The Mystery Mirror Murder

by Enigmatic-Medic

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Sad, Dark
Length: 1937

A mirror that kills pony? No silly, but it had to be somepony who able kills pony without leaving no trace of them?

Evidence found mirror covered in pony bloods. Also, it was infected by something strange and rare. Also, found half-eaten pony and not either soul too. It's like there something is cannibalism and devourer pony.

No one never ever found alive. Clue leading nowhere to the culprit.

Also, my first FanFiction Story.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-02-28 01:41:57 UTC

The Mystery Mirror Murder Ch.1

13 lives were lost. They couldn't save them. Mayor Mare screams "MIRROR IS HAUNTED!" Every pony throws all mirrors and piles up. It reaches to the sky. Twilight Sparkle uses her magic horn to throw the torch in the mirror piles. It blazes up to the sky, fire crackling at us. Princess Celestia, Luna, and every pony watching the fire burning mirrors. Mirrors exploding.

I was inside the Ponyville Hopsital. I was watching out the window on the bed. I was crying bloods tears. I didn't even notice I was crying bloods tears. I was alone until a gentle, soft voice said "I'm not dead, son?" I start to smile. A gentle, soft voice said "Please, rest my dear son?" I smile. I slowly crawl down and lay on the pillar. White blanket fly up in the ceiling and gently, slowly fall on my neck.

I was sound asleep. A gentle, soft voice said "You will be okay, I won't ever want to kill you, but remember keep this secret."

I had a smile on my face.

Princess Celestia, Luna, and Twilight Sparkle open the door slowly, and peak their head in the door. They see me, I was sound asleep and worrying something might happen to me while they were outside.

They all smile at me. Princess Celestia and Luna pull their head out and leaving Twilight Sparkle watching me. Princess Celestia: "Twilight Sparkle?" Twilight Sparkle: "Oh!" Twilight Sparkle pulls her head out the door and close it gently. The doctor comes up toward Princess Celestia, Luna, and Twilight Sparkle. Princess Celestia: "How is he?" Doctor: "His conditions are getting better and better, but I'm not sure what causing him to be very sick?"

Twilight Sparkle looks worried. Princess Celestia: "Something wrong, Twilight Sparkle?" Twilight Sparkle: It's nothing, it just that we burns all the mirror, his condition are getting better?" Princess Luna was thinking, said "Strange?"

They talk, sharing clues each other about me.

1 hour later, Twilight Sparkle yawned. Princess Celestia said "We going continue, tomorrow?" Princess Luna: Yes, my dear sister?"

They were about to leave the hospital, until a pony screaming. Princess Celestia, Luna, and Twilight Sparkle widen eyes.

They quickly run toward the screams. They bash into Mare restroom. They widen eyes. Twilight Sparkle was going vomit and she left the bathroom, quickly. The mirror was covered vast blood.

It was half eaten. Princess Celestia and Luna said "Impossible, that monster could die, but how?" Princess Celestia starting cry, said "We burnt those mirrors for something worse?" Blood wall written "REVENGE!"  Nurses screams when they see a dead nurse in the mare restroom. Doctor was terrific by it.

Every pony was afraid. They can't stop thinking about the good, caring, and generosity.

The guards come to extract the nurse body out the restroom.

Something was waking me up. It felt wet on my face. I open my eyes. I see my mother, baring those bloody sharp teeth at me. I widen eyes. I try not to scream, but my mother said "You thirsty, son?" I shook my head and her head comes close to my face. i nod my heads. The mother said "Why don't you open your mouth?" I was afraid that she will kill me, if I disobey. So I did and close my eyes. I feel strong taste fall back of my throat. It drips by drips. Blood tastes very bad, but she kind of... Vomit in my mouth.

I was going to throw up, but she force me to swallow all those bloods from the a pony nurse killed. The mother said "Go back to sleep, son?"

I close my eyes. She licks the bloods off my face. She whispers " You are beautiful, son?"  Mother is slowly sliding back to the mirror at the back of the door. I close my eyes when she disappeared.

I feel very happy as she left. I was more aware that she will give me more bloods to drink. It feels like I'm a vampire pony, but taste which mix with my mother's saliva too. It was nasty for me to think, but I have too. If I don't I will be tortured drinking more and more till I slowly become something I never want to. I was afraid of that thing inside me will slowly feast the bloods. At least, it refreshes my throat.

She also, left me a necklace by me. It had an unusual amulet look like red inverted pentagram in a circle with black fallen angels sticking out the side. I didn't mind what it mean, but I mind it looks so good on me.

I wake up. Doctor sitting behind the door, crying very hard. I could hear, see, and feel his emotion. I said "What wrong, doctor?" Doctor said "She died?" I said "She who?" Doctor said "My parnter nurse she was caring you too much and very generosity that don't mind you don't have money to paid your bills." I said "How sad?" Doctor said "I want to die, now!" I said "Don't think that!" Doctor stops and look at me. I said "Your nurse could be in....heaven?" Doctor notice I was very smart.

Doctor said "You acting like her?" I said "Don't worry, doctor, it will be alright, just think something special for her at the funeral?" Doctor stop crying and thinking. Doctor said "I don't know?" I said "Why don't you give her some red and white roses or  pine and white roses?"

Doctor stand on his 4 legs. Doctor walking toward me. Doctor places his 2 hooves around me. I hug him back. I was smiling. Eyes color changing red, but until door opens. My eyes color change back.

The Mystery Mirror Murder Ch.2

I want to the kill the doctor and drinks his blood, but I was afraid to do it. I will hurt and break  my eternity friendship if that happen. If I don't my mother will come find me and take me somewhere I don't want to go. Not hell, nor heaven, not even her world. It somewhere I don't want to be and no one wants to be at. It was a very dark place.

Twilight Sparkle smiles at me. I smile back. Twilight Sparkle turns toward the mirror. Twilight Sparkle is wondering about that mirror during? Twilight Sparkle quickly went into shock and figuring something. Twilight Sparkle heard that the murder of the mirror is interesting someone are alone and usually colt or filly are common type to kill.

Twilight Sparkle:"Doctor?" Doctor looks at Twilight Sparkle. Doctor: "Yes?" Twilight Sparkle: "What this alicorn alone at night?" Doctor: "Yes?" Doctor: "Wait.. You know something?" Twilight Sparkle: "I'm not sure, but isn't that mirror suppose be there before once we leave?" Doctor: "Huh? I have never seen that mirror there?" Doctor looks at me. I stare out the window. I feel them going find something.

Doctor: "Strange?" Twilight Sparkle: "It's much better take that mirror off, now?" Twilight Sparkle cast her magical horn, but mirror won't budge. Twilight Sparkle tries using her magic harder, but it won't work. Twilight Sparkle: "It's stuck?" Doctor walking toward the mirror. My head feels something. I don't know what I'm feeling, but I feel he is going... Doctor screams as he falls through the mirror.

Twilight Sparkle: "DOCTOR!" Doctor screams in blood after a long fall. Twilight Sparkle could see her dimension. Twilight Sparkle: "I will try to get out there, before"... Mirror went completely reflection of her face. I was not afraid, but my mom was smiling at me. Twilight Sparkle looks at me, but she notice I was looking down on the floor.

Twilight Sparkle hears terrific screaming, chomping, and loud gulp. Twilight Sparkle didn't like the sound as she quickly runs to call Princess Celestia and Luna.

Twilight: Princess Celestia and Luna!

Princess Celestia and Luna come out the bathroom and see Twilight Sparkle crying.

Princess Celestia: "Yes, Twilight Sparkle?"

Twilight Sparkle: Doctor... Is DEAD!"

Princess Celestia and Luna gasp and run back to patient room I was in.

Twilight, Princess Celestia, and Luna see the door was closed. Twilight Sparkle: "I don't remember closing the door?"

Twilight Sparkle, Princess Celestia and Luna bash the door open by their magical horn. They see an empty room as they look around. They find a doctor's skull on the bed facing at them. Twilight Sparkle feel nausea and she left the door. Princess Celestia and Luna: "Where that young alicorn at?"

Twilight Sparkle: "I don't know, but there was a mirror back of the door!" Princess Celestia and Luna looks behind the door. It was blank and smooth wood. Princess Celestia: No mirror?" Twilight Sparkle exclaimed "What?" Twilight Sparkle see the back of the door was smooth and clean.

Twilight Sparkle: "That's impossible!"

Princess Celestia, Luna, and Twilight look at each other and figuring the puzzles.

Meanwhile, I wake up with my head groaning. I see my mother and ready to feed me. I can't move my arms, wings, and defy my magical horn. I struggle as she comes closer and closer until I look up at her. She looks down at me with her big grin. Her teeth were covered in bloods.

My mouth automatic open. I widen eyes as she vomit all those bloods in my mouth. Feeling bloodthirsty, mind fill like a vampire, but I... Resist... The feral mind of insanity that will leave me going to hell.

I close my eyes gently as the taste of bloods very strong and lusty how it's going down through my neck. It feels like... Lust.

Even though, she did not see me resisting, but I'm resisting right now. She stops vomiting and look at me. I open my eyes as crimson showing her.

She laughs "I'm a god that I will murder anyone who want to mess my son or making my son happy." I was afraid  as she looks down at me, again. She tells me a story "Once upon, my son and I..." She stops... And looks at me again.  She looks up.  I was already becoming a tall alicorn. A gentle smile, but no meaning of life. She was quickly insane as she laughs. I watch her and I did not laugh, but a smile with apathy. My mother said "I'm very tired after a big 2 meals and I will let you... As she falls asleep quickly.

I decide to look around her words. I smell lost souls, but I'm only interesting is.. Void. One thing is bothering me why the void  is a better place than hell? I don't really understand, but I like to be myself.

Well I walked and walked. Nothing very interesting to me, but I'm interesting is not life, not dead, but something very special. I search and search. Nothing comes up. So, I head back to where my mother slept. She was still sleeping as I smile at her. She wakes up with her belly empty. She said "I'm hungry again." I said "Yes, mother!" She disappears. I study her magic, but it was very strange for me learned. I just learn instant. So, I left her dimension as I was outside Ponyville. I was amazing. I was hungry for bloods, but I stop myself. I slowly changing back to colt. I was happy to see myself, but mind asking for tasty blood. I resist and resist.

Well, I did not want to go back to Ponyville, but I just wandering Colt. I did find a black a black cloak. It cover whole body and my face expect my eyes.