Cupcakes : a crinkledash alternitive

by princess alaska

Rating: everyone
Tags: Tragedy
Length: 420

This is my first fic, please give good advice on how I can improve! Rainbow Dash survives Pinkie brutally murdering her but has to face a humiliating punishment.

"Dashie, you can't move! My knife is MISSING you when it's not supposed to!" Pinkie moaned as Dash groaned in pain, tears streaming down her face and her wings beating franticly. She was so much in pain that she 'took a nap'. Pinkie stared and sighed. Her victims never really went to sleep or tried to. They endured the pain and agony Pinkie gave them or had a genuine black-out. But this was not a genuine black-out or faint. She was trying to forget and die peacefully in her sleep, like any normal pony without their numbers coming up would do. She never had to do it before, but she had a punishment for ponies like those. She wanted to do it so badly now, Dashie looked adorable when sleeping actually in this state. She undid the leather belts. If anypony was trying to go to sleep when she was doing her business, she decided, instead of dying they might do something else. Pinkie could tell that they were to young to die, and she knew that they would try to go to sleep again when going through torture. She needed to see the pain they experienced because, from a professional she heard that cupcakes tasted disgusting when coming from a sleeping pony, because the heart was the key ingredient, and should the victim be sleeping, it was no use. She picked out a small pink garment and put Rainbow Dash in a cage, gently, so as not to wake her and still holding the garment in her hooves.
"Wake up, Dashie…" Said a voice.
"P- P- P- Pinkie?" Replied Dash. "What are you doing here? I should be dead by now, right? "
She looked back and saw stitching on all the parts which were originally cut off, and a small plaster with a balloon on it on her side.
"Hello, Rainbow Dash. You have tried to sleep. I congratulate you. You have escaped death, but have to suffer a humiliating punishment."
Pinkie Pie waited for the suspected reply.
"What?"
"You are my baby now. You acted like one. First the 'mommy, I want to go home' scream, and then sleeping." Pinkie answered. "By the way, you looked adorable when sleeping." Pinkie could not resist saying that.
"YOUR baby? No thanks, I've already had it with Fluttershy."
Pinkie just frowned. "Well, now that you are awake, I'll just go get my knife and start my buis-" Rainbow Dash cut in.
"No! Fine, I'll be your baby!" As soon as she said that, Pinkie's dissapointed frown was replaced by a smile.
"Okay, then, here are rules! One: wearing a diaper at all times."
Pinkie Pie held up the pink, rustling garment that she had his being her back. It had a little set of balloons on it and the frills were made of streamers. Stitched on the side, there was, 'Pinkie's adorable little one".
"Wow." Said Dash. Pinkie had really mean't for the bearer to be as embarrassed as possible, hadn't she? She also held up a pair of transparent plastic pants. They were very high tech, Pinkie must of took lessons from Twilight. They had a lock on them with a combination.
"So only I can change you." Pinkie said as she saw Rainbow's eyes wander to the pair of plastic pants. Pinkie gave Dash some information, which in Dash's eyes, only made the punishment worse.
"These are the high tech pinkie pads pro! They are accostumed for up to a weeks use, with diaper rash preventing spray on it. I use some of the organs for 'science' too, you know, not just cupcakes. If you ask for a change and it has not been seven full days, the itching powder will kick in for an hour, as it is sound detecting. It has very special heat and cool sources in it, to make the poop runny and the pee smell bad. But the thing is, only you will smell it. If you try to escape, a most embarrassing thing will happen. Your diapers will be made to kick in ucontroable itching powder realese, and you cannot scratch, the diaper is too thick and also, the 'massage sensors' will go, making you poop and pee all the time and you will not get changed for another week and by the way, when you 'poop and pee all the time' this will occur when sleeping as well for a day, and I have the 'remote' for the itching powder.' See?' Pinkie got the itching powder remote. It had a label on it saying 'extra strong itching powder remote' She showed dash it and put it back down. She beckoned Rainbow Dash onto a changing table.Dash didn't bother to struggle free when she was strapped, Pinkie had a large paddle nearby. The diaper rustled up her legs and was taped. It fit very snugly and it was very warm. She picked up the pair of plastic pants, sealed with the combination and got her down to look in a mirror. Dash saw a helpless filly. Pinkie Pie took Dash and went to a small closet.
"Rule 2: Baby clothes." Said Pinkie. She took some overalls and examined them, but then an 'oh! expression came to her face. She picked out a bonnet, a PINK bonnet and tied it onto Rainbow Dash. She grimaced when she saw it. The colour pink was her least favourite colour now, it only sickened her. She was going to get some contact lenses as soon as possible to mask the pink eyes. The colour pink, for Dash, was officaily out of the rainbow.
"There! Now, a two part sleeper…" Triumphed Pinkie.
"A two part sleeper? Do you even get those? I mean, I've heard of normal sleepers but-" Dash was interrupted by Pinkie.
"Rule 3: Baby talk, or ask nicley and address me as Miss Pie, but I will answer your question. " Commanded Pinkie in a teacher tone of voice. She held up what looked like the top of a sleeper. At the bottom of it it had two button holes on each side at the back and front. Then she held up up the bottom of a sleeper, only it looked like it wouldn't fit her properly, like it would leave a gap from her waist to her crotch when on. Then she saw that there long pieces of what seemed like ribbon, on each side at the back and front of the bottoms. They looked about the size of the distance between her waist and crotch. They had buttons on the end of the ribbons.
Pinkie put the top part on dash. It fitted nicley and went to her waist. Pinkie put the bottom halves on and picked of the ribbons from each 'half' of the trouser and bottomed them in the correct slots. To dash, it seemed like wearing a pair of trousers that were to small, so the crotch on the bottoms was inches away from the real crotch.
"Miss Pie?" Asked Dash.
"Yes?" Replied Pinkie.
"Do I have to go out in public like this?" Interrogated Rainbow Dash.
"Yes, you do. You will be in a stroller and you will have your-oh, I forgot!" She picked up an object from a table.
"You will have your pacifier. Now be quiet and have a nice rest!"Pinkie then forced the rubber part through her mouth. She attached a special strap, forcing it to stay there.
"Goodnight, Dashie!"

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-02-22 22:18:17 UTC

the next part

Rainbow Dash woke up, two-part sleeper on, dummy in mouth. Suprisingly, Dash actually got a good sleep. She had not slept like that in years. To be correct, she slept like a baby. She looked down at her mare-parts and realized the garment that Pinkie had put on her the day before was wet. She was just about to go and scream "Pinkie, get me out of here! If you are not going to let me go, at least change me!" but then she remembered the rules. The garment was thought reading....Pinkie had worked on it for years....for just any reason that she could think of. A light spray of the powder kicked in and Dash began to itch a bit, but like Pinkie had said, it was far too thick. She began to cry a little as she thought about her fate in this gloomy basement of Sugar Cube Corner, also the itching powder pain got worse. Pinkie heard the quiet sobs, she had put up a monitor. Pinkie came into the basement in her cutie-mark sown goonie, and smiled. Part of this little 'punishment game' was the phycological terror as well. Rainbow Dash looked up at Pinkie's evily smiling face, and to her surprise, Pinkie picked her up, using some amount of strength, and began rocking her in the arms. Dash kicked a bit, she wanted to kill the freak, and Pinkie then picked up the strong itching powder remote and flicked the switch to '15 minutes'.

"Naughty baby! Naughty baby!" Pinkie scolded. "This will be your punishment, naughty babies need to learn! Prepare for 15 minutes of torture, little Dashie!"

"Oh Celestia." Rainbow Dash thought. She had just went through five minutes of painful itching powder, and now she needed to

go through another 15 minutes of extreme torture and pain and irritation? Pinkie put Dash back into a cot, and got some leather straps, to make sure she couldn't move and had to take 15 minutes of unbearable, unstoppable torture. She was sooo hungry.... she hadn't eaten or drank in a day. Thinking about only seemed to make the fifteen minutes longer

The fifteen minutes were worse than Dash imagined. Then Pinkie came back, and this time she was grateful for her.

"I'm sorry Pinkie I'm- Oh, I mean I'm sowwy Miss Pie, I'm sowwy. I'll neva do it again." Dash said in baby talk. Pinkie smiled.

"Let's try this morning again, shall we? Okay.... Good morning Dashie, had a good sleep?