One Wild Night

by BraxAttacks

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Thunderlane, Romance, Fluttershy, Sex, Anthro
Length: 4224

Fluttershy has been feeling pretty lonely lately, with no one to keep her company but various animals. One night, Thunderlane stumbles upon a somewhat unclothed Fluttershy while fixing a package delivered to the wrong address. The have sex. BOOM.

Fluttershy is a fulfilled mare. She has good friends that will always have her back, she has a wonderful cottage the perfect distance away from town, and her dream job of taking care of animals. What more could she possibly want? She didn't think there was anything more, until Thunderlane brings a package delivered to the wrong house to its proper recipient, only for the short visit to become a bit more... involved.

Artwork by Marik_Azemus

First time clop writer here, so it was a bit weird to write this. Hope you enjoy!

Additionally, pre-reading and editing was done by Deprave, who is much better at writing than me but never garnered attention for some reason. Pay his page a visit!

Update: This is now the top rated Anthro Clop story featuring Fluttershy! Thanks guys!

Published 2014-02-21 19:50:05 UTC
Last updated 2014-02-21 19:50:05 UTC

One Wild Night

Fluttershy collapsed onto her bed, sighing with relief as she let the stress of the day seep into the soft mattress. She lay still for awhile, simply allowing herself to relax for a bit and do nothing. Her cottage was calm, all the animals that weren't nocturnal having scampered or flown off to their respective nooks and crannies to sleep through the night. Fluttershy herself was just about ready to let sleep overtake her.

Reluctantly sitting up, the pegasus scooted to the edge of her bed and began to strip off her clothes. Shirt, pants, bra, and panties, they all came off and were neatly put in the dirty clothes hamper to be cleaned in the morning. Fluttershy walked over to the closet and opened it, looking for a very specific green hoodie to wear while she slept. A small smile appeared as the jacket was spotted and quickly removed form its hanger.

Fluttershy couldn't remember when exactly she had started wearing nothing but a hoodie to bed, but it was weirdly comforting. The lower half of her body was exposed to the chill of the air, contrasting delightfully with the warmth of the hoodie around her torso. The uneven texture of the inner lining of the hoodie rubbing against her large chest whenever she moved, and she liked to think it was someone gently tickling her.

She stopped on her way back to the bed, thinking about that last thought. She reflected that she really didn't have anyone in her life to do something like that. The mare wrapped her arms around her round breasts, sighing with loneliness as she wished she had a special somepony.

It wasn't as if nopony had wanted to be her date, though. When Photo Finish had briefly given her a life of fame, tons of ponies had tried to gain her attention and approval. The noise and constant crowd had been far too much for a shy pony like her, and thankfully that brief period in time had faded into obscurity.

Still though, why didn't she have a special somepony? She turned to the mirror hanging from the wall next to her bed and looked at herself. All she saw was a pair of eyes that seemed to be filled with uncertainty and doubt. Quickly they were snapped shut with an eep!

Exhaling slowly, Fluttershy quelled the surge of... she wasn't sure what to call it. Self-loathing? Disgust? None of the words and phrases that drifted through her head seemed to fit. they were all too.. extreme. She didn't dislike herself at all, yet she still couldn't really see what everypony else had when she became a successful model.

There was a strange sort of detached feeling that filled Fluttershy's mind whenever she tried to figure out how she looked compared to everyone else. It always made it near impossible to have true confidence in a conversation, which was a part of what made her so famously shy.

~DING - DONG!~

Startled, Fluttershy's thoughts were interrupted by a the sound of her doorbell. Confused about who could possibly have come all the way out to her cottage at something close to nine at night, she automatically began to move towards the front door, stepping lightly down the stairs.

The wooden door swung open, and Fluttershy was greeted by the smiling face of Thunderlane, who was carrying a small brown cardboard box in his hands. He was taller than Fluttershy, and lean, but all of his muscles were well defined and appeared perfectly capable of doing some heavy lifting. Black fur covered his body, thick and well groomed feathers of the same color adjourning his wings. A white and light blue striped Mohawk sprouted from his head, making it easy to spot him even from a good distance away. "Oh! Hello Thunderlane! What brings you here so late?" she asked, waving.

Thunderlane, oddly, didn't respond. His smile faded, and a red tint appeared on his cheeks, rapidly getting more and more red. "U-uh... I can just leave this here then, o-or come back later... or something..." he said with progressively less and less confidence.

Fluttershy was incredibly confused until she looked down at herself. Shrieking with embarrassment, she tugged her hoodie down as far as it could possibly go and retreated inside, slamming the door shut in her panic. Unfortunately for her, the rudeness of what she just did dawned on her. "Oh my gosh, I just slammed the door on a guest! she thought, quickly re-opening the door while standing behind it.

"Sorry about that," said Fluttershy, having gained a fierce blush herself. "I wasn't expecting company, and I guess I answered the door without thinking. Sorry!" Even though her private parts were now hidden, she clamped her eyes closed and lowered her head, creating a light pink barrier between herself and the stallion she had accidentally revealed herself to.

"It's no problem, Fluttershy. I just wasn't..." He paused, "...Ready, I guess. Anyways, I came here to give you a package addressed to you that I got for some reason. I would've brought it over earlier, but I was out," he explained, his blush fading a bit.

Lifting her head, Fluttershy looked at Thunderlane and considered her options. "Um, if it's okay with you, could you bring it inside for me?" she asked, trying to avoid making any movement that could uncover herself more than she currently was. She had already had her fill of embarrassment for one day. Any more and she would likely have a panic attack.

Thunderlane nodded. "Sure, but uh, you're gonna have to move out of the way if you want me to come inside," he said, speaking with his full confidence now that the shock had worn off.

"A-alright." Fluttershy started an awkward sort of shuffle out of the way, trying her hardest to move not a single thing besides her feet. It took awhile, but eventually the entryway into her house was clear. Thunderlane moved past the mare and further inside her abode, looking around for a place to put the package, admiring the interior of the home as he did.

"You know, your house is actually really pretty, Fluttershy," he said quietly, eyes absorbing the overall natural looking room cluttered with birdhouses and various bags of animal food. None of the animals he expected to see were around, though he supposed they could just be hiding from the new presence in the room.

Shuffling her way forward, Fluttershy admired her home as well. She had made sure that the feel of her house was one of nature, and the abundance of green and wood did the job well. She didn't have all that much of a desire for objects, so instead she put most of her income towards her home and food for all of her animal friends.

With a light thump, the package was set down on a coffee table in the middle of the room. Looking around again, Thunderlane muttered to himself, "Shame she doesn't share this place with someone else. It really is a beautiful house."

Fluttershy's ears perked up, his words reaching her. Biting her lip, Fluttershy realized that she really did live here all alone. Sure, she had all of her animals and occasional visits from friends every so often, but that wasn't really the same as what Thunderlane was talking about.

Caught in a foreign burst of confidence, Fluttershy spoke up. Even as her mouth moved and words came out, it didn't truly feel like she was the one saying them. "W-would you like to keep me company?"

As soon as she said it, fear overwhelmed her. What had possessed her to say something like that? She wasn't ready for a mate! At no point in her life had she dated anyone, but for reasons she couldn't fathom at the time, she basically asked Thunderlane out.

The stallion in her front of her turned away from the room and looked her in the eyes with a look she couldn't quite place in them. A mixture of surprise, hope, and pride. Those eyes suddenly roamed over her body, traveling up from her feet to her own eyes, lingering on her bare things and large breasts. A shiver that was actually quite pleasant ran up her spine as Thunderlane's wings started to unfurl behind him, making it even more obvious what was running through his head.

Still as stone, Fluttershy remained motionless as the stallion in front of her approached with a calm, ponderous gait. There was no need to rush at a time like this. As he drew closer and closer, Fluttershy started to tremble, the conflicting uncertainties and excitements of everything that was happening too much to process at one time. The gap between them only a few inches wide, Thunderlane once again made eye contact, this time asking her if she was truly okay with this, or if she wanted to back out while there was still time.

Oddly, she nodded yes.

A short gasp escaped her as his arms wrapped themselves around her waist, his lean muscles hard against her body yet pulling her closer with a gentle force, soft enough that she could back away if she wanted to. His smooth chest was pressed her far more curvy one as the gap closed completely, and his lips connected with hers.

Fluttershy's mind fired banks as it tried to comprehend the feelings that had filled her whole body. Everything about seemed so personal, like she was the first pony ever to experience something so amazing. Her breath escaped her as Thunderlane's strong jaw pushed forward, leaving her feeling weak in the knees. It was like... like... something wonderful. Her thoughts were a bit jumbled to think of a fitting comparison.

Thunderlane's hands began to explore the curves of Fluttershy's body, moving over every part of her, just like his eyes had not moments ago. She let out quiet moans every time he passed over a particularly sensitive spot, slowly leaning more and more into his embrace. After what felt like an eternity of bliss, a tongue gently forced its way into her mouth, and Fluttershy's wings joined Thunderlane's at their full span.

They stayed like that for awhile, Thunderlane's hands never resting and Fluttershy's enjoyment never diminishing in the slightest. The sun finally hit the horizon, a crimson red and deep purple filling the room as seconds turned into minutes while the two ponies continued to kiss.

Eventually, Thunderlane became more daring. His right hand moved lower and grabbed one of Fluttershy's ass cheeks, and the other began to massage the joint where her wing connected to her back. A breathy moan, longer and deeper than all the previous ones, went straight from Fluttershy's mouth to Thunderlane's, earning a groan form him right after.

Pleasure spread across Fluttershy from her wings as fingers pressed and kneaded the joint, doing to same to her supple bottom. The feeling filled her with a heat that stemmed from somewhere inside of her, at her core. She could feel herself growing wet down below, and it only made her even more excited.

Wrapped in each others' arms, they wandered upstairs without pausing their activities, and Thunderlane flung Fluttershy onto her bed as soon as it was in sight. He kicked the door closed with a foot as he walked towards the mare in front of him.

Fluttershy felt abandoned the moment Thunderlane's roving hands left her flesh, and gasped when the sensation returned all at once as she was pushed into the mattress, pinned beneath the stallion above her.

Removing his mouth from hers, Thunderlane looked at her and she did the same. Both of them were still a moment as they took in each other and smiled. Then, Thunderlane slowly began to tug the green hoodie that had obscured Fluttershy from him off, her arms raised in compliance to make it come off faster.

It took a second for Thunderlane to recover when he laid eyes on Fluttershy's bare chest. They were... perfect, frankly. Round and curvy, their plumpness somehow not dragging them down at all. Her nipples stood erect, large and pink and waiting.

He took one in his grasp, savoring the way they molded around each of his fingers, yielding easily to his touch but resisting the perfect amount to feel dense and heavy. With every flex of his fingers, Fluttershy gasped, her breath growing shorter and shorter. Her hands grabbed clumsily at his wrists as he manipulated her boobs with more force, trying to stoke the fire that burned in her chest. Thunderlane obliged, bringing his other hand to tug and play with her other nipple, pushing the two mounds of fat against each other and pulling them apart, forcing more and more moans out of the mare caught in his grasp.

Soon he brought his mouth to her right tit, and closed his lips over the areola, sucking and gently biting in an unpredictable pattern, leaving Fluttershy in total rapture. She felt fulfilled as Thunderlane's tongue danced across her nipple, tugging it this way and that. It was as if an all important piece of her life had been returned after it was long forgotten, the reason why uncertain. Fluttershy wasn't sure why she had been so hesitant, so afraid to become this intimate with somepony else. It was far better than anything she had ever experienced before.

"Thunderlane... this is the best day... *moan* I've ever had..." she breathed out with a voice so husky and sensual it surprised her to hear it coming from herself. Thunderlane looked up at her, his mouth never leaving her breast, and she could tell her words had made him happy when he started sucking with even more gusto than before.

Thunderlane wasn't expecting her to suddenly push him off of her and switch positions, all at once laying under a mare with half-lidded eyes crouching above him. "My turn," she whispered. Thunderlane shivered.

Fluttershy wasn't sure what had persuaded her to do something so controlling, yet she found herself pinning Thunderlane's arms to his sides as she kissed his neck and jaw, never in the same spot. Every now and then he would give a twitch, a subconscious attempt at escape, but she never relented, holding him underneath her as she kissed him and pressed her breasts against him, the fabric of the plain black t-shirt he was wearing stimulating her. "I bet skin would feel better... she thought.

Thunderlane lifted his arms while she lifted his shirt from his boy, and then undid his belt and tossed it to the side, landing somewhere Fluttershy didn't care about. Slowly, he pushed his jeans and boxers down his legs, revealing his penis, standing at attention. Fluttershy froze up at the sight, completely uncertain. Should she touch it? Was that rude? Was that the average size, or was it big? Small? Estimating it to be about seven inches long, Fluttershy was held hostage by her lack of knowledge.

He noticed her predicament when she backed away slightly. Heh, pre-dick-ament... Thunderlane laughed inwardly at his lame pun, before laying a hand on Fluttershy's shoulder. "Do you wanna take this a step further?"

She looked at him and gulped hard. "I think so, but... I don't really know what to do at this part," she said with a bright blush tinting her cheeks.

"That's fine," he said reassuringly, "I can help give you some tips.. heh... about how to give a blowjob." Fluttershy blushed even harder as soon as the activity's name was put out there, suddenly impossible not to think about. She nodded slowly, before leaning forward. Every few inches she would pause and look to Thunderlane, trying to tell if everything she was doing was correct. He gave her no reason to stop.

Soon the penis' tip was an inch in front of her mouth. It smelled odd, pleasing and arousing in a way that invited her to come closer. Her lips parted and took the head inside, just barely. Thunderlane gave a quiet gasp as pleasure flared in his member, causing a twitch that startled Fluttershy into flinching back and releasing him.

"Don't worry, you were doing fine. Come on, give it another go," he said patiently, giving her a comforting look. Once again, the soft sensation of her delicate lips enveloped his penis. Gently, Thunderlane used his hand to guide her head lower, slowly overtaking him, forcing small grunts and moans out of him as her mouth slip over more and more of his shaft.

"That feels so good Fluttershy, mmm!" he grunted, breath ragged. His encouraging words prompted the mare to start slowly bobbing her head up and down, up and won, a rhythm taking shape. The wet warmth of her mouth was amazing, accented by the flicks of her tongue against the bottom of his dick. He ran his fingers through her hair, moving his arms in sync with her bobbing. Either Fluttershy was a natural at giving blow-jobs, or she had lots of experience. Somehow, I doubt it's the latter.

For her part, it was unlike anything she had ever done before. Thunderlane's dick was totally erect, yet it still had that fleshy give to it that made it feel like nothing else. It tasted simultaneously salty, a hint of sweetness present, forming a pleasant taste that made her want to keep it in her mouth forever. Over time, she could start taking it further and further inside, gaining centimeter by centimeter, inch by inch until she was properly deep-throating him. She could feel it in her throat, restricting her breathing, yet she didn't care. There was something irresistible about the whole experience, and she didn't want it to end. Resisting the urge to gag and breathing through her nose, she continued with fervor.

Thunderlane sighed with contentment once Fluttershy's nose bumped against his crouch, his dick totally hilted inside her. She looked at him, eyes lifted up towards his face, half-lidded, and he had to restrain the urge not to cum right there. The familiar pressure had been building up throughout the whole night, and now he felt like he was getting close to the edge, but not quite. That would take one final step.

Pushing her gently off of his cock, receiving a confused glance in the process, before he pulled her closer to him. Their bodies fit together like they were meant to be this close, bringing a sense of security to them. Arms wrapped around her back, Thunderlane kissed the crook of her neck as he spoke quietly into her ear, "If you're willing, we can do something that feels even better."

Even after everything they had done, Fluttershy could not hold back a blush, tinting her face a shade of pink Thunderlane found adorable. "Y-you mean... have sex?" she asked, receiving a nod.

"Yup," he said, "Only if you're okay with going that far, but this night could get even better than it already is, which would be pretty awesome if you ask me." He flashed a grin, one overflowing with a dork-ish confidence.

Weighing her options, Fluttershy realized there was no way she was going to refuse Thunderlane's offer. The heat within her loins demanded that she be truly satisfied, that she press onward. Plus, she was far from having a bad time. In fact, this was probably one of the best nights of her life. She truly had been missing out all those times she refused the advances of all those stallions.

"I think I'm ready," she said with determination, giving Thunderlane a long kiss, her tongue playfully teasing his own for a few seconds before she pulled back and had had no idea what to do from there. Thunderlane lowered her to the bed, crouching over her.

"Here, guide me in," he said, moving his crotch close to hers so that the tip of his cock was just touching her. The touch sent shivers down her spine, and she used her hand to line the tip up with her opening, before pushing herself onto him. A burst of pain erupted from somewhere inside her, like something tearing, and Fluttershy stopped. The pain, initially overwhelming, faded rapidly.

"You okay?" Thunderlane asked, only slightly concerned considering he was pretty sure he knew what was wrong. Very slowly he pumped his hips forwards and back, easing into it to let the mare adjust.

Sure enough, she began to pant as the pain was replaced with a deep satisfaction not unlike scratching a horrible itch. Pleasure blossomed throughout her body, spreading from where Thunderlane's stallionhood was thrusting in and out of her. She felt full every time he moved forward, and empty as a void when he pulled out so that just his tip was still inside of her. Her hands stroked his toned, smooth chest, gripped his shoulders, and tried to make his thrusts faster. Thunderlane obliged.

Feeling a bit out of place doing nothing to contribute, Fluttershy sought out Thunderlane's wings, running her fingers through the feathers, giving him a haphazard preening while he continued thrusting. He groaned, his rhythm faltering slightly from the unexpected surge of feeling from his wings.

Fluttershy let loose a loud and long moan when Thunderlane's tempo increased a bit, the small increase in speed seeming to double the carnal pleasure. Fluttershy could feel the pressure from earlier building up again, stronger than before. Instinctively she knew that something was about to happen. "Thunderlane... I-I'm gonna... aaaaAAAAAA~!"

Her sentence was finished by a scream of pure, unimaginable bliss as Fluttershy came, harder than she had ever come before. Her nerves were aflame, her body lit with the best feeling that she knew. She was totally overpowered by the raw force of her orgasm, her mind unable to process anything happening for what felt like an eternity. Her cum splattered onto Thunderlane's crotch and onto the bed sheets, staining them an off-white. Eventually her mind returned to her, and she gazed at Thunderlane with the most genuine smile to ever grace her features. "That was incredible."

Smirking, Thunderlane began thrusting again, giving Fluttershy no time to recover from her blown mind. "Maybe for you, but I still need to cum myself. Get ready for round two!"

More sensitive than before, Fluttershy could not have held in her moans and screams of passion if she tried, which she was definitely wasn't. It seemed like all the feelings of bliss returned full force as Thunderlane pushed himself into her harder and harder, loud slaps alerting her to the force he was using.

Thunderlane too was lost in the moment, amazed by how wonderful Fluttershy felt. She was tight, but could still be penetrated with a bit of effort, her inner walls slick and warm, surrounding Thunderlane's dick with what he would consider the best feeling in the world. His hands groped her breasts again, tugging and kneading them, increasing the volume of Fluttershy's groans even further. If anyone else was in the house, they would be incredibly annoyed by the amount of sound to two ponies were creating in their sex. I hope my animals aren't too annoyed, worried Fluttershy, before Thunderlane's cock inside of her overtook her thoughts again.

Time seemed to melt away as pleasure consumed them both, the rhythm of Thunderlane's thrusts fully occupying their minds. Nothing else mattered but themselves, and however bad or good the day leading up to this moment was didn't matter. It was completely irrelevant when compared to how good they felt as their sex continued.

Eventually, Thunderlane could feel that the edge was close. He moved faster, the slaps grew louder and his grunts harder. With one last powerful push, he hilted fully inside Fluttershy, pushing his lips and tongue against hers, kissing her with passion as he came, cum filling Fluttershy's vagina, pulse after pulse until it seeped out of her and onto the sheets as she came for the second time, their cum oozing onto the sheets together, making them even dirtier. He panted into her mouth as she gasped into his, both of them recovering from the orgasmic high.

Settling under the covers, Fluttershy and Thunderlane held each other close, enjoying the warmth the other gave. Their arms were around each other, and Fluttershy looked into Thunderlane's eyes once more before saying in a tired, pleased voice "That was the wildest, best night of my life. Thank you." Then she kissed him tenderly, holding it for as long as she could before nuzzling his neck and closing her eyes.

She fell asleep satisfied and wondering what would come next, looking forward to whatever may come.

Author's Note

Well, this was an interesting beast.

Being a teenager who has never had sex, let alone been in a relationship, it was pretty interesting to write this. Basically all of my knowledge on sex is derived from clop stories on this site, so that's something to consider.

I am actually really happy I wrote this, considering I haven't published anything here for over a year at this point. It feels good to actually accomplish something. In all likelihood, I'm going to write more clop fics, because apparently that's what motivates me to write.

BraxAttacks, signing off!