Cold Welcoming
A darker skewed version of Twilights arriving in ponyville
Twilight arrives in Ponyville to deliver a message from the Princess Celectia. However things do not go quite as planed. A dark version of the first episode in which the qualities of all of the characters have been skewed to a different aspect but not completely changed. Not yet completed, this is my first attempt at a fiction, comments and feedback greatly appreciated.
5784 words: Estimated 29 minutes to read
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6 Chapters:
- Part One: welcome to Ponyville 2012-03-22 00:49:37 UTC495
- Part Two: The messenger 2012-03-22 00:51:28 UTC784
- Part Three: Throwing stones 2012-03-22 00:53:21 UTC509
- Part Four: I Try. 2012-03-22 00:54:03 UTC1058
- Part Five: Judge. Jury, and Executioner 2012-05-15 00:08:57 UTC1315
- Final part: Assumed Reality 2012-07-15 22:17:25 UTC1623