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The Other Side

by Leoshi
[Experiment] Rainbow Dash recalls the days leading up to her promotion to Wonderbolts Captain, causing her to silently question her mentor and subordinates.

[Experiment: First-person recollection]

In a moment of thought, Rainbow Dash recalls the days surrounding her promotion to Captain of the Wonderbolts. She details the conversations and reactions of those close to her, causing her to question her old mentor and her new subordinates. She asks herself...was the choice made the right one? What did it mean to her? And most importantly, what did it mean to Spitfire?


Written for the Rainbow Dash writing contest from a few months ago. I never found enough time or inspiration to finish my entry. So, as an experiment in writing first-person past-tense, I'm going to flesh out the idea and submit it chapter by chapter.

Everyone
Cancelled
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
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5417 words: Estimated 27 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. Facing the Windows 2014-02-13 23:01:52 UTC
    3041
  2. Facing the Sun 2014-05-05 03:39:11 UTC
    2376