Dragon's Tale, the city of Darkrise

To my dear readers

I am sorry to inform you that I will be revoking the submission of this story on the 30th of may 2014.

After a lot of consideration, I found out that a full rewriting of this story is needed for me to achieve the level this story in itself deserve, In the new story a lot of the plot points are going to change, the characters are also undergoing a full remake, though the premise of the story (as in the city of Darkrise and the world building) are going to remain the same, as well as the style of first character.

As a consolation prize however I will tell you why Spike left Equestria: During a second changeling invasion, taking this time in the Crystal empire, Queen Chrysalis managed to capture Princess Twilight with  Spike failing to save or even help her, in the aftermath of the invasion, the mane six express their frustration over the baby dragon uselessness in that situation which guilted the dragon into running away. In the end of the story, the princesses (Celestia, Luna, Twilight) will head to Darkrise in order to form diplomatic relationship with their southern neighbors, that is when they will find Spike and convince him to return home.

I apologies again for my readers who liked this story, and I do hope to see you again when the new one is published.

Yours truly

IMN