Crystals in the heart

by xblade

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, Sad, Romance, Tragedy
Length: 2170

The sequel of "dash"ing story takes place with Lighting bolt(oc) and the newest character (oc)

Lightning Bolt is a colt who thinks he has pretty much has everything he could want, and is almost perfect in every right. He is paired up with another mare for a school project, of which he doesn't like, but will be put to the test as his emotions have been tried from past horrors. Can this pony be broken, and can his partner see through to his heart?
This story doesn't require you and would not read the dashing story. (Read at your own risk)But read this one alot of time and effort was put into this.
Don't basis this description on the story. Read it. Just do it. And special thanks to my editor Mondai Shunketsu. He put alot of time and effort into helping make this story. Read it,fav it,like it,follow it,and comment.
(A sequel to The “Dash”ing Story)

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-04-17 00:30:04 UTC

The diamond in the rough Part 1

"Well it's another beautiful morning in Equestria! Tom?" came the voice of a particular mare.

"Yes, it certainly is, Vinyl," replied Tom.

An automated message sounded over the radio: You’re listening to Dubstep radio on 101.9 FM with Tom and Vinyl Scratch. Lightning Bolt was still half asleep, fumbling about his sheets to hit the volume on his radio.

"Wheres the snooze button?" He clicked it with his hooves, groaning to himself after it ceased its blaring. A little bit later, he rose from his bed, the sun baking his face lightly. “What time is it,” he yawned. “It-s-s-s..... OH MY CELESTIA! I'M GOING TO BE LATE FOR CLASS!"

He jumped out of bed not evening bothering with his sheets and booked it down the stairs as fast as his hooves could carry him. "I got to make breakfast!" Lightning glanced at the clock. "Oh My Celestia! I'm so going to be late!" he said in a panicky tone. Lightning hurriedly reached for his books and went to make his lunch.

"Oh, I've no time to pack my lunch!"

(Err…the script has Lightning pack his lunch…)

Lightning Bolt urgently trotted to his room to get the rest of his belongings. "Urgh I'm going to be late. Ok so I might as well buy lunch. I really don't have any time.”

(I won’t say it again, the story has Lightning Bolt PACK his lunch!!!)

"I've got so little time,” Lightning said, hurrying out the door. “Ah there, some bits for later."

(No! Follow the script, make your lunch!!! NOOOO!!!!!)

Lightning wolfed down his breakfast and prepared a teleportation spell. As he was swallowing, he activated his magic and vanished from his current spot.

The hallways were empty, save for one colt hurrying to the class of his destination. Lightning Bolt grunts, "Come On!" The bell rings defiantly in his ears, but he hastens his pace and tries for the door. He can see his class just down the hall.

"GO… GO… GO... AN-N-N-D!" he slides into the room, just as the door is about to close. “I’m…!”

"LATE!" replied Mr.Golden. The teacher scowled at Lightning and handed him a slip of paper. “I figured you would be, so I made this in advance.”

"2 hours?!" Lightning shouted, disbelief all over his face. Snickers rang out from the entire class. "Detention! Aw mare, this blows!" he groaned.

"Well Mr. Bolt, would you be so kind and join the rest of the class?" Mr. Golden said.

The classroom giggles as the class clown trots into class.  Sure he’s the smartest pony in probably the entire academy, but his unruly antics and haughty behavior don’t exactly earn him the respect he should feel he deserves.

"What did Mr.Golden give you?" a colt asked to side.

Lightning Bolt slams his head on his desk and mumbles, "2 Hours."

"That sucks, bro."

Mr. Golden yells, "NO TALKING!" He clears his throat and straightens his mane. "Ok, class, today I will pick your partners for a big project that is worth most of your grade." He lifted the list from his desk and began reading off names, much to Lightning bemusement. Going down the list, he finally came down to....

"Crystal, you’re with Lightning Bolt."

"NO!" They stated unison.

"Yes!" stated Mr.Golden. "I want all partners to set up times, when you can get together with each other and work on the project," he replied. The whole class started to get up and move around to try and find their partners.

"You can do this. It's one project then you don't have to talk with her again." He looked over at the strange mare and frowned. Nopony liked this girl. "Hey… um," Lightning Bolt tried to speak, but his brain failed him.

"Crystal"she stated with sass.

"Salty, aren't we?"Lightning Bolt asked sarcastically.

"Not at all, because ponies are 75% water," she replied in a matter of factually way.

"Well, aren't you just a barrel of laughs?" Lightning said jokingly.

"No, I'm not a barrel, and what is laughter?" she asked quizzically.

"Laughter is an involuntary, physical reaction in ponies, consisting typically of rhythmical, often audible contractions of the diaphragm," Lightning said, talking right out of his ass.

"Whatever," she replied, flaunting her mane. "Um, listen, meet me at my house tomorrow. Here are the directions. I'll see you there."

Before Lightning can speak, the bell rings, signaling the end of homeroom. Crystal leaves without saying a word, leaving Lightning alone and confused.

"Ugh, I can't believe I got stuck with the most emotional challenged, and probably most socially challenged pony as well!" Lightning Bolt complained.

The diamond in the rough Part 2

It was a nice sunny day with not a cloud in the sky.

"Looks like the weather team did a fantastic job with today," Lightning Bolt said while trotting and following the directions Crystal had given him. "Is this the place?" said Lightning Bolt in a confused manner. "Knocking....knocking...answer the door already," said Lightning Bolt waiting impatiently.

The door opens and.... Crystal trots out. She stares at Lightning Bolt. Lightning Notices and blinks oddly.

..."Are you ok?" he asked.

Crystal continues staring until finally she says, "Yes I'm fine," in a peppy voice. Lightning Bolt stood there with his mouth agape. Crystal turns around and says, "You coming or what?" still very upbeat. Lightning Bolt is completely perturbed by this personality 180. But, in the end decides to follow her.

After a few minutes of trotting they finally got to her room. It was.... rainbow colored....

Lightning Bolt had no words. He just stood their with his mouth still ajar.

"Well, isn't it pretty?" Crystal said while staring at him. Tears well up in lightning's eyes. In his mind all he could think about is his mother. Crystal noticed this and acted quickly, moving in fast. She could see it in his eyes; pain, sadness.... so much sadness, anger; all of this was welled up inside his heart. She tried to get close but he moved back.

"Leave me alone," Lightning Bolt said in a messy arraignment of emotions.

"No," Crystal said in a serious tone. "You need help and I can help you!" She pushed Lightning to the ground.

"Wait, how could possible help me and you barely know me?" asked Lightning Bolt questioningly.

She starts laughing then, which made Lightning very confused. She looks down at him and smiles.

“Because I can see inside your heart,” Crystal replied.

Lightning had no response to this. He couldn’t believe this was happening. It was all so overwhelming. As she gets closer to his face, their eyes locked, staring deep into his heart. She was so close to his face that they were a millimeter apart from each other. Then finally, their faces met, and she dove right for his mouth. Lightning Bolt didn't know whether to be turned on by this, or be disgusted. She kept digging her tongue into his mouth. Finally he gave up and welcomed her advance.

This sensation was so odd, yet it felt so good. He never wanted this to end. Unluckily for him Crystal pulled back. He begged and pleaded for her to keep going. But, she couldn't until she cleared up that emotional distress. Just then, she felt something throbbing under her. She got off him to see his stallionhood standing erect at attention.

"Aw, it’s so big," purred Crystal. That was biggest cock she had ever seen. "I think I know how to help you,” she said kinkily. She moved down slowly, licking all the way down to his massive length. "Ready to take your medicine?" she asked, eyeing it and ready to pounce.

"WAIT!" said Lightning, in a rushed and nervous tone.

"Yes," Crystal said while continuing to ready herself.

"I don't think i'm ready for this,"said Lightning in a not so assuring manner.

"I think you've needed this for a long time," she said before moving closer to the tip. Finally, it happened.

BOOP.

As her nose cringes on the tip of the cock, she follows up with a kiss. This turned on Lightning so much.

"Wow, you must really like that. Well then, you’re going to love this," she says while grabbing his length with her hooves. She then proceeds to lick up and down him like a Popsicle.

"Oh my-y Celestia-a-a. This feels so-o-o-o goo-d-d-d,"said Lighting in a state of bliss. She then moved to licking the lip. Precum started leaking and she drank that all up.

"You taste so good," she moaned. She started to suck on the tip and this drove Lightning out of his mind. He couldn’t help but moan. She noticed this and decided to go further down his length. He could feel her warm suckling mouth bobble up and down him. As he increased his moaning, she increased her pace. Finally he bottomed out in her mouth. She wanted him so badly to release all of his emotions and let the past go but in order to do that she had to make him "release" his warm seeds.

After a few minutes of this going on, he couldn't hold back any longer. "Crystal I'm going to cum," he said while he felt like he was going to explode.

"Good, give it to me. All in my mouth. Your emotions, your pain, your suffering and most of all your love," she said then, going back down on his length. Finally he came, spurting out hot seeds right down her throat. "Mhmhmhm. That was amazing."

Lightning was in a state of pure bliss. He was slowly coming back down. "Hehe, I guess you liked it," she said in a happy voice.

He finally came down and said, "That was the best thing I've felt in a long time. Thank you, Crystal."

"Lightning?" she asked.

"Yeah" he answered.

"Do you want to be my special somepony?" Something in his memory clicked. He could faintly hear the voice of his mother.

One day you'll find a special somepony, but be careful, because she can see through your heart…

Then it all came to him. Crystal was meant to be his special somepony.

"Yes," he said after a while.

She was so happy. She jumped up and dove into him.

"A kiss… one that, he would never forget."

Lightning Bolt's Backstory/memory

When the rich are given money, greed consumes them and they turn everything around them into objects that reflect them.

What kind of world do we live in that our light is taken from our dark? This balance is always tilting. Yin and Yang. If one side were to grow, Chaos would ensue. When the weak fall and the strong rise, only the one who can see through to the heart may triumph.

Lightning Bolt looked up to the sky, lost in thought.

“Dad, I remember when you used to tell me stories like that,” Lightning Bolt mumbled to himself. “Too bad he didn't realize that there aren't ponies out there that can see into other ponies hearts.”

Lightning's ears zeroed in on the stranger and his eyes grid locked.

Lighting Bolt took a defensive stance and yelled, “Who is that! Show your-r-r-r”

Rainbow Dash, with a depressed look in her eyes, said, “You're thinking about him, aren't you?”

Lighting Bolt turning his head said quickly. “No, I wasn't thinking about him.”

Rainbow Dash softened her tone. “Son its ok to be upset.”

“I'm not upset!” Lightning shouted.

Rainbow Dash pulled him into a hug. “I know its hard, but-t-t…!”

Lighting Bolt ripped her hoof off of his back. “HOW COULD YOU UNDERSTAND MY PAIN?! DAD MEANT EVERYTHING TO ME! NOW I DON'T KNOW WHERE HE IS! I DON'T EVEN KNOW IF HE'S ALIVE! HOW COULD YOU POSSIBLY UNDERSTAND!” he screamed, throwing his face into hers.

Rainbow Dash swiftly slapped him.

Lighting Bolt looked up confused. “You hit me.”

Tears flowed down Rainbow Dash’s face. “How could say such things? Your father loved you. He taught you everything he knew,” she sniffled, trying to regain her composure. “You can't say I don't understand your pain, I was as close or even closer to him than you were.”

Rainbow Dash shouted angrily, “YOUR FATHER LEFT, BUT WE ARE A FAMILY; WE STICK TOGETHER THROUGH THICK AND THIN! OR, WOULD LIKE ME TO SLAP YOU AGAIN!?”

Lightning Bolt sat there and stared up at his mother while she stroked his cheek. “I'm good.”

Rainbow Dash trotted closer. “Listen,” she started.

Lighting Bolt tried to pay attention.

“One day you'll meet somepony. You'll fall in love,” she said. “But be careful, she will be able to see into your heart....” her voice trailing off into the distance.

Lighting Bolt suddenly woke up in his dorm bedroom, full of sweat and breathing hard. He lied in bed, staring at the ceiling and sniffling softly to himself. hot streaks flowed down the side of his face and he covered his head, unable to resist the urge to cry.