MLP: First Kiss Reactions
Let Us Party: Part One The Brawl
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Me, Rarity, and Fluttershy approached the giant sugary treat of a building Pinkie held the party at. At the front I could see a poofy inked maned pony dar her head back into the bakery and the lights shut off. I was nering the entrance when I notice it was just me and Rarity, Fluttershy stood back some feet laying on the ground with her eyes close overing her ears.
"What ever is the matter, darling?" the unicorn asked her scared friend.
"I never liked the...surprise part," Shy quivered.
I went back for her, "How about I come get you when the surprise part is over, sound good," I asked the slightly shaken pony who looked up at me and nodded. I gave her a quick hug and told her I'll be right back. I walked back to the doorstep and braced myself for what awaits behind the door.
I opened the door and in that instant the lights turned on and, "SURPRISE," all the ponies from Ponyville screamed all at once. Ponies popped out of their hiding spots from behind couches and counters. The set up was arranged nicely; 2 couches along the sides of the walls on either side of the room, a bigger one close to the back wall assuming for me because it had a banner that said Welcome New Ponyvilian above it with a large table in front of it with a large welcome cake and other goodies, there were 3 tables along side each other by the left corner of the back wall with delicious treats and beverages and a dj station with big speakers on the right corner in the back, games were set up in the middle of the floor such as pin the tail on the pony, bean bag toss, something sort of like twister and other miscellaneous games. A white pony with a blue and cyan colored mane worked the dj station, she had on her purple glasses and a pair of dj headphones. She was known as Vinyl Scratch or DJ Pon3 and she had her wubstep playing.
I walked in with Rarity behind me and was greeted by Pinkie herself and she escorted us to my table where the rest of the Mane 6 sat. "Hold on a sec," I told them and ran back outside, "Come on Fluttershy, the surprise part's over," the shy mare heard my call and trotted over to me.
I led her to my table and we all sat on the couch except for Pinkie who was tending to her guest. I sat in the middle, Shy on my right and Twilight sat next to her, AJ on my left with Rarity next to her, and Dash hovered in the air off to the side/front of Rarity. I enjoyed talking to each of them.
The multi-colored mane pony spoke, "So let me get this straight, your from another planet and even though you've been in Equestria for only like...2 days, you know everything about us".
I thought no more than a second and answered, "Pretty much..more or less that is"
"That's pretty creepy if you ask me," responded Dash.
Just then a very pink mare presented a tray of cupcakes in front of us, "Cupcakes anyone," she asked giving each one of us a delectable treat.
The purple alicorn had a questioningly look on her face, "How did you get here in the first place, can you teleport from your world," she asked.
I wasn't prepared for that one, "Um..," I couldn't tell them about Discord bringing me here so I had to make something up, "...I'm not sure actually...I..ah..I was at home watching t.v. and...I...um drank something strange and woke up in the Everfree and that's where I met Fluttershy," looking down at the shy pony who blushed.
"Whuum...interesting...I would love to learn more about the human world there has never been a human in Equestria before," Twilight said eagerly.
I answered thoughtfully, "I wouldn't mind stopping by the library someday...I can tell you everything I know."
Applejack was giving me that wanting look again I tried to ignore her for the time being but I also decided that AJ should be next. I thought to myself, "AJ is already coming on to you, why don't you think of a way to get her alone".
I was planning on a scheme when she asked the shy pegasus a question, "Why ya lookin' spiffy for there sugarcube".
"Yeah what's with that fancy get-up," Dash added in. Twilight was curious herself so they all stared at Fluttershy to see what she was going to say.
Shy's cheeks became crimson and began to stutter, "Well I ah..-," but was cutoff by Rarity thankfully because I think this dress idea was a bad one.
"Can't a lady wear what she pleases without being bombarded with all these silly questions. I personally am glad that Fluttershy is showing herself dignified, I think the rest of you could learn a thing from her," the mare full of decency herself backed her friend up.
"Not me... (gag)..," Dash pretended to put her hoof down her throat, "..you won't catch me wearing that everyday".
The work mare responded to Rarity, "Then why ain't you in somethin' fancy".
"I..I haven't had the time..," the fashionista said in her defense, "...with Tommy and his attire I didn't have enough time for myself you see". The orange mare just smirked.
The mares talked and I answered any questions they might of had. Pinkie got me up to enjoy some games and treats. Everyone was having a good time. I sat back on the couch by myself thinking while Shy and her friends enjoyed themselves. A light aqua colored mare with a pale cyan mane with white highlights sat next to me. She slouched back and her hindlegs hung over the cushions. There was only one mare that sat like that, Lyra Heartstrings. The mare stared at me as a kid would Santa Clause.
I already knew what she wanted so I gladly held out my right hand, "Go ahead," I tell her.
She took hold of my hand with her hoofs and stared at it in awe, "Hands," she said in great admiration. She petted my hand and played with my fingers, then she rubbed my palm on her face. The mare ran my hand down her neck and onto her chest. I felt her heart beating with excitment. I don't know how anyone or anypony can get a thrill for hands but if thats what makes her happy I didn't care.
I watched the party guest having fun, I haven't gone out for a while and to have everypony here was indeed joyful. I wasn't paying attention to the mare with my hand but I could feel her pressing my hand down her furry warm smooth belly then being pressed into something much warmer and slighty wet. "Oh-ha hands," she moaned.
I yanked my hand away realizing what I was feeling, "Wooh, I think thats enough hands for one day," I said shocked. Lyra pouted. I checked to see if anypony saw and one was coming straight towards us.
The beige colored mare with a pink and blue mane glared at me, "We're leaving Lyra," she said dragging her marefriend with her and while giving me a angry piercing look.
Lyra pleaded, "No...Bon Bon wait...hands".
I watched the two mares leave the bakery as I walked over to the table with the drinks and wiped my hand off with a napkin. "That was that," I said looking at the drinks figuring its time for phase 1. I grabbed a bottle from the half barrel and drank it. It was very fruity, apples, blueberries, and raspberries but it was too weak, "You call this beer, this crap will never work," I thought to myself.
A mare stood next to me and notice the disappointed look on my face, "What's the matter babe, beer ain't strong enough," she stated.
"You got that right, it'll take cases of this shit just for you feel tipsy," I responded to the mare at the same time getting a good look at her. She was a mulberry colored mare and her mane was cerise colored.
She laughed, "This stuffs for school fillies thats for sure," I in return chuckled at her remark, "I like you, folks around here call me Berry Punch".
"Tommy," I replied.
Berry thought for a minute, "You know...I could get this place crackin, I know ponies that can give me the hook up anytime I want".
"Really...can you get your resources to bring something tonight," I asked hoping for a yes.
"Don't worry about a thing babe, I'll be back with my boys and we'll really get this party started," the mare said heading out.
The plan was still in action all I have to do is wait until Berry brought the booze. I felt like dancing to kill the time so I went over to the dj pony and asked her if she could play some techno dance music, "You got it," she answered.
I searched the room for Fluttershy and when I spotted her I asked her to join me, "Let's dance".
"Oh I do-WOOOH," to late pulled her onto the dancefloor before she could say another word.
I started to bob my head and stomp my feet to the beat, "Just go with the beat Shy," I try encouraging the scared pony.
She hesitated at first then she saw what I was doing and she started to mimic me, kind of, she didn't quite go crazy with it like I did. Soon other ponies joined in including Shy's friends and started stomping their hooves and shaking their heads as the big stereos took control of their minds putting them into a trance to move with the beats. Everypony danced for like 30 minutes when I was pulled from the crowd by Berry Punch.
She led me outside where I saw 2 big stallions strapped with carts and 2 box crates in each cart. Berry said ,"Here it is babe, the best brew in town".
I opened one of the crates and grabbed one of the bottles to try it. Each crate must of held like 4 or 5 dozen by the looks of it. "Whuuu that's strong," I said satisfied tasting the beverage which tasted like a hard cranberry-grape.
Berry smiled proudly, "It has a higher alcohol percentage then common beer and it also carries an effect that messes with your mind when you consume to much of it".
"Thanks Berry now let's get these ponies hooked," I thanked the mare and carried a crate inside followed by Berry's henchponies carrying two more crates, the 4th crate I told them I'll get later. We placed the crates underneath the party tables and caught some attention from some curious onlookers, "Whose thirsty?" I yell tossing everypony a bottle. In no time everypony was drinking and continued to have a good time.
I had grabbed a couple bottles for me and Fluttershy who was waiting for me on the couch. I sat next to her and tried to give her one, "Oh I-I don't drink," she said placing one hoof on her muzzle and pushing the bottle away with the other.
"You don't drink or you never tried it," I asked the resisting mare.
"I..um..," was all she said before I removed her hoof and placed the bottle mere inches from her muzzle.
"You never know, you might like it," I persuaded. Shy took the bottle between her hooves, eyed it nervously, then accepted the fact that she was really going to try her first alcohlic beverage. The timid mare drank it slowly at first but managed to drink it all before placing the empty bottle next to her. She looked up at me and smiled, I could tell in her eyes that the drink was starting to take affect. Berry did say it was very strong so I wouldn't doubt that it'll take long before Fluttershy, the sensitive innocent little mare, would pass out in a moments notice.
After 2 more bottles and just sitting there for another 15 minutes the shy pegasus was confident enough to go crazy with the crowd. By now ponies were all feeling the effects of Berry's special brew. They were all being rowdy, throwing their hooves in the air and shouting and that was only the begginning.
About another 20 minutes in, I sat on the couch and watched how everything unfolded, pegasi flew recklessly above the crowd, unicorns had beams of magic light either shooting from their horns or simply illuminating a light ray. This crowd was wild even Shy's friends where having a good time, except Pinkie she was to busy pulling her mane out trying to calm down the out of control jungle animals. Twilight and Rarity shot rays of magic light from their horns and Rainbow Dash and Apple Jack were trying to fight off passing out from their drinking game they had started.
"I bet, (hiccups), ya there gone pa-past out before I do, ssssugarcube" AJ slurred.
The rainbow maned pegasus reponded, "Your go-going down, j-jack," she then guzzled down her beer, "(burps) I'm win-ner at ev-rything".
I on other hand can handle myself when I drink, these ponies could not. I had my eye on one mare in praticular, the flying yellow mare who was recklessly flying with other pegasi. She wasn't a shy pegasus anymore, she was spontaneous, letting loose and having a good time, "Woo-Hoo," she screamed. She was having fun until somepony accidently or purposely blinded her with their magic light beams and Shy crashed into the wall but quickly recovered and hovered in placed and shook her head from the sudden impact.
"Haha maybe you should watch out where your going next time Hahaha," laughed a blue unicorn with a dark purple curly mane and tail. I jumped to my feet and was about to tell that dumb unicorn off but to my surprise I didn't have to.
Fluttershy glared angrily down at the unicorn and swooped down landing nose to nose with her, "And maybe you should learn how to aim better with that stupid magic of yours, " shy said sarcastically.
"I'm not the dumbass who flew into a beam of light in the first place," the unicorn smirked back. Everypony started to hear the bickering and formed a circle around the two mares. I had to see this there's no way Fluttershy would hurt another pony but then again this is an intoxicated Fluttershy.
Fluttershy wings flared out and she pressed her head against the unicorns who pressed back and her horn began to glow.
"You better back off bitch before somepony gets hurt," the blue unicorn snickered.
"No one calls me a bitch no one," Shy yelled and punched the unicorn in the face with her left hoof. Okay maybe she would hurt somepony. Shy threw a right punch but the unicorn dodged it and uppercutted the pegasus in the chin.
"There's no need for violence darling," Rarity tried calling out to her friend.
Twilight wanted to help her friend but was blocked by a spell that the blue unicorn must of cast so nopony else could interfere.
Dash and AJ were almost out of it to pay any mind to the commotion.
Pinkie watched in fear as her friend brawled with somepony else.
Shy stood on her hindlegs and started punching downwards on the unicorns head, but was pushed back and onto the floor by the unicorns forehooves and was being pummeled in the face. The yellow pegasus was getting angrier by each punch her adrenaline pumped up and with all her might she kicked the unicorn in the stomach with both hindlegs and sent her toppling over with an, "OOOF".
I rooted for the yellow pegasus, "Come on Shy beat her ass".
Shy was now on top pounding her hooves in the unicorn face. The yellow pegasus flew up and the unicorn notice two hooves were going to meet her face with great force so in that next second her horn lit up and she teleported just in time and Shy stamped the ground instead. In that same moment the unicorn teleported next to the pegasus and bucked Shy in the jaw so hard that she lost her balance and stumbled hitting the ground.
The unicorn grinned at the fallen pegasus who stared back at her attacker, "Your pathetic...a sorry excuse of a mare...why don't you quit before you really hurt yourself".
I continue to root for Shy, "Don't let that tramp talk to you like that, come on get up".
The blue unicorn faced me, "Why don't you stay the hell out it you mutated looking pony...you're the most disgusting thing I've ev-ARGH," she was to busy talking shit again she didn't see Fluttershy get up and charge her.
Fluttershy grabbed and flew the blue unicorn into the wall beside the door, ponies had to get out of the way so they wouldn't be obstacles in her way. The pegasus beat the unicorn in the face with each hoof punch she said, "No. One. Picks. On. My. Friends". Then she flapped her wings to hover up enough to pick up her hindlegs to kick the air out of the unicorns lungs.
The blue unicorn almost fell but instead teleported once again behind Shy and grabbed hold of the pegasus head and started to brutally bash her head into the wall. Shy screamed in pain and she kicked one her hindlegs back with brute force and made contact with one of the unicorns hindlegs.
The unicorns leg bent sideways and there was a cracking sound at the knee, she screamed in pain and fell to the ground and Shy stood over her breathing heavily with her teeth bared, "Please don't hurt me I'm sorry," the unicorn quivered under the furious pegasus, cowering and covering her face with her forehooves. Fluttershy stared at the shaking unicorn and grinned, without saying anything else she backed off and started to trott over to me with a proud smile of victory on her muzzle.
"Wow Shy you were great I would never have thou-WATCH OUT," I had began to praise her when I saw a magic energy shot heading straight at Fluttershy whose back was turned. I pushed Shy out of the way and was hit in the chest by the unicorns magic attack. I was sent across the room near the back wall next to the booming speakers. I felt like I got momentarily paralyzed and electrocuted sending surges through my body.
"T are you ok," Shy panicked running over and giving me a quick nuzzle on the cheek.
My body shoke a little but I manage to say, "Yeah I'll be okay...that bitch does not know when to quit," I groaned.
Seeing me hurt made Fluttershy enrage in anger, her face turned red and she glanced over at the disabled mare who leaned on her forehooves with her back on the wall staring at us and said, "That'll teach you to fuck with me".
The yellow pony yelled, "I had enough of you," and with one loud war cry she lunged at full speed with a murderous look in her eyes that scared the blue unicorn whose hotty look was now the expression of fear. Her horn lit up and I thought she was going to attack again but instead she teleported away and at full speed the pegasus smashed into the wall knocking her out cold and there she dropped to the floor and was dead asleep, with the alcohol, and all her rage plus using all her adrenaline, she was done, she blacked out especially with a hard hit like that.
Me, Rarity, Twilight, Pinkie and other ponies ran to the fallen champion. I caressed her head and checked to see if she was breathing, "She's fine...just let her rest she'll be fine," I inform the other ponies.
We stared at the beaten pegasus in my arms, her face was bruised and blood came out her nose from the hoof punches, blood trailed down from her forhead from being bashed against the wall, blood leaked out of her mouth, her jaw was sore, she had missing teeth and a swollen black eye. To be honest it sort of hurt me inside to see Fluttershy like this.
"Oh goodness, Twilight is there anything you can do?" The white unicorn asked the stunned alicorn.
Twilight's answer was litting her horn and casting a healing spell over the beaten pegasus, "There she shouldn't feel any pains when she wakes up," she told her friends.
I watched as the brawler looking pony became the beautiful pony that I see everyday. No blood, no bruises, all her teeth back in her muzzle and two beautiful eyes intacted. Fluttershy looked normal again like nothing had happened.
I thanked the purple alicorn for healing her and carried the sleeping pegasus to the couch so she can lay there and rest. Her friends and I sat with her for a little bit very worried like holding her and watching her sleep. I had to leave her there because her friends where giving me odd looks on why I was so concerned for the little mare.
I walked outside to get some fresh air, I also forgot about the crate that I left out there starting to remember who and what it was intended for, "You had your fun but its getting late and you have a pretty little orange mare to kiss," the voice in my head spoke.
I sighed, "Let's get this over with," I grabbed the last crate and snuck it upstairs to Pinkies room. It looks like everypony started to party and get rowdy again and nopony should bother us up here. I sat on the otherside of the bed hoping I could pull this off but I started thinking of the yellow mare sleeping downstairs I still can't believe she wooped that mares ass, I chuckled to myself, Shy was amazing that's for sure.
I was interrupted by that voice again, "Stop thinking about her, I told you to call it off but no you let some mare steal your heart from your beloved Tina and now your having second thoughts go down there and get that orange mare so you can get this over with". I was about to get up and leave when I heard a familiar voice at the door.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Author's Note
There it is part one I wanted this chapter to be interesting so I added some action and there will be more action in part two giggedy. I'll let you guess who’s at the door. Until next time see you guys next chapter.
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