Story Of The Blanks:New Nightmare
Chapter 3- RAge of Loyalty
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It'd been two weeks since Twilight never came back from the everfree. Celestia was more distraught then ever. If she was crying over Luna, she's most certianly crting over Twilight. "SHUT UP,GUARD! YOU AREN'T HELPING!" Celestia yelled, in the canterlot voice. "Twilight.TWILIGHT i'm so sorry for sending you to look for luna!!!!" She hadnt raised the sun, so Celestia was leaving it as night.
Her yelling could be heard all across Equestria...MAny ponies around the 3 lands ran and hid.

Canterlot Castle was in an uproar from the princess's uncontrollable sadness. A couple royal guards had a conversation..

"I never thought that old mares tale was true.." one of the guards said."Yeah.SunnyTown seemed like a legend but with this development, it seems it may exist.." another guard said. "I heard Celestia speaking of going one of these days to get her sister and Twilight back..:A third guard said. The first two Guards slooked scared."IS She Insane?!" they both said in unison, as the sun was finally risen by Celestia.Twilight who was in the area heard that."Princess if i might speak,I can still leave as i am not originally part of the legend...please stop raging Celestia......your scaring everyone." Twilight even looked a bit terrified at how badly Celestia was Crying.

Cadence was visiting from the crystal empire this day, so they'd get to see Twilight.Twilight was happy to see them, and told them of her adventure. Though they were worried at first, they loved their sister/sister in law just the same. "That's AMazing Twilight! I hope Celestia's Eldest sister is alright around you though.she's not good with many Alicorns." Cadence said, having read up a bit on ANastasia's Hystory. Twilight decided to take Cadence and shining to see the town. The two happily obliged, Cadence wanting to talk to the original princess before celestia.

While walking through the everfree, Twilight told an interesting story about when Fluttershy tamed a cokatrice, which Cadence was both shocked and impressed at. Shining Armor didn't think about that- he was just worried.Something was off about these woods, but soon he remembered that Twilight told him the exact dangers and he still chose to come. The three entered the Town, and were greeted cheerfully by greyhoof.

"Oh! welcome to SUnnytown. I'm Greyhoof, party planner extrordinaire.Enjoy your stay, you will never want to leave." He said, which kinda worried Cadence. She walked somewhere, possibly to think this over, because somthing just was not right with how Greyhoof acted.
Shining Armor was much more allert, and immidiatly warned him not to try to harm Cadence while he was there. Greyhoof said he doesn't burn royalty, infact he encourages royalty to stay and be cursed. The more Royalty under th ecurse, the more power the sunnytown residents have. Cadence meanwhile, had found the fillys skeleton in that fireplace. She shrieked from the house, and the curse took effect. The whole town decayed, as did all the residents.
Shining couldn't believe what happened to his little sister."T-TWilie? This can't be for real..." HE didn't want to believe it. SOon, he ended up under the curse once Twilight hugged him, saying it was all unfrtunatly trrue. Cadence met up with shining about ready to leave this horrid place, but Shining told her he was staying. Broken, but not wanting to lose him, Cadence agreed too. Suddenly, Greyhoof tackled her down, cursing her, Both hers and Shining's Cutie Marks faded. SUnnytown had claimed 2 more victems.
BAck home, Rainbow dash began cussing a storm up in frount of scootaloo, and the moon was blood red once more that night.

Author's Note
Cussing in frount of a filly? wow dashie
RAimbow DAsh:this just is not fair!
Applebloom":i told them not to go!
Scootaloo:rainbow stop cussing!
Read and rate.. Next time we get to see what dash does.
