The Satanic Sunet (Alternate Ending for Equestria Girls)

by Chaos51268

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Alternate Universe
Length: 1730

Instead of being beaten, Sunset Shimmer manages to defeat the human versions of the Mane 6, and has her own army of demons to invade Equestria. Will she defeat Celestia?

Twilight Sparkle and her human friends have been defeated by Sunset Shimmer. In celebration of her victory, she has converted all of Canterlot High School's students and staff into demons like herself. Her army, known as the Satanic Sunset, now plans to take over Equestria. War will be unavoidable, and much blood will be shed. Will Sunset Shimmer be successful in her endeavors, or will she be beaten by Celestia?

Equestria Girls and the characters involved in this story are copyrighted by Hasbro. I do not own the characters in this story, or any music that I may add.

I may or may not decide to incorporate elements of Brutal Legend in here, so I may have to add a crossover tag.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-02-14 21:00:04 UTC

Prologue

Twilight Sparkle had just won the Fall Formal, and gotten her crown back, when she heard Spike screaming for help.  She chased after Snips and Snails, but didn't count on Sunset Shimmer being at the portal with a sledgehammer.  "That's close enough!"  said Sunset Shimmer.

When Twilight stopped, she saw that Spike was being held hostage.  Terrified, he yelled "Twilight!"  When Twilight Sparkle heard Spike's desperate cry for help, she was scared beyond belief that the little dragon-turned-dog that she cared for since her childhood would be taken away from her.

"Don't hurt him!" said Twilight Sparkle

With a malicious grin on her face, Sunset Shimmer said "Oh, I wouldn't dream of it!  I'm not a monster, Twilight."  Turning her attention to Snips and Snails, Sunset Shimmer then said "Let him go."

Snips and Snails complied, and let Spike run back to Twilight.  She embraced Spike in a hug.  After this brief moment of affection, Sunset Shimmer said "You don't belong here. Give me the crown, and you can go back to Equestria tonight. Or keep it and NEVER go home."  Sunset Shimmer then raised her sledgehammer to smash the portal if Twilight were to decline the offer.

"Tick-tock, Twilight. We haven't got all night. The portal will be closing on its own in less than an hour. So, what's your answer?"  said Sunset Shimmer.

With a stern look on her face, Twilight Sparkle gave her answer.  "NO."

Needless to say, Sunset Shimmer did not expect Twilight to say no to her.  "What!? Equestria! Your friends! Lost to you forever! Don't you see what I'm about to do to the portal?!"

Twilight replied with "Yes, but I've also seen what you've been able to do here without magic. Equestria will find a way to survive without my Element of Harmony. This place might not, if I allow it to fall into your hands. So go ahead. Destroy the portal. You are not getting this crown!"

With a sigh of disappointment, Sunset Shimmer said "Fine.  You win."  She then proceeded to toss her sledgehammer back towards Snips and Snails, one of which almost had the hammer land on his foot.

Twilight's human friends then began to surround her, and shower her with complements, which disgusted Sunset Shimmer.  "Oh, yes, she's so very special!"  Then Sunset Shimmer proceeded to pounce on Twilight Sparkle to steal the crown from her.  However, Spike took the crown.  "Grab him, you fools!" said Sunset.

Spike then was cornered at the school's entrance.  However, Rainbow Dash had opened herself so she could catch the crown if Spike threw it to her.  "Spike!  Throw it here!"  said Rainbow Dash.  Spike complied and Rainbow caught the crown as it fell to the ground.  She then proceeded to toss it to Fluttershy, and Sunset, Snips and Snails started running towards Fluttershy.  Applejack used her rope to pull Fluttershy away from Sunset and her lackeys, The crown traded places among the girls and boys, until Twilight absentmindedly tossed the crown to Sunset Shimmer.

"I'LL TAKE THAT!" said Sunset Shimmer.  "At last...  MORE POWER THAN I COULD EVER IMAGINE!"

When Sunset Shimmer put the crown on her head, dark particles started to form on the crown, and a beam of light emerged from the ground.  The entire school took notice.  Inside the beam, Sunset Shimmer began to change dramatically.  Her skin turned crimson, and her clothing changed from her leather jacket and skirt, to a firey dress.  Her body was covered in what appeared to be black fire, and with that fire came the final changes.  Her head turned crimson like the rest of her skin, her hair stood up like fire, and the whites of her eyes turned jet black.  Lastly, demonic wings sprouted from Sunset Shimmer's back.

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With her transformation complete, Sunset Shimmer let out an evil laugh.  She then proceeded to turn Snips and Snails into demons like herself.  "This is gonna be so cool!" said Snips.

All of the students were screaming, and they all retreated into the school.  "I've had to jump through so many hoops tonight just to get my hands on this crown, and it really should have been mine all along." said Sunset Shimmer with a growl to her voice.  "But let's let bygones be bygones. I am your princess now, and you will be loyal... to me!"  Sunset Shimmer proceeded to use her new powers to literally tear the school entrance out of the building.  The students attempted to retreat, but before they could, Sunset Shimmer used a spell that controlled all of the students, making them into zombies.

"Round them up and bring them to the portal." ordered Sunset Shimmer.  Snips and Snails proceeded to round up the zombie students.

"Spoiler alert: I was bluffing when I said I was going to destroy the portal. I don't want to rule this pathetic little high school; I want Equestria! And with my own little teenage army behind me, I am going to get it!"

Twilight looked towards the students, and noticed Flash Sentry among the zombified students.  She shed some tears.  "No, you're not." said Twilight in defiance to Sunset Shimmer.

With a smug grin on her face, Sunset Shimmer said "Oh, please! What exactly do you think you're going to do to stop me? I have magic, and you have NOTHING!"

"She has us!" said Rainbow Dash.  The human versions of Rarity, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, and Fluttershy walked up to Twilight.

"Gee, the gang really is all back together again." said Sunset Shimmer, shedding a false tear.  She then proceeded to charge a giant fireball.  "Now step aside! Twilight has tried to interfere with my plans one too many times already! She needs to DIE!"  Sunset then launched the fireball towards Twilight and her friends, who all huddled up together.

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As the smoke cleared from the crater where the fireball landed, Sunset could not make out any shapes of any living thing in the crater. She laughed so coldly that it brought a chill to the blood. "Snips!  Snails!  Bring me my ex-boyfriend Flash Sentry!"

The mindless husk of Flash Sentry was brought before Sunset Shimmer.  With a touch of her magic to his forehead, Flash Sentry became a demon just like Sunset Shimmer. The demonized Flash Sentry had a fanged grin on his face.

"Nothing like this power is there Flash?" said Sunset Shimmer.

"Like you wouldn't believe!" said Flash.

Sunset Shimmer then began converting ALL of the staff and students of Canterlot High School into demons like herself. Even the human Celestia and Luna were turned into demons. With her army, now known as the Satanic Sunset, Sunset Shimmer triumphantly led her army through the portal with Flash Sentry.

Chapter 1 (INCOMPLETE! THIS IS JUST A PREVIEW)

Chapter 1 (INCOMPLETE! THIS IS JUST A PREVIEW)

In Equestria, Twilight's friends and the other Princesses were beginning to worry . The portal was going to close soon, and there had been no sign of something exiting the portal. A ripple in the mirror began to emerge, and Rainbow Dash stepped closer to the mirror, thinking it would be Twilight Sparkle that was going to step out.  However, it wasn't Twilight who came through, but the demonic form of the human Flash Sentry, now in a pony form. His head was poking out of the portal muzzle-to-muzzle with Rainbow Dash.  With a fanged smile on his face, he walked out of the portal, with Sunset Shimmer's cutie mark on his flank.  The Mane 6 and the princesses were terrified to see this demon before them.

Out of the portal next came 2 demonic mares; one a dark lavender, and another a bright yellow. They too bore Sunset Shimmer's cutie mark. And last but not least, the demonic form of Sunset Shimmer herself came through the portal. Sunset emerged as a demonic Alicorn, with her mane burning as brightly as the sun, and two demonic wings that were so sharp they could slice the air. With a demonic grin on Sunset Shimmer's face, she said, "Do you see it NOW, Celestia?! What I am truly capable of?! I told you I was ready to be made an alicorn then, and look at me NOW! More than fit to rule Equestria in you and your sister's place! Equestria... and the WORLD!"

Celestia was horrified to say the least.  She had not expected Sunset Shimmer to come through the portal.  Much less with an army of demonized ponies.  She could have sworn she even saw a demonized version of herself and her sister Luna among the army.  "Sunset Shimmer?  Is that truly you?  What happened to you?" she asked with a fearful tone in her voice.

Sunset Shimmer still wore that malicious grin on her face, and pointed to the crown on her forehead, still burning with black fire.  "Take a wild guess Celestia!"

When Celestia looked at the crown, she noticed that it was the Element of Magic that rested on her former student's head.  Except, she could sense that the Element of Magic was corrupted, and she could see the gold metal of the crown slowly turning black, and the gem turning from light purple to blood red.  "That's not possible!  Only Twilight could use the Element of Magic!"

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"Oh please!" said Sunset, "You of all people should know that if the original bearer is gone, then the Element would simply seek another to wield its power."

"G-gone?" said Celestia with a tone that could be compared to a mother losing her child.  "Wh-what do you mean Sunset?  WHAT DID YOU MEAN?"

"TWILIGHT SPARKLE IS DEAD! BY MY OWN HOOVES, I HAVE DESTROYED EQUESTRIA'S LAST DEFENSE! NOW YOU SHALL ALL FALL TO THE WRATH OF MY ARMY, THE SATANIC SUNSET, AND I, SUNSET SATAN!"

Celestia broke into tears.  She had valued Twilight Sparkle as not just a student, but as her own daughter.  All those long years of Twilight's studies flashed in Celestia's mind.  From when Twilight was first accepted as Celestia's personal protege, all the way to the events of Twilight's venture through the mirror.  Words cannot express the grief Celestia felt at losing the only pony she considered her daughter.

And she hated Sunset Shimmer for taking Twilight Sparkle away from her.

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"Sunset Shimmer...  I WILL END YOU!" said Celestia.  As she said this, she summoned forth a glowing scythe as large as her body, and proceeded to lunge at Sunset Shimmer.  Sunset Shimmer summoned forth her own weapon, a blade made of fire, and used it to block the incoming hit from Celestia's scythe.  The weapons made a great flash as they collided with each other.  Sunset Shimmer had rarely seen her former mentor in combat, so she was not quite sure what to expect Celestia to use against her.