was time to finally go to punishment. At-least it would be a very nice change of pace, doing something long and maybe even humiliating instead of standing around...

An hour passed...just another...

Red wasn't sure but...he felt...excited?...He felt that Jackhammer was one of the tougher guards, so maybe spending time with his stone cold commander would be a little interesting?...

Some time passed, five minutes left...

Red, again, wasn't sure why...but he was excited more than he was 55 minutes ago...even strangely so.

Alright...five minutes passed...Punishment it is.

"Oh boy." Was all that Red could murmur under his breath.
Before Red could enter the Commander's quarters, he took a long sigh. Slowly he turned the door knob. He felt that turning the doorknob partially felt like he was twisting his current feelings, because he wasn't quite sure...to be excited or to be afraid...So currently he was feeling both.

"You're late, cadet." A familiar voice said in the darkness. For some reason the curtains were closed and any light sources were off. Red was sure it was Jackhammer, but he felt that the voice was a little bit...'sweet'?...Red was feeling awkward, he wasn't sure what exact words to use in order to describe how Jackhammer was speaking.

"L-Late sir?...I-I arrived at seven sir..." Red whimpered. He felt a little defenseless.

"You arrived at seven, but you also arrived at Seven O' two." Jackhammer...purred? "When you're a guard, you must learn how to be efficient. You must arrive EXACTLY at the time you're designated to." Jackhammer said. "I suppose we can spend the rest of the day teaching you how the ropes of being a guard work, huh cadet?" Jackhammer said. Red still couldn't see him, and he was starting to feel a little uncomfortable yet more excited.

"I-I'm ready s-sir..." Red whimpered. He could feel that once he said these words, he was selling a part of himself for the day.

"Good." Commander Jackhammer mischievously purred once more and used his magic to light up a single candle on his desk. Oh yes, Jackhammer was a unicorn, one of the best unicorn guards in-fact.

Jackhammer was sitting there with his hind-legs on the desk. "First, I'm going to teach you some discipline, Cadet. Then, I'll be teaching you efficiency...This will be a long pair of lessons." The commander said as he was circling around Red.

Red wasn't sure where this was going. Yes, he had a hypothesis, but...Jackhammer was such a high-ranked professional, surely it was just his way to get Red a little nervous, right?

"Y-Yes sir..." He whimpered again.
"And when I'm done with you, you'll be a good little guard." Jackhammer whispered in Red's ear.

When Red was getting very nervous, he felt Jackhammer's hoof slap his flank hard, causing Red to squeak in the suddenness. Red was now positive, it was happening, Red was about to be fucked silly by his commander, and it was his third day of guard duty...

That made him think why he felt so odd around the other, more experienced guards in the showers.

"First, you'll obey orders, so why don't we start?~" Jackhammer purred seductively and sat on the chair of his desk.

"First, Cadet, suck my cock." Jackhammer said and pulled his chair away a little from the desk. He then spread his legs to reveal a flopping back horsecock prepared for action...A throbbing fourteen inches?! Yes, Red was a virgin, but even masturbating so often in his life and watching various porn he still was a little nervous. If he was going to fit that thing into his tight butt he expected himself to scream very often.

Well, no point to postpone disciplinary service. He knelled down and before he knew it, the black, shiny, fleshy tip of Jackhammer's cock was already booping his muzzle. It was almost mesmerizing up to the point Jackhammer had to say 'I'm waiting.' for Red to knock it off and get to work.

Red knew how pacing worked after watching so much porn in his life. First he had to go nice and slow, then he'd had to suck that thing off like there was no tomorrow. Red stuck his tongue out and gave on long lick from balls to the tip on all 14 inches. It made the two stallions shudder at unison. Red gave a few more lengthy licks. He decided to turn his attention to Jackhammer's balls and began to nibble on them, but before he could get into it, Jackhammer spoke with his stern-yet-seductive voice. "Suck it.”
Red felt that in a way, he was pushing his own head down Jackhammer's cock. It was almost as if Red forgot about the one rule he recently though about: To go slow at the start. Red, before even getting half of the black horsecock into his throat, jolted his head back from his gag reflex.

"Would you like me to help you?" Jackhammer sweetly smiled at Red. He felt that this sweetness was only a devious, seductive voice disguised as niceness, but Red didn't realize that at the time. Red nodded a few times, but the commander didn't do anything. Red remembered this was disciplinary training.

"Y-Yes sir...I need help." Red whimpered before Jackhammer's smile widened. Jackhammer put his hoof on Red's head and stroked his mane. Red believed this was to help him get relaxed and steady...

Until Jackhammer crudely grabbed him by the mane and pushed him down his cock on ALL 14 inches before Red could even react. Somehow it did help, because once it was in his throat, Red felt that it was his duty to keep it warm and wet down there, so he couldn't disappoint his commander. After being held down, Jackhammer released and allowed Red to work on his cock himself. Red was slowly pulling out, and went back down on the cock. He pulled out again, and pushed himself back down again. His first deepthroat act seemed to be very decent with his commander moaning.

"Such an obedient Cadet, you remind me of myself when I was a cadet myself~!" Jackhammer moaned again and shuddered. "Quicker you rookie!" Jackhammer shouted and grabbed Red's head with his hooves, pushing him down and pulling him out to speed it up.
Red pulled out, and pushed down, out, up, down, in, he was sucking the monster cock off and still it didn't cum. Red let his guard down and just at that moment, Red could feel something warm and even a little bit sweet. His suspicions were confirmed when Jackhammer loudly moaned, pushed Red's head down once more time, and thrust his hips forward...Jackhammer came into Red's mouth. Red could feel only a little bit to taste though, as the cock was so beyond his tongue it wouldn't take long to get into his stomach. The commander came lots, and took his time. So much cum down his throat made Red feel a little nourished even, for some reason

"Good work my little cadet." Jackhammer smirked and slowly pulled his head out. "Now you know how to obey and be a good little bitch~!" He purred. "Clean my dick until it's shining, we still have efficiency training."

Red was having a blast, he really felt like he was a better bottom bitch more than anything. He was licking Jackhammer's cock clean until it was shining and sparkling. Red looked up at his commander and the commander smiled in response and stroked Red's mane. It was probably the only moment the two shared without any discipline training nor any rough play.

"Time for your efficiency training, Cadet." Jackhammer smirked. "To begin, bend over the desk, we'll get to it as soon as were' both ready." Jackhammer said, his sweet tone soon turned into a seductive, devious one.

Red obeyed and got his hind-legs before he bent over on Jackhammer's desk, awaiting for his first anal fucking he would receive in his entire life. He tried to use toys, but he never mustered up the courage to do it.

Before Red expected it, he was mounted by Jackhammer. Jackhammer was massaging the in-between of his flanks to get Red a little excited for it.
Red gulped, he never expected to be penetrated by such a long tool in his life ever, and all the dick-massaging got him a little hot and bothered, he was unsure whether to be afraid or aroused, but he always heard his sexually active gay friends say that it hurts at first before it feels really good, so it was time he tested that little theory out. After the massage was over, he could feel the lengthy cock's tip touching his tight asshole. Taking a long, heavy sigh, Red bit his tongue in anticipation. After that, Red felt that the cock was pushing into his asshole. The feeling of being penetrated was a little heavy and somewhat burning to Red, and not in-vain has he braced himself. He felt the long meaty cock nest in his ass, but it wasn't even a quarter way through, which made Red gulp. Before he knew it, Jackhammer thrust his hips forward, causing Red to shout in surprise in pain. His eyes teared up from it, and he bit his lips so hard they were nearly bleeding. However, it wasn't entirely unpleasant. Red however thought of how it would feel once Jackhammer would start pushing in and out. Jackhammer was slowly pulling out, but then pulled out suddenly, causing Red to lower his guard down.

"Who's a good little bitch cadet?~" Jackhammer mused.

"M-Me~!" Red moaned out.

"Me what!?~" Jackhammer shouted.

"Me sir!" Red moaned in response, correcting himself and remembering who was in charge. Soon enough, Jackhammer was picking up the pace. What began as a series of unexpected sudden thrusts was evolving into a series of rough, fast ones. Red was having a hard time processing everything that happened. First he was about to go in disciplinary duty, and now he's getting fucked silly by his own commander. Jackhammer didn't stop, he was already speeding in and out. Both stallions were moaning and soon enough, Red began to feel the 'good feeling' his friends talked about. Both stallions were now feeling pleasure.

"You fucking slut~! I'll turn you into a fucking guard and you're going to learn, my little bitch~!" Jackhammer shouted as he was actually living up to his name at the moment, he was pounding his fellow guard's ass making use of all 14 inches.

They really fucked for about twenty minutes, but for both stallions it felt like eternity. Red couldn't believe it, but he was feeling that he would orgasm himself if this kept up. He never believed that there was such a thing as an anal orgasm, but apparently, it seemed so.

"S-Sir, I-I'm cumming!" Red exclaimed and squirmed, but soon he remembered that he wasn't allowed to cum unless commanded to.

"Hold it cadet, you will not cum unless I tell you to do so~!" Jackhammer said and continued to pound his cadet, his balls were slapping against Red's.

Red couldn't believe he had to deny his orgasm, especially if Jackhammer wasn't close himself. He tried his best, pre-cum leaking out.

Jackhammer had a great idea. He pulled Red back and got him lying on his back on the floor. Jackhammer continued to fuck Red in this missionary position, Red's own cock was a lot smaller, only 9 inches, but it had some good girth to it. Red's cock slapped against his stomach while it was dribbling pre-cum. Jackhammer was still fucking his ass but while he wouldn't admit, he was close.
Red was having a very hard time resisting his orgasm, but he had to do it. The commander didn't stop fucking him with his 14 inch cock, and more pre-cum dribbled out. The commander smirked proud of his cadet's obedience and efficiency.

"Cum now, cadet!" Jackhammer smirked and pulled his cock out. Red's muscles relaxed as a torrent of cum erupted from his own cock like a fountain, and before long, Red found himself coated in his own cum, from head to chest. Jack was going to cum, but decided to coat him instead. Jack stood up and ejaculated, his torrent of cum was spreading over Red's body. Red found himself covered in any more cum, and got some in his mouth. The two stallions exchanged eye contact before Jackhammer smiled and lied down with Red on the ground. The two stallions now cuddled while Jackhammer was giving Red a few licks to clean him up.

"Hot damn cadet, you've done me proud. You'll be a commander by the end of the month!" Jackhammer smirked.

"Oh...So...that's how all the other guards ranked up so fast?..." Red asked.

"I won't lie, I've been working here for three months." Jackhammer chuckled. "I was no less of a slut than you are right now." He smiled. "And, one day, you'll be just like me." Jackhammer booped Red.

Red finally realized this is why his fellow guards enjoy the duty.