staring Into the blue Of apples

by Xx soul sorrow xX

Rating: teen
Tags: Applejack, Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Granny Smith, Sad, Apple Bloom, Tragedy, Big Macintosh, Fluttershy
Length: 1492

Applejakc ponders her life on the farm

While Apple jack is sick with pneumonia she ponders her life and her family's past while sitting under a apple tree.

((((*story was etited by EgoreFritzCud because IXSparkleShipperXI is sick thats wear i got the insperasion for this stry from :::(((( ***

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Published 2014-02-06 17:10:03 UTC
Last updated 2014-02-06 17:10:03 UTC

Under the apple tree of family

My name's Apple jack and I live on Sweat Apple Acres. I have a sister named Apple bloom and a big brother named Big macentosh and a gramma named granny smith. We live on the farm happily now but we had a tradgic passt. After my work on the farm was done one ssterday after noon, I pondered my life, my friends, my family, and the incidint, it was a stress relief to sit and i like it. i sit their.

When I was born my mom was born with pneumonia but the pus went solid so she died when i was born. I never knew how much i would miss my mom but I do.... She was my mom. she was suppoe to hold me and bath me and keep me from harm and death. But she couldnt even protect herslef from diseas so sad....... But I still had big mc and Apple bloon and granny smith and my dad. My dad was green with a orange mane and his cutie mrk was a tomato. My mom was yellow with a mane that was rad and had orange streeks in it.

Big mac is red and doesn't talk much he can only say Eeup. He has yellow hair. Apple bloom is my little baby sister. She's yellow too just like mom and big mc's hair. She looked just like mom. I miss my mom. She died right after I was born. I cry under the tree of stress relief.

I renember Granma Smith and how she became almost like my mom after she died. Smithee was so kind but now she's old nd depressed. Back then, my dad used to have obsessed compulsive disorder and he always made me and my siblings clean it. Granny yelled at him one day for it and he stmped into his room and Granny was mad. Then the next day, we didn't find him. We couldn't find it and my dad was gone.
"Ye. He's in a better place, Apple jack. Im pretty sure. Dont worry, child. I'll take care of you."
I loved my grandma even though shes old and smells like prunes and is the reaosn my father is gone.
I hug her everyday even though she smells really gross and i think she forgets to brush her teeths so it smell bad.

I kep crying under the tree and Apple bloom came up to me.
"Hey, Apple jack I was sad and I wanted to say hi."
"Oh, Apple bllom, I odnt know what to do anymore. I miss mom and dad."
"Yeah. I miss mom and dad too."
"I remember mom just before she died after i was born."
"Yeah>"
We sat togtehr in silence and cried together but we didnt make a peep. Then Grammy Snith came outside and said, "soups on everpony."
Then apple boom got up and she said. "Are you coming, Apple jack? Its dinner, your fvorite food too."
"No, Im too sad. i said.
"Oh well come on in when you want something to eat."
I didn't want to eat. I wanted to starve forever and I was so sad yeah....
I sat and cried.
Big mac came up and said "Hi apple jack. How are you?"
He talked!!! "Oh big bac i didnt know you could talllkkk!!! :"
"Eup."
I cried on his shoulder. I just needed somebody to lean on. "Yeah I know youre sad but look on the bright side. We have a gamma who loves us so much. All our lives too."
"I know but I still miss em.Can I just be alone now? Granny made dinner."
"Oh okay. I'll go. Bye.
Then he walked to the fabarn house and he was gone and I was alone once again.

Author's Note

Hey this my new stry it was editd by EgoreFrimzCud. But she tot me a little bit about writing stories so im getting better now. So maybe i can right a story and it will get aproved!!!!!!!
Thx for suportt keep it coiming with the comments. Thx ??!!!!!!!!!

Oh and cover art is by kittykat67 friend from school. All of my friends are from scool.

Death in the air

After we hugged Fluttershy kicked some apples out of the trees with her strong legs and they fell and she took them and she left. Then I fell asleep by the tree in a daze and I started dreaming.

In my dream, everything felt so real, like it was in the real life. In my dream, Fluttersy came up to me. I was in my room. She said to me "Apple jack, we need your help. Twilight is crying and your our friend. Come on." She gallopt out and I followed her. She pointed to the sky. I saw Twilight falling. She was falling form the sky and she was crying, "Helpm !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:heart:" Then she hit the ground and she was bleeding everywhere. But I ran back to my farm and grabbed a blanket to rap it up good. The blood got on it but it was okay. She had a scar on her arm from the injury but tehn I was a hero!!!!!
"Your a good deed, applejack!" evepony cried. I hugged eveyone and Fluttershy whispered in my ear "IT WAS ALL ME. HAHAHA"

Then I woke up. Fluttersy sounded like a demon in my dream and I get scred and I started crying in real life.
I cried until I saw the sun setting and it was almost night time. I was scared to get up to go in the house but i did anyways. I got up and went into the house and nobody talked. They didnt bother to come outside to get me. I sat on the couch. It was red like a appl. Wear did everbody go? I didnt see them the hole night. I watched Doctor Hoo. I watched 3 epsidoes but it only equalled 1 epsidoe cause they are divided into acts or parts. Anyways, it was a n hour later and i tunred the TV off and went upstairs. I noticed that the lights was on.

I went into Appleblom's room and said, "Hey why do you not talk to me today??" But Applebloom was on the floor and she was so pale. Super cold like ice......
"No! Not my sister!!!!! I screamed/

I sobbed and went to Granmy Snifth room. Her room had furniture that smelled like expired tooth paste. I saw he on her bed dead.
"What is happen????"
I went to Bigjac's room.
"Big mac why did everyone die!!!!!!!!!!!" but he was dead tooo!

I didn't know what to do. My hole family had died and I was clueless. I didnt know what I could do...

My future was just beginning....

Author's Note

Thnkx to my fans thx. oh and for my friends who edit it. Thanx <<<<33333
More storys comin yore way!!!

longing For friends

When they were eating I thought about my life some more and I membered my friends. They were Twilight, Rarity, Rainbow Yash and Rarity and Fluttertshy. I also have my friend who is my cousin but she's pink her name is pinki pie.
They were my friends for a hole year after raindow bash's berthaversery but I lived in Ponnyville y hole life. Rainfow and i are friends. I was also friends with the others but rainjow and i hade a conection. He both likes sports and not being girly. She was my favorite friend. He were all elenemts of harm ony. I was honesty and raingow dash was loyily and pinkepie was laufter and rarity wa s jennerosity and Twilight was firnedship I thinK.

We were friends for all one year. We fighted many dangers together forever and ever, We loved i. I love them and we;ll be friends forever I thought about what would happen if they died and I realized hwo sad I would be withot them and how lost I would be. I'd have some of my other friends but without them I'm nothing but honesty in a lonely world wihtout the other elements.

Suddenly, a boy comes up t me. Wait, no it was Fluttershy. She said "Hi applle Jack. Can I have some apples? I need them to feed my anmals."
"Yeah you can just take wichever you want Just take them. My life doesn't mean anythung any more....."
"What?? Apple jack, we love you. Your a farmer girl and you have great apples. We love you. We do, and you sell apples. We love your apples."
"You do?" i cried.
"Yes, there so good.'
THEN I HUGGED HER TIGHT. ANd she started crying with me.
"Thanks Farttershy"

Author's Note

omgod, this chapter almost made me cry,. lolo x''D
I realy hope you liek!!!
Thankz to my EgoreFrimzCud gor helping my and my story.....!!!!!!!!!??????????????@@@@@@