breakout : asylum

by bright foal

The plan begins

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"So you figerd out what is this crack allready?" Spiked asked Twilight Sparkle, while sitting near the crack, they been tring to figer out what it is for severl hours now, but were almost as clueless to its nature as they were when they found it.

"I don't know Spike, taking to accont what we know so far the best I can come up with that the world I'm in right now is an image build ontop the real world, and the cracks are places where that image was damaged, but why trying to expand that crack seems to send us to other dimensions is something I can't explain, nor why the cracks are fromed in the first place, try to go to celestia and talk to her on that, see if she can do anything to help. also take care of the critters would you?"

"Oh my, I forgot of all my little critters, Spike, you can use my cottage if you care for all the pets, but please no fire, I'm worried my little friends will get hurt"

"Be a dear and take care of my opel, would you? she needs worm milk, but not hot, and remeber to brush her fur from head to tail, and be gental"

"Will do Rarity, Is there anything else?"

"That will be all for now, get a scroll to the princesses, its highly importent and ergant!"

"When you think of it, who does take care of all the critters in this world?"
All eyes were turned to the only pony who had knowledge of the place, Nurse Rachet.

"Oh, we got a critter carer, She's Pinkie's sister, she moved to ponyville soon after Pinkie was moved to the hospital so she could visit her"

"Which sister is that? I got 3 you know"

"It's Maud Pie, If my memory serves me right"

"Pinkie, will our little friends will be safe with Maud? I never heard of her"

"Well, that depends"

"On what?"

"Are they rocks or not, and taking into accont the low popularity of pet stones in ponyville, I say they are NOT safe"

"Oh no! I have to go take care of them right now!"Fluttershy cried as she stormed out the front door, Twilight Sparkle was going to stop her, but had an epiphany when she saw Derpy munching a muffin.

"I be damded, It was right infornt of me all this time!!"

"What is it, Twilight?"

"I know how the cracks are made!!! how I could have been so blind"

"You figerd it out? Realy? How?"

"Cracks are formed when a pony with twisted memories experience something that trigger its real memories, and they lose believe in this world, Its happend with you Scootalo and with Derpy! thats why this world or image is strong like it is, its made from Imagination, which in some cases is even more powerful then knowledge!!"

"Thats so cool, you got a plan how to get us out of here then?"

"While yes I do, Applejack, I need you to go working on sweet apple acres, Pinkie Pie, Start to plan a party, hold nothing back, Rarity, Start makeing dresses, Derpy, be your self, Sweetie belle and Scootalo, go with Applejack and group up with Apple Bloom, then go crusading,Fluttershy already went to take care of the critters, Everypony on Three, One, Two, Three!!!"
"Three!!!"
"Three!!!"
"Three!!!"
"Three!!!"
"Party!!!"
"Muffin!!!"

As Everypony went to act normal, Twilight went back to the crack "Spike, are you there?"

"Yes, Twilight, what is it?"

"I would take cover If I was you, If my guesses are correct, all the ponyville area will join with the delusion very soon, but if you could spare some time... can you get me some cooking supply ready?"

"Sure think Twilight, you want me to write a list?"

"You can realy read my mind Spike, thats why your my number 1 assistent"


The door bell of the suger cube corner rang as a pony came to the mostly desrted sweet shop, "Welcom, What could I help you with today?"

"Hi Ms Cake, can you get the oven hot, Ponyville is a need for a super doper party and I need to start baking!!"

"Do I know you?!" Ms Cake asked the weird pink pony who just came in the store,

"Hehehehe, why of curse, doh, I'm Pinkie Pie, I'm your baking assistent, you and Mr Cake gave me the attic, You realy Should try to remeber, It will help a lot"

"Me? Mr Cake? attic? Pinkie Pie?" *CRACK*

"Who was it honey?" Mr Cake asked as he came from the back room "Hello there, did we met before?"

"You both are so silly, but no more funny talk, time is candy, and I need candy for the huge party I'm planing"

"Time? candy? party?" memories started flooding Mr cake head as well and a loud crack was heard, both cracks started to grew, as the shop started to look like it should be.


"Hi Big Mac, wheres Winnona? I bet she misses me and I wish to greet her before we start bucking the trees"

"Nope"

"Whats wrong big brother? you think I should be working in that mental block?"

"Yap"

"Well I ain't, I'm a farm pony, now lets get this stinky coat off and get a proper hat on, I got work to do"

"Hi Big Mac, You saw Apple Bloom?"

"Yha were going cursading and we need her for it"

*Crack!!*

"Hi Apple Bloom"

"How you been?"

"Who are you?"

"Don't act like you don't know us"

"Yha, we Cutie Mark Crusaders stay together for life!!!"

"Cutie mark??"*CRACK!!!!!*"Sweetie Belle, Scootalo, come on, we got crusading to do!!!"


"I'm now open for business!, get ready Ponyville, Rarity is going to make you shine!"


"Heres your mail!"

"Thats not my mail, its a muffin! and what happend to your eyes..." *CRACK!*

"Muffin!!!"

*Crack* *Crack* *Crack* *Crack*

"Are you ready girls?"

"Yha!!"

"I'm Ready!!!"

"CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS DEMOLITION DERBY DRIVERS YEY!!!!"

"Look out!!!" *crack*
BANG!!!!
*Thou Fillies are CRAZY!!!!" *crack*
BOOM!!!!
"What is wrong with todays youth?" *crack*
CRASH!!!!!


Author's Note

"So Pinkie Pie, What you think of that?"

"YOUR LATE!!!!"

"I'm not, I published yesterday"

"Yha, but you said you gonna publish again in less then 24 hours, Its been 29, 29!!!!!"

"Well, you see, I was hungry, and the computer room in the library is was taken and you don't get to judge me, I WRITE YOU!!"

"Then its a good your mental like the ones who make Rainbow Dash Presents, cause that mean I can still argue with you!"

"Talking on the mentaly advanced series...."

"Don't tell me you planing on writing a story on that?"

"Why yes I do, so I need Practice, and in this little chats..."
*Poof*
"You will pay for this, nopony can escape Pinkies wrath!!!,yes, what happend to my voice, it's all manly all of a sudden, yes,"

"And hello for the mentally advance Pinkie PIe, I'm happy to see you too"

"You do not get to say hello to Pinkie, yes, It is me, Pinkie,yes, who deside who talks with her,yes, and you will bow before your mighty pony god,yes."

"Why you say yes so much anyway?"

"You do not question Pinkie, yes, for she do not need to remind herself she is correct all the time, yes, Pinkie don't need you to tell her who she is!!! yes"

"OOOOkkkkk, did you liked the cmc in this episode?"

"They were nice, yes, but Pinkie had even better ideas in her mind, maybe cutie mark crusaders murder squad was needed there, yes"

"Murder Squad!? :twilightoops:REALY!??!!!!! that is the worst thing they could do, where is the fun in there, killing is no way of living"

"Hehehe, you foolish writer made silly rhyme that got nothing to do with real life, what a bad writer, well this is all for now, yes, I keep writer hostage till he writes more chapeters, yes"

(The mentaly advanced series and rainbow dash presnets were made by FiMFlamFilosophy and are used without permission) ("I Tried to ask from them but they didn't replied, I guess they got lots on their mind right now with all the lets play and such" "Did Somepony asked Your opinion Rainbow dash?" "No Twilight...." "That is cause Nobody cares, they probbly just sitting arond picking at their nose right now ignoring, no body cares on this little fan fiction, so they didn't even botherd to read what ever you sent, you ran a tiny blog and are a complete nopony, why whould they take time thinking of you? "But Twilight, Its Bright Foal who asked on tumblr from his babyyoni user" "Well, How many followers he got?" "51..." " I proved my point, so Bright foal needs to write what ever he wishes and just remeber to cradit FiMFlamFilosophy in the end, its not like he can lower the level of that silly cartoons thing anyway"

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