"Losing Faith" (Grimdark short

by dabram71
A short story following Faith and Twilight through a tangle of lies and secrets. My first every MLP story, so constructive criticism is appreciated and welcome.

This story follows a character called "Faith" a original character (though with no back story), as well as Twilight sparkle. When a good day turns horridly wrong, bad things happen. (Duhh.) Since this story is very short, and also incomplete, saying much more would give away things.
This is my first story, so constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated. Enjoy.

Teen
Incomplete
Sad
Dark
 

1871 words: Estimated 9 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

  1. Losing Faith 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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