My Little Final Destinationby Thunder IceChaptersChapter I: PremonitionAfter VisionSweet Apple DeathA Slice of MarshmallowRainblood DashSword of FateChapter I: PremonitionI have looked at this story. After a while, I looked at it again...and again...and again. Finally, I slammed my head against the wall, finally realizing that this story was complete, utter shit. Well, I didn't really slam my head against the wall...yet. But I'm serious. The story in its original form sucked, so I decided to change it up. BIG TIME. I'm completely remaking the story, but keeping the storyline. I will be keeping the old author notes on here because it's...kind of nostalgic. Also, before I continue, you people better enjoy your electricity while you can, because sometime in the near future, it's turning off. Muahahaha!! ... I'll tell you about that at the end of this chapter. Anyway, enjoy. The remaining text below this is the original author note. This is my first Final Destination/My Little Pony fanfic, so basically, if I'm not really good at it, I don't really care that much. I just decided to entertain you while you wait for updates on my other stories. Anyways, enjoy. My Little Final Destination It was sometime after 3:30, when Twilight Sparkle and the other Elements of Harmony had made their way to the Ponyville train station. Applejack had a special event to do in Appleoosa, so she invited her friends to come along. "Weeee! I love trains!" Pinkie Pie yelled as she entered one of the cabins of the train. She looked around for a seat in the nearly empty cabins. Finally, she picked a seat, next to a mare. Pinkie took out a bag of candy, and began to eat rather loudly, grossing out the mare. The rest of the group had picked some seats. Rainbow Dash sat down to a rather handsome stallion; Rarity did the same. Fluttershy sat alone, Spike sat next to Rarity, Applejack sat next to a mare, and Twilight sat with her new stallionfriend, Thunder Ice. Thunder was not really your typical stallion. He was very...different. He wasn't born in Equestria. He was born on a planet called Earth, and he was known as a Homo-Sapien, or human. There were less than 7 1/2 billion humans on Earth, as he explained to Twilight when he first arrived 2 1/2 years back. 2 1/2 years already. "Do you want the spot next to the window, Twi?" Thunder asked her with her nickname, giving her a faint blush. "No, it's alright. You can have it," she replied. Thunder then walked and sat down into the seat nearest to the window. Twilight sat right next to him. Once they were both seated, Thunder began to look around the cabin. It had a minimum number of ponies, but one pony manage to lock his gaze. Fluttershy. It had been already a year since he had broken up with the shy mare. Or, in this case, she broke up with him. After a few weeks with him, she realized that the rest of the relationship probably wouldn't end well. She didn't want to tell him in pony, so she wrote a letter to him. He became heartbroken, and locked himself in his house for days. Twilight eventually came over, and cheered him up. She realized why he was so heartbroken. Fluttershy was his only marefriend ever, Earth AND Equestria. Eventually, Twilight did more than just cheered him up. She kissed him, and that kiss made them a couple. Thunder's P.O.V. (will be for rest of story) Twilight managed to see me looking at Fluttershy. "Are you still upset about her?" She asked. Knowing I was caught, I quickly looked at her. "What? No. I've gotten over her," I lied, but she could easily see. "Thunder, you don't need to lie," Twilight said, smiling slightly. Knowing I couldn't hide it, I sighed. "I just...I just don't know what went wrong." "Don't worry about it. Fluttershy isn't really the expert for dating when it comes to stallions." "It's just that...we were going so good...and then I got the letter. My heart stopped...I didn't do anything for days...then you came..." Just thinking about that day made me blush, causing Twilight to giggle. Suddenly, she leaned towards me and gently pulled me into a kiss, which I gladly accepted. As we kissed, Twilight wrapped her forelegs around my shoulders, and I gently placed my hooves onto her flanks, earning a quiet moan. Just to the right of me, I could hear some laughter. I looked to see Rainbow Dash looking at our little action, which was making her giggle uncontrollably. Twilight heard this, and looked to see what it was. When she saw Rainbow looking at us, her face went scarlet red. I always found her blushes adorkably cute. "Never mind her, Twilight," I said to her. "R-Right, yeah," Twilight stuttered. Slowly, her blush went away. With my magic, I managed to take out a camera from my bag. "You know what we've never done yet?" "What?" I placed the camera in my hooves. "Take a picture together," I replied. "Oh, yeah," Twilight replied. She then leaned closed to me, and looked at the camera. I put my face right next to hers. Right before taking the picture, I decided to mess with her. Since I was right next to her, I put my mouth up to her ear, and whispered, "You look really sexy right now." Twilight's face went scarlet red once more, and once it did, I pressed the button on the camera. A flash blinded us for only a split second. "Y-You did that on purpose, d-didn't you?" Twilight asked, still blushing furiously. "Well, it's true," I said before smiling. Her blush did not fade. Suddenly, a voice appeared on the intercom of the train. "Attention, passengers. The train will now depart from Ponyville to Appleoosa. Dinner will be at 6:30 tonight, and we should arrive to Appleoosa by 12:00 noon tomorrow. Until then, enjoy your trip." Right after the pony said that, the train jolted forward a little. Slowly, we could hear the sounds of the wheels grinding on the metal tracks. The train began to move. We were well on our way to Appleoosa. It was about 10 minutes since we departed. I looked around the cabin once more. Applejack was just sitting, not really doing much; Pinkie was still eating her candy; Fluttershy was hugging a picture of some rabbits. D'awww. To me, it looked like Rainbow was seducing the stallion next to her; Spike was wearing a moustache to impress Rarity, who was not interested in the slightest. I looked down to my right shoulder. Twilight was laying against me; she had her forelegs wrapped around my right foreleg, and she was snoring in a way that made me D'awww inside. She looked adorkably...adorkable. Accidentally, I dropped a book that was in my lap, waking Twilight. "H-Huh?" Twilight looked around, then looked up to see me. "Sorry, Twi. Didn't mean to wake you," I apologized, a sheepish smile on my face. "Wh-What time is it?" "It's only been about 10 minutes." "Oh." Twilight sat up and rubbed her eyes. I looked outside the window for a few seconds, before a similar shriek startled me. I turned around to where the sound came from. I saw Pinkie sticking her head out the window. "Pinkie, get your head back in here! That's not safe!" Twilight yelled. "Oh, don't be such a party pooper, Twilight!" Pinkie replied, literally ignoring Twilight's plea, which made Twilight groan in annoyance. "Weeee! This is fun!" Pinkie yelled. Meanwhile, at the cockpit, the driver was checking over everything to make sure everything was okay. It was. Just about 50 feet from the train, the section of the tracks that switch from one side to the other began to change. Suddenly, it jammed, and the train was heading straight for it. The driver didn't seem to notice until it was too late. The moment the train struck the jammed tracks, the main cabin shook around, derailing from the tracks; a loose tire was shaken off, flinging into the air. Back in the other cabin, Pinkie continued to cheer in excitement. "I swear, one day, her head's just gonna end up clean off her body," I said to Twilight. The moment after I said that, Pinkie's screams of excitement became dead silent. I decided to turn around to see why. I nearly threw up at the sight. Pinkie fell to the ground, but her head! It was gone, sliced, chopped off! Suddenly, a large splatter of blood covered the windows, and the cabin began to shake. Ponies screamed from a mixture of seeing Pinkie beheaded, and the cabin vibrating. Twilight and I tried to unhook our seatbelts, but they wouldn't come off. In horror and fear, Twilight gripped me tightly; I even began to feel warm tears. I hugged her tightly, as well. As I saw the panic commence, I could see Applejack getting up. I saw her struggling to run to the door to get to the other cabin. Suddenly, the shaking of the cabin caused the large chandelier to fall from the ceiling right on top of Applejack. The center of the chandelier struck down onto her back, breaking it; another heavy part landed on her head, cracking it open, spilling blood onto the floor. "No!" I screamed as I saw another friend of mine die before my eyes. In one of the forward cabins, the shaking caused a gas can to fall, making it leak. The leaking gas poured out of a hole torn in the side of the train. This managed to touch the sparks of the wheels. Once it did, a large explosion obliterated the further cabin, but blasting a hole into ours. I then heard a terrorizing scream. I looked to the hole to see Rarity holding on as best as she could to her chair. Spike also tried to help her by grabbing one of her forelegs. He tried all he could to pull her back, but the baby dragon failed, and Rarity ended up getting sucked out of the train. She fell off the side of the mountain, before finally striking the bottom in a loud splat. Blood and guts spewed everywhere. "No..." Spike silently said in the chaos that occured around him. Suddenly, the seat he was still strapped to came loose, and flew out of the holed cabin. Spike screamed as he flew, before finally slamming into a tree, immediately killing him on impact. Rainbow saw in horror as her friends were sucked out to their deaths. Finally, she realized she had to get out of here. After she successfully unlatched her seatbelt, she began to fly towards the hole. "Rainbow Dash, help us!" I yelled to her in fear. Twilight sceamed as the train continue to shake. Rainbow heard me and looked to me. She then looked back to the hole, then back to me. "S-Sorry, you two! Every pony for themself!" She yelled to me. An explosion near the front of the cabin sent a long metal rod flying straight towards the cyan pegasus. Before Dash could react, the rod pierced her body, striking her heart. In an instant, the dead pegasus fell to the floor of the cabin. "Rainbow!!" Twilight yelled as she saw another friend die. Tears were streaming down her face by now. I gripped her tightly, keeping her safe... Another scream then pierced our sound barriers. We looked to the source; Fluttershy was holding onto her chair, trying not to get sucked out of the cabin. "Fluttershy! Grab my hoof!" Twilight yelled as she held her hoof out to her yellow friend. Fluttershy saw her, and began to reach out to Twilight. She tried and tried to reach her friend, but she couldn't. "I-I-I-I can't!!" Fluttershy stuttered, as fresh, hot tears streamed down her face, fearing the inevitable. Suddenly, she began to hear a grinding noise beneath her. She looked down; her seat was detacthing from the floor. Upon seeing this, Fluttershy quickly tried to unbuckle herself, but her seatbelt would not unhook. She screamed. Finally, her seat detatched from the floor, and the helpless pegasus was sucked out. Since we were still on the side of a mountain, Fluttershy fell nearly 150 feet to her death. Since she was in a chair, she couldn't open her wings fully. If she couldn't open her wings, she was flightless. After a few seconds, she slammed into the ground with a powerful force. Her jaw had been ripped from its original resting place. Her stomach slammed against the ground, ripping it open from the impact. Her head had been broken like a vase falling to the floor. Her brain matter and blood spilled all over the ground. It was now only Twilight and I left on the still moving train. I couldn't see it, but I looked outside the hole of the cabin to see the cabin in front of us derail, and fall to the bottom of the mountain. Since it still had the gas cans inside of it, I could hear an explosion a few moments later. "Thunder...if we don't make it out alive...I just want you to know..." Twilight's voice cracked up as she spoke to me, "I love you." More fresh tears rolled down her face; mine as well. "I love you, too," I said, my voice cracking up, too. We decided that if we were going to die, we would die with one last kiss. I began to lean towards her; she leaned towards me. Suddenly, as I was about to kiss her, she was quickly pulled away from me. Her seat had detatched from the floor. I quickly tried as best as I could to grab her, but I was too slow. She was sucked out of the train. "Twilight!!!" I screamed as my marefriend was sucked out to her death. So many things flashed through my head...visions that would never be...our wedding...our first honeymoon...our first child...it all slipped away so suddenly...why? Finally, after so long, the cabin finally de-railed. I felt myself tipping sideways, so I knew I was falling. I heard a huge 'BOOM!'. Then, I felt pain. Then...I felt nothing. It was all over... Well...or so I thought... Well, there's the first chapter, remade. I still think it's pretty bad, but it's better than the original. I gotta stop being such a damn bitch. :3 Anyway, you remembered at the beginning of the chapter when I said to enjoy your electricity for now? Well, I created a new blog, called, "Making "Revolution" a Reality". I don't feel like making more of this author note, so just look at that blog and join me. :D P.S. I'm a crazy fuck. After VisionHere's the second remade chapter. Enjoy...I guess. Suddenly, a bright flash blinded me for only a split second. I blinked for a few seconds. What just happened? "Y-You did that on purpose, didn't you?" I heard a voice next to me. Wait, I know that. I quickly looked to my left. Twilight was...sitting next to me? Was I just...dreaming? I couldn't have...it felt so real...maybe...maybe it wasn't a dream. Maybe it was a sign. A sign to get off. I quickly looked out my window. Luckily, we were still at the train station. I began to sweat. If that vision's coming true, I'm not sticking around here to wait. "Thunder? Are you okay?" Twilight asked next to me. I quickly looked at her. "C'mon, Twilight. We're getting off," I said to her. "What? Why?" My voice became shaky for a moment. "The train's gonna crash." "What?" Twilight became confused. "Thunder, you're scaring me." I quickly unbuckled my seatbelt and got up. Once I was in the aisle, I quickly unbuckled Twilight's seatbelt, and grabbed her hoof. "Hey! Thunder! Let go of me!" Twilight yelled to me, before slapping my hoof, causing me to let go of her. I looked back to her. "We need to get off now, Twilight," I said, nearly yelling. "Thunder," Twilight looked into my eyes, "I'm worried about you. Please, just...tell me what's going on." After she said that, two train officers walked into the cabin. "Is everything alright in here?" One of them asked. I quickly walked to them. "Sir, we need to get everypony off this train." One of the officers put their hooves on my shoulders. "Sir, why don't you just sit back do-" I cut him off by hitting his hooves off of my shoulders. "No, I will not sit down! These ponies are in grave danger! I saw it! I saw the train crash! It fell off the mountain-side! The cabin exploded! Everypony died! I saw it!" I yelled in his face. "Sir, I will remove you from this train if you do not calm down!" "Why won't you listen to me?! I'm trying to warn you here!" Finally, the officers grabbed and dragged me out of the train. The whole time, I was yelling to the passengers to get off the train. They didn't bother listening to me. A few minutes later, I was placed into the lobby of the train station. The train sat just outside the large window. "Don't move," one of the officers said to me. "Sir, you don't understand! That train's going to crash!" "That train is one of the most safest moving locomotives in Equestria. It is perfectly safe." After that, the officers headed out the door we came in. However, one officer stood next to the door. I just eyed him for a moment. I sighed and slumped in my seat. As I did, I could hear the whistle of the train, and I saw it start up. Wait, am I forgetting something? I gasped. Twilight! They're still on the train!! Just then, the doors of the lobby opened up. I looked to see Twilight and the others standing there, looking at me. I quickly ran to Twilight and hugged her tightly. "Oh, thank Celestia you're okay!" I said to her. Twilight didn't reply. Instead, she gently pushed me away and looked at me. "What happened back there?" She asked, looking at me like I was a complete stranger to her. I don't blame her. It's not everyday your boyfriend - excuse me, stallionfriend - suddenly says he has a dream about a train crash. Slowly, I head back to the seat I sat in and sat back down. I was silent for a few moments before I finally spoke up. "I...had this...dream...or premonition...vision...whatever you want to call it. Anyway, it was about us. And the train. Something happened, and the train..." I paused, "the train crashed. I don't know how, or why, all I know is that the train crashed with us on it, and we all...died." Rarity was the first to respond to me. "Darling, it was simply a dream. There's no need to get riled up about it." "But...it felt so real. Not real like a lucid dream or anything, but it felt like I was actually awake," I responded to her. I stopped and remembered what I thought earlier. "What if...what if it isn't a dream? What if it was a warning? A warning to me?" It became silent as the girls exchanged glances. Suddenly, laughter broke out as they all laughed at my question. "Oh-ho, man! That is the most redic-" Rainbow was cut off. *CRASH!* The windows of the station lobby all shatter, causing us to cover ourselves and scream. "What was that!" Twilight demanded to know. We then looked out the window. Our eyes widened, Rarity began to tear up, and I sat there speechless. The train, not too far from the station, was burning and falling down the hill at a high speed. Flames completely scorched the train, possibly from an explosion in the cabin. While we saw it falling, we all sat there, speechless. After a few moments of silence, Rainbow Dash managed to ask me a question I still haven't yet answered... "How did you know?" Short, yes, but it's better than the original chapter. I critique my own stories. But hey, don't we all? All I gotta say at the moment. Oh yeah, in English class today, we watched WALL-E. We're looking for how it relates to "The Last Book in the Universe." :D I'm the most random brony you'll ever meet. EVER. Sweet Apple DeathMy Little Final Destination Started right after publishing the 3rd chapter. I'm a quickie. :D Enjoy. Chapter IV: Death Apple Acres Twilight's Home 4:00 p.m. Thunder and Twilight had fallen asleep in each other's forelegs about 8 minutes ago. Twilight was feeling tired and Thunder felt tired as well. Thunder was the first to wake up. He slowly trotted into Twilight's Library as she slept. He looked through the book section "V." After about a minute of searching, He found nothing. "Oh, Man. I guess there's no book about Visions of the Future," He said to himself, Disappointed. Spike, Who saw Thunder trot into the Library, Came down from his bed up top to talk to Thunder. "Uhh...Hey, Thunder." Thunder looked to his left to See Spike standing there. "Oh, Hey, Spike." Spike felt a little guilty for not believing Thunder about the vision. "Uhh...I just wanted to say that...I'm sorry. I didn't know your vision would come true." Thunder chuckled. "You don't need to be sorry. I didn't know the vision would come true either. Heheh...So...How's Rarity doin'? You know, After this whole thing?" "She's okay...Still a little scared, Though." "Yeah, Twilight's the same...I just hope I can keep her safe. Actually, I hope I can keep everyone safe." Spike smiled at his friend. "You kept us from going on the train. That counts, Right?" Thunder smiled back. "I guess you're right. Hehe..." Suddenly, Rainbow Dash came in through the Window. "Guys..." Tears swelled up in her eyes. Thunder was instantly worried about his friend. "Dash? What's wrong?" "Pinkie...She's...She's..." Thunder knew what she was getting at, And his eyes widened. "Where?" "Sugarcube Corner." He began heading downstairs to go get Twilight. Sugarcube Corner Downtown Ponyville 4:05 p.m. Rainbow Dash, Twilight, Thunder, And Spike reached Sugarcube Corner, Which was covered with reporters, And Medical workers. Two medical workers carried a stretcher, And a body that was in a bag, Which Was placed into a Medical Carriage. The four of them knew that Pinkie was in that bag. They were so close to the bag, That they could smell her burnt flesh. "Pinkie..." Twilight said before bursting into tears. Thunder held her tightly. "It's okay, Twilight...Shhh..." Thunder calmly said, Trying to keep her calm. A few moments later, Applejack, Rarity, and Fluttershy arrived at the scene, As well. "What in Tarnation happen'd here?" Applejack instantly asked. Thunder looked at his Cowmare friend. He was silent for a moment, Then spoke up. "...Pinkie's dead." "What? How...?" She asked. "She...She got locked in the Kitchen oven. She was cooked alive," He replied, His voice cracked a little. "Oh no..." Fluttershy said, A tear in her eye. Then, Out of the corner of Thunder's eye, He saw him...The Detective Stallion he met just a few hours ago. He just stared at Thunder. "Thunder...I wanna go home," He could hear Twilight speak. He looked down at her, And smiled faintly. "Okay." He kissed her Forehead gently. "We'll see you girls later..." He said to the others, Who were still in shock at what they learned. Spike stayed with Rarity as Thunder and Twilight left the area. As Twilight and Thunder left, Thunder looked back to where the Stallion was, But he wasn't there. He was gone. He then looked back at Twilight, A tear in her eye. He slowly placed his left hoof up to her eye, And wiped away her tear. She looked at him and faintly smiled. "It's okay..." He then got close to her, And kissed her cheek, Hoping to make her feel better. She would never feel better after this... July 16, 2012 Ponyville Graveyard 3:14 p.m. A large group of Ponies were sitting in seats, In front of a coffin that held the body of Pinkie Pie. Above the coffin was a collection of pictures of Pinkie, Smiling as a Filly, Then slowly growing up, The last Picture showing her eating a Cupcake, The treat she liked the most. Then, A Tombstone behind the coffin had writing on it: PINKAMENA DIANE PIE July 12, 19994 - July 15, 20012 A friend taken too soon A White Stallion stood up at a podium above the coffin, And spoke into a microphone. "We are here today, To commemorate the loss of a good Pony, A good mare...And a Good friend. Pinkamena Diane Pie was the best Pony there was...She was a fantastic baker, And there was nopony that could compare to her..." His voice trailed off as Thunder looked at Twilight, Who was sitting next to him, Crying. He slowly placed a foreleg around her, And held her safely. The Stallion continued. "Who could her forget the smile she always kept on her face? ...Or the songs she always sang? ...Or the dances she always did...? Now...Would anypony else like to say something about her...?" Pinkie was one of Thunder's best friends, So he thought it would be best to say something. He raised his hoof. The Stallion nodded, And Thunder slowly trotted up to the podium. He stood on his back legs, And began to speak. "I...I don't have much to say...But...I would like everypony to know...That Pinkie was a good friend to me...To her friends...To everypony...When we always felt down...She cheered us up...When we had parties, She was there with sweet treats...She lightened up moods, And put smiles on everypony's face..." "I remember one time, On Jokes and laughs Day (Fake name for April Fools Day), I remember opening my house door, And seeing her standing there, A pie in her hand. And her throwing it at my face...It gave me a smile...It's...Just hard to know that...She's gone...I will dearly miss her...Her friends will miss her...And...That's...All I have to say..." Thunder slowly got down from the podium, And trotted back to his seat. "Thank you, Thunder," The white stallion said. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- *Ponyville Graveyard* 3:28 p.m. There was now five of the Mane six, Along with Spike and Thunder, As they began to leave the Cemetery. Rarity and Spike were holding hands/hooves, Rarity saddened deeply still. "We'll see you guys later...Rarity and I are gonna head to the boutique." Spike said. "Alright...See you later..." Twilight managed to say. As Spike and Rarity left, Thunder, Fluttershy, Applejack, Twilight, and Rainbow Dash stood there. "Well...I guess I better get back to the farm...Big Mac and the other's will wanna know where I am." Applejack said. "Okay," Was all Thunder said. Soon, Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash flew off to their own places, Leaving Twilight and Thunder there. Soon, They left Pinkie's grave, and Headed back to Twilight's home. Twilight knew that Pinkie's death would haunt her forever. Well, Not just Pinkie's death... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- *Sweet Apple Acres* 3:45 p.m. Applejack just finished Bucking another tree, Filling a few buckets with more apples. "Phew..." She sighed, As she placed one of the buckets on her back, And began trotting into the barn. When she entered the barn, She climbed a ladder carefully, And placed the Bucket on the top floor of the barn. "Alrighty..." She climbed down to get the rest of the buckets. Meanwhile, A heavy wind burst through the Barn, Knocking a barrel onto the bucket, Sending it to the edge. Applejack came back with another bucket on her back. "Brrghh. Mighty chilly," She said to himself. Then, Suddenly, The bucket fell over the edge, Toward the ground. It crashed into a rake, Which sent the handle pointing up, Catapulting an apple towards Applejack. "What in Tarna..." Was all she said before the Apple flew right into her mouth, Near her throat. It got stuck there, And instantly began choking the cowmare. As Applejack tried Desperately to remove the Apple, It would not budge. Soon, Within seconds, Applejack felt her life beginning to flash before her eyes; She remembered first getting her Cutie Mark, She saw the time they visited Appaloosa...She saw herself. But, Then, She saw a sign of hope enter the barn: Big Macintosh. "Hey, Sis, I gots the...SIS!" Big Mac yelled at the sight of his sister choking. He quickly ran to her, Placed a hoof carefully into her mouth, And quickly pulling out the apple. She was unharmed. She started breathing hard, Getting as much air as possible. "Sis, Are you Alrigh'?" He asked her. After she caught her breath, She began to speak up. "Yeah..*Inhale* I'm...*Exhale* Okay..." She got up. "Thank you, Big brother..." She then began trotting back to the fallen apples to gather them back up, When she stepped on the Rake that hid in the hay. The Rake instantly flew up, And the pointy "Stems" of the rake stabbed directly into her head, Through her skull, Coming out of the other side. She was instantly dead. Big Mac screamed as he saw his sister get impaled by the rake, And slowly fall down. He ran towards her, And looked at her already lifeless body. ***"SIS! SIIIIISS!"* He yelled at the top of his lungs, Clutching his Dead sister in his forelegs.** He slowly began to cry. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- *Pretty good, IMO. Well, Here's the second death for you. And also, I just found out that I'm the only person who has done a Crossover between MLP and FD. I must be a lucky motherfucker. Next chapter up soon.* A Slice of MarshmallowMy Little Final Destination Next update. :D Chapter V: A Slice of Marshmallow Sweet Apple Acres 4:00 p.m. As medical carriages and reporters gathered at the barn, Big Mac sat on a Hay Cube, Tears flowing down his eyes. He continued to cry, And then Thunder and the others showed up. Thunder was the first to speak. "Big Mac, Are you okay? What happened?" He asked. Big Mac couldn't speak much, But he managed to get some words out. "A...A.J's Dead..." Thunder and the others' eyes widened in shock. "What? How?" Big Mac took his time to speak. "She...She was bucking apples and placing those there apples in that barn...When I saw her, She was choking on an apple. I took it out...She thanked me...She walked back to the fallen bucket of apples, And she stepped on a rake, And the stems of it went right through her head...If we had just cleaned that barn..." Thunder was confused. "Wait...If she stepped on the rake, How did the stems go up? She had to have stepped on the Stems in order for it to go up." Big Mac looked at him a little angry looking. "It was that there Double Rake yous made." "Oh..." Thunder said, Feeling guilty. Then, Big Mac looked to his right, And saw Applebloom sitting there. "Applebloom..." A tear came from her eye. "Applejack Ain't comin' back?" Big Mac nodded. Quickly, Applebloom ran into her brother's chest, And began crying, Knowing that her sister was now dead. "Thanks to your stupid rake you gave us...She ain't comin' back." "ME? It was YOU who took it from me!" Thunder instantly yelled. Twilight slowly trotted up to Thunder, Trying to calm him down. "Thunder, Calm down..." Thunder, overtaken by anger, Turned around to Twilight. "Shut up, Twilight!" He yelled, Not controlling himself. Twilight's eyes widened. Her voice quivered. Then, A tear slowly came down her face. Thunder's face went from anger to shock at what he had just done. His eyes widened as well. A few more tears came down Twilight's face. Thunder stood there, Still shocked by his own action. "Twilight..." Instantly, Twilight began running away from everypony, Away from the barn, and back to her home, Crying. Thunder watched as she ran away. "Look what you's done. You's upset her," Big Mac said. Thunder didn't bother turning around. He looked at the others, Them having a shocked reaction. Then, Thunder looked back to where Twilight headed, And quickly began bolting to follow her. "Twilight, Wait!" He yelled. The others, Including Big Mac and Applebloom, Just watched as he ran to follow her. Twilight's Bedroom 4:10 p.m. Thunder had managed to reach Twilight's home. He opened the door to her living room to see nopony there. "Twilight?" He trotted into the hallway of the first floor. He opened doors that led to many rooms. "Twilight, You in here?" He asked in one of the rooms. In about half a minute, He went upstairs, Hoping to find her up there. He reached the door to her bedroom, But when he reached it, He heard some sniffling sounds from a distance, To where the bed would be. He knocked on the door, Hoping she would respond. "Go away," She said, Sniffling. He spoke out to her. "Twilight?" "Go away, Thunder," She added. He tried to open the door, But it was locked. "Twilight, Please, Open the door." "Please, Just go away." A few moments later, She heard hoofsteps slowly fading. She was then met by silence. The silence was broken as she sniffled. Suddenly, She heard a voice behind her. "I'm sorry, Twi." She flipped around on her bed, To see Thunder standing there. She screamed. "Whoa!" Thunder yelled. "H-How did you get in here?" She stuttered. Thunder nervously chuckled and pointed to the window next to her bed, Which was open. Twilight decided to move onto the "Scene" at the farm. "Why...Why did you yell at me?" Thunder forgot about that for a second. His face slowly turned to sadness. "I was...I was mad at Big Mac, Saying I was responsible for Applejack...I completely filled with un-needed anger, That when you spoke up...I couldn't stop myself...Until It was too late...I upset you...I...I hurt you...Emotionally..." A tear fell from his eye. "I'm sorry, Twilight..." He trotted over to the bed, And sat down. "I can never forgive myself for what I did to you...Please forgive me, Twi..." Twilight slowly smiled, And leaned over to him. "I forgive you..." She said, Before placing her lips on his. He slowly gave into the kiss, And kissed back, His forelegs wrapping around her. Twilight began moaning into Thunder's mouth as they shared the warm, Passionate kiss. Slowly, Thunder and Twilight slowly began to fall onto the bed, Still kissing, Until Twilight broke the kiss. "W-Wait..." "What?" Twilight looked to the window, Still open. "Oh, Right..." Thunder chuckled as he got up, Walked towards the window, And closed it. "Hehe..." Twilight smiled and giggled. Thunder then walked back to the bed. At Rarity's home, The Carousel Boutique, She was starting on a new dress, Trying to forget about her friends' deaths. 'First Pinkie, Now Applejack?' She thought to herself. "This doesn't make much sense," Spike said, Sitting down at a table. "First, It was Pinkie, Now it's Applejack?" Rarity sighed. "I know, Spike," She said. She walked over to the Invention that was created by famous builders: The Dress Maker 2000. The Dress Maker 2000 was a large Slicing machine, Capable of Slicing thick clothing, Cloth for dresses, And, If they were stupid enough to get in the way, Ponies. "I'm confused, As well." Rarity added, As she pulled the lever on the machine down, Sending the large, Sharp sword into the cloth, Slicing the cloth in half. But, As the sword came down, A large nail that held the Sword in place unloosened itself a little bit. "If we were there to have helped her, We could've saved her," Spike said. Rarity grabbed another piece of cloth and placed it down under the sword. She pulled the lever, And the sword came down and sliced the cloth in two. The nail unloosened more. Spike slowly got up, And walked to Rarity, Who had a tear in her eye. "Hey," He said, Slowly and carefully wiping the tear out of her eye. "It's okay..." She slowly smiled. He then leaned to her, And gently embraced her in a kiss. Back at Twilight's home, Twilight was laying on her back in the bed, With Thunder on top. Thunder kept kissing her body, Making her moan, And giggle as it tickled. Then, Thunder slowly got lower and lower, Until he reached her wet femslit. He looked up to her and smiled before placing his tongue into her Marehood, Licking around. Twilight loudly gasped as a response. Thunder liked the taste. It tasted a very sweet taste. Soon, He brought his head up, And wiped off his mouth so he could kiss her once more. After the kiss, Thunder got his hard Member positioned near her entrance. "Are you ready...?" He asked her, Pretty much cooing the question. She nodded, Smiling. "Please...?" She whispered, Quietly begging for it. He smiled again. As he slowly slid himself into her, He had felt himself reach her hymen. He tore through it, Ending her virginity. When he looked down to Twilight, He saw her eyes closed tightly, A tear or two coming down her face. Thunder quickly brought his lips to hers, Not being too rough, And began kissing her. After the kiss, Twilight slowly nodded, Motioning him to continue. Thunder then slowly began thrusting in and out of her, Making her moan in the process. Thunder's thrusts slowly increased, Making Twilight moan louder and longer. "Thunder..." She moaned. The sound of them flapping against each other echoed throughout the bedroom, Making their love-making louder, But the Walls were sound-proof, So nopony could hear. Thunder then felt his Climax coming. "Twi...I'm...I'm gonna..." "Th-Thunder...I...Ah...I...!" She moaned. Just a few moments later, They both released themselves. They basically released their fluids at the same time, And much of it leaked out of Twilight and onto the bed. They moaned each other's names in Ecstasy. "A-A-A-A-A-A-Aahhhh!!!" Twilight's scream was very shaky. Just about half a minute later, After the climaxes ended, Thunder slowly pulled out of Twilight and laid down next to her, Holding her in his forelegs. "I love you, Twilight..." She slowly turned her head around. "I love you, Too...Thunder." They pulled each other in for another passionate kiss, And they slowly fell asleep, Thunder holding Twilight close. Back at The Carousel Boutique, Rarity had just finished cutting the cloth she needed. "I gotta go, Rarity...Twilight probably needs me...I'll see you later...Okay?" Spike said to her. She looked at him, And smiled. "Okay...Bye, Spike." Before he left, However, He planted one more kiss on Rarity's lips, And began walking to the door. Meanwhile, The nail in the Dress Maker had unloosened enough to pop out. It quickly slipped out, And the sword that stood up to the ceiling began falling down towards Rarity. Before Rarity could look back, The Sword Sliced through the center of her body, Slicing through her skin and landing on the floor with a bang. Some blood splashed everywhere. Spike turned back to see the bloody mess, And Rarity, Who was literally split in two. "RARITYYYY!" He screamed as he saw the two halves of her fall to the floor. He ran to the sight, And looked at her sliced corpse: Organs fallen out, Blood leaking everywhere... "No...Rarity..." Spike began to cry, Just looking at his dead marefriend. "Why....WHYYY?!" He continued to cry. Death had taken it's next victim... Well, How did you like this chapter? Good...? Bad...? Enough? Good. I wasn't sure if The Carousel Boutique was Rarity's home. But, Now I do. :D Hope you liked this chapter! :D Rainblood DashMy Little Final Destination Updating cause I wanna. Enjoy. Chapter VI: Rainblood Dash At Twilight's home, Thunder and Twilight slept quietly in Twilight's bed. Thunder slowly woke up, And slowly got up from bed, Hoping not to awaken his marefriend. He looks out the window after putting his clothes on (Sorry that I forgot to mention those; Check the Profile Pic). He views the calm, Quiet Village of Ponyville, The sun only at the horizon of the far lands. He sighed and smiled, Looking back at Twilight. She...She looked so beautiful. Then, All of a sudden, He could hear sirens...Sirens from a medical carriage. Seconds later, He saw a medical carriage ride down the street, Towards the Carousel Boutique. "What the..." He then got the hint another one of his friends was taken as well. "No..." He quickly bolted to the bed, And shook Twilight to wake her. "Twilight...Wake up." Twilight then woke up to see Thunder, With a worried look on his face. "Thunder? What's wrong?" "We need to get down to the Boutique. I think there's been an accident." Twilight knew what he meant. Quickly, She got up out of her bed, And followed Thunder, Who was running out of the door. Carousel Boutique 5:00 p.m. They reached Rarity's home within a minute or two. They weren't really far. When they reached the home, Ambulance crews were placing yet another body bag into an Ambulance. When Twilight looked over to a bench, She could see Spike...Sitting there...Crying. Thunder saw as well, And the two began walking towards him slowly. As they reached him, They could hear his cries behind his claws. "Spike..." Twilight said, Hoping to help him. Spike began to speak. "I promised her...I promised her...That she would be safe, And I...Broke the promise...If I had known a little bit earlier, I could've stopped that sword from..." He couldn't finish. He sighed and shuddered. "I'm sorry..." Twilight walked up to him, And hugged her friend. After Spike, Twilight, And Thunder headed back to Twilight's home after about 15 minutes, Spike just sat down, Not bothering to get up. "Spike..." Twilight said as she walked over to him and sat down next to him. "Please...Tell us what happened..." Spike took a deep breath, And began to speak. "We were in the shop, And Rarity was cutting clothing with that Dressmaking sword thingy. And, Just when I was about to leave..." He shudders for a second before continuing, "The sword came down through the center of her body, Slicing her in two..." He sighs and places his face into his claws. "It doesn't make sense...First, It was Pinkie, Then Applejack, And now...Rarity?" Thunder then thought back to his vision of the Train Crash. The Deaths...Pinkie...Applejack...Rarity...Then...He started getting a weird feeling...It was like...He had seen this before...Uh oh... "Guys?" He spoke up. Twilight turned around, And Spike looked up. "I don't think this was an accident..." Twilight was confused, "What do you mean?" Thunder took some time to remember what to say. "Back in my Time, In the year...2000, There was this movie...You guys know what movies are, Right?" They both nodded. He continued. "Anyway, There was this movie...Called, "Final Destination," Where this human Teenager and his school class is going to Paris. He boards a plane, And eventually has a vision that the plane is going to explode...He freaks out, And about 8 people got off the plane...Minutes later...The Plane explodes. And then, The people started dying in order the way they died if they had stayed on the plane." Twilight was still a little confused, "What does this have to do with any of this?" "I had a vision that the train was gonna crash. And, Now...We're dying in the order the way we died if we stayed on the train. First, It was Pinkie...Then, Applejack...And now...Rarity." Twilight began to believe him a tiny bit. "Well...Who's next?" Thunder then slowly began looking at Spike. Spike didn't know why he was looking at him, Until he got the hint. Then, Slowly, Spike began to chuckle. "You've gotta be joking. Really? Just because the three of them died like that, Doesn't mean it's like the vision." Spike then got up from the seat, And began walking to the door. "I'm...I'm gonna go for a walk. I'll see you later..." He opened the door, And walked out. Thunder, On the other hoof, Was worried now. Twilight looked at him worriedly, "Thunder?" Thunder looked at her. "He came after Rarity...He's next." Twilight's eyes widened. She then began running out of the door, Thunder instantly following. "Spike, Wait!" Twilight yelled. Ponyville Construction site 6:35 p.m. Spike had reached the construction site of Downtown Ponyville, And he could see that construction workers were still working on the site. He decided to head to the park, And going through the Construction site was the quickest way. "Thunder can't be correct. Just because he saw some movie about a vision and deaths in order doesn't mean it connects to real life...Can it?" He began looking around the area. He saw a large concrete brick being held up by wires, And a large container also held up by wires. Those were the only things being picked up right now. Well, For now... Up in the container crane, Two Construction ponies were slowly trying to move the container safely up on top of a building still in construction. But, As one of the construction ponies inspected the wires holding up the container, They flinched as one snapped, Tilting the container, And putting strain on the other wires. Back on the ground, Spike had no idea what was happening, For he didn't see, Nor hear it. "SPIIIIKKEE!" He turned around to see Thunder and Twilight running towards him. "Oh, What now?" Back up to the container, Another wire snapped, And eventually, The Container had half of it's wires left, Leaving it to swing down. And...It was swinging towards Spike. As Spike saw the container flying towards him, He couldn't move one bit. Then...He felt somepony grab him and push him out of the way. He then felt himself hit the ground. He opened his eyes and saw Thunder sitting on top of him. "You alright, Man?" Thunder asked, Pulling Spike onto his feet. "Yeah." Twilight managed to reach them, And heard their conversation. "Wait...If Spike was next...But, He was skipped...Who goes after him?" A few moments later, Rainbow Dash appeared, With a suprised look on her face. She landed to her hooves. "Oh, Celestia. What happened here?" She asked. Thunder looked at her with a worried look. Then, The Container that nearly hit spike crashed into the Large concrete brick, Instantly destroying the Wires from the force. The Concrete brick began falling. It was right in the path above Rainbow Dash. A few moments later, Before Dash could even look up, The Large concrete structure fell on top of her, Crushing her to a bloody pile of smashed up organs and concrete. Thunder, Twilight and Spike screamed as blood splattered onto them. All they could see of Dash was her remaining foreleg. "Dash..." Thunder quietly said to himself. Nopony's safe... What did you think? Good? Bad? Cheesy? Meh. It may look a little stupid, Because I was working on this at like, 2:00 in the morning. I'm so fucking tired. Anyway, Gotta go. Sword of FateMy Little Final Destination Updated. Yeah. Chapter VII: Sword of Fate 7:40 p.m. Twilight's Home Thunder, Twilight, And Spike came back from the Construction site after the Ambulance picked up the remains of Dash's body, And sat in Twilight's Living room, Still shocked after the scene that occured. "So...The order we died in your vision..." Spike said before continuing, "Is the same order we die in real life?" Thunder nodded. "It's the same way it happened in the past 5 movies. Although, The fourth one wasn't really that good, I mean, The animation is horrible, And..." He was cut off by Twilight. "Thunder...This is serious..." She said, Her voice still shaken. He looked back at her. "I'm sorry, Twilight. That just happens to me now..." He added before continuing, "Death has a specific Pattern for it's victims, And a specific death. Basically, For example, Pinkie, Applejack, Rarity, And Dash Died in that order. In real life, It happened. And, Soon, When the next victim dies, He'll go onto us. Appearently, Death hates to be cheated..." Spike was worried, "You're saying that...We can't stop this?" Thunder sighed, "Pretty much. Well...Like at the construction site...Your death was supposed to happen there, But I got you out of the way, Which meant that you cheated death. But, Death wasn't finished. He decided to skip you, And go on to the next victim, Which was Dash." Twilight was still worried about the next victim. "Thunder...In your vision...Who was after Dash?" She asked him. "Well, Let's see...Pinkie, A.J., Rarity, Spike, Dash, And..." When Thunder knew the next name, His eyes widened, His heart pounded against his chest, And he shuddered. "No..." Twilight was worried still, "Who's next?" She asked him. Slowly, Thunder looked back up at the two, And whispered with fear. "Fluttershy." Twilight and Spike's eyes widened with shock. Fluttershy was next after Dash, And Fluttershy...Well, They didn't know where she was. Suddenly, They heard a knock at the door. Thunder slowly got up and trotted to the door. He opened it up, And saw that nopony was there. "Hello?" He called out. Then, He looked on the ground, And saw a white paper. He picked it up with his hooves. It read: HEAD TO SUGARCUBE CORNER. YOUR YELLOW FRIEND IS THERE. SAVE HER. The paper didn't have a signature, But Thunder knew that the pony was telling them to go now. "What is it?" Twilight asked. Thunder turned around and held up the paper, "It's a sign saying we should go. Now." He said, Before running out of the door, And running towards Sugarcube corner. "Thunder, Wait!" Twilight yelled, Before bolting out the door as well. Spike also followed. As Thunder kept running, He kept thinking about Fluttershy. "I hope it's not too damn late..." Meanwhile, Behind one of the trees near Twilight's home, The black Detective stallion watched as Thunder, Twilight, and Spike ran towards the Bakery. "Good luck..." The detective said quietly. Sugarcube Corner 7:45 p.m. Fluttershy was sitting at a table, That had a picture of her friends, Pinkie, Rarity, Applejack, And Dash. She was all by herself, Until Big Mac sat down opposite from her. "Hey," He said to the shy mare. "Oh...Big Mac. I didn't know you were here." "Just got here." He said, Grinning faintly at her. He then grabbed the picture of Applejack. He sighed. "Ah just can't believe she's gone..." "I know...I miss her..." Meanwhile, Near the Cupcake Bar near the Kitchen, There was a Wall Plaque holding a large sword. It was held up by a rusty nail. Above the plaque was a small Pipe that began dripping a type of acidic water on the nail, Corroding it drop by drop. "So...How is it at the farm, Now that...You know...?" Big Mac sighed, "Not so well...With A.J. gone, It's difficult bucking all them apple trees by mahself. Applebloom won't speak much. The whole family is falling apart since A.J.'s passing." "Oh, My...Maybe I could help?" "That'd be kinda ya...But Ah don't want ya ta get hurt." "Oh...Okay then." By now, The Nail had corroded so much that it was nearly about to break, Which would allow the sword to fall, And if Somepony was close, kill them. "I...Gotta head back to the barn...Hopefully, I can get Applebloom to speak," Big Mac spoke. "Okay...Bye..." "Later, Miss." Big Mac got up from the seat, And headed for the door. He pulled it open and walked out. Fluttershy sighed, And got up, Heading to the Cupcake bar to grab a few cupcakes before leaving. As she neared the Plaque holding the sword, Which was about to fall any second on her, She heard the door of the shop burst open. "FLUTTERSHY!" Fluttershy looked to the door to see Thunder, Twilight, And Spike there. "Huh?" Thunder began running towards her. Just then, She looked up and saw the sword begin to come down. Her eyes widened, Until she felt Thunder push her out of the way. Thunder ended up getting into the path of the oncoming sword, Which sliced his stomach, And he fell to the floor, The sword landing next to him. "No..." Twilight said, Before running to Thunder's side. When she reached him, She saw as a line cut across Thunder's stomach was seeping blood. Everyone that was in the shop began gathering around the scene. "Thunder? THUNDER?" A very Frightened Twilight asked. Thunder was very dizzy, And he slowly looked at Twilight and Fluttershy, Who got up and went right next to Twilight. "F..Fluttersh-shy...Are you...O-kay?" Fluttershy, Who had a tear in her eye, Nodded lightly. Thunder then slowly looked over to Spike. "Sp-Spike...T...Take care of them for me..." Just a few moments after he said that, Thunder's eyes closed. Twilight was ready to cry. "No...Thunder...Please...Don't go..." She closed the wound as much as she could, Then, She started CPR. "Come on, Thunder...Come on..." Tears began falling down Twilight's face, As well as Spike's and Fluttershy's. "Please...Thunder...You can't..." Tears also began falling down Fluttershy's face. She tried to speak. "N-No...D-Don't die..." Twilight continued to do CPR on Thunder. She then did Mouth to Mouth, And started Pumping his chest again. Her voice Echoed into the air. "No...No..." 21 Days Later Ponyville Hospital 12:33 p.m. Thunder Could feel himself Regaining Consciousness, But all he saw around him was white. "Oh, Man..." Then, Slowly, The White faded, And began showing the details of a Room. Like a Hospital Room. He began looking around the room and saw some things, Including a Breakfast tray with Pancakes and Orange Juice. Suddenly, He heard a voice. "You're awake." He looked to the door, And saw Fluttershy standing there. "Fluttershy?" Slowly, She trotted towards him and began to hug him. Slowly, He felt tears on his foreleg Shoulders. He looked to his side to see Fluttershy crying. "I...I thought you wouldn't wake up." Slowly, Thunder placed his forelegs around her, As well. "Hey...It's okay, Shy. I'm alright..." He smiled as she continued hugging him. Then, He heard another voice. "Thunder?" He looked to the door to see Twilight and Spike standing their as well. "Hey." "You're awake!" "Yep." Spike was suprised, "It's a miracle. The doctors said you'd never wake up." Fluttershy let go of him as he continued speaking, "Well, It'll take more than a blade to kill me." Then, Thunder looked confused, "Wait...How long have I been asleep?" He asked. Twilight then sounded disappointed when she spoke. "3 Weeks." "Oh, That's not so bad. I needed some sleep anyway," He said, Chuckling. Fluttershy giggled as a response. Spike also chuckled. Twilight just smiled. "So...What have you guys been doing the whole time I was out?" He asked, Wondering. "We've...We've been praying..." "Praying?" "Yes...We prayed to your god, That hopefully, You'd wake up. Looks like he answered our prayers." "Yeah..." He smiled. Then, Twilight began trotting towards Thunder. When she reached his bed, She began looking into his eyes, Him looking into hers. Then, Slowly, They leaned towards each other, And finally, Their lips met in a romantic kiss. Fluttershy and Spike looked in Awe as the couple kissed. Although they couldn't see it, Thunder gained entrance into Twilight's mouth with his tongue, And also allowed her to enter his mouth, And their tongues danced around in a romantic bond. After their lips parted, They stared into each other eyes in an endless, Unbreakable Bond of love. 2 Days Later Twilight's Parent's backyard 3:23 p.m. Thunder, Twilight, Fluttershy, and Mr. and Mrs. Sparkle were sitting at a table, Eating some food that Spike had prepared for them. Spike then came back from a homemade grill with a plate of Extra burgers. "Wow, Spike, This looks delicious!" Twilight exclaimed. "Thanks! I'll get some more, In case. I hope you like them, Too, Shy." He looked towards Fluttershy. She smiled. "Mm-hmm." She said, As Spike leaned to her and kissed her. Thunder and Twilight's eyes widened in surprise. Spike then began heading back to the grill. "You've got one lucky dragon, Shy," Thunder said to Fluttershy, Making her smile. He then thought for a moment. 'Man, He got over Rarity quick,' He thought to himself. "So, Mr. Ice..." Mr. Sparkle said to Thunder. "Tell me about yourself." He grinned at Mr. Sparkle. "Well, You know, I'm a nice Stallion. I care about my friends, I make sure they're safe, And especially, I do everything for them, Including your daughter." "Well, You do seem like one of the nice types, You know, Not the ones who only want her for the plot." "Daddy...!" Twilight said in embarassment. Meanwhile, At the grill, Spike was trying to get the grill to work (Spike doesn't use his Fire breath. It burns the burgers). "C'mon, You stupid piece of..." Just then, A Spark appeared. Then another. And then, A Rumbling sound erupted in the grill, Causing Spike's eyes to widen. "Uh oh..." At the table, Mr. Sparkle and Thunder were laughing at a joke Thunder said, when suddenly, They were deafened by an explosion. The shockwave from the explosion blew wind into their faces. They all looked back to see that the grill had exploded. Fluttershy's eyes instantly widened. "SPIIIIIIKE!" Fluttershy placed her face into her hooves as Thunder, Twilight, And Mr. and Mrs. Sparkle just looked in shock. Just then, Something fell down from the air onto Fluttershy's plate. When she looked, She instantly screamed as loud as she could. The object that had landed on Fluttershy's plate was Spike's Arm, Half of it just bone. Twilight fainted from the sight. I guess it's a good time to say..."BONE" APPETIT!** The End...Or is it? Finally I'm done with this story. It took some time to think of this, But It was a cheesy Idea. Also, I just decided to End this by re-enacting the Final Destination 2 Ending, But with ponies. I'm not that Good with ideas. A sequel is already in the making. Here are the characters starring in it: Lyra Rock Steady HI-C Bon Bon Shadow Heart Caramel Diskciplee Sprocket Malario For those who were probably confused after the "Thunder Dying" Part, Let's just say Death thought Thunder was killed, And so it leads up to Spike's death. I'm outta ideas. I think in Final Destination 2, Some girl tried to kill herself, But survived and messed up death's plan. I can't remember, I haven't seen that movie in years. :/ Anyway, I Hope you liked the story! Because...I sorta did... :D AN: As of 3/25/12: Just wanted to let you guys know that I'm working on MLFD2, And It will be published soon. :D
Chapter I: PremonitionI have looked at this story. After a while, I looked at it again...and again...and again. Finally, I slammed my head against the wall, finally realizing that this story was complete, utter shit. Well, I didn't really slam my head against the wall...yet. But I'm serious. The story in its original form sucked, so I decided to change it up. BIG TIME. I'm completely remaking the story, but keeping the storyline. I will be keeping the old author notes on here because it's...kind of nostalgic. Also, before I continue, you people better enjoy your electricity while you can, because sometime in the near future, it's turning off. Muahahaha!! ... I'll tell you about that at the end of this chapter. Anyway, enjoy. The remaining text below this is the original author note. This is my first Final Destination/My Little Pony fanfic, so basically, if I'm not really good at it, I don't really care that much. I just decided to entertain you while you wait for updates on my other stories. Anyways, enjoy. My Little Final Destination It was sometime after 3:30, when Twilight Sparkle and the other Elements of Harmony had made their way to the Ponyville train station. Applejack had a special event to do in Appleoosa, so she invited her friends to come along. "Weeee! I love trains!" Pinkie Pie yelled as she entered one of the cabins of the train. She looked around for a seat in the nearly empty cabins. Finally, she picked a seat, next to a mare. Pinkie took out a bag of candy, and began to eat rather loudly, grossing out the mare. The rest of the group had picked some seats. Rainbow Dash sat down to a rather handsome stallion; Rarity did the same. Fluttershy sat alone, Spike sat next to Rarity, Applejack sat next to a mare, and Twilight sat with her new stallionfriend, Thunder Ice. Thunder was not really your typical stallion. He was very...different. He wasn't born in Equestria. He was born on a planet called Earth, and he was known as a Homo-Sapien, or human. There were less than 7 1/2 billion humans on Earth, as he explained to Twilight when he first arrived 2 1/2 years back. 2 1/2 years already. "Do you want the spot next to the window, Twi?" Thunder asked her with her nickname, giving her a faint blush. "No, it's alright. You can have it," she replied. Thunder then walked and sat down into the seat nearest to the window. Twilight sat right next to him. Once they were both seated, Thunder began to look around the cabin. It had a minimum number of ponies, but one pony manage to lock his gaze. Fluttershy. It had been already a year since he had broken up with the shy mare. Or, in this case, she broke up with him. After a few weeks with him, she realized that the rest of the relationship probably wouldn't end well. She didn't want to tell him in pony, so she wrote a letter to him. He became heartbroken, and locked himself in his house for days. Twilight eventually came over, and cheered him up. She realized why he was so heartbroken. Fluttershy was his only marefriend ever, Earth AND Equestria. Eventually, Twilight did more than just cheered him up. She kissed him, and that kiss made them a couple. Thunder's P.O.V. (will be for rest of story) Twilight managed to see me looking at Fluttershy. "Are you still upset about her?" She asked. Knowing I was caught, I quickly looked at her. "What? No. I've gotten over her," I lied, but she could easily see. "Thunder, you don't need to lie," Twilight said, smiling slightly. Knowing I couldn't hide it, I sighed. "I just...I just don't know what went wrong." "Don't worry about it. Fluttershy isn't really the expert for dating when it comes to stallions." "It's just that...we were going so good...and then I got the letter. My heart stopped...I didn't do anything for days...then you came..." Just thinking about that day made me blush, causing Twilight to giggle. Suddenly, she leaned towards me and gently pulled me into a kiss, which I gladly accepted. As we kissed, Twilight wrapped her forelegs around my shoulders, and I gently placed my hooves onto her flanks, earning a quiet moan. Just to the right of me, I could hear some laughter. I looked to see Rainbow Dash looking at our little action, which was making her giggle uncontrollably. Twilight heard this, and looked to see what it was. When she saw Rainbow looking at us, her face went scarlet red. I always found her blushes adorkably cute. "Never mind her, Twilight," I said to her. "R-Right, yeah," Twilight stuttered. Slowly, her blush went away. With my magic, I managed to take out a camera from my bag. "You know what we've never done yet?" "What?" I placed the camera in my hooves. "Take a picture together," I replied. "Oh, yeah," Twilight replied. She then leaned closed to me, and looked at the camera. I put my face right next to hers. Right before taking the picture, I decided to mess with her. Since I was right next to her, I put my mouth up to her ear, and whispered, "You look really sexy right now." Twilight's face went scarlet red once more, and once it did, I pressed the button on the camera. A flash blinded us for only a split second. "Y-You did that on purpose, d-didn't you?" Twilight asked, still blushing furiously. "Well, it's true," I said before smiling. Her blush did not fade. Suddenly, a voice appeared on the intercom of the train. "Attention, passengers. The train will now depart from Ponyville to Appleoosa. Dinner will be at 6:30 tonight, and we should arrive to Appleoosa by 12:00 noon tomorrow. Until then, enjoy your trip." Right after the pony said that, the train jolted forward a little. Slowly, we could hear the sounds of the wheels grinding on the metal tracks. The train began to move. We were well on our way to Appleoosa. It was about 10 minutes since we departed. I looked around the cabin once more. Applejack was just sitting, not really doing much; Pinkie was still eating her candy; Fluttershy was hugging a picture of some rabbits. D'awww. To me, it looked like Rainbow was seducing the stallion next to her; Spike was wearing a moustache to impress Rarity, who was not interested in the slightest. I looked down to my right shoulder. Twilight was laying against me; she had her forelegs wrapped around my right foreleg, and she was snoring in a way that made me D'awww inside. She looked adorkably...adorkable. Accidentally, I dropped a book that was in my lap, waking Twilight. "H-Huh?" Twilight looked around, then looked up to see me. "Sorry, Twi. Didn't mean to wake you," I apologized, a sheepish smile on my face. "Wh-What time is it?" "It's only been about 10 minutes." "Oh." Twilight sat up and rubbed her eyes. I looked outside the window for a few seconds, before a similar shriek startled me. I turned around to where the sound came from. I saw Pinkie sticking her head out the window. "Pinkie, get your head back in here! That's not safe!" Twilight yelled. "Oh, don't be such a party pooper, Twilight!" Pinkie replied, literally ignoring Twilight's plea, which made Twilight groan in annoyance. "Weeee! This is fun!" Pinkie yelled. Meanwhile, at the cockpit, the driver was checking over everything to make sure everything was okay. It was. Just about 50 feet from the train, the section of the tracks that switch from one side to the other began to change. Suddenly, it jammed, and the train was heading straight for it. The driver didn't seem to notice until it was too late. The moment the train struck the jammed tracks, the main cabin shook around, derailing from the tracks; a loose tire was shaken off, flinging into the air. Back in the other cabin, Pinkie continued to cheer in excitement. "I swear, one day, her head's just gonna end up clean off her body," I said to Twilight. The moment after I said that, Pinkie's screams of excitement became dead silent. I decided to turn around to see why. I nearly threw up at the sight. Pinkie fell to the ground, but her head! It was gone, sliced, chopped off! Suddenly, a large splatter of blood covered the windows, and the cabin began to shake. Ponies screamed from a mixture of seeing Pinkie beheaded, and the cabin vibrating. Twilight and I tried to unhook our seatbelts, but they wouldn't come off. In horror and fear, Twilight gripped me tightly; I even began to feel warm tears. I hugged her tightly, as well. As I saw the panic commence, I could see Applejack getting up. I saw her struggling to run to the door to get to the other cabin. Suddenly, the shaking of the cabin caused the large chandelier to fall from the ceiling right on top of Applejack. The center of the chandelier struck down onto her back, breaking it; another heavy part landed on her head, cracking it open, spilling blood onto the floor. "No!" I screamed as I saw another friend of mine die before my eyes. In one of the forward cabins, the shaking caused a gas can to fall, making it leak. The leaking gas poured out of a hole torn in the side of the train. This managed to touch the sparks of the wheels. Once it did, a large explosion obliterated the further cabin, but blasting a hole into ours. I then heard a terrorizing scream. I looked to the hole to see Rarity holding on as best as she could to her chair. Spike also tried to help her by grabbing one of her forelegs. He tried all he could to pull her back, but the baby dragon failed, and Rarity ended up getting sucked out of the train. She fell off the side of the mountain, before finally striking the bottom in a loud splat. Blood and guts spewed everywhere. "No..." Spike silently said in the chaos that occured around him. Suddenly, the seat he was still strapped to came loose, and flew out of the holed cabin. Spike screamed as he flew, before finally slamming into a tree, immediately killing him on impact. Rainbow saw in horror as her friends were sucked out to their deaths. Finally, she realized she had to get out of here. After she successfully unlatched her seatbelt, she began to fly towards the hole. "Rainbow Dash, help us!" I yelled to her in fear. Twilight sceamed as the train continue to shake. Rainbow heard me and looked to me. She then looked back to the hole, then back to me. "S-Sorry, you two! Every pony for themself!" She yelled to me. An explosion near the front of the cabin sent a long metal rod flying straight towards the cyan pegasus. Before Dash could react, the rod pierced her body, striking her heart. In an instant, the dead pegasus fell to the floor of the cabin. "Rainbow!!" Twilight yelled as she saw another friend die. Tears were streaming down her face by now. I gripped her tightly, keeping her safe... Another scream then pierced our sound barriers. We looked to the source; Fluttershy was holding onto her chair, trying not to get sucked out of the cabin. "Fluttershy! Grab my hoof!" Twilight yelled as she held her hoof out to her yellow friend. Fluttershy saw her, and began to reach out to Twilight. She tried and tried to reach her friend, but she couldn't. "I-I-I-I can't!!" Fluttershy stuttered, as fresh, hot tears streamed down her face, fearing the inevitable. Suddenly, she began to hear a grinding noise beneath her. She looked down; her seat was detacthing from the floor. Upon seeing this, Fluttershy quickly tried to unbuckle herself, but her seatbelt would not unhook. She screamed. Finally, her seat detatched from the floor, and the helpless pegasus was sucked out. Since we were still on the side of a mountain, Fluttershy fell nearly 150 feet to her death. Since she was in a chair, she couldn't open her wings fully. If she couldn't open her wings, she was flightless. After a few seconds, she slammed into the ground with a powerful force. Her jaw had been ripped from its original resting place. Her stomach slammed against the ground, ripping it open from the impact. Her head had been broken like a vase falling to the floor. Her brain matter and blood spilled all over the ground. It was now only Twilight and I left on the still moving train. I couldn't see it, but I looked outside the hole of the cabin to see the cabin in front of us derail, and fall to the bottom of the mountain. Since it still had the gas cans inside of it, I could hear an explosion a few moments later. "Thunder...if we don't make it out alive...I just want you to know..." Twilight's voice cracked up as she spoke to me, "I love you." More fresh tears rolled down her face; mine as well. "I love you, too," I said, my voice cracking up, too. We decided that if we were going to die, we would die with one last kiss. I began to lean towards her; she leaned towards me. Suddenly, as I was about to kiss her, she was quickly pulled away from me. Her seat had detatched from the floor. I quickly tried as best as I could to grab her, but I was too slow. She was sucked out of the train. "Twilight!!!" I screamed as my marefriend was sucked out to her death. So many things flashed through my head...visions that would never be...our wedding...our first honeymoon...our first child...it all slipped away so suddenly...why? Finally, after so long, the cabin finally de-railed. I felt myself tipping sideways, so I knew I was falling. I heard a huge 'BOOM!'. Then, I felt pain. Then...I felt nothing. It was all over... Well...or so I thought... Well, there's the first chapter, remade. I still think it's pretty bad, but it's better than the original. I gotta stop being such a damn bitch. :3 Anyway, you remembered at the beginning of the chapter when I said to enjoy your electricity for now? Well, I created a new blog, called, "Making "Revolution" a Reality". I don't feel like making more of this author note, so just look at that blog and join me. :D P.S. I'm a crazy fuck.
After VisionHere's the second remade chapter. Enjoy...I guess. Suddenly, a bright flash blinded me for only a split second. I blinked for a few seconds. What just happened? "Y-You did that on purpose, didn't you?" I heard a voice next to me. Wait, I know that. I quickly looked to my left. Twilight was...sitting next to me? Was I just...dreaming? I couldn't have...it felt so real...maybe...maybe it wasn't a dream. Maybe it was a sign. A sign to get off. I quickly looked out my window. Luckily, we were still at the train station. I began to sweat. If that vision's coming true, I'm not sticking around here to wait. "Thunder? Are you okay?" Twilight asked next to me. I quickly looked at her. "C'mon, Twilight. We're getting off," I said to her. "What? Why?" My voice became shaky for a moment. "The train's gonna crash." "What?" Twilight became confused. "Thunder, you're scaring me." I quickly unbuckled my seatbelt and got up. Once I was in the aisle, I quickly unbuckled Twilight's seatbelt, and grabbed her hoof. "Hey! Thunder! Let go of me!" Twilight yelled to me, before slapping my hoof, causing me to let go of her. I looked back to her. "We need to get off now, Twilight," I said, nearly yelling. "Thunder," Twilight looked into my eyes, "I'm worried about you. Please, just...tell me what's going on." After she said that, two train officers walked into the cabin. "Is everything alright in here?" One of them asked. I quickly walked to them. "Sir, we need to get everypony off this train." One of the officers put their hooves on my shoulders. "Sir, why don't you just sit back do-" I cut him off by hitting his hooves off of my shoulders. "No, I will not sit down! These ponies are in grave danger! I saw it! I saw the train crash! It fell off the mountain-side! The cabin exploded! Everypony died! I saw it!" I yelled in his face. "Sir, I will remove you from this train if you do not calm down!" "Why won't you listen to me?! I'm trying to warn you here!" Finally, the officers grabbed and dragged me out of the train. The whole time, I was yelling to the passengers to get off the train. They didn't bother listening to me. A few minutes later, I was placed into the lobby of the train station. The train sat just outside the large window. "Don't move," one of the officers said to me. "Sir, you don't understand! That train's going to crash!" "That train is one of the most safest moving locomotives in Equestria. It is perfectly safe." After that, the officers headed out the door we came in. However, one officer stood next to the door. I just eyed him for a moment. I sighed and slumped in my seat. As I did, I could hear the whistle of the train, and I saw it start up. Wait, am I forgetting something? I gasped. Twilight! They're still on the train!! Just then, the doors of the lobby opened up. I looked to see Twilight and the others standing there, looking at me. I quickly ran to Twilight and hugged her tightly. "Oh, thank Celestia you're okay!" I said to her. Twilight didn't reply. Instead, she gently pushed me away and looked at me. "What happened back there?" She asked, looking at me like I was a complete stranger to her. I don't blame her. It's not everyday your boyfriend - excuse me, stallionfriend - suddenly says he has a dream about a train crash. Slowly, I head back to the seat I sat in and sat back down. I was silent for a few moments before I finally spoke up. "I...had this...dream...or premonition...vision...whatever you want to call it. Anyway, it was about us. And the train. Something happened, and the train..." I paused, "the train crashed. I don't know how, or why, all I know is that the train crashed with us on it, and we all...died." Rarity was the first to respond to me. "Darling, it was simply a dream. There's no need to get riled up about it." "But...it felt so real. Not real like a lucid dream or anything, but it felt like I was actually awake," I responded to her. I stopped and remembered what I thought earlier. "What if...what if it isn't a dream? What if it was a warning? A warning to me?" It became silent as the girls exchanged glances. Suddenly, laughter broke out as they all laughed at my question. "Oh-ho, man! That is the most redic-" Rainbow was cut off. *CRASH!* The windows of the station lobby all shatter, causing us to cover ourselves and scream. "What was that!" Twilight demanded to know. We then looked out the window. Our eyes widened, Rarity began to tear up, and I sat there speechless. The train, not too far from the station, was burning and falling down the hill at a high speed. Flames completely scorched the train, possibly from an explosion in the cabin. While we saw it falling, we all sat there, speechless. After a few moments of silence, Rainbow Dash managed to ask me a question I still haven't yet answered... "How did you know?" Short, yes, but it's better than the original chapter. I critique my own stories. But hey, don't we all? All I gotta say at the moment. Oh yeah, in English class today, we watched WALL-E. We're looking for how it relates to "The Last Book in the Universe." :D I'm the most random brony you'll ever meet. EVER.
Sweet Apple DeathMy Little Final Destination Started right after publishing the 3rd chapter. I'm a quickie. :D Enjoy. Chapter IV: Death Apple Acres Twilight's Home 4:00 p.m. Thunder and Twilight had fallen asleep in each other's forelegs about 8 minutes ago. Twilight was feeling tired and Thunder felt tired as well. Thunder was the first to wake up. He slowly trotted into Twilight's Library as she slept. He looked through the book section "V." After about a minute of searching, He found nothing. "Oh, Man. I guess there's no book about Visions of the Future," He said to himself, Disappointed. Spike, Who saw Thunder trot into the Library, Came down from his bed up top to talk to Thunder. "Uhh...Hey, Thunder." Thunder looked to his left to See Spike standing there. "Oh, Hey, Spike." Spike felt a little guilty for not believing Thunder about the vision. "Uhh...I just wanted to say that...I'm sorry. I didn't know your vision would come true." Thunder chuckled. "You don't need to be sorry. I didn't know the vision would come true either. Heheh...So...How's Rarity doin'? You know, After this whole thing?" "She's okay...Still a little scared, Though." "Yeah, Twilight's the same...I just hope I can keep her safe. Actually, I hope I can keep everyone safe." Spike smiled at his friend. "You kept us from going on the train. That counts, Right?" Thunder smiled back. "I guess you're right. Hehe..." Suddenly, Rainbow Dash came in through the Window. "Guys..." Tears swelled up in her eyes. Thunder was instantly worried about his friend. "Dash? What's wrong?" "Pinkie...She's...She's..." Thunder knew what she was getting at, And his eyes widened. "Where?" "Sugarcube Corner." He began heading downstairs to go get Twilight. Sugarcube Corner Downtown Ponyville 4:05 p.m. Rainbow Dash, Twilight, Thunder, And Spike reached Sugarcube Corner, Which was covered with reporters, And Medical workers. Two medical workers carried a stretcher, And a body that was in a bag, Which Was placed into a Medical Carriage. The four of them knew that Pinkie was in that bag. They were so close to the bag, That they could smell her burnt flesh. "Pinkie..." Twilight said before bursting into tears. Thunder held her tightly. "It's okay, Twilight...Shhh..." Thunder calmly said, Trying to keep her calm. A few moments later, Applejack, Rarity, and Fluttershy arrived at the scene, As well. "What in Tarnation happen'd here?" Applejack instantly asked. Thunder looked at his Cowmare friend. He was silent for a moment, Then spoke up. "...Pinkie's dead." "What? How...?" She asked. "She...She got locked in the Kitchen oven. She was cooked alive," He replied, His voice cracked a little. "Oh no..." Fluttershy said, A tear in her eye. Then, Out of the corner of Thunder's eye, He saw him...The Detective Stallion he met just a few hours ago. He just stared at Thunder. "Thunder...I wanna go home," He could hear Twilight speak. He looked down at her, And smiled faintly. "Okay." He kissed her Forehead gently. "We'll see you girls later..." He said to the others, Who were still in shock at what they learned. Spike stayed with Rarity as Thunder and Twilight left the area. As Twilight and Thunder left, Thunder looked back to where the Stallion was, But he wasn't there. He was gone. He then looked back at Twilight, A tear in her eye. He slowly placed his left hoof up to her eye, And wiped away her tear. She looked at him and faintly smiled. "It's okay..." He then got close to her, And kissed her cheek, Hoping to make her feel better. She would never feel better after this... July 16, 2012 Ponyville Graveyard 3:14 p.m. A large group of Ponies were sitting in seats, In front of a coffin that held the body of Pinkie Pie. Above the coffin was a collection of pictures of Pinkie, Smiling as a Filly, Then slowly growing up, The last Picture showing her eating a Cupcake, The treat she liked the most. Then, A Tombstone behind the coffin had writing on it: PINKAMENA DIANE PIE July 12, 19994 - July 15, 20012 A friend taken too soon A White Stallion stood up at a podium above the coffin, And spoke into a microphone. "We are here today, To commemorate the loss of a good Pony, A good mare...And a Good friend. Pinkamena Diane Pie was the best Pony there was...She was a fantastic baker, And there was nopony that could compare to her..." His voice trailed off as Thunder looked at Twilight, Who was sitting next to him, Crying. He slowly placed a foreleg around her, And held her safely. The Stallion continued. "Who could her forget the smile she always kept on her face? ...Or the songs she always sang? ...Or the dances she always did...? Now...Would anypony else like to say something about her...?" Pinkie was one of Thunder's best friends, So he thought it would be best to say something. He raised his hoof. The Stallion nodded, And Thunder slowly trotted up to the podium. He stood on his back legs, And began to speak. "I...I don't have much to say...But...I would like everypony to know...That Pinkie was a good friend to me...To her friends...To everypony...When we always felt down...She cheered us up...When we had parties, She was there with sweet treats...She lightened up moods, And put smiles on everypony's face..." "I remember one time, On Jokes and laughs Day (Fake name for April Fools Day), I remember opening my house door, And seeing her standing there, A pie in her hand. And her throwing it at my face...It gave me a smile...It's...Just hard to know that...She's gone...I will dearly miss her...Her friends will miss her...And...That's...All I have to say..." Thunder slowly got down from the podium, And trotted back to his seat. "Thank you, Thunder," The white stallion said. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- *Ponyville Graveyard* 3:28 p.m. There was now five of the Mane six, Along with Spike and Thunder, As they began to leave the Cemetery. Rarity and Spike were holding hands/hooves, Rarity saddened deeply still. "We'll see you guys later...Rarity and I are gonna head to the boutique." Spike said. "Alright...See you later..." Twilight managed to say. As Spike and Rarity left, Thunder, Fluttershy, Applejack, Twilight, and Rainbow Dash stood there. "Well...I guess I better get back to the farm...Big Mac and the other's will wanna know where I am." Applejack said. "Okay," Was all Thunder said. Soon, Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash flew off to their own places, Leaving Twilight and Thunder there. Soon, They left Pinkie's grave, and Headed back to Twilight's home. Twilight knew that Pinkie's death would haunt her forever. Well, Not just Pinkie's death... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- *Sweet Apple Acres* 3:45 p.m. Applejack just finished Bucking another tree, Filling a few buckets with more apples. "Phew..." She sighed, As she placed one of the buckets on her back, And began trotting into the barn. When she entered the barn, She climbed a ladder carefully, And placed the Bucket on the top floor of the barn. "Alrighty..." She climbed down to get the rest of the buckets. Meanwhile, A heavy wind burst through the Barn, Knocking a barrel onto the bucket, Sending it to the edge. Applejack came back with another bucket on her back. "Brrghh. Mighty chilly," She said to himself. Then, Suddenly, The bucket fell over the edge, Toward the ground. It crashed into a rake, Which sent the handle pointing up, Catapulting an apple towards Applejack. "What in Tarna..." Was all she said before the Apple flew right into her mouth, Near her throat. It got stuck there, And instantly began choking the cowmare. As Applejack tried Desperately to remove the Apple, It would not budge. Soon, Within seconds, Applejack felt her life beginning to flash before her eyes; She remembered first getting her Cutie Mark, She saw the time they visited Appaloosa...She saw herself. But, Then, She saw a sign of hope enter the barn: Big Macintosh. "Hey, Sis, I gots the...SIS!" Big Mac yelled at the sight of his sister choking. He quickly ran to her, Placed a hoof carefully into her mouth, And quickly pulling out the apple. She was unharmed. She started breathing hard, Getting as much air as possible. "Sis, Are you Alrigh'?" He asked her. After she caught her breath, She began to speak up. "Yeah..*Inhale* I'm...*Exhale* Okay..." She got up. "Thank you, Big brother..." She then began trotting back to the fallen apples to gather them back up, When she stepped on the Rake that hid in the hay. The Rake instantly flew up, And the pointy "Stems" of the rake stabbed directly into her head, Through her skull, Coming out of the other side. She was instantly dead. Big Mac screamed as he saw his sister get impaled by the rake, And slowly fall down. He ran towards her, And looked at her already lifeless body. ***"SIS! SIIIIISS!"* He yelled at the top of his lungs, Clutching his Dead sister in his forelegs.** He slowly began to cry. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- *Pretty good, IMO. Well, Here's the second death for you. And also, I just found out that I'm the only person who has done a Crossover between MLP and FD. I must be a lucky motherfucker. Next chapter up soon.*
A Slice of MarshmallowMy Little Final Destination Next update. :D Chapter V: A Slice of Marshmallow Sweet Apple Acres 4:00 p.m. As medical carriages and reporters gathered at the barn, Big Mac sat on a Hay Cube, Tears flowing down his eyes. He continued to cry, And then Thunder and the others showed up. Thunder was the first to speak. "Big Mac, Are you okay? What happened?" He asked. Big Mac couldn't speak much, But he managed to get some words out. "A...A.J's Dead..." Thunder and the others' eyes widened in shock. "What? How?" Big Mac took his time to speak. "She...She was bucking apples and placing those there apples in that barn...When I saw her, She was choking on an apple. I took it out...She thanked me...She walked back to the fallen bucket of apples, And she stepped on a rake, And the stems of it went right through her head...If we had just cleaned that barn..." Thunder was confused. "Wait...If she stepped on the rake, How did the stems go up? She had to have stepped on the Stems in order for it to go up." Big Mac looked at him a little angry looking. "It was that there Double Rake yous made." "Oh..." Thunder said, Feeling guilty. Then, Big Mac looked to his right, And saw Applebloom sitting there. "Applebloom..." A tear came from her eye. "Applejack Ain't comin' back?" Big Mac nodded. Quickly, Applebloom ran into her brother's chest, And began crying, Knowing that her sister was now dead. "Thanks to your stupid rake you gave us...She ain't comin' back." "ME? It was YOU who took it from me!" Thunder instantly yelled. Twilight slowly trotted up to Thunder, Trying to calm him down. "Thunder, Calm down..." Thunder, overtaken by anger, Turned around to Twilight. "Shut up, Twilight!" He yelled, Not controlling himself. Twilight's eyes widened. Her voice quivered. Then, A tear slowly came down her face. Thunder's face went from anger to shock at what he had just done. His eyes widened as well. A few more tears came down Twilight's face. Thunder stood there, Still shocked by his own action. "Twilight..." Instantly, Twilight began running away from everypony, Away from the barn, and back to her home, Crying. Thunder watched as she ran away. "Look what you's done. You's upset her," Big Mac said. Thunder didn't bother turning around. He looked at the others, Them having a shocked reaction. Then, Thunder looked back to where Twilight headed, And quickly began bolting to follow her. "Twilight, Wait!" He yelled. The others, Including Big Mac and Applebloom, Just watched as he ran to follow her. Twilight's Bedroom 4:10 p.m. Thunder had managed to reach Twilight's home. He opened the door to her living room to see nopony there. "Twilight?" He trotted into the hallway of the first floor. He opened doors that led to many rooms. "Twilight, You in here?" He asked in one of the rooms. In about half a minute, He went upstairs, Hoping to find her up there. He reached the door to her bedroom, But when he reached it, He heard some sniffling sounds from a distance, To where the bed would be. He knocked on the door, Hoping she would respond. "Go away," She said, Sniffling. He spoke out to her. "Twilight?" "Go away, Thunder," She added. He tried to open the door, But it was locked. "Twilight, Please, Open the door." "Please, Just go away." A few moments later, She heard hoofsteps slowly fading. She was then met by silence. The silence was broken as she sniffled. Suddenly, She heard a voice behind her. "I'm sorry, Twi." She flipped around on her bed, To see Thunder standing there. She screamed. "Whoa!" Thunder yelled. "H-How did you get in here?" She stuttered. Thunder nervously chuckled and pointed to the window next to her bed, Which was open. Twilight decided to move onto the "Scene" at the farm. "Why...Why did you yell at me?" Thunder forgot about that for a second. His face slowly turned to sadness. "I was...I was mad at Big Mac, Saying I was responsible for Applejack...I completely filled with un-needed anger, That when you spoke up...I couldn't stop myself...Until It was too late...I upset you...I...I hurt you...Emotionally..." A tear fell from his eye. "I'm sorry, Twilight..." He trotted over to the bed, And sat down. "I can never forgive myself for what I did to you...Please forgive me, Twi..." Twilight slowly smiled, And leaned over to him. "I forgive you..." She said, Before placing her lips on his. He slowly gave into the kiss, And kissed back, His forelegs wrapping around her. Twilight began moaning into Thunder's mouth as they shared the warm, Passionate kiss. Slowly, Thunder and Twilight slowly began to fall onto the bed, Still kissing, Until Twilight broke the kiss. "W-Wait..." "What?" Twilight looked to the window, Still open. "Oh, Right..." Thunder chuckled as he got up, Walked towards the window, And closed it. "Hehe..." Twilight smiled and giggled. Thunder then walked back to the bed. At Rarity's home, The Carousel Boutique, She was starting on a new dress, Trying to forget about her friends' deaths. 'First Pinkie, Now Applejack?' She thought to herself. "This doesn't make much sense," Spike said, Sitting down at a table. "First, It was Pinkie, Now it's Applejack?" Rarity sighed. "I know, Spike," She said. She walked over to the Invention that was created by famous builders: The Dress Maker 2000. The Dress Maker 2000 was a large Slicing machine, Capable of Slicing thick clothing, Cloth for dresses, And, If they were stupid enough to get in the way, Ponies. "I'm confused, As well." Rarity added, As she pulled the lever on the machine down, Sending the large, Sharp sword into the cloth, Slicing the cloth in half. But, As the sword came down, A large nail that held the Sword in place unloosened itself a little bit. "If we were there to have helped her, We could've saved her," Spike said. Rarity grabbed another piece of cloth and placed it down under the sword. She pulled the lever, And the sword came down and sliced the cloth in two. The nail unloosened more. Spike slowly got up, And walked to Rarity, Who had a tear in her eye. "Hey," He said, Slowly and carefully wiping the tear out of her eye. "It's okay..." She slowly smiled. He then leaned to her, And gently embraced her in a kiss. Back at Twilight's home, Twilight was laying on her back in the bed, With Thunder on top. Thunder kept kissing her body, Making her moan, And giggle as it tickled. Then, Thunder slowly got lower and lower, Until he reached her wet femslit. He looked up to her and smiled before placing his tongue into her Marehood, Licking around. Twilight loudly gasped as a response. Thunder liked the taste. It tasted a very sweet taste. Soon, He brought his head up, And wiped off his mouth so he could kiss her once more. After the kiss, Thunder got his hard Member positioned near her entrance. "Are you ready...?" He asked her, Pretty much cooing the question. She nodded, Smiling. "Please...?" She whispered, Quietly begging for it. He smiled again. As he slowly slid himself into her, He had felt himself reach her hymen. He tore through it, Ending her virginity. When he looked down to Twilight, He saw her eyes closed tightly, A tear or two coming down her face. Thunder quickly brought his lips to hers, Not being too rough, And began kissing her. After the kiss, Twilight slowly nodded, Motioning him to continue. Thunder then slowly began thrusting in and out of her, Making her moan in the process. Thunder's thrusts slowly increased, Making Twilight moan louder and longer. "Thunder..." She moaned. The sound of them flapping against each other echoed throughout the bedroom, Making their love-making louder, But the Walls were sound-proof, So nopony could hear. Thunder then felt his Climax coming. "Twi...I'm...I'm gonna..." "Th-Thunder...I...Ah...I...!" She moaned. Just a few moments later, They both released themselves. They basically released their fluids at the same time, And much of it leaked out of Twilight and onto the bed. They moaned each other's names in Ecstasy. "A-A-A-A-A-A-Aahhhh!!!" Twilight's scream was very shaky. Just about half a minute later, After the climaxes ended, Thunder slowly pulled out of Twilight and laid down next to her, Holding her in his forelegs. "I love you, Twilight..." She slowly turned her head around. "I love you, Too...Thunder." They pulled each other in for another passionate kiss, And they slowly fell asleep, Thunder holding Twilight close. Back at The Carousel Boutique, Rarity had just finished cutting the cloth she needed. "I gotta go, Rarity...Twilight probably needs me...I'll see you later...Okay?" Spike said to her. She looked at him, And smiled. "Okay...Bye, Spike." Before he left, However, He planted one more kiss on Rarity's lips, And began walking to the door. Meanwhile, The nail in the Dress Maker had unloosened enough to pop out. It quickly slipped out, And the sword that stood up to the ceiling began falling down towards Rarity. Before Rarity could look back, The Sword Sliced through the center of her body, Slicing through her skin and landing on the floor with a bang. Some blood splashed everywhere. Spike turned back to see the bloody mess, And Rarity, Who was literally split in two. "RARITYYYY!" He screamed as he saw the two halves of her fall to the floor. He ran to the sight, And looked at her sliced corpse: Organs fallen out, Blood leaking everywhere... "No...Rarity..." Spike began to cry, Just looking at his dead marefriend. "Why....WHYYY?!" He continued to cry. Death had taken it's next victim... Well, How did you like this chapter? Good...? Bad...? Enough? Good. I wasn't sure if The Carousel Boutique was Rarity's home. But, Now I do. :D Hope you liked this chapter! :D
Rainblood DashMy Little Final Destination Updating cause I wanna. Enjoy. Chapter VI: Rainblood Dash At Twilight's home, Thunder and Twilight slept quietly in Twilight's bed. Thunder slowly woke up, And slowly got up from bed, Hoping not to awaken his marefriend. He looks out the window after putting his clothes on (Sorry that I forgot to mention those; Check the Profile Pic). He views the calm, Quiet Village of Ponyville, The sun only at the horizon of the far lands. He sighed and smiled, Looking back at Twilight. She...She looked so beautiful. Then, All of a sudden, He could hear sirens...Sirens from a medical carriage. Seconds later, He saw a medical carriage ride down the street, Towards the Carousel Boutique. "What the..." He then got the hint another one of his friends was taken as well. "No..." He quickly bolted to the bed, And shook Twilight to wake her. "Twilight...Wake up." Twilight then woke up to see Thunder, With a worried look on his face. "Thunder? What's wrong?" "We need to get down to the Boutique. I think there's been an accident." Twilight knew what he meant. Quickly, She got up out of her bed, And followed Thunder, Who was running out of the door. Carousel Boutique 5:00 p.m. They reached Rarity's home within a minute or two. They weren't really far. When they reached the home, Ambulance crews were placing yet another body bag into an Ambulance. When Twilight looked over to a bench, She could see Spike...Sitting there...Crying. Thunder saw as well, And the two began walking towards him slowly. As they reached him, They could hear his cries behind his claws. "Spike..." Twilight said, Hoping to help him. Spike began to speak. "I promised her...I promised her...That she would be safe, And I...Broke the promise...If I had known a little bit earlier, I could've stopped that sword from..." He couldn't finish. He sighed and shuddered. "I'm sorry..." Twilight walked up to him, And hugged her friend. After Spike, Twilight, And Thunder headed back to Twilight's home after about 15 minutes, Spike just sat down, Not bothering to get up. "Spike..." Twilight said as she walked over to him and sat down next to him. "Please...Tell us what happened..." Spike took a deep breath, And began to speak. "We were in the shop, And Rarity was cutting clothing with that Dressmaking sword thingy. And, Just when I was about to leave..." He shudders for a second before continuing, "The sword came down through the center of her body, Slicing her in two..." He sighs and places his face into his claws. "It doesn't make sense...First, It was Pinkie, Then Applejack, And now...Rarity?" Thunder then thought back to his vision of the Train Crash. The Deaths...Pinkie...Applejack...Rarity...Then...He started getting a weird feeling...It was like...He had seen this before...Uh oh... "Guys?" He spoke up. Twilight turned around, And Spike looked up. "I don't think this was an accident..." Twilight was confused, "What do you mean?" Thunder took some time to remember what to say. "Back in my Time, In the year...2000, There was this movie...You guys know what movies are, Right?" They both nodded. He continued. "Anyway, There was this movie...Called, "Final Destination," Where this human Teenager and his school class is going to Paris. He boards a plane, And eventually has a vision that the plane is going to explode...He freaks out, And about 8 people got off the plane...Minutes later...The Plane explodes. And then, The people started dying in order the way they died if they had stayed on the plane." Twilight was still a little confused, "What does this have to do with any of this?" "I had a vision that the train was gonna crash. And, Now...We're dying in the order the way we died if we stayed on the train. First, It was Pinkie...Then, Applejack...And now...Rarity." Twilight began to believe him a tiny bit. "Well...Who's next?" Thunder then slowly began looking at Spike. Spike didn't know why he was looking at him, Until he got the hint. Then, Slowly, Spike began to chuckle. "You've gotta be joking. Really? Just because the three of them died like that, Doesn't mean it's like the vision." Spike then got up from the seat, And began walking to the door. "I'm...I'm gonna go for a walk. I'll see you later..." He opened the door, And walked out. Thunder, On the other hoof, Was worried now. Twilight looked at him worriedly, "Thunder?" Thunder looked at her. "He came after Rarity...He's next." Twilight's eyes widened. She then began running out of the door, Thunder instantly following. "Spike, Wait!" Twilight yelled. Ponyville Construction site 6:35 p.m. Spike had reached the construction site of Downtown Ponyville, And he could see that construction workers were still working on the site. He decided to head to the park, And going through the Construction site was the quickest way. "Thunder can't be correct. Just because he saw some movie about a vision and deaths in order doesn't mean it connects to real life...Can it?" He began looking around the area. He saw a large concrete brick being held up by wires, And a large container also held up by wires. Those were the only things being picked up right now. Well, For now... Up in the container crane, Two Construction ponies were slowly trying to move the container safely up on top of a building still in construction. But, As one of the construction ponies inspected the wires holding up the container, They flinched as one snapped, Tilting the container, And putting strain on the other wires. Back on the ground, Spike had no idea what was happening, For he didn't see, Nor hear it. "SPIIIIKKEE!" He turned around to see Thunder and Twilight running towards him. "Oh, What now?" Back up to the container, Another wire snapped, And eventually, The Container had half of it's wires left, Leaving it to swing down. And...It was swinging towards Spike. As Spike saw the container flying towards him, He couldn't move one bit. Then...He felt somepony grab him and push him out of the way. He then felt himself hit the ground. He opened his eyes and saw Thunder sitting on top of him. "You alright, Man?" Thunder asked, Pulling Spike onto his feet. "Yeah." Twilight managed to reach them, And heard their conversation. "Wait...If Spike was next...But, He was skipped...Who goes after him?" A few moments later, Rainbow Dash appeared, With a suprised look on her face. She landed to her hooves. "Oh, Celestia. What happened here?" She asked. Thunder looked at her with a worried look. Then, The Container that nearly hit spike crashed into the Large concrete brick, Instantly destroying the Wires from the force. The Concrete brick began falling. It was right in the path above Rainbow Dash. A few moments later, Before Dash could even look up, The Large concrete structure fell on top of her, Crushing her to a bloody pile of smashed up organs and concrete. Thunder, Twilight and Spike screamed as blood splattered onto them. All they could see of Dash was her remaining foreleg. "Dash..." Thunder quietly said to himself. Nopony's safe... What did you think? Good? Bad? Cheesy? Meh. It may look a little stupid, Because I was working on this at like, 2:00 in the morning. I'm so fucking tired. Anyway, Gotta go.
Sword of FateMy Little Final Destination Updated. Yeah. Chapter VII: Sword of Fate 7:40 p.m. Twilight's Home Thunder, Twilight, And Spike came back from the Construction site after the Ambulance picked up the remains of Dash's body, And sat in Twilight's Living room, Still shocked after the scene that occured. "So...The order we died in your vision..." Spike said before continuing, "Is the same order we die in real life?" Thunder nodded. "It's the same way it happened in the past 5 movies. Although, The fourth one wasn't really that good, I mean, The animation is horrible, And..." He was cut off by Twilight. "Thunder...This is serious..." She said, Her voice still shaken. He looked back at her. "I'm sorry, Twilight. That just happens to me now..." He added before continuing, "Death has a specific Pattern for it's victims, And a specific death. Basically, For example, Pinkie, Applejack, Rarity, And Dash Died in that order. In real life, It happened. And, Soon, When the next victim dies, He'll go onto us. Appearently, Death hates to be cheated..." Spike was worried, "You're saying that...We can't stop this?" Thunder sighed, "Pretty much. Well...Like at the construction site...Your death was supposed to happen there, But I got you out of the way, Which meant that you cheated death. But, Death wasn't finished. He decided to skip you, And go on to the next victim, Which was Dash." Twilight was still worried about the next victim. "Thunder...In your vision...Who was after Dash?" She asked him. "Well, Let's see...Pinkie, A.J., Rarity, Spike, Dash, And..." When Thunder knew the next name, His eyes widened, His heart pounded against his chest, And he shuddered. "No..." Twilight was worried still, "Who's next?" She asked him. Slowly, Thunder looked back up at the two, And whispered with fear. "Fluttershy." Twilight and Spike's eyes widened with shock. Fluttershy was next after Dash, And Fluttershy...Well, They didn't know where she was. Suddenly, They heard a knock at the door. Thunder slowly got up and trotted to the door. He opened it up, And saw that nopony was there. "Hello?" He called out. Then, He looked on the ground, And saw a white paper. He picked it up with his hooves. It read: HEAD TO SUGARCUBE CORNER. YOUR YELLOW FRIEND IS THERE. SAVE HER. The paper didn't have a signature, But Thunder knew that the pony was telling them to go now. "What is it?" Twilight asked. Thunder turned around and held up the paper, "It's a sign saying we should go. Now." He said, Before running out of the door, And running towards Sugarcube corner. "Thunder, Wait!" Twilight yelled, Before bolting out the door as well. Spike also followed. As Thunder kept running, He kept thinking about Fluttershy. "I hope it's not too damn late..." Meanwhile, Behind one of the trees near Twilight's home, The black Detective stallion watched as Thunder, Twilight, and Spike ran towards the Bakery. "Good luck..." The detective said quietly. Sugarcube Corner 7:45 p.m. Fluttershy was sitting at a table, That had a picture of her friends, Pinkie, Rarity, Applejack, And Dash. She was all by herself, Until Big Mac sat down opposite from her. "Hey," He said to the shy mare. "Oh...Big Mac. I didn't know you were here." "Just got here." He said, Grinning faintly at her. He then grabbed the picture of Applejack. He sighed. "Ah just can't believe she's gone..." "I know...I miss her..." Meanwhile, Near the Cupcake Bar near the Kitchen, There was a Wall Plaque holding a large sword. It was held up by a rusty nail. Above the plaque was a small Pipe that began dripping a type of acidic water on the nail, Corroding it drop by drop. "So...How is it at the farm, Now that...You know...?" Big Mac sighed, "Not so well...With A.J. gone, It's difficult bucking all them apple trees by mahself. Applebloom won't speak much. The whole family is falling apart since A.J.'s passing." "Oh, My...Maybe I could help?" "That'd be kinda ya...But Ah don't want ya ta get hurt." "Oh...Okay then." By now, The Nail had corroded so much that it was nearly about to break, Which would allow the sword to fall, And if Somepony was close, kill them. "I...Gotta head back to the barn...Hopefully, I can get Applebloom to speak," Big Mac spoke. "Okay...Bye..." "Later, Miss." Big Mac got up from the seat, And headed for the door. He pulled it open and walked out. Fluttershy sighed, And got up, Heading to the Cupcake bar to grab a few cupcakes before leaving. As she neared the Plaque holding the sword, Which was about to fall any second on her, She heard the door of the shop burst open. "FLUTTERSHY!" Fluttershy looked to the door to see Thunder, Twilight, And Spike there. "Huh?" Thunder began running towards her. Just then, She looked up and saw the sword begin to come down. Her eyes widened, Until she felt Thunder push her out of the way. Thunder ended up getting into the path of the oncoming sword, Which sliced his stomach, And he fell to the floor, The sword landing next to him. "No..." Twilight said, Before running to Thunder's side. When she reached him, She saw as a line cut across Thunder's stomach was seeping blood. Everyone that was in the shop began gathering around the scene. "Thunder? THUNDER?" A very Frightened Twilight asked. Thunder was very dizzy, And he slowly looked at Twilight and Fluttershy, Who got up and went right next to Twilight. "F..Fluttersh-shy...Are you...O-kay?" Fluttershy, Who had a tear in her eye, Nodded lightly. Thunder then slowly looked over to Spike. "Sp-Spike...T...Take care of them for me..." Just a few moments after he said that, Thunder's eyes closed. Twilight was ready to cry. "No...Thunder...Please...Don't go..." She closed the wound as much as she could, Then, She started CPR. "Come on, Thunder...Come on..." Tears began falling down Twilight's face, As well as Spike's and Fluttershy's. "Please...Thunder...You can't..." Tears also began falling down Fluttershy's face. She tried to speak. "N-No...D-Don't die..." Twilight continued to do CPR on Thunder. She then did Mouth to Mouth, And started Pumping his chest again. Her voice Echoed into the air. "No...No..." 21 Days Later Ponyville Hospital 12:33 p.m. Thunder Could feel himself Regaining Consciousness, But all he saw around him was white. "Oh, Man..." Then, Slowly, The White faded, And began showing the details of a Room. Like a Hospital Room. He began looking around the room and saw some things, Including a Breakfast tray with Pancakes and Orange Juice. Suddenly, He heard a voice. "You're awake." He looked to the door, And saw Fluttershy standing there. "Fluttershy?" Slowly, She trotted towards him and began to hug him. Slowly, He felt tears on his foreleg Shoulders. He looked to his side to see Fluttershy crying. "I...I thought you wouldn't wake up." Slowly, Thunder placed his forelegs around her, As well. "Hey...It's okay, Shy. I'm alright..." He smiled as she continued hugging him. Then, He heard another voice. "Thunder?" He looked to the door to see Twilight and Spike standing their as well. "Hey." "You're awake!" "Yep." Spike was suprised, "It's a miracle. The doctors said you'd never wake up." Fluttershy let go of him as he continued speaking, "Well, It'll take more than a blade to kill me." Then, Thunder looked confused, "Wait...How long have I been asleep?" He asked. Twilight then sounded disappointed when she spoke. "3 Weeks." "Oh, That's not so bad. I needed some sleep anyway," He said, Chuckling. Fluttershy giggled as a response. Spike also chuckled. Twilight just smiled. "So...What have you guys been doing the whole time I was out?" He asked, Wondering. "We've...We've been praying..." "Praying?" "Yes...We prayed to your god, That hopefully, You'd wake up. Looks like he answered our prayers." "Yeah..." He smiled. Then, Twilight began trotting towards Thunder. When she reached his bed, She began looking into his eyes, Him looking into hers. Then, Slowly, They leaned towards each other, And finally, Their lips met in a romantic kiss. Fluttershy and Spike looked in Awe as the couple kissed. Although they couldn't see it, Thunder gained entrance into Twilight's mouth with his tongue, And also allowed her to enter his mouth, And their tongues danced around in a romantic bond. After their lips parted, They stared into each other eyes in an endless, Unbreakable Bond of love. 2 Days Later Twilight's Parent's backyard 3:23 p.m. Thunder, Twilight, Fluttershy, and Mr. and Mrs. Sparkle were sitting at a table, Eating some food that Spike had prepared for them. Spike then came back from a homemade grill with a plate of Extra burgers. "Wow, Spike, This looks delicious!" Twilight exclaimed. "Thanks! I'll get some more, In case. I hope you like them, Too, Shy." He looked towards Fluttershy. She smiled. "Mm-hmm." She said, As Spike leaned to her and kissed her. Thunder and Twilight's eyes widened in surprise. Spike then began heading back to the grill. "You've got one lucky dragon, Shy," Thunder said to Fluttershy, Making her smile. He then thought for a moment. 'Man, He got over Rarity quick,' He thought to himself. "So, Mr. Ice..." Mr. Sparkle said to Thunder. "Tell me about yourself." He grinned at Mr. Sparkle. "Well, You know, I'm a nice Stallion. I care about my friends, I make sure they're safe, And especially, I do everything for them, Including your daughter." "Well, You do seem like one of the nice types, You know, Not the ones who only want her for the plot." "Daddy...!" Twilight said in embarassment. Meanwhile, At the grill, Spike was trying to get the grill to work (Spike doesn't use his Fire breath. It burns the burgers). "C'mon, You stupid piece of..." Just then, A Spark appeared. Then another. And then, A Rumbling sound erupted in the grill, Causing Spike's eyes to widen. "Uh oh..." At the table, Mr. Sparkle and Thunder were laughing at a joke Thunder said, when suddenly, They were deafened by an explosion. The shockwave from the explosion blew wind into their faces. They all looked back to see that the grill had exploded. Fluttershy's eyes instantly widened. "SPIIIIIIKE!" Fluttershy placed her face into her hooves as Thunder, Twilight, And Mr. and Mrs. Sparkle just looked in shock. Just then, Something fell down from the air onto Fluttershy's plate. When she looked, She instantly screamed as loud as she could. The object that had landed on Fluttershy's plate was Spike's Arm, Half of it just bone. Twilight fainted from the sight. I guess it's a good time to say..."BONE" APPETIT!** The End...Or is it? Finally I'm done with this story. It took some time to think of this, But It was a cheesy Idea. Also, I just decided to End this by re-enacting the Final Destination 2 Ending, But with ponies. I'm not that Good with ideas. A sequel is already in the making. Here are the characters starring in it: Lyra Rock Steady HI-C Bon Bon Shadow Heart Caramel Diskciplee Sprocket Malario For those who were probably confused after the "Thunder Dying" Part, Let's just say Death thought Thunder was killed, And so it leads up to Spike's death. I'm outta ideas. I think in Final Destination 2, Some girl tried to kill herself, But survived and messed up death's plan. I can't remember, I haven't seen that movie in years. :/ Anyway, I Hope you liked the story! Because...I sorta did... :D AN: As of 3/25/12: Just wanted to let you guys know that I'm working on MLFD2, And It will be published soon. :D
