My Little Amnesia : Cadance

by Prince Harmony

Alternate Ending for Challenge 1

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Cadance look around and decided to go into one of the open cells. When she did she heard the sound of sawing wood and hammering nails. Then she made a staircase up to a spot in the rafters. She did this in case anyone would come in here. Cadance went in to the cell to the left of the one she was just in and saw a message written in blood saying, Forgive Me My Love! Also she heard the noise of a racquet on ball and grunting. In the corner was a racquet and a ball with the name Alois inscribed on them.

In the cell to the right she saw a grisly sight. Blood smears and chunks of flesh were in the cell. She also heard the sound of laughing and a violin being played. In the corner opposite of the blood and flesh was broken violin and bow.

Cadance soon heard a sad, worried voice saying, “Is that you my love?”

Cadance quickly got up the stairs she made and hid on the platform in the rafters. She looked and panicked a bit as she saw a mutilated pony enter the room. Cadance saw on a box up here was a note saying, there are three monstrous suitors, Alois, Basile, and Malo. Watch out for these three men.

She heard him say, “Where did you go?”

She gasped in fear and looked away from him.

Suddenly he looked toward the door of the room and said, “Is that you I hear?”

As he left the room Cadance carefully and quietly came down from her perch and looked for a way out. Then she saw a lever near a locked cell. Inside the cell was a man hoping to be freed.

The man said to her, “Cadance please let me out. You have my word as a doctor that I shall give you the best psychiatric care I can provide.”

Cadance pulled the lever to see what would happen and all of a sudden a metal rod slammed down through the doctor and killed him as a ladder fell down. She heard chains rattling as the monster entered the room.

He said to her, “You came for me.”

Cadance took off running as he began to get closer. She saw him exit the room in slow pursuit of her. She entered the room through the other entrance and climbed he makeshift staircase to him from him. All of a sudden she remembered who he was, her ex-suitor Alois.

Alois entered the room and said, “Where did you go? Come Back! Please Come Back!!”

As Alois left the room Cadance carefully and quietly got down. She then made her way to the ladder on the other side of the room. She was halfway up the ladder when he saw her.

Just as she started to move even faster up the ladder he grabbed her and angrily said, “NO STAY! Don’t leave again!!!”

Cadance suddenly fell as she was yanked off of the Ladder. By the time she got her bearings she saw him get very close to her. Cadance knew this was the end of her life.

Alois said to her, “Hush now it is all right.”

Alois swung his arm and slashed he throat open and Cadance saw as she blacked out her blood pouring out of the wound. After a minute of bleeding out she was dead. Her soul stayed in the room to find out what Alois would do to her lifeless body. She was surprised to see him pick her up and put her in his cell.

Alois soon laid down next to her dad body and sang a lullaby to her dead body, “Hush now, quiet now, It's time to lay your sleepy head, hush now, quiet now, Its time go to bed.”

Alois was soon fast asleep next to his greatest treasure. Cadance was surprised to see that her killer was loving her as if she was still alive. She saw this happy sight and decided to watch over the two for all of eternity.

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