My Little Final Destination

My Little Final Destination

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Chapter VII: Sword of Fate

7:40 p.m.

Twilight's Home

Thunder, Twilight, And Spike came back from the Construction site after the Ambulance picked up the remains of Dash's body, And sat in Twilight's Living room, Still shocked after the scene that occured. "So...The order we died in your vision..." Spike said before continuing, "Is the same order we die in real life?"

Thunder nodded. "It's the same way it happened in the past 5 movies. Although, The fourth one wasn't really that good, I mean, The animation is horrible, And..." He was cut off by Twilight.

"Thunder...This is serious..." She said, Her voice still shaken. He looked back at her.

"I'm sorry, Twilight. That just happens to me now..." He added before continuing, "Death has a specific Pattern for it's victims, And a specific death. Basically, For example, Pinkie, Applejack, Rarity, And Dash Died in that order. In real life, It happened. And, Soon, When the next victim dies, He'll go onto us. Appearently, Death hates to be cheated..."

Spike was worried, "You're saying that...We can't stop this?"

Thunder sighed, "Pretty much. Well...Like at the construction site...Your death was supposed to happen there, But I got you out of the way, Which meant that you cheated death. But, Death wasn't finished. He decided to skip you, And go on to the next victim, Which was Dash."

Twilight was still worried about the next victim. "Thunder...In your vision...Who was after Dash?" She asked him.

"Well, Let's see...Pinkie, A.J., Rarity, Spike, Dash, And..." When Thunder knew the next name, His eyes widened, His heart pounded against his chest, And he shuddered. "No..."

Twilight was worried still, "Who's next?" She asked him.

Slowly, Thunder looked back up at the two, And whispered with fear.

"Fluttershy."

Twilight and Spike's eyes widened with shock. Fluttershy was next after Dash, And Fluttershy...Well, They didn't know where she was.

Suddenly, They heard a knock at the door. Thunder slowly got up and trotted to the door. He opened it up, And saw that nopony was there. "Hello?" He called out. Then, He looked on the ground, And saw a white paper. He picked it up with his hooves. It read:

HEAD TO SUGARCUBE CORNER.

YOUR YELLOW FRIEND IS THERE.

SAVE HER.

The paper didn't have a signature, But Thunder knew that the pony was telling them to go now.

"What is it?" Twilight asked.

Thunder turned around and held up the paper, "It's a sign saying we should go. Now." He said, Before running out of the door, And running towards Sugarcube corner.

"Thunder, Wait!" Twilight yelled, Before bolting out the door as well. Spike also followed.

As Thunder kept running, He kept thinking about Fluttershy.

"I hope it's not too damn late..."

Meanwhile, Behind one of the trees near Twilight's home, The black Detective stallion watched as Thunder, Twilight, and Spike ran towards the Bakery.

"Good luck..." The detective said quietly.

Sugarcube Corner

7:45 p.m.

Fluttershy was sitting at a table, That had a picture of her friends, Pinkie, Rarity, Applejack, And Dash. She was all by herself, Until Big Mac sat down opposite from her.

"Hey," He said to the shy mare.

"Oh...Big Mac. I didn't know you were here."

"Just got here." He said, Grinning faintly at her. He then grabbed the picture of Applejack. He sighed. "Ah just can't believe she's gone..."

"I know...I miss her..."

Meanwhile, Near the Cupcake Bar near the Kitchen, There was a Wall Plaque holding a large sword. It was held up by a rusty nail. Above the plaque was a small Pipe that began dripping a type of acidic water on the nail, Corroding it drop by drop.

"So...How is it at the farm, Now that...You know...?"

Big Mac sighed, "Not so well...With A.J. gone, It's difficult bucking all them apple trees by mahself. Applebloom won't speak much. The whole family is falling apart since A.J.'s passing."

"Oh, My...Maybe I could help?"

"That'd be kinda ya...But Ah don't want ya ta get hurt."

"Oh...Okay then."

By now, The Nail had corroded so much that it was nearly about to break, Which would allow the sword to fall, And if Somepony was close, kill them.

"I...Gotta head back to the barn...Hopefully, I can get Applebloom to speak," Big Mac spoke.

"Okay...Bye..."

"Later, Miss."

Big Mac got up from the seat, And headed for the door. He pulled it open and walked out. Fluttershy sighed, And got up, Heading to the Cupcake bar to grab a few cupcakes before leaving. As she neared the Plaque holding the sword, Which was about to fall any second on her, She heard the door of the shop burst open.

"FLUTTERSHY!"

Fluttershy looked to the door to see Thunder, Twilight, And Spike there. "Huh?"

Thunder began running towards her. Just then, She looked up and saw the sword begin to come down. Her eyes widened, Until she felt Thunder push her out of the way. Thunder ended up getting into the path of the oncoming sword, Which sliced his stomach, And he fell to the floor, The sword landing next to him.

"No..." Twilight said, Before running to Thunder's side.

When she reached him, She saw as a line cut across Thunder's stomach was seeping blood. Everyone that was in the shop began gathering around the scene. "Thunder? THUNDER?" A very Frightened Twilight asked.

Thunder was very dizzy, And he slowly looked at Twilight and Fluttershy, Who got up and went right next to Twilight.

"F..Fluttersh-shy...Are you...O-kay?"

Fluttershy, Who had a tear in her eye, Nodded lightly. Thunder then slowly looked over to Spike.

"Sp-Spike...T...Take care of them for me..."

Just a few moments after he said that, Thunder's eyes closed. Twilight was ready to cry. "No...Thunder...Please...Don't go..."

She closed the wound as much as she could, Then, She started CPR. "Come on, Thunder...Come on..."

Tears began falling down Twilight's face, As well as Spike's and Fluttershy's. "Please...Thunder...You can't..." Tears also began falling down Fluttershy's face. She tried to speak.

"N-No...D-Don't die..."

Twilight continued to do CPR on Thunder. She then did Mouth to Mouth, And started Pumping his chest again. Her voice Echoed into the air.

"No...No..."

21 Days Later

Ponyville Hospital

12:33 p.m.

Thunder Could feel himself Regaining Consciousness, But all he saw around him was white. "Oh, Man..."

Then, Slowly, The White faded, And began showing the details of a Room. Like a Hospital Room. He began looking around the room and saw some things, Including a Breakfast tray with Pancakes and Orange Juice. Suddenly, He heard a voice.

"You're awake."

He looked to the door, And saw Fluttershy standing there. "Fluttershy?" Slowly, She trotted towards him and began to hug him. Slowly, He felt tears on his foreleg Shoulders. He looked to his side to see Fluttershy crying.

"I...I thought you wouldn't wake up."

Slowly, Thunder placed his forelegs around her, As well. "Hey...It's okay, Shy. I'm alright..." He smiled as she continued hugging him. Then, He heard another voice.

"Thunder?"

He looked to the door to see Twilight and Spike standing their as well. "Hey."

"You're awake!"

"Yep."

Spike was suprised, "It's a miracle. The doctors said you'd never wake up."

Fluttershy let go of him as he continued speaking, "Well, It'll take more than a blade to kill me."

Then, Thunder looked confused, "Wait...How long have I been asleep?" He asked.

Twilight then sounded disappointed when she spoke. "3 Weeks."

"Oh, That's not so bad. I needed some sleep anyway," He said, Chuckling. Fluttershy giggled as a response. Spike also chuckled. Twilight just smiled.

"So...What have you guys been doing the whole time I was out?" He asked, Wondering.

"We've...We've been praying..."

"Praying?"

"Yes...We prayed to your god, That hopefully, You'd wake up. Looks like he answered our prayers."

"Yeah..." He smiled.

Then, Twilight began trotting towards Thunder. When she reached his bed, She began looking into his eyes, Him looking into hers. Then, Slowly, They leaned towards each other, And finally, Their lips met in a romantic kiss.

Fluttershy and Spike looked in Awe as the couple kissed. Although they couldn't see it, Thunder gained entrance into Twilight's mouth with his tongue, And also allowed her to enter his mouth, And their tongues danced around in a romantic bond.

After their lips parted, They stared into each other eyes in an endless, Unbreakable Bond of love.

2 Days Later

Twilight's Parent's backyard

3:23 p.m.

Thunder, Twilight, Fluttershy, and Mr. and Mrs. Sparkle were sitting at a table, Eating some food that Spike had prepared for them. Spike then came back from a homemade grill with a plate of Extra burgers.

"Wow, Spike, This looks delicious!" Twilight exclaimed.

"Thanks! I'll get some more, In case. I hope you like them, Too, Shy." He looked towards Fluttershy.

She smiled. "Mm-hmm." She said, As Spike leaned to her and kissed her. Thunder and Twilight's eyes widened in surprise. Spike then began heading back to the grill.

"You've got one lucky dragon, Shy," Thunder said to Fluttershy, Making her smile. He then thought for a moment.

'Man, He got over Rarity quick,' He thought to himself.

"So, Mr. Ice..." Mr. Sparkle said to Thunder. "Tell me about yourself."

He grinned at Mr. Sparkle. "Well, You know, I'm a nice Stallion. I care about my friends, I make sure they're safe, And especially, I do everything for them, Including your daughter."

"Well, You do seem like one of the nice types, You know, Not the ones who only want her for the plot."

"Daddy...!" Twilight said in embarassment.

Meanwhile, At the grill, Spike was trying to get the grill to work (Spike doesn't use his Fire breath. It burns the burgers). "C'mon, You stupid piece of..."

Just then, A Spark appeared. Then another. And then, A Rumbling sound erupted in the grill, Causing Spike's eyes to widen. "Uh oh..."

At the table, Mr. Sparkle and Thunder were laughing at a joke Thunder said, when suddenly, They were deafened by an explosion. The shockwave from the explosion blew wind into their faces. They all looked back to see that the grill had exploded. Fluttershy's eyes instantly widened.

"SPIIIIIIKE!"

Fluttershy placed her face into her hooves as Thunder, Twilight, And Mr. and Mrs. Sparkle just looked in shock. Just then, Something fell down from the air onto Fluttershy's plate. When she looked, She instantly screamed as loud as she could. The object that had landed on Fluttershy's plate was Spike's Arm, Half of it just bone.

Twilight fainted from the sight.

I guess it's a good time to say..."BONE" APPETIT!**

The End...Or is it?

Finally I'm done with this story. It took some time to think of this, But It was a cheesy Idea. Also, I just decided to End this by re-enacting the Final Destination 2 Ending, But with ponies. I'm not that Good with ideas. A sequel is already in the making. Here are the characters starring in it:

Lyra

Rock Steady

HI-C

Bon Bon

Shadow Heart

Caramel

Diskciplee Sprocket

Malario

For those who were probably confused after the "Thunder Dying" Part, Let's just say Death thought Thunder was killed, And so it leads up to Spike's death. I'm outta ideas. I think in Final Destination 2, Some girl tried to kill herself, But survived and messed up death's plan. I can't remember, I haven't seen that movie in years. :/

Anyway, I Hope you liked the story! Because...I sorta did... :D

AN: As of 3/25/12: Just wanted to let you guys know that I'm working on MLFD2, And It will be published soon. :D