Shooting Comets

by The Notebook

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Random
Length: 3050

Lots of shooting Comets here, lots and lots of shooting comets, of course the type of comet that's shooting and where it's landing is up to you to figure out.

(This is OC characters if you don't like it WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU READING THIS? Any who, for those who are willing to give it a chance, thank you and happy fapping to yet another shit clop from first timers.)

Mere Ka has been planning this for years now. Star would be hers. Catching him on the streets Star thought she was going to go about the normal routine, talk and leave him feeling embarrassed. This time she will give him more than embarrassment.

(Well, I denounce the anyway I could lie about this and I'll give it to you straight. I got bored, I was horny, and guess what I'm reading, that's right Po-Ni-Oh. Well as it turns out I edit that story and my OC by how I made her has a thing for… Masculine ponies, or in cases like this, ponies with humor and she can manipulate without conversation. So I birthed this monster up to when Star starts to [CENSORED]. So I claim that up until that point was me, I called it troll clop, but shit got real when my main man, Fluttershysone, who I made it for as a way to tease him. Instead he asked me to continue I said I wouldn't but I told him if he finished it up for me I would post it and give him credit which has been given.)

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-02-06 01:10:03 UTC

Lots and Lots of Shooting Comets

   Star, a seemingly endless source of energy. The young stallion however was no longer, well a young adult. He had been through many trials as a duelist, but his time had long since past since Comet had taken over. He payed no mind. Being nearly 25 he was past all his old way going about releasing his energy. After retiring from dueling, which Rainbow Dash still complained about since she still head her ground with the title of second best duelist in all of Equestria.

It surprised him that day, when she admitted to be second best to him and only him, and only at dueling. Seeing as he held a title that he refused to duel away after retirement. Comet was his successor so he was no longer needed for   that title.

He had taken the job of a athletic trainer at the gym in town and since then been keeping in good shape, he didn't understand why some of the mares went in there though. They just sat at the front entrances chairs and watched the stallions. So this was a bit weird to him, seeing as most did actually seem to work out.

   Right at that time our Star was walking home from his job. Not every night he got off early.

   "Heya Hot Stuff!"

   Star almost laughed at the remark. He knew that flirtatious voice.

"Hi Mere, good to see you again... I think?" Star replied.

"You kidder, you know you love me. Or are you still ogling that yellow Pegasus. She told no like 3 years ago."

Star's eye twitched at the insensitivity in her voice just as much as the painful memory. Fluttershy hadn't turned him down at first, rather had to wait 2 years to muster the courage to tell him off right when he tried... It was painful to see her do that, or rather hear.

"Haha. Thanks for that. And I don't won't to screw up what friendship 'Shy and I still have." Star said.

"Good then you and that big red fellow are all mine," she paused for a moment and formed a seductive smile, " and Palpa's, too. That is if your into threesomes." She said.

"Tempting but, not going to convince me." Star said suppressing a laugh, he was used to this kind of joking.

"Maybe I wasn't joking." She said jumping in front of star and puling him closer to her as she ran one of her furred paw-hands down Star's chest and resting just below his hips, "I have been feeling frisky lately, and you might turn into a tasty snack for me."

Star blushed a bit, Crap, damn it Mere your teasing is going too far this time. Your actually making my body respond. Of Course Mere took immediate notice of the bulge taking place below and giggled.

"Oh, so you do want to be a chef tonight!" Mere said. Slowly, her paw lowered down further and further, going up and down his jeans, the bulge grew from this teasing. Star was rigid, how was he supposed to react there was no way he could possibly let his friend do this, but as long as she didn't go further he was safe. Right?

"Oh does my big boy like his massage? I bet he does, come on I'll be your means of release tonight." Mere said, taking into consideration the empty street during the 4 o' clock time, which meant everyone was tired and still working elsewhere, "Come on my big boy." She said after making sure the coast was clear, grabbing his bulge she lead him into the allies and off the Main Street.

"Mere I don't think we should, I mean I'm kind of tired and I just got off work, plus your my friend so this is kind of awk-"

"Shhhhh," mere interrupted, "You know you want to Star, I gave you every chance to grab a piece of the action before and I saw how your big friend reacted to what you couldn't figure out. So I'm going to show you ow much I care. Your mine for the rest of the day lover boy." Mere whispered into his ear heavily breathing.

Mere pulled back a bit and forced herself onto Star's lips. It was a rough kiss, definitely not the delicate, soft kisses he had gotten from 'Shy, but still he couldn't stop it. Diamond dogs, although he did lifting and such now a days, they had extreme strength in their fore arms and a iron grip.

After a few moments of catching himself he felt a rough rounded tongue. Star gladly accepted seeing as he wasn't getting away anytime soon. Not unless he wanted a horny diamond dog chasing him around town. Of course he was going to change his tune quickly he was the submissive in this duet. The bass there to accompany and listen out for the soprano that had the melody. The omega obeying the alpha, and he was starting to enjoy it.

Moments after he felt Mere's tongue swirling his mouth he felt a hand reach down and stroke his bulge again. Mere pulled away and grinned.

"Come on Hot Stuff. We have activities to finish in a secluded environment." She stated. Grabbing him by his bulge he followed willingly, all thoughts of struggle left his mind as hormones kicked in.

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"Come on big boy open it, I have stuff to prove and want this to happen soon as possible." Mere said practically doing anything but help. All the way through town in those back alleys she had teased him and played with his hard-on which she called a treat.

Squeezing and stroking until he was ready to blow then stopping and letting him get worse and worse, hormones rampantly drove past Star's sanity as he finally got back to the place he called home. Mere kept taunting him too, "How's my bone?", "does my baby want to fill me up?", her number of punch lines went on for forever.

Opening the door Mere was greeted with being talked to the floor, immediately after they entered the house. In her moment of shock Star had already pulled off her jacket and shirt, leaving her bare chested. Which he quickly searched. The back door still wide open, Mere shivered as breeze blew over her open chest, her nipples stiffening. Then another tingle ran up her spin, fingers rubbing around and tugging her nipples. Star was having his turn playing with her body, and she'd be damned if she wasn't enjoying it.

Star's head was bending over her exposed chest practically milking her when she she started to whimper like a puppy. It wasn't out of discomfort though, no it was purely out of pleasure, this only encouraged Star to play more though. He was well past stopping anyway. With his mouth he tugged on the different tits on Mere's chest, all the while toying with others.

"Please no more teasing I'm almost... I'm almost,.. I'm.... I..." Mere was cut off, eliciting a deep moan as she felt Stars head and fingers rubbing against her thighs.

"Stand up and turn around would you?" Star asked as he stood up as well.

Once he was on his feet, he started taking his shirt off. Being a bit shorter than most he wasn't exactly built like an elephandar like Bulk Biceps. His days at the gym, however showed in the form of strong firm muscles. After he had removed his shirt Star went to the door, closing it into the mahogany frame surrounding the old thing.

Upon turning around he was greeted with the sight of Mere bending over the couch, completely naked.

"You undressed pretty quick, no teasing left in you?" Star asked jokingly, as he has one of his hands run up between her legs.

Mere didn't get the chance to answer, instead she yelped and moaned as Star began slapping her ass, Mere Ka was simply enjoying the fact of this new Star was so aggressive in his acts of dominant. She had to get ravaged by this one. Convinced she needed it a plan spun inside Mere Ka's head.

"Do you enjoy that? I bet you do, I can feel you getting wet," He lightly slapped her pulsating tunnel. This produced a loud moan from Mere Ka telling him all he needed to now.

"On your knees." Star commanded. Mere followed the order immediately.

Star undid his pants and 10 inches of horse meat dropped out like a pole from his pants, "I think you know what to do." Star whispered in her ear, almost hissing.

With the command said Mere licked the long shaft, over and over as if it was ice and she needed the water. Then she put the very tip in her mouth.

She stopped moving, and Star stopped moaning.

"What the heck keep going down on it hurry up."

'Work for it then." Mere replied immediately.

Star didn't need a further word his hands clan her the sides of her head and he began ramming her mouth. As Star was ravaging her mouth, Mere Ka's mind began to go blank. Never before has she been so taken advantage of, even with Big Mac. The harder he thrust in her mouth, the more moist her nethers became. She looks up to see the passion emitting from Star's eyes. No longer did she see the joker and easy-going colt, but a feral stallion ready to dominate her.

“Mere, I going to-” Star strained.

No sooner than he said those words, Mere Ka mouth was filled with his essence. She hungrily drank it all, not spilling a drop. As Star feel to the floor, Mere Ka looked at him with a half-lidded eyes. Just merely drinking the substance it made her crave him more. As her eyes travel downward, she expected to see Star's flaccid member. Much to her delight and surprise, his member was still rock hard.

“I guess you been saving a lot up, huh?” she teased, inching closer to him.

Star just shrugs.

“You say that. I haven't had any marefriend since 'Shy. And even then...”

“Good...” she beams.

“Why is that-”

Before he could continue, Mere Ka lunged at him. Pinning him on the ground, she forced her tongue into his mouth. As two playfully danced in each other mouths, the moans echoed throughout the room. Finally pulling back to catch their breath, Star sees Mere Ka removing her leggings. As she tossed them aside, he noticed that she not wearing any underwear.

“Mere Ka...going commando I see...” he said, with a half-lidded smirk.

“Like I said, big boy,” she said, leaning in closer. “I planned on you being mine for the rest of the day.”

Without hesitation, she spears herself with his massive rod. She fails to stifle her heavenly moan, as she stares at the ceiling in a daze.

“Oh, yes... I-I didn't think you'd be think this b-big,”she moans.

“You're so tight, Mere,” strained Star.

She then looks down and licks her lips.

“I hope you're ready, Star. Because I'm gonna take to for a ride,” she said as she beings to move.

Moving slowly, Mere balanced herself as took in his full length. After a few seconds, she found her rhythm. With her tongue lolled, she ferociously thrusts herself on his member. With each thrust, she reached new levels of pleasure. Star couldn't help be take in the erotic display before him. No longer feeling the need to hold back, he thrust upwards to meet her halfway. She let out a cute squeak, at your actions. Looking down, she gives his “do that again” gaze. Not wanting to disappoint, Star continues to add force to each of the thrust. The moans of the two filled the room, as Star continually rammed her moist tunnel. He soon shift to a sitting position, with Mere Ka wrapping her legs around his waist. With better leverage, Star continued to slam his rod into her with great force. At this rate neither of them were going to last much longer.

“Mere, I'm about to-,” Star said, before being cut off by Mere Ka pushing her mouth against his.

Nearing her as well peak, Mere Ka leaned her muzzle next to his ear.

“Give me everything you got, big boy,” she said, in a lustful whisper.

This made Star increase the force  of his thrust. With a few more thrust, Star opens the flood gate of his passion. The sheer force of his climax caused Mere Ka to reach hers as well. During her powerful release, Mere drug her claws against his back. Her body shook with pleasure, as she waited for him to finish. After his last few drops filled her womb, she slowly lifts herself of his semi-flaccid member. Now on her hands and knees she felt her lust for her now captive lover increase.

More...I need more... thought Mere in her state of lust.

Crawling just out of reach, Mere Ka lifts her skirt to shamelessly reveals her dripping sex. Wagging her rear, she looks back with a lustful gaze.

“Come on, big boy. Time for another round,” she lustfully spoke.

“You sure you can handle another go?” Star playfully teased, as he moved closer to her.

“Why don't you come and find out,” she spoke, with a half-lidded grin.

With small chuckle, Star began to massage her butt. Kneading her cheeks with a firm, yet gentle strokes; he heard the cute moans escape her lips. She had always put up a tough tomboy act whenever she was around him, but now that she acting like a woman made her kinda cute. As he continued these actions, her cute moans so turned into lustful sighs. After a few minutes of the playful torture, she looks back at Star with a pleading glance.

“P-Please, Star. Don't tease m-me anymore. I need it,” she lustfully pants.

“Need what?” he asked, trace his member along her folds.

“I need it inside....” she began to beg.

“I won't know what you mean, unless you tell me,” he teased.

She then rubbed her moist folds along his now erect shaft.

“This...I want you rod inside me...Please...” she pleaded.

“I guess it can't be helped,” Star sighed.

Placing his hands on either side of her butt, Star then push past her folds and  with one thrust push his member deeper inside her. He could feel the shudder move down her spine, as she let out a pleasured moan.

“Th-This feel s-so good...” she blissfully sighed.

Mere Ka so began to force herself against his thrust. The two then found there rhythm as Star continued to add more and more force behind each thrust. Mere Ka howled with pleasure each movement sent her body into heights of ecstasy. Fueled by her howls, Star picked up the pace and thrust more and more deeper. Nearing her limit Mere Ka tries to muffle cries of pleasure, which ultimately fail. Feeling her walls tighten around his shaft, Star decided to help her with her release. He then lifts her up and began to massage her breast.

“Star...if you do...I'll...go crazy,” Mere Ka moaned passionately.

As he kneaded her breast, she felt her body quake with pleasure. Never before has she handle so roughly, and yet tenderly. The sheer passion that flowed with each movement was like poetry.

“Star...I-I'm cumming,” she pants.

..“Me too,” he grunted, trying to delay the inevitable.

“Let's cum together...” she  sensually whispered in his ears.

After a few more thrust, the two lovers screamed with pleasure as they simultaneously climax. As his essence filled  her womb, Mere Ka looked at the ceiling with glazed eyes. As they came down from their euphoria, Star laid her down gently on the floor. He then collapsed next to her to her, being careful not to hurt her. He then look to see Mere Ka was still lightly panting. It was then he realized, how beautiful she was. He was so in love with Fluttershy that he never really gave anyone else a chance. Looking at the ceiling he though back to all the times the two of them would joke around and have fun. Even though she would tease him constantly, she always gave subtly hints of her feelings for him.

“Hey, Mere Ka...”

She turned to lift her head to him, still in a euphoric trance.

“Yes, my little Star,” she cooed.

Without warning, Star pulled her close and deeply kissed her. She let out a cute squeak, but soon accepted the kiss fully. After a few second of passionate kissing, they broke apart for some air. With a half-lidded gaze, Mere Ka spoke,“What was that for?”

“That was just my way of telling how I feel about you,” Star smiled.

“About me?” she tilted her head.

“Yes...I finally realize something the that I've known for a while...” he said sitting up.

Curious she sat up and looked deeply into his seafoam eyes. Wrapping her in a tight embrace, Mere Ka felt her heart race. He then look deep into her blue eyes and softly spoke,

“I love you, Mere Ka. Wanna be my girlfriend?”

Just saying those words, was enough the send shiver down her spine and set her heart aflutter. Burying her face in his chest, she says,

“I love you too....” she sighed.

“Mere....Mere....Mere Ka, snap out of it!” he shouted.

Mere Ka then snaps out of her daze, and realizes that they were outside. Seeing the sun was still the sky, she realized that everything the just happened was all in her head.

It was all a fantasy!? she groaned inwardly.

“What were we saying?” she asked with a frustrated sigh.

“You were saying something about 'feeling frisky', and something about make me a snack or something,” Star said, shifting nervously.

Mere Ka just facepalmed.

But it felt so real! she whined.

“Well, as fun as it's been Mere. I'm gonna head home,” Star said, as he turned to leave.

Before he get to far, she grabbed his tail. Getting his attention, she leaned toward his ears.

“Say, Star?,” she whispered in his ear. “So you do want to be my chef tonight?”