Just a visit...

by Gray Compass

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Fluttershy, Sex, Big Macintosh, Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy
Length: 2928

After an exhaustive week of work and shows, Big Mac just wants to relax. Maybe Fluttershy can help him with that...

Every stallion deserves a break from work, in special Big Mac, that besides the farm, still has to sing for the Ponytones once in a while.

Maybe Fluttershy can help him with that... Maybe sing one of her relaxing songs, or a massage — or well — let's see what else she can do.

Published 2014-02-17 17:30:02 UTC
Last updated 2014-02-17 17:30:02 UTC

Fluttershy... What happened to your voice?

Just a visit...

Darn! It was surely a hard day for Mac; two shows, almost no lunch, and he still had to help Applejack at the farm.

"Oh darling, it was just splendorous!" Said Rarity as they left Filthy Rich's mansion. If it wasn't for that snob filly presence, he could agree with Rarity. But nonetheless, It was a nice show.

"We are going to celebrate the Ponytones success in my place, maybe some fine appetizers and a good wine. Are you coming?"

He thought about it for a while, and shook his head. "Nope" Mac said.

Three days ago, he would have accepted this invitation without a hint, but today, the poor stallion just wanted a moment of peace.

"Ummm... Ah'm sorry Rarity, but ah still have some hay to stack back there on the farm..." He looked to the ground awkwardly, kicking some pebbles with his unshorn fetlocks.

"Well, o-okay then, don't worry about it, I understand. Just say hello to your sister for me!"

"Yeep!" He nodded.

She smiled and left along with the rest of the band towards Carousel Boutique. Big Mac stood there on the road, pondering; he could go back to Sweet Apple Acres right now, and spend the rest of his afternoon working.

Or... Maybe he could go somewhere else, rest, take that well deserved nap, and come back home later. His family wouldn't even notice, besides, he could say that the show took longer than expected.

Now, that sounded like a nice plan! But where would he go? Big Mac wasn't close friends with anypony there in the city, he could pass by Caramel's house but — Better not, that fella is- ah, he's kinda strange. — Mac thought.

He turned around and spotted the Everfree border road.

Umm- Maybe Fluttershy is at home. — Since earlier events, when he lost his voice, both had become friends. Of course that they mutual shyness was naturally a problematic factor. But Mac couldn't deny; he appreciated the yellow pegasus company.

And now that he thought about it; the stallion was indeed invited several times by Fluttershy to pay her a visit. Why not? This was a good opportunity.

Her cottage was always so cozy and quiet, the perfect place to take that nap, or maybe chat — or maybe both. Yes. He said to himself, Sweet Apple Acres could wait a little bit more.

Now he just needed some kindness.

"Hmmmmmmph" Fluttershy softly moaned under her breath.

There she was, laying on her bed, hind legs spread and a hoof stuck between her thighs. The little pegasus couldn't contain her urges anymore; since he never seemed to show any signs of interest on her person, this was the only way she could appeal to satisfy her marehood.

Fluttershy slowly stroked her now soaked lips, feeling the slightly hard part of her under-hoof brushing against her folds, the only thing inside her lust-filled mind was a large and strong stallion, a very specific one; Big Macintosh, of course. Many times before she tried to draw his attention, but all efforts were in vain... She even shook her butt on the window for Celestia's sake!

"O-oh Mac." She whispered.

The pegasus rubbed her winking button delicately, as her inner walls contracted. A burning sensation took over every single inch of her body, her pussy just begged to be filled with something else. As Fluttershy inserted just the tip of her hoof inside of her, pictures of the virile stallion flashed through her mind — his heavy hooves planting her on the ground, that large cock stretching her walls, she was being dominated, and she loved it.

"Nghhhhh... Ahhhh!" Fluttershy's hooves were completely drenched, dripping her sticky fluids all over her chest, hind-legs spasmodically kicking the air as an electric shiver ran through her entire spine. She would cum at any second.

"Fluttershy?"

It was so vivid, she could even listen to his voice.

"Ermmm... Fluttershy, 'r you at home?" She froze in place. This couldn't be-

"Shy?"

Still panting heavily, she peered through the window only to see her own fantasy waiting outside.

Big Macintosh.

She almost fainted. Fluttersy gasped and for a second, threw herself on the floor to hide. Her legs still too weak and wet from her previous activities.

"Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh" She was panicking "If I s-stay here he may leave, b-but... O-oh my... But how can I e-even..."

She peered again, but this time Big Mac had already turned around and was— leaving!

"O-oh no!" Fluttershy with great courage, summoned forces out of nowhere and jumped.

"Wait!" She screamed from the small round window of her room. This wasn't the kind of opportunity she would simply let walk away.

"I'm... I'm going down."

Big Mac was indeed leaving when Fluttershy said that. Well, he just hoped to not be bothering her too much.

She opened the cottage door and greeted the stallion with a timid smile. "Oh... H-hello Mac!" The pegasus was covered in sweat from the the head to the hooves, her mane and wings abnormally disheveled.

"Oh, howdy Fluttershy..." He scratched his neck. "I'm sorry, ah came without warning. I can come back later if—"

"No!" That word came out louder than expected. "I-I mean... I was j-just ummm... Feeding the animals, as I always do." She forced a giggle "Here little Angel, take your lunch." She stuck a carrot inside the bunny's mouth. A quite wet and sticky carrot.

She looked down to herself, and noticed her oddly drenched condition. With tremendous will, Fluttershy suppressed a gasp.

"W-why don't you come inside? I j-just have to take a quick shower... If you don't mind." A soft blush colored her cheeks.

"Nope." He said, and walked inside the small cottage. Mac couldn't help but chuckle at the sight of Angel awkwardly staring at the carrot.

Funny little critter — He thought.

"Just make y-yourself at home. I'll be right back." The stallion answered with an affirmative nod.

As Fluttershy left, he easily found a cozy spot on the couch. Almost everything seemed cozy here. The fresh breeze coming from the windows, the birds humming outside; even the smell of the nearby forest was pleasant.

Everything was so simple and at the same time so enjoyable. He could even...

Sleep.

As Fluttershy finished her bath and double checked her hooves to make sure she had cleaned all of that mess, she walked downstairs and found a quietly asleep pony over her couch.

Oh, he's so adorable... — She thought, sitting next to him, very cautiously at first, but in no time she started to pet his mane, those beautiful blonde locks, his delicious apple smell mixed up with a natural masculine scent. — Oh my.

Without realizing, she was tucking her muzzle into his mane. Mac noticed it, but it felt good, so he just ignored it.

"Fluttershy?" He asked a couple of minutes later, almost causing her a heart attack . She gasped "I-I... I-I'm sorry! I didn't m-meant to-"

Big Mac chuckled. "Hey, that's fine, I'm not complaining 'bout that"

"Oh... You w-weren't? But I shouldn't have... I shouldn't have played with your mane without your permission." She sheepishly hopped back on the couch, her face in a deep crimson tone.

An awkward silence filled the room. "So... What brought you here? N-not that I don't want you here!" She quickly added. "I'm just wondering."

"Well, actually, I had a quite tiresome week, ya know?" Fluttershy nodded. "So ah thought it would be nice to pay you a visit — chat — ah dunno..."

Big Mac stretched his neck, his spine was sore from all the singing, and of course, the applebuck.

"Ouch" He flinched. One of his vertebrae making a slightly painful crack.

"Oh my! Are you okay!?" The pegasus instantly flew over to his side.

"It's nothing to worry 'bout Shy. Ah think I'm getting rusty." He rubbed the base of his neck.

She pressed some seemingly random spots around his shoulders, which elicited shivers down his spine."No, your muscles are all tense and knotted up. I can give you a massage if you want to."

"Ya don't need to do it Shy, I don't wanna take yar time." He squirmed under the pegasus touch.

"Don't worry about this, I would love to make you feel better!" She smiled. Fluttershy loved to help a friend in need. In special if her friend was Big Mac.

"Oh heavens... That's wonderful, Shy!" Said the stallion as the she rubbed and massaged his backbone; Fluttershy had learned much about this during all the years working as animal caretaker.

Laying on his stomach over the bed, his muzzle buried on Fluttershy's pillows, he could smell a soft, but peculiar scent. He couldn't clearly discern it, but there was surely something else; it was very entrancing.

He felt those delicate hooves of her caressing his column, satisfying snaps and shivers running through his body — and for Celestia's sake! — a very awkward boner stiffening between his legs. Oh no, this couldn't be happening. Not now, not there! She would never look at him again, what Applejack would say about this??

"Could you turn a-around now? So I can work on your hooves... That if you don't mind." Heck!

"Ah... Umm... Are ya sure ya finished everything back there?" Darn it, why? And the smell, he couldn't stop thinking about, that thing was just forcing his cock to grow bigger.

"Yes silly pony, I finished everything" She chuckled innocently. " Now turn around, I need to reach your hooves from the other side."

"Nope" He said, trying to avoid eye contact.

"W-why? Am I doing something wrong? D-do you... I'm sorry I didn't meant to—"

"Shy, It's mah fault..." He sighed "A-ah have a problem down there." The stallion blushed. This was the awkwardest moment of his life, surely.

"W-well, but if you refuse to show me your problem, I'll be unable to solve it, right?" Poor Fluttershy... The innocence is a gift and a curse.

He couldn't stay like that forever, besides, his cock wasn't showing any signs of withdrawal. "Awww horseaples." Slowly, and with the worst blush in Equestria, Mac turned on his back, revealing his throbbing member to a very stunned Fluttershy.

As the stallion in front of her revealed his problem, Fluttershy couldn't help but think about how big it was that problem.

"O-oh... A-ah, that's y-your problem..." She tried to look away from his erection, but she soon realized it was practically impossible to do that without punching her own eyes.

"Ah am so sorry 'bout that Flutershy, I'll leave now." Big Mac tried to stand up, but was restrained by one of Fluttershy wings.

"No! Y-you don't have to! I mean... If you want, I can f-ix... Your problem." Now it was her turn to get a boner; a wing one.

Mac was astonished, how could Fluttershy volunteer herself to do such a thing? Does she even knew what it meant?

"Fluttershy, a-are ya sure bout that? Ya truly don't have to." She didn't knew much about such a delicate subject, except the fair share of knowledge that Rarity kindly shared with her during their spa days.

And she had shared many things.

"Y-yes... I just want to make you fell better." She blushed furiously. Now the question was; where to begin?

Mac was still frozen in place, with no more words to say. Fluttershy evaluated the situation; she had to do something, but what? There were so many probabilities, where to grab, how to grab. Oh my, she was panicking!

And then, Fluttershy did the most unexpected thing of all: Engulfed half of his cock at once.

"Ahhhhhh." The stallion moaned from the sudden hot sensation around his member. As fast as she engulfed it, Fluttershy pulled out. "O-oh I'm sorry, did I hurt you??" She asked nervously.

"N-no Flutter... That was good." She smiled at that. Glad to see he was enjoying it.

For this second time, she came back slower; with a hoof she grabbed the base of his shaft, while her tongue, traced small and delicate licks around the large and flat tip of his dick.

"Ohhh darn t-hat's just..." For her first time, he thought she was doing a great job.

The small pegasus started to move her hoof up and down his length. Big Mac wasn't the only one aroused; Flutershy's wingtips were nearly touching the roof, her heart racing as a timberwolf.

Slowly, she inserted the tip of his cock inside her mouth, coating it with saliva, which started to drip from her lips as she tenderly bobbed up and down, teasing and sucking at the same time. Her fluffy hoof caressed his dick, making the stallion crazy at the sight of that little and innocent pony doing such nasty things.

Placing one of his hooves on her cheek, he guided her muzzle around his member, Fluttershy made small circular movements with her head back and forth, caressing its flaring tip with her wet and slippery tongue. She could feel the contours of his stallionhood poking her throat every time she tilted to one side or the other

"Nhhhhgggggg..." He grunted. Fluttershy had placed both her hooves around his cock, and sucked the top of it like a lollipop, her half-lidded eyes gazing at him. With his available hoof, Mac began to push her muzzle deeper and deeper into his mast, the feeling intensified as the pegasus tried to swallow and gagged.

Besides all the pressure, Fluttershy increased the pace, fondling his balls very gently with her hooves. Big Mac couldn't control himself anymore; resting both hooves over her head he started to move his hips, fucking that little mouth of her. She choked at first, drooling even more as spurts saliva leaked down her chin. But as she picked up the breath technique everything turned out to be just fine.

With each thrust, his length went deeper inside her throat. All of that warmness, the tightness, it hurt so so good. Her arousal was uncontrollable and with a spare hoof she began to stroke her already wet cunt.

Fluttershy moaned and cried as his cock twisted sharply at the back of her mouth as it slid past her throat and down her gullet. Every time she swallowed, he felt that straight passage clamping his throb. He couldn't bear it much longer...

Mac balls were completely coated in mix of their fluids. As Fluttershy came closer to reach her own climax, her moaning intensified, as so the deep vibrations around his cock.

"O-hhhhh, Shy... Hmphhhhh, I'm gonna cum!" Hearing that, the innocent pony shoved his dick the deeper possible inside of her throat, fighting against the gag reflex. She let a long and muffled moan escape.

The burst of sensations around his member was unbearable; Mac felt a wave of heat running through his body as a strong spurt of cum left his stallionhood right inside Fluttershy's throat, followed by another, and another one, she swallowed all of his warm and thick milk. When he finally took his dick out of her throat, the mare was almost dying from air deprivation.

"Ahhhh" Mac let a final spurt of foal seed accidentally fly on her face. The still coughing yellow pegasus licked her lips and collapsed on the bed right next to him. Both of them breathing hard after that little show.

"Thank ya... Fluttershy" He said between puffs of air.

"I'm g-glad you liked it." She panted "You're feeling... Better, a-after all." Her voice was husky, but that was completely understandable, considering what just happened.

After that massage, Big Macintosh unfortunately had to leave. It was almost night, and Applejack already wondered about where the hell he went to.

And Flutershy — well, she definitely needed another bath.

It was around dinner, when a knock at the door drew her attention. It was Twilight, the bookworm. "Oh, hello" Fluttershy said as she opened the door.

"Hello Fluttershy!" She smiled. "I just came here to bring back your book about herbs, It was very useful..." Fluttershy just shook her head approvingly.

"Erm... Are you okay?" Noticing the pegasus awkward face, Twilight asked. Fluttershy just nodded again.

"What happened to your voice? You're not Flutterguy again are you?" She giggled.

"No..." Fluttershy replied with a raspy and barely audible voice. Her throat was... Well, it was... fucked up. Literally.

"Oh Fluttershy — you know you don't have to be ashamed about that!" Twilight placed a friendly hoof around her shoulder. The pegasus froze at hearing that. Does she know?? How could she know about that?

"I-I... I, d-don't??" Dear god, how could she even justify that to Twilight?? What if Applejack knew—

"Of course not Fluttershy, haven't we said it to you dozens of times before? You don't have to be ashamed! It's okay to lose your voice after singing."

For Celestia's beard! That was close. She left a sigh of relief.

"Y-yes- O-of course. Please come in Twilight." She walked to the fireplace and got a teapot; yes... maybe some warm tea could help her.

"You have no idea of h-how much I sang today..." She chuckled.

Yes, she truly had no idea.

Oh, if Twilight just knew the size of the microphone...

Author's Note

Congratulations, you've just read another piece of pure nonsense. Anyway, don't forget to rate it!

Pedro Hander