It was a dark and cloudy night, the mane six were having a sleepover at Twilight's house. They had pillow fights, did each other's makeovers, and played games. Everypony was having a great time. When it was time for them to go to bed it started to rain really hard with thunder. Everypony was scared, especially Fluttershy. She tucked herself in her sleeping bag really tight. Since they didn't want to go to sleep, they decided to tell stories to each other. Everypony went to sleep later on but Fluttershy stayed awake. It was 2:00 am and Fluttershy was still awake. She kept getting scared everytime thunder struck. She walked up to the window and looked outside to see how hard it rained, but she saw something odd. There was a shining light appearing in the Everfree Forest. She went to tell the others about the light shining in the Everfree. Twilight, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie woke up and went to see what Fluttershy was talking about. When they went up to the window and saw the shining light they wondered what it could be. They all went outside in the rain and headed to the Everfree Forest to take a closer look.
When they were at the entrance of the Everfree Forest, the shining light had stopped and left the mane six with a confused face. They wanted to see what the shining light was, so they decided to go inside the forest and check it out. It was dark to see anything, so Twilight used her magic to shine light in the forest. They found and followed a path that started from the entrance of the forest. After a while of walking, they started to see some white blurry objects. Twilight and the others didn't know what the objects were. They walked slowly and closer to the white objects to see them better. As they got closer the white objects disappeared in an instant. The mane six were scared but they pretended not to notice what had happened. They knew they couldn't stop now, so they kept walked deeper into the forest. As they walked deeper in the forest, they started hearing laughs. The laughs made the six become even more scared. After a while, the white objects appeared out of nowhere and surrounded the ponies. The mane six all jumped at the same time. Twilight and Rarity got their magic ready just incase anything happens. They huddled up against each other, back to back, closing their eyes. The white objects started to spin around them. Faster and faster they spun and they started to fly up into the sky. As the white objects flew up into the sky they combined together. The mane six opened their eyes and saw nothing in sight. All of a sudden the small white blurry objects turned into one huge white blurry object. Twilight was so scared that see accidentally turned off the magic and the area became dark. With the lighy gone, the white object started to become clear and able to be seen. Twilight looked at the white object's long tongue and wondered what it was, but she was too scared to make a move.
She thought to herself in a scared voice,"What kind of creature is this? I've never read or seen it before in my life!"
Little did they know they were boos and they formed into a big boo. The big boo started to laugh and scared the mane six which made them step back a lot. Twilight and Rarity used their magic and shot it to the big boo. It hit the big boo and made it pop back into smaller boos. The boos were flying everywhere in the forest. The did anything to scare the ponies. Some appeared behind them and some snuck up on them. They boos went deeper into forest but Twilight wanted to know what they were and what they were doing, so she followed them. The other five screamed her name and told her not to go deeper into the forest. Twilight didn't listen, so the other five followed her. The boos were going to an abandoned mansion in the forest. Once Twilight arrived where the boos were, she was shocked to see that there was a huge abandoned mansion somewhere hidden in the forest. When the other five ponies caught up with Twilight, they also saw the abandoned mansion and were shocked too. The boos were flying around the mansion. The boos were searching for the Elements of Harmony so they can take them to their world. When the mane six saw them taking the Elements of Harmony, they tried to stop them from taking the elements. Twilight and Rarity started to shoot their magic at the boos, but the boos vanished before they were hit with the magic. Rainbow Dash created a tornado to suck the boos in, but they were being shot back out. Applejack started to apple buck at them, but she couldn't hit them. Pinkie Pie tried to scare them with silly faces, but the boos scared her back with their silly faces. Fluttershy was to scared to do anything. A shy boo came to her and she though it was scared. She told the boo that there's nothing to worry about. They boo fooled her and scared her. She froze up with a scared face and the boo started to laugh. The mane six couldn't do anything to stop them taking the Elements of Harmony. The boos took the Elements of Harmony inside the mansion. The ponies tried running into the mansion but before they could a big boo appeared and scared them. The mane six started to scream and ran away. While they were running away, they heard the big boo laughing loudly. They ran out of the forest and into the rain to return to Twilight's house. They started talking about what those white objects were. They couldn't stop thinking about what they saw.
"An abandoned mansion in the Everfree Forest. How is that possible?!", asked Twilight in a confused and scared voice.
"The bigger problem is that those white creatures took the Elements of Harmony with them." Applejack replied.
Twilight wanted to explore the mansion so they can look for the elements but the other five didn't want to go back. Twilight told them that they have to so they can protect Equestria from all evil beings. After a lot of discussing about the elements, the other five finally agreed to go get the elements back. Twilight wanted to do some research on the beings they saw. They decided to look for and explore the mansion in the morning. That night they tried sleeping but they couldn't. They hardly got any sleep.
The next morning, it was a bright and sunny day and the mane six woke up tired and sleepy. They knew they had to find the Elements of Harmony in the abandoned mansion but they didn't want to. They couldn't even stand up properly. They decided to go check it out later that day. Twilight couldn't find out what the white creatures were. As time passed, the ponies got their energy back. They were fully awake and took some food to eat. They headed to the Everfree Forest. As they walked to the forest they started to make a plan on how they would find the elements. They all agreed on the plan but Fluttershy was still scared. She couldn't forget the terrifying boo that scared her yesterday. She didn't want to go but she was doing it for the Elements of Harmony.
Once they got to the Everfree Forest they walked right in. Twilight used her magic to shine light in the forest. They tried to remember what way they went to get to the mansion. It took them 15 mins to get to the mansion because they had gotten lost for awhile. When they got to the mansion, they looked at it to see if it was real or just their imagination. There was hardly any sun in the forest top. They slowly walked to the mansion's door. They opened the door slowly and a loud squeaky sound came from the door. They entered the mansion but Fluttershy wanted to stay outside. They told her it was safe but they hardly believed it themselves. Fluttershy didn't want to, so she stayed outside on the porch of the mansion. The rest of them explored the mansion. All they saw was pure dust and broken wood everywhere. They saw something covered up in the middle of the room. They walked towards it and took off the sheet that was covering it up. It was a mirror. The five of them looked at each other confused and looked at the mirror closer. Twilight walked closer and closer to the mirror. As she was walking closer, she tripped on a board of wood and slammed on the glass of the mirror. All the dust came off and she saw her reflection in the mirror. The reflection of her swirling slowly. Twilight didn't know what was going on. Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie ran to Twilight to see what was going on with the mirror. The mirror started to suck them in. They were scared so they tried running away but they couldn't.
They all screamed in a terrified voice,"Fluttershy! Help us!"
The mirror sucked all five of them inside. The reflection stopped swirling and was back to normal. Fluttershy heard the screaming and ran quickly inside the mansion. She didn't see anypony. She slowly walked around the mansion terrified. She wondered if they were still exploring but somewhere else in the mansion. She couldn't find them anywhere. She saw the mirror in the middle of the room and walked towards it. She looked at it for a while and wonder where they were. The door of the mansion shut behind Fluttershy. She jumped and looked at the closed door. She walked back scared and bumped into the mirror. She looked at the mirror and saw her reflection. It started to swirl and the mirror started to suck her in. Fluttershy tried running away but she couldn't and ended up being sucked into the mirror.
Author's Note
This is my very first story. Sorry if there are a lot of mistakes. I hope you guys enjoy this chapter of the story. I put a lot of thought into this story. Anyways, I hope you guys enjoy this whole story.
Chapter 2: Luigi's Mansion
Author's Note
Well, chapter two is out. I hope you guys like it. If it doesn't sound right fill free to comment what I did wrong. I proofread it myself and added a few more details. The second hardest thing to do is name the chapter lol. Well, anyways, again I hope you guys enjoy it as much as I do.
Chapter 2: Luigi's Mansion
After the incident with the mirror, Fluttershy found herself deep in a dark and stormy forest surrounded by lots of rocks and trees. Fluttershy was scared as she walked around the forest to find her friends.
"Hello? Is anypony out there?!", shouted Fluttershy in a worried tone.
After a while of walking in the forest, Fluttershy saw a light in the distance. Fluttershy went to the light thinking it was Twilight using her magic to light up the forest. Fluttershy started running to the light and was feeling happy because she was going to see her friends once again. When Fluttershy got to the light, the light flashed bright. The flash of light blinded Fluttershy, so she shut her eyes tight. When Fluttershy opened her eyes again, she was standing in front of a mansion. She was confused of what had happened, she was nowhere near a house or an exit. As she looked at the mansion, Fluttershy felt scared because the mansion reminded her of the abandoned mansion in the Everfree Forest. She knew she wasn't going to let herself get tricked two times in one day...or in this case two times in one night. Feeling courageous, Fluttershy turned around and walked away from the mansion but as she did she got a visit from some orange ghosts. Fluttershy looked at the ghosts and screamed loudly. She covered her face with her hooves and dropped herself to the floor. The ghosts surrounded her and started laughing at her. Tears were running down her eyes.
"P-Please, somepony help meeeee...", said Fluttershy as she started crying.
Fluttershy couldn't do anything because she was too scared to move. The orange ghosts noticed someone also was walking in the forest, so they decided to scare the stranger. Fluttershy heard someone's voice echo throughout the forest.
"Mario...Mario...Mariooooo!", said the unknown stranger.
The ghosts pop out and scared the stranger. The stranger screamed and made Fluttershy scream too. Fluttershy stood up and started running with her eyes closed. She ran straight to the stranger and crased into him. Both of them fell to the floor. The orange ghosts laughed at both of them and vanished into the forest.
The stranger stood up and wiped off the dirt from his clothes and picked up his flashlight. The stranger saw Fluttershy and was shocked to see a yellow pony with wings on the floor. He tried to ignore the pony part about her and helped her up. He asked her if she was okay. Fluttershy stood up on her four hooves and nodded her head. Fluttershy opened her eyes and saw the stranger. She was shocked that she was looking at a human. The stranger told her that his name was Luigi. Fluttershy was nervous to talk to him. She stepped back slowly and away from him. Luigi asked her what was her name. Fluttershy was too shy to say something. She started whispering quietly and softly.
"Flutter...", said Fluttershy as she was looking away.
Luigi was confused, he told her if she can repeat what she had said.
"I'm...Fluttershy...", repeated Fluttershy and looked directly at him.
Luigi was shocked that he was hearing Fluttershy talk. He took a step back but he tripped and fell to the floor. Fluttershy was confused and asked Luigi was what was the matter.
"Y-You're a talking horse!" shouted Luigi in scared tone.
"No, I'm a pony not a horse!" replied Fluttershy.
Luigi was still shocked to hear her speak. Fluttershy looked at Luigi on the floor trembling and started to laugh. Luigi looked at Fluttershy and realized that there was nothing scary about a talking pony at the moment. Fluttershy told Luigi that there was nothing to be scared about, that she wouldn't hurt nobody, not even a tiny bug. Luigi stood up and walked towards Fluttershy. As he did that, the orange ghosts returned. They snuck up behind Fluttershy and scared her. Fluttershy screamed and dropped to the floor as she covered her eyes. The ghosts laughed at her. Luigi jumped in front of Fluttershy and shined his flashlight at the ghosts. The ghosts were stunned by the light and vanished. Fluttershy uncovered her eyes and saw Luigi standing in front of her.
"Nobody messes with my friends.", said Luigi as he saw the ghosts leave.
Luigi looked at Fluttershy and helped her stand up. Fluttershy had asked Luigi why he considered her as a friend of his. Luigi told her that she seems like a nice pony to talk to. Fluttershy then realized there was nothing scary about a human being.
Luigi asked Fluttershy what was she doing in the middle of a forest. Fluttershy explained everything. About the shining light, the abandoned mansion, the mirror, and also about the white objects with the long tongues. When Fluttershy mentioned the white objects with long tongues, Luigi stopped her. Luigi described the white objects in his part. Fluttershy said yes to everything he had said to describe them. Luigi told Fluttershy that those white objects are ghosts called Boos. Fluttershy stared into space with a scared face. She started remembering what had happened last night with the Boo that scared her back in the Everfree Forest. Fluttershy had asked Luigi why the boos took the Elements of Harmony to this world. Luigi didn't know what Fluttershy was talking about. Fluttershy explained what the Elements of Harmony were and also mentioned that her friends were sucked into this world too but she can't find them anywhere. She also told Luigi what would happen if she doesn't bring her friends and the Elements of Harmony back to Equestria. Luigi told Fluttershy that he would help her find her friends and the Elements of Harmony in one condition. He told Fluttershy that she must help him find his older brother Mario. Fluttershy cheered and agreed on helping him without question.
Luigi also told Fluttershy that his brother went into the mansion that was behind her. Fluttershy stopped cheering and heard what Luigi said. She didn't want to go into the mansion but she had already agreed on helping him. Luigi said that Mario should be in the mansion waiting for him. Fluttershy asked why his brother would wait for him in an old and scary mansion. Luigi told her that he had won the mansion in a contest he didn't even entered and Mario told Luigi that he'll meet up with him inside. He told her that there was no more time to explain. He started walking towards the mansion and Fluttershy followed him. Luigi opened the gate and as he did, the gate made a loud rusty sound. Luigi and Fluttershy both entered through the gate and walked slowly towards the mansion's door. The gate had slammed shut behind them and made them jump. They looked at the gate and then to each other and then continued walking to the door. Once they got to the door, Luigi reached for the doorknob. As he was about to grab the knob, there was a slam on the door from the other side. Luigi and Fluttershy got scared and ran back to the gate. They knew they needed to get inside to meet up with Mario. They walked back to the door and this time Luigi opened the door. As he opened the door, him and Fluttershy peeked their heads in to see if there was anyone inside.
"H-Hello?", said Luigi in a nervous tone.
"I-Is anypony in here...Twilight?", said Fluttershy while she looked around the mansion.
They both walked inside the mansion. Luigi flashed his flashlight around to see if anyone was there. Fluttershy saw a chandelier hanging in the middle of the room. She walked under it to take a better look. Luigi heard something shaking and pointed his flashlight at the chandelier. The chandelier fell and was going to hit Fluttershy. Fluttershy looked at the falling chandelier and stood there without thinking of moving. Luigi ran to Fluttershy and pushed her out of the way. The chandelier had stopped falling and was one foot off the floor. Luigi opened his eyes to see what had happened. He looked and realized that the chandelier was right atop of him and was about to fall on him. Luigi rolled out of the way. Fluttershy got up and looked at Luigi to see if anything happened to him. She ran to the chandelier and looked under it. The chandelier started to rise up back to the ceiling. Luigi stood up and wiped the dust off his clothes. They heard a laugh echo through the mansion. Luigi knew it was the work of the boos. Fluttershy ran to Luigi and told him if he was ok. Luigi told her that he was fine, he just wanted to find Mario so they can leave this place. Fluttershy saw a door that was across the entrance door. Luigi walked to the door and tried to open it but it was covered in some weird glowing web. There was nowhere to go but upstairs now.
When they went upstairs they saw another door. Luigi walked to the door but before he did he saw a trail of coins leading to another door down the hall. Fluttershy looked at the coins and wondered why were there bits on the floor. Luigi walked towards the coins and picked them up. He looked at the door and tried to open it. It was locked. Luigi was disappointed he couldn't get more coins and started to weep. Fluttershy was getting angry because Luigi was wasting time. Luigi got up from the floor and stopped weeping. He walked to the main door of the second floor and opened the door. Fluttershy rushed behind him so she wouldn't get left behind. Luigi walked in the room but he couldn't see a thing. The room was dark. Luigi turned on his flashlight and looked around the room. Fluttershy walked around and explored the room also. Luigi started to yell Mario's name but there was no answer. All of a sudden a group of orange ghosts appeared and surrounded them. Fluttershy and Luigi walked back and bumped into each other. They were back to back and looking at each other. Luigi flashed the light at the ghosts but not happened. Another ghost appeared but this time it wasn't an orange ghost, it was a pink ghost. The pink ghost went towards Fluttershy and Luigi to scare them but Luigi got his flashlight and flashed it on the pink ghost. The flash stunned the ghost and made it mad. The pink ghost charged his energy and punched Luigi. Luigi flew to the wall and hit it hard. Fluttershy saw Luigi get hurt and that made her angry. Fluttershy picked up the flashlight and flashed it to the pink ghost multiple times. It stunned the pink ghost and made its eyes hurt. The pink ghost vanished into the walls and the orange ghosts followed.
Fluttershy dropped the flashlight and screamed, "Nobody messes with my friends!"
Fluttershy went to Luigi and helped him up. They decided to leave the mansion. Luigi struggled to walk but Fluttershy said that she'll help him. Fluttershy told Luigi to get on top of her. She flapped her wings and flew out of the mansion.
"T-Thank you Fluttershy...", said Luigi in a tired voice as they were leaving the mansion
They exited the mansion went through the gate. Luigi got off Fluttershy and began to walk. As they walked away from the mansion, they noticed a cottage near the entrance of the gate. They both looked at each other and decided to go in the cottage. They wondered if someone inside could help them find Fluttershy's friends and Luigi's brother.
