The Story of Sam Eclipse

by expo2

Rating: everyone
Tags: Twilight Sparkle, Main 6, Princess Luna, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Original Character, Comedy, Princess Celestia, Human
Length: 1150

Sam eclipse, a half human half pony, comes to equestria to find his two sisters.

This is my first story so please please PLEASE go easy on me. I what to know if anyone would like to hear more story, so I will start the epilogue and if you have any ideas, I'll take them into account and I'd like to hear if i made mistakes.

This is a story of an almost human named Sam, he was abandoned by his parents when he was born. He has been waiting a very long time to finally meet his 2 sisters (guess who ;3). It happens when a rift through the dimensional plains is opened after a new alicorn is made (do i really have to say who -_-). (this is a first person story)

Published 2014-02-12 05:30:06 UTC
Last updated 2014-02-12 05:30:06 UTC

prologue

It has been 7 years since my parents left me, If I recall correctly that means I'm almost 10. Yes, I know I sound older, but its just that... OK, let me start from the beginning. My name is Sam Eclipse and I am a human. Well, technically I'm half human half pony. I have a regular human body except for one small detail... I have a horn and wings... anyway, it's really hard to explain what I look like because... let me put it this way, I change depending on the time of day. For example, my hair is brown, but in the day it is very light brown and in the night it is dark brown. This factor is the same with my blue eyes and my white/dark blue wings and horn.
I know what your thinking. How can a guy like me go walking down the street with a pair of wings and a horn? That's easy, I made a spell that, as long as I don't use them, they can't be seen. Of course I have to keep recasting the spell after i use them.

There is a reason I'm telling you all of this? I found out something today that I'm happy about. Before my parents left, I cast a spell that would allow me to see where they went. The first time I used it, I was unhappy to find that my father (the alicorn king of equestria) had turned my mother (a human girl from earth) into a pony. I was very, very upset, but I got over it. This time, however, was different. I use the spell today and guess what I found out. I have a little sister. She is a white alicorn with light pink hair and glistening purple eyes. Her name is... Celestia.

Author's Note

I just want to know what you think before I continue. Just so you know i spent most of my afternoon writing this, so the main story line will be much longer then this. Also the main story will take place 10000 Years in the future. Please be nice. :)

Chapter 1 Through The Rift and Into Equestria

Chapter 1 Through The Rift and Into Equestria

10,000 Years Later

It's time to go to equestria. The rift through the dimensional plan has been opened. It only took the creation of a new alicorn. After the rift appeared it took a couple of weeks to stabilize, but I finally did it. I would really like to meet my sisters, Celestia and Luna, who raise the sun and the moon every day and night, after my father's passing.

Like I said, there is now a new alicorn. She was originally a unicorn by the name of Twilight Sparkle, she became an alicorn after fully understanding the magic of friendship and rewriting the unfinished spell written by star swirl the bearded sent to her by my sister, Celestia.

OK, it is time to go through the rift. I just hope it does not hurt.

Zap!!!!!

"Where am I?” I said as I looked around. "YES!!! I made it to equestria!!! Now I just have to get to the castle," that's when I noticed the city of canterlot in the distance. "Well, I may as well look around canterlot."

Canterlot

I quickly ducked into an ally way the hide my extra appendages, after I got out I started to look around. 'Wow canterlot is huge,' I thought as I walked. I couldn't help notice that all the ponies were staring at me. the next thing I knew, they were all gone. 'All I have to do is find a way inside the castle so I can talk to Celestia and Luna, but how?' I pondered, 'There is a lot to look at, there's a fancy restaurant, a lovely hotel, a royal guard pointing a spear at me, a flower shop... Wait WHAT!!!'

“Halt, strange creature. You are under arrest." he said in a gruff voice.
“Oh ya, for what?" I remarked slyly.
“For being a public disturbance. I am ordered to take you to princess Celestia and princess Luna."
“Really?"
“Yes, follow me."
“OK then."
That moment then I thought to myself ' Wow that was easy'

Author's Note

this chapter is short because im going to have a very funny scene in the next chapter. It is ether really funny and/or really stupid.

Chapter 2 The Royal Sisters

As we walked through the large halls of the castle, I kept thinking ‘how I’m going to convince them that I’m their brother’. Then it hit me, ‘I’ll just tell them to look in their/our father’s journal. He kept a record of all the things he did, the good and the bad.’ I finished my trail of thought as soon as we got to the throne room.
“Your majesties, I have brought you the…disturbance.” The guard said.
“Thank you, you may return to your post,” Celestia said with a calm tone.
And with a bow, the guard left us leaving me, Celestia and Luna.
Then Celestia broke the silence.
“Who are you?”
“Oh, where are my manors,” I apologized, “My name is Sam, Sam eclipse.”
“Sam, what an interesting name.”Luna stated.
“Not at all, my people have name just like mine, names that mean nothing,” I said.
I saw the curiosity in Celestia’s eyes “and who might your people be?”
“Human.”
“Interesting.” Celestia said with a cocked eyebrow. “I have never heard of such a creature, this is truly interesting.”
“Neither have I.” Luna added.
“I wouldn't be surprised, not only are humans from another planet, they’re from another dimension.”
“WHAT?!?” They said in unison.
“Yup.” I said.
“Then how-how did you get here?” Celestia asked.
“Magic.”
“There is one more thing I what to ask you.” Celestia asked “why were you hiding your real form?” Then her horn started to glow reveling my horn and wings.
“Well?”She asked.
“OK, OK, when I said I was a human, that wasn't necessarily true. I’m technically half human half pony.” I explained.
I decided to continue.
“Anyway, I best be going. If you need me I’ll be in ponyville. Oh, there's one more thing I need to tell you two, if you don’t believe me then check in your father’s journal.”
“And what is that?” Celestia asked, as I started to walk away.
I stopped, turned my head and smiled a devilish smile.
“I’m your brother”
I turned back and walked away just as Celestia and Luna’s jaws hit the floor.
As soon as I was out of view, I burst out into laughter.
“That was funny, oh well, time to go to ponyville.” and then I left to go to my destination.

Author's Note

just so you know i put a lot of work into this chapter and i had tuns of fun writing this. so ya. thanks