My Little Final Destination

by Thunder Ice

A Slice of Marshmallow

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My Little Final Destination

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Chapter V: A Slice of Marshmallow


Sweet Apple Acres

4:00 p.m.

As medical carriages and reporters gathered at the barn, Big Mac sat on a Hay Cube, Tears flowing down his eyes.

He continued to cry, And then Thunder and the others showed up. Thunder was the first to speak.

"Big Mac, Are you okay? What happened?" He asked.

Big Mac couldn't speak much, But he managed to get some words out.

"A...A.J's Dead..."

Thunder and the others' eyes widened in shock. "What? How?"

Big Mac took his time to speak.

"She...She was bucking apples and placing those there apples in that barn...When I saw her, She was choking on an apple. I took it out...She thanked me...She walked back to the fallen bucket of apples, And she stepped on a rake, And the stems of it went right through her head...If we had just cleaned that barn..."

Thunder was confused. "Wait...If she stepped on the rake, How did the stems go up? She had to have stepped on the Stems in order for it to go up."

Big Mac looked at him a little angry looking.

"It was that there Double Rake yous made."

"Oh..." Thunder said, Feeling guilty.

Then, Big Mac looked to his right, And saw Applebloom sitting there.

"Applebloom..."

A tear came from her eye. "Applejack Ain't comin' back?"

Big Mac nodded. Quickly, Applebloom ran into her brother's chest, And began crying, Knowing that her sister was now dead.

"Thanks to your stupid rake you gave us...She ain't comin' back."

"ME? It was YOU who took it from me!" Thunder instantly yelled.

Twilight slowly trotted up to Thunder, Trying to calm him down. "Thunder, Calm down..."

Thunder, overtaken by anger, Turned around to Twilight.

"Shut up, Twilight!" He yelled, Not controlling himself.

Twilight's eyes widened. Her voice quivered. Then, A tear slowly came down her face.

Thunder's face went from anger to shock at what he had just done. His eyes widened as well.

A few more tears came down Twilight's face. Thunder stood there, Still shocked by his own action.

"Twilight..."

Instantly, Twilight began running away from everypony, Away from the barn, and back to her home, Crying.

Thunder watched as she ran away.

"Look what you's done. You's upset her," Big Mac said.

Thunder didn't bother turning around. He looked at the others, Them having a shocked reaction.

Then, Thunder looked back to where Twilight headed, And quickly began bolting to follow her. "Twilight, Wait!" He yelled.

The others, Including Big Mac and Applebloom, Just watched as he ran to follow her.


Twilight's Bedroom

4:10 p.m.

Thunder had managed to reach Twilight's home. He opened the door to her living room to see nopony there. "Twilight?" He trotted into the hallway of the first floor.

He opened doors that led to many rooms. "Twilight, You in here?" He asked in one of the rooms.

In about half a minute, He went upstairs, Hoping to find her up there. He reached the door to her bedroom, But when he reached it, He heard some sniffling sounds from a distance, To where the bed would be.

He knocked on the door, Hoping she would respond.

"Go away," She said, Sniffling. He spoke out to her.

"Twilight?"

"Go away, Thunder," She added.

He tried to open the door, But it was locked. "Twilight, Please, Open the door."

"Please, Just go away."

A few moments later, She heard hoofsteps slowly fading. She was then met by silence. The silence was broken as she sniffled. Suddenly, She heard a voice behind her.

"I'm sorry, Twi."

She flipped around on her bed, To see Thunder standing there. She screamed. "Whoa!" Thunder yelled.

"H-How did you get in here?" She stuttered.

Thunder nervously chuckled and pointed to the window next to her bed, Which was open.

Twilight decided to move onto the "Scene" at the farm.

"Why...Why did you yell at me?"

Thunder forgot about that for a second. His face slowly turned to sadness.

"I was...I was mad at Big Mac, Saying I was responsible for Applejack...I completely filled with un-needed anger, That when you spoke up...I couldn't stop myself...Until It was too late...I upset you...I...I hurt you...Emotionally..."

A tear fell from his eye. "I'm sorry, Twilight..."

He trotted over to the bed, And sat down. "I can never forgive myself for what I did to you...Please forgive me, Twi..."

Twilight slowly smiled, And leaned over to him. "I forgive you..." She said, Before placing her lips on his. He slowly gave into the kiss, And kissed back, His forelegs wrapping around her.

Twilight began moaning into Thunder's mouth as they shared the warm, Passionate kiss.

Slowly, Thunder and Twilight slowly began to fall onto the bed, Still kissing, Until Twilight broke the kiss. "W-Wait..."

"What?"

Twilight looked to the window, Still open. "Oh, Right..." Thunder chuckled as he got up, Walked towards the window, And closed it. "Hehe..."

Twilight smiled and giggled. Thunder then walked back to the bed.


At Rarity's home, The Carousel Boutique, She was starting on a new dress, Trying to forget about her friends' deaths.

'First Pinkie, Now Applejack?' She thought to herself.

"This doesn't make much sense," Spike said, Sitting down at a table.

"First, It was Pinkie, Now it's Applejack?"

Rarity sighed. "I know, Spike," She said. She walked over to the Invention that was created by famous builders: The Dress Maker 2000.

The Dress Maker 2000 was a large Slicing machine, Capable of Slicing thick clothing, Cloth for dresses, And, If they were stupid enough to get in the way, Ponies.

"I'm confused, As well." Rarity added, As she pulled the lever on the machine down, Sending the large, Sharp sword into the cloth, Slicing the cloth in half. But, As the sword came down, A large nail that held the Sword in place unloosened itself a little bit.

"If we were there to have helped her, We could've saved her," Spike said.

Rarity grabbed another piece of cloth and placed it down under the sword. She pulled the lever, And the sword came down and sliced the cloth in two. The nail unloosened more.

Spike slowly got up, And walked to Rarity, Who had a tear in her eye. "Hey," He said, Slowly and carefully wiping the tear out of her eye. "It's okay..."

She slowly smiled. He then leaned to her, And gently embraced her in a kiss.


Back at Twilight's home, Twilight was laying on her back in the bed, With Thunder on top. Thunder kept kissing her body, Making her moan, And giggle as it tickled.

Then, Thunder slowly got lower and lower, Until he reached her wet femslit. He looked up to her and smiled before placing his tongue into her Marehood, Licking around. Twilight loudly gasped as a response.

Thunder liked the taste. It tasted a very sweet taste. Soon, He brought his head up, And wiped off his mouth so he could kiss her once more. After the kiss, Thunder got his hard Member positioned near her entrance.

"Are you ready...?" He asked her, Pretty much cooing the question.

She nodded, Smiling. "Please...?" She whispered, Quietly begging for it.

He smiled again. As he slowly slid himself into her, He had felt himself reach her hymen. He tore through it, Ending her virginity. When he looked down to Twilight, He saw her eyes closed tightly, A tear or two coming down her face.

Thunder quickly brought his lips to hers, Not being too rough, And began kissing her.

After the kiss, Twilight slowly nodded, Motioning him to continue. Thunder then slowly began thrusting in and out of her, Making her moan in the process. Thunder's thrusts slowly increased, Making Twilight moan louder and longer. "Thunder..." She moaned.

The sound of them flapping against each other echoed throughout the bedroom, Making their love-making louder, But the Walls were sound-proof, So nopony could hear.

Thunder then felt his Climax coming. "Twi...I'm...I'm gonna..."

"Th-Thunder...I...Ah...I...!" She moaned.

Just a few moments later, They both released themselves. They basically released their fluids at the same time, And much of it leaked out of Twilight and onto the bed. They moaned each other's names in Ecstasy.

"A-A-A-A-A-A-Aahhhh!!!" Twilight's scream was very shaky.

Just about half a minute later, After the climaxes ended, Thunder slowly pulled out of Twilight and laid down next to her, Holding her in his forelegs.

"I love you, Twilight..."

She slowly turned her head around. "I love you, Too...Thunder."

They pulled each other in for another passionate kiss, And they slowly fell asleep, Thunder holding Twilight close.


Back at The Carousel Boutique, Rarity had just finished cutting the cloth she needed.

"I gotta go, Rarity...Twilight probably needs me...I'll see you later...Okay?" Spike said to her.

She looked at him, And smiled. "Okay...Bye, Spike." Before he left, However, He planted one more kiss on Rarity's lips, And began walking to the door.

Meanwhile, The nail in the Dress Maker had unloosened enough to pop out. It quickly slipped out, And the sword that stood up to the ceiling began falling down towards Rarity. Before Rarity could look back, The Sword Sliced through the center of her body, Slicing through her skin and landing on the floor with a bang. Some blood splashed everywhere.

Spike turned back to see the bloody mess, And Rarity, Who was literally split in two. "RARITYYYY!" He screamed as he saw the two halves of her fall to the floor. He ran to the sight, And looked at her sliced corpse: Organs fallen out, Blood leaking everywhere...

"No...Rarity..."

Spike began to cry, Just looking at his dead marefriend. "Why....WHYYY?!"

He continued to cry. Death had taken it's next victim...


Well, How did you like this chapter? Good...? Bad...? Enough? Good. I wasn't sure if The Carousel Boutique was Rarity's home. But, Now I do. :D Hope you liked this chapter! :D

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