MLP: First Kiss Reactions

by KingHalo1337

Entering The Twilight Zone

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Author's Note

Sorry for the long wait people but you know how life is. Gotta work and shit. Anyways here ya'll go and uh yeah there's reference to clop and all. No full ledged clop scene but just little minor shit throughout the chapter, just skip a sentence or two if you feel uncomfortable reading. As always Read and Enjoy.


Entering The Twilight Zone

Twilights Library

Here I was ready to knock on the door. Here we go. I knocked and waited. I guess Pinkie was already inside because I didn't see her out here.

"You may come in," I heard Twi say. I took a deep breath and entered. "Oh it's you," she said smiling. Twilight was rearranging books.

The little dragon was helping, "Why do we always have to tear this place up every time she gets a new book?" Spike said to himself.

Twilight immediately levitated all her books and placed them randomly on the shelves. "If I knew you were coming," Twilight said, "I would have had this place already cleaned up."

"I need to talk to you about something," I said sitting on her couch.

"Sure I wanted to talk to you about something, too," The purple alicorn said dreamily.

Spike walked over to us and said to Twi, "Twilight, you're not going to get all freaky again are you?"

The spellcaster stared at her baby dragon and gave him a look, "Spike why don't you go to Rarity's and leave me and Tommy to ourselves."

"So you are going to get freaky again," the green scaled dragon said.

"Just go," Twi said levitating Spike out. She really wanted some privacy. The magically enriched pony looked at me and said, "I'm sorry about that."

"Whatever, at least I don't have to clean anymore," Spike said then said more dreamily like, "...well at least I can go see the beautiful Rarity."

Some pony was watching Spike walk away. Discord said to himself, "Yes little Spikey, let's give them their privacy hehe." Once Spike was out of sight the tall drac flew down to the window, "It's time to enhanced Twilight's lust. And this time when they are in the heat of the moment I will teleport Fluttershy here and have her see with her own eyes. Tommy and Twilight making a baby should be enough for Shy to leave him and she'll cry to her good friend Discord for comfort. I win hahahaha." But before anything could happen somepony was galloping towards him and the treehome.

"Oh no I'm late," the mare said. She looked ahead and saw Discord, "Discord what are you doing here?!"

The God of Disharmony turned his head and saw Pinkie coming, "Oh great, not her," he said annoyed. He flew over to her, grabbed her, and teleported to a tall mountain. "Why don't you stay out of the way," he said leaving the party animal there teleporting back to Twilight's.

As soon as he got back Pinkie was already there, "You can't get rid of me that easily," she said.

"How did you get back so fast?" Discord asked, "Who cares, I'm not going to let you stand in my way." He snapped his talons and poofed Pinkie far away, but with the 4th wall breaking abilities, the party planner returned as fast as he snapped his talons. He teleported her to an island, a volcano, different countries, a far away cave, even chained her up and left her in a dungeon, but nothing worked.

"I'm not going to let you mess with Tommy," the pink pony stated. She stood her ground.

While Discord fought with Pinkie Pie on trying to ditch her somewhere, Twilight was sharing her new book with me.

"There are so many questions that need answering. I was hoping to fill this book up with all the information you give me about Earth and humanology, "the alicorn said excitedly, "It's never too late to learn."

I skimmed through the book looking at the different sections, "I didn't have time for this," I thought to myself.

"Let's skip to Section 34 and learn about that first," the mare said softly blushing. She flew to the couch and sat next to me leaning on my shoulder.

"Sex," I said dragging my hand down my face, "that's exactly what I need your help with."

Twilight's heart began to race, "Really, hold that thought," she gleed levitating another book. The title read, "21st Century Equestrian Sex Positions". "I want to try every single one," the purple mare said smiling and licking her lips. She gazed at me with great lust in her purple eyes searching through the book.

"That's not what I meant," I said.

"Oh this one looks dirty," Twilight said not paying attention to me.

I closed the book, "No, we aren't doing any of these," I stated.

"You're right," the alicorn agreed.

"Thank you," I said relaxing a bit. But then Twi flung the book away.

"We can make up our own," she excitedly said, "now let's get these pants off." Off guard I caught her trying to tug on my zipper with her mouth.

I pushed her head away, but she couldn't resist not getting to my prick. "Hey, cut it out," I told her as I pushed her over and got up backing away.

"What's wrong, Tommy," she said slowly, "don't you want me?" the princess prowled towards me like a lioness on the hunt. Twilight's eyes began to dilate and she had a wide grin.

"Nah, I don't," I answered her question. I better get out here because she's starting to look crazy. I don't want to chance it. I went to the front door but I couldn't get out. The doorknob wouldn't twist.

"I put a spell on all the doors and windows so nopony can try and come in," The princess of magic stated. She licked her lips and teleported on my right leg hugging it. She smiled up at me a little creepily like.

"Or to keep me in," I thought to myself. I kicked her off, "Why don't you just relax, alright." I said backing up towards the kitchen.

"I'll relax as soon as I have you in me hehe," she giggled and flew after me.

I ran in the kitchen and grabbed a stool. Ms. Sparkle puckered her lips and tried to kiss me but I pointed the stool legs towards her and she met that instead. The winged unicorn tried to fight passed it.

"Fucking calm down Twilight," I yelled.

She levitated the wooden stool away from me, "I'll calm down once I maregasm, NOW HAVE SEX WITH ME."

"Hell no," I said flipping her kitchen table in between us and ran back in the living room. She teleported in front of me causing me to shift to the right. She teleported in front of me again and I cut to the left.

The bookworm finally teleported on my back and nibbled my ear, "Mmm," she moaned. I flipped her over my shoulder and she landed on her back on the couch. I ran upstairs to her bedroom and hid under her bed.

"I need to get the fuck out of here, this wasn't a good idea," I thought to myself, "...where the hell is Pinkie."

Outside...

Discord and Ms. Pie stared through the window. "Aha, looks like Twi's doing a good job without me altering her feelings hah hehe ha," the drac laughed.

"Oh no," Pinkie said worried, "I need to go in there." Pinkie also caught what he said about altering Twi's feelings. What did he mean by that she thought.

However right when she was about to leave Discord grabbed her by the throat, "Oh I don't think so, my little pink friend." He snapped his paw digits and the party animal was tiny, like a 4 inch tall pony figure, and she found her new home in a jar like necklace around the dracanequus neck.

Pinkie tried to break out by hitting the jars inner sides, "Let me out," she cried out in her squeaky little voice.

"I'll let you out once this is over, for now looks like you'll be enjoying this with me," Discord grinned.

"Oh Tommy, you can do this, just break through through her," the fun energetic mare said to herself.

They watched Twily run upstairs.

"I like this type of roleplaying, me chasing you is so fun," I heard the purple mare say, "now where are you?" I felt something pulling my legs. Twi was using her magic to drag me from under the bed. "Found you." I was placed on the bed and was magically held. Twi smiled and crawled on top of me and started licking my neck.

"Twilight stop, you're not really feeling this. I mean really think, are you really in heat? " I said trying to convince her to stop.

Twi turned around, wet marehood dripping in my face, "Well of course I'm in heat why else would I want to have sexual intercourse with you...and on top of that I want it sooo badly." She unzipped my pants and stuck her hoof in my trousers rubbing my cock with her hoof.

I could only move my head but I needed to turn her around, for one, I don't want her pussy all up in my face and two, I figure if I headbutt her hard enough she'll snap out of it. Twi pulled my manhood out and turned around. Her vaginal lips will soon be parted by my dick soon enough.

The Element of Magic stared at her cum that dripped on my face and started licking it all off, "Wow, my pussy's really dirty, but you can clean it after we mate hehe," she giggled. The princess' s wing flung out and she spread her legs proceeding to lower herself. My dick stood tall waiting to enter the alicorn's love cave.

I don't think so. I headbutted her while I had the chance, careful not to impale my skull with her horn. Our heads bumped causing her to stop using her bonding spell and she stumbled back. I grabbed her and flipped her on her back and held her down.

"For Christ sake, stop and snap out of it," I yelled in her face.

The alicorn quickly shook her head and came to her senses, "I'm, I'm sorry Tommy, I-I don't know what's wrong with me, I just-"

"It's alright but shit, this is exactly why I need your help," I said getting off her and zipping my pants locking my dick away. Now I can talk to her civilized. Jeez that was close.

Physco Twilight return to normal and sat up straight, "But you said you wanted my help with sex, I don't understand, isn't that what you want? In fact, I don't understand why I have this strong urge to have sex with you in the first place." Twi just stared at her forehooves.

"I don't need your help with sex, but I need your help regarding other mares wanting to sex me for no known reason," I explained.

"Wait," the purple mare said looking up at me, "so I am not the only one?" I shook my head no. Twi was thinking to herself, "I guess I'm not in heat, but it's so strange, why?" she asked outloud.

I answered, "All I know is its some odd attraction they feel for me but its all lust."

Twi looked up at me in a caring manner, "Oh I'm sorry, I bet it's difficult for you to go through your everyday activities with us mares chasing after you," the Element of Magic said softly.

"Not only that but I'm in uhm...," I looked into her purple eyes and finished my sentence, "...I'm in love with somepony else and she is a very sensitive pony and if she saw other mares all over me it may break her heart." I was thinking of Fluttershy. I could have lost her back there with Rainbow.

"Oh I understand," Twi said, "come on, let's figure this out. I'm sure there is something we can do," she thoughtfully said.

We went downstairs to see what she had in her library.

Pinkie was happy for Tommy, "YAY, I knew you could do it Tommy."

Discord laughed, "There's no fixing this, good luck." Discord hovered near the lower window. Inside he saw the bookworm skimming through her books.

On the couch, "Okay Tom, the only explanation I could think of is that you have some kind of pheromone that your body is releasing and because it's so strong our bodies pick it up and the next thing you know we want to sleep with you. Is this true? Do the other ponies want to mate with you as badly as I did?"

"That's a definite yes," I answered.

"Hmm, maybe if I cast a spell on myself...," the princess said thinking to herself, "...no that won't work because I would have to gather every pony in Ponyville and cast the spell on them as well."

"Well, saying that I am the source of the problem why don't you cast the spell on me," I suggested.

"That's a smart idea," Twilight said happily, "and it will save us the trouble." Her horn lit, "Okay, are you ready?" Twi asked taking a deep breath. I nodded my head.

Discord chuckled, "Oh please." A pony was bouncing around in the jar still trying to get out. "Oh Pinkie, why would you want to insist on ruining my fun?" He poofed the jar away but the tiny little pony appeared in his paw.

The pink poofy headed mare stared up at Discord with anger, "Why can't you just leave Tommy alone, can't you see that Tommy and Fluttershy are in love."

"In love," the Master of Chaos stated, "ha how is that when dear Fluttershy has these strange feelings for him."

"Nope," Pinkie shook her head, "my Pinkie Sense tells me its true love."

The Chaotic Overlord rolled his eyes and dropped the pink mare. She screamed as the fall was much greater because she was small, but lucky her, Discord increased her size to normal. Being big it was only about a 2 -3 foot drop. The pink pony landed on her rump with a grunt. She stood up and rubbed her bum glaring up at the mean drac.

Before anypony could say anything, they saw a flash of light through the window. Pinkie and Discord went to the window to peek in.

Twilight opened her eyes after casting the spell. I had some purplish rainbow thing wrap around me before fading away. "How do you feel?" I asked hoping it worked.

"I um feel okay I guess," the pony answered lightly.

I wanted to make sure so I pulled the mare in for a hug. Twilight had a confused look on her face. I started to massage her wing joints nice and smooth. I needed to see how she'd react.

She began to moan. Her wings erected and she closed her eyes, "oh hah ah hah," Twi slowly moaned. She smiled up at me with half closed eyes, but then her eyes shot wide open and she pushed me away folding her wings firmly by her sides. "No I uh I don't want to uhm...," the bookworm blushed shaking her head, but she stopped and smiled slowly saying to me, "...wait, I'm actually resisting."

I smiled knowing her spell had to have worked. "I was just testing you," I said happy to rid these lustful feelings forever. I thought to myself, "Now me and my marefriend can be together peacefully."

Twilight was gleeing and jumping on the couch like a little foal, "It worked, it worked, it worked. I don't have the urge to mate with you anymore."

Discord glared at her, Pinkie smiled happily because deep down she felt something go away, too. "Not if I have something to say about that," Discord said snapping his talons. He used his magic to enhance Twi's lust again.

Twilight stopped jumping and gleeing. I asked her what was wrong. Discord smiled and Pinkie had a questioning look on her face. But Discord's smile faded when the purple alicorn just sneezed and nothing else.

"What?," the Spirit of Disharmony slightly yelled. He continued to snap his talons but nothing.

Pinkie picked up on this and asked, "Are you...are you the reason we feel this way towards Tommy?"

Discord ignored her question and stared angrily through the window listening to us talk.

"I am really sorry for my actions and I apologize for any other pony that put you through this," Twilight apologized.

"It's okay," I said, "at least it's over."

We stared at each other for a second then the talented magic doer closed her eyes looking down then she tilted her head upwards and kissed me softly. I held it not sure what to do. She did fix the problem didn't she? The mare broke the kiss and I asked her, "What gives I thought you fixed everything?"

"Oh I'm sure I did," the princess stated, "I still feel really bad for what you had to go through. I'm sure you want to live with the pony you love in perfect harmony and if anything that was just a kiss out of friendship. I hope we can still be friends."

I hugged her, "Of course, no hard feelings."

Twilight levitated a quill and notebook. "Well, at least I can answer one of my questions. Humans taste salty," she said jotting it down.

I shook my head, "Ai yi yi this mare," I chuckled.

She giggled, too. The little pony had a question for me, "So who's your special somepony?"

"Oh uh," I smiled thinking of her, "Fluttershy."

"You love Fluttershy, does she know? Does she love you back?" the princess of magic said happily.

"Yes she knows," I answered, "and yes she loves me back."

The purple alicorn was happy for her friend, "Oh Fluttershy, having somepony to not only love her as a friend but to be there for her and take care of her is a wonderful thing for her in her life."

Discord snickered, "Oh we'll see about that, lover boy. Sometimes when magic fails you have to do things yourself."

"Why do you have to be a big mean meanie pants," Pinkie confronted him.

Discord laughed, "This is all in good fun."

Pinkie glared at him, "You're becoming a monster about this," she said.

"Monster?," Discord fumed, "if anypony is a monster its you. Attaining pleasure from poor Tommy, I can't believe you used dear Fluttershy against him just so your little pink ass can get laid. He'll never truly forgive you for that."

Pinkie sat on her rump and her heart turned. Tears formed in her baby blue eyes and her mane/tail drooped half poofed, "Why do you have to keep bringing that up," her voice sounded very sad.

The drac grinned at the sad pony and said, "Now if you excuse me I have some unfinished work to tend to," the conniving chaos infested creature said taking off. Pinkie sat there crying, she wiped her tears away with her tail when she heard her friends come out.

"Come on Tommy, we don't want to miss Fluttershy's modeling," the purple pony said. It was already 9:35pm.

Pinkie walked towards them, "Hello you two. How'd did everything go?" she tried to sound happy.

"Everything went great, Twilight fixed everything," I excitedly said running up to her and kneeling down so I could hug her, "And thank you for all your help as well." Pinkie loved the warm gesture and her mane/tail poofed back out completely. Unknowingly, Tommy's hug made her feel better.

Twilight came up to them, "Hey Pinkie, what are you doing here? And are you okay?" she asked concerned.

"Oh um, I told Tommy that I'd come with him to talk to you," the pink mare explained, "...but I had some Discord problems, but I'm fine."

"Discord?" Twi asked.

"Yeah what about him?" I added.

Pinkie wanted to tell Tommy only so she said, "Oh uh I'll tell you later. We need to be there for Fluttershy, we don't want to be late."

"Right," Twi said with that and she teleported everypony at the front door of the big tent where everypony gathered to see Shy do her best.

Fashion Models Tent

"If Discord is causing any trouble, Pinkie, I want to know about it," Twi informed firmly.

"Oh okay no problemo Twily Sparko," the party thrower said saluting her.

The Element of Magic turned and headed inside, "Well let's go cheer for our friend," she said.

I waited until she went completely inside so I could talk to Pinkie, "So what's going on with Discord?"

Pinkie Pie sat down and began to fill disheartened, "He brought up my secret and told me that you'll never truly forgive me."

"Oh come here," I gave her a long hug, "He's a liar because I left that in the past." It angered me to see Pinkie all sad because of Discord. "I'll deal with him myself."

Pinkie broke the hug and continued, "...and also I think he is the one making us have those strange feelings for you. I heard him say he'll make Twilight all lusty and stuff. He tried using his magic but it didn't work. I was trying to stop him that's why I didn't go inside with you, that and he trapped me in a little jar."

"That fucking guy man," I said angrily, "I believe you, too. He's always fucking with me. No wonder he wanted me to go to Twilight's so badly."

"Yeah I think he made me and all my friends' one big horny herd," the very pink pony said.

"Fuck him right now, because you know what?" I said trying not to stir into complete anger, "Twi fixed everything so we don't have to worry about such things happening right now."

"Ya got that right," Pinkie excitedly said, "Now let's party!" She ran inside and I could hear a certain Pinkie commotion inside.

I looked to the skies to think. "Live in harmony huh," I said thinking about what Twilight said. To do that I must tell Fluttershy the truth. I can't keep these secrets any longer, for our love I must come clean.

A voiced echoed in my head to protest, "Go ahead, tell her the truth, that mare will leave you for sure. All you have to do is keep it hidden." No no no no, I can't.

Another soft spoken voice said, "Like Luna said, the truth will set you free." I'm telling her tonight. It's time to step up to plate like a man and confess. My baby must know.

"So be it," the bad voice said, "Fluttershy doesn't love you anyway. Like Pinkie said, Discord made her and all her friends, including Shy, all horny for you. Now that Twilight cast the spell that pathetic pony can finally tell you it was all fake."

Okay, that part I was afraid of. Now that the strange feelings are gone, did Shy have them, too? I wouldn't know until I ask my Flutterbaby and hear the words from her own muzzle. I started to feel scared and sad for my love. No, our love is real, it had to be.

I will come clean. Fluttershy does love me. And we will live a happy life together. I took a deep breath and walked inside. Now let's go see my darling butterfly walk the runway.

Lurking in the shadows...

"Well, well, well. It looks like it's now or never. Tonight will be the night Tommy will leave empty hoofed. No Fluttershy, just him and his broken heart," Discord said as he saw a pegasus pulling three ponies in a fancy carriage. "Time to put chaos to work," he laughed evilly.

His body became a mist and he allowed the wind to blow him towards the carriage. He slipped inside and his misty self became a grey, white trimmed briefcase with a dragon scaled red handle. Briefcase Discord sat next to the other ones as this was his ticket in.

"This will be a night to remember haha hahaha," the briefcase thought chuckling to himself.

Tommy, Fluttershy, is their love strong enough to stay intact? Or will the wits of Discord break that bond? Or worse, will Tommy's confession destroy his relationship and leave the Element of Kindness forever heartbrokened. Stay tuned for the grand finale

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