Chapters Spiral Ponies Ch.1 (Revised)
Spiral Ponies: Ch.1
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I was so happy right now, I had just beaten the lord of fire, Lord Vanaduke. I was standing right above the core staring and what was the last thing the alpha squad was seeing before they disappeared, all I saw was a big metal ball with a giant hatch. I turned too walk away but then I saw a light, I turned around and saw the hatch was slightly open. I jumped down and I use some of my shock weapons to electrify my boots so I don’t fall off. I turn away from the hatch and then out of no where I feel my self being pulled into it, I took out my “Cold Iron Vanquisher” and stabbed it into the metal but sadly I didn’t make a dent and I ended up flying into the light.
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Today was a great day in Fluttershy’s opinion, Most of the animals were asleep including Angel (her pet white rabbit) but what she did not expect was the loud boom she heard. At first she thought it was Rainbow Dash making sure her Sonic Rainboom wasn’t getting rusty, But when she stepped out side she didn’t see the rainbow in the sky, She turned around too see a grey ball of sorts fall from the sky and land meaby a mile away from her cottage in the Everfree Forest. At first she was to scared to go, but then she thought of the animals that might be hurt which got her motivated too go. She burst off worried if an animal might have been killed!
She saw a line of trees all broken and some seem too be slightly burning. She put out the burning trees and then approached a crater in the ground, Probley what caused all this chaos. When she looked inside she was shocked too see some kind of creature laying there it seemed too be barley breathing and it seemed too have a broken leg, When she got closer she saw it had two kinds of weapons, one a very large sword that had chains bound too it and a yellow, grey, and slightly off white do-hicky as Pinkie Pie would say. She picked him up (she thought it was male cause of the body build and how it seemed muscular) and threw him on her back. He seemed slightly heavy but the oddest thing happened, the weapons disappeared as if they disintegrated. She started moving as fast as she could with the new creature on her back. She thanked Celestia she wasn’t attacked by anything when she got back. She set the creature on her couch where it rest and she saw it was slowly breathing and decided to get some medicine.
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I woke up with a pounding head ache. I slowly opened my eyes and saw a roof and I also smelt the scent of animals, and sure enough when I turned my head there was a white bunny taping his foot. "Um...hello?" I said. He just stopped taping and walked away which look adorable since he was a bunny. I tried to move my legs into a more comfortable position but when I moved them. "YEE-OW!" I screamed. Almost immediately a small yellow horse, a pony I am guessing since thats what they taught us back in school to call a small horse, came rushing too me. What surprised me is it had wings, what surprised me more is it talked! "Oh my gosh! Are you alright?" It asked me. "Y-yeah. But how are you talking? Am I dreaming?" I said a little shocked from the talking pony.
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Fluttershy was stunned. The strange creature was talking. "Umm whats your name? You know if you don’t mind me asking..." She asked getting quieter as she spoke. "Well my code name is Legend Wing, But my team mates call me Wing. Whats yours?" Wing Said. "My name is Fluttershy..." She said so low she was surprised that he caught it. "Fluttershy? Thats a cute name." Wing said. Wing slowly turned in the couch so he could sit up and make eye contact with Fluttershy. "So umm do you know where I am?" Wing asked. "Well you in my cottage which is right outside Ponyville which is in the wide world of Equestria." Fluttershy said. "So I am on a different world? Wow..." Wing said seeming to be a little sad. "Is there anything you need?" Fluttershy asked. "Well I am a little tired, can I go to bed?" Wing asked. "Sure." Fluttershy responded and handed Wing a blanket. "Good night" Fluttershy said after seeing out side her window that it was dark. "Good night." Wing said back before closing his eyes and falling asleep.
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The next mourning Wing could smell something being cooked. He got up and slowly (while wobbling a bit) too the kitchen where he saw Fluttershy making some breakfast for her animals. "Oh good mourning Wing" She said too him. "Good mourning Fluttershy." Wing responed. "Wing can you stay and make sure my home dosen't fall apart? I need too go get some Groceries." Fluttershy asked. "Sure I can do that." Wing said. Fluttershy put food for all the animals and then said good bye before leavening. "Now what to do till she gets back. Hmm..." Wing said while looking at something that looked like a TV. He saw the remote on the coffe table and turned on the TV to a channel called "Equestria Channel" and he sat there and watched TV totally captivated by the amazeing creatures being shown on the screen.
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Fluttershy returned seeing a certain person in a type of trance with her TV sitting next to Angel. Fluttershy giggled as she turned off the TV. "Aw it was getting too the good part!" Wing whined. Fluttershy stiffled a laugh. "Help me unpack groceries and you can go back too the TV." Fluttershy said. "Ok." Wing said. Later they finished and Wing went back too the TV he didn't miss much. *Knock Knock* was all that could be heard from the door.
Spiral Ponies Ch.2 (Revised)
Previously on Spiral ponies.
Legend-Wing Finally made it too the core, But for reason unknown it without warning opened up and swallowed him. He awoke on the coach of a yellow winged pony. Its been 1 day since his arrival, But can his sanity last? Who was it that was knocking on the door at the end of the last chapter?! FIND OUT HERE!
After wing had heard the knock he ducked behind the coach where he wasn’t in view of the door. "Angel can you sit on the coach please?" Wing asked the white rabbit who was noming on a little snack. Angel complied grabbed his carrot and hoped onto the coach. "Thanks man I owe you one." Wing said. Angel simply nodded his head. Fluttershy walked up too the door and opened it too reveal her friend Twilight Sparkle. "Oh umm hi Twilight." Fluttershy said in her casual timid voice. "Hey Fluttershy. Did you see the meteor yesterday?" Twilight asked. "Why yes, but umm i am too afraid too go check it out..." Fluttershy said. She knew what had fallen was now hiding right behind her, but she felt like he needed more time because it was obvious he wasn’t from here and who knows how he will react too other ponies.
Twilight said her goodbyes and went too go see the meteor site. As Fluttershy was closing the door she herd someone call her name. "Hey Fluttershy! Wait a second!" She recognized the voice of her best friend Rainbow Dash. "Oh hi Rainbow." The yellow pegasus said too her cyan friend. "Fluttershy guess what!" Rainbow said with a look of excitement that would put anime school girls too shame. "What is it Rainbow?" Fluttershy asked. "I have two tickets for a wonderbolts show in cloadsdale!" She said in a tone that would REALLY put anime school girls too shame. "That’s great! I am happy for you Rainbow." She said in her shy enthusiasm voice. "Come on its gonna start in 2 hours!" Rainbow said. "Alright just let me get a few things set up. You can go ahead and go too the stadium I will catch up." Fluttershy said not wanting to slow down her friend. "Alright but don't take too long Fluttershy." And with that Rainbow lept and flew too the stadium. "Ok you can come out now." Fluttershy said. "A Wonderbolts show? What’s a Wonderbolt?" Wing asked with a dumbfounded look on his face. "Their Equestria's top pegasi that have become Princess Celestia's Personal air preformers." Fluttershy said. "Oh that sounds so cool!" Wing said with an excited look on his face. "But how will I fly up there?” Wing asked. “Hmm, do you have an idea?” Fluttershy asked as Wing got a ‘idea’ look on his face. “Yes!” Wing said excitedly. With a flash of light wing now had a cloak and hood of sorts with stars on them. “Wow. What is that?” Fluttershy asked completely amazed. “Its called ‘Miracle Armor” it said its grants one miracle though I have seen it save me a lot more times then that.” Wing said.
After about 20 minuets they finally made it too the stadium with an hour and forty minuets too spare. FLuttershy secretly helped wing onto a cloud placed right over the stadium before hand without anyone noticing, not even Rainbow Dash. So Fluttershy and Rainbow talked but Rainbow did most of the talking since Fluttershy isn't comfortable in public or crowds. The buzzer sounded the start of the show. High above Wing had a good look at the area, It kinda reminded him of how he had too spy on gremlin scientist once. Then the show started...
"FILLIES AND GENTALCOLTS! Welcome! To the greatest show! IN EQUESTRIA! These pegasi are the fastest most agile most co-operative team in all of Equestria! Stomp your hooves for...THE WONDERBOLTS!" The speaker pony said. All the ponies in the stadium stomped their hooves as the Wonderbolts flew out. They did spin and dives and a whole assortment of tricks! Wing felt he was watching a space race like in his old world where Knights would race different space crafts. Then a tragedy happened...
A loud screech was heard and a lighting bolt struck all the wonder bolts and high above was 2 griffons both bearing and evil grin. Rainbow Dash recognized one of the griffons as her ex-friend Gilda but she could not tell who her other friend was. "Oh hi Rainbow crash!" Gilda said in a mocking tone. "I told you I would come back and pay you back for making me look like a fool! Yeah this time i am paying you and your loser friends back! (She had a fight with Rainbow right before she left ponyville) And I brought my big bro this time." She said as she was pointing at the second griffon. "Hey Rainbow is not a loser! She super duper cool! And she will be cooler then you can ever be you stupid bird!" This small rant came from a small young orange filly who was with two other fillies who were next too a white unicorn, and small mix of orange and yellow earth pony and a pink earth pony which Gilda remembered as Pinkie pie, Rarity, And Applejack. "Scootaloo is right! Your just a big mean poopy bird!" Said a small white filly with a white coat and a mix of white, purple, and light pink in her mane and tail. "You said it Sweetie Belle! Mah family would neva take a rude bird like yerself in out home unless we were desperate too eat!" Said a filly with a yellow coat and red mane. "Applebloom hush now." Said Applejack. Gilda was infuriated by the insults and swoop down and grabbed the fillies and flew over the ring and dropped them so they would fall too the earth. Wing was pissed very pissed, That griffion took 3 children and just dropped them. He was gonna remember this when he came back with the children. Wing took out his grapple gun and shot a cloud and zip lined too the fillies as fast as he could.
(To help the mood listen to "Faint" By linkin Park) As Wing got closer and closer to the 3 screaming fillies and reached out and slowly re-caught them all. He broke the first line and shot a new on right above were the fillies were seated and turned on the wheel in the hook of the zip line so it took him upward. After returning to the three ponies these fillies were originally with, he turned and zip lined too a cloud right in front of Gilda. Only too be intercepted by the Second griffon. "What do they call you?" Asked Wing. "They call me Black Fang. You?" Asked Fang. "I am Legend Wing but you may call me Wing. Now if you excuse me I have someone on my list that needs to die." Wing said in a dark tone. "I cant let you do that too my sister!" Fang said backing up and letting out a fierce screech. "You got claws. *He took out his Antiguna* I got guns." Wing said pointing his revolver at the Screaming griffon and pulling the trigger pumping 6 shots of lead into the griffon. The griffon merely fell from the sky and landed on a cloud turning it red with his blood. Gilda was crying for her brother's death. She looked up and bolted at Wing. Wing as a response kicked the griffon too stun her. Letting his gun ‘dissolve’ into his bag of gear he summoned his most favored sword, His Cold Iron Vanquisher. Wing leaped and made on single slash through the loud mouth griffon between her torso and lower legs. Her two parts fell and landed probley a few meters from her brother’s. Everypony in the stadium saw Wing's brutal display...including Princess Celestia, and her younger sister Princess Luna.
Spiral Ponies Ch.3 (Revised)
Last time on Spiral Ponies
Wing had killed not one but two griffons. Gilda and her brother Black Fang met very painful deaths. He did it in front of the whole stadium of Cloadsdale...and the Royal Alicorn Sisters, Luna and Celestia. How will Wing explain him self? FIND OUT HERE!
"Oh well this isn't good." Stated Wing and he was being led by the two royal sisters too the throne room. Behind him were the Six Elements of Harmony, What was interesting too him is Fluttershy was kindness which made sense since she was so kind to him when he was hurt. Once they were in the throne room the two alicorns sat in their seats.
"So what are you, A assassin, hunter, creature from the Everfree forest?" Princess Celestia asked.
"First off, I am none of those things. My name is Legend Wing. I am a knight of the spiral order. How I came here is because of an ancient artifact that was found on the planet my race is trapped on cause we have no energy too power our ship. The artifact is called 'The Core' for it is located at the center of the planet." Wing said
"So you came here by mistake? And why did you kill two griffons!" Twilight said in a concerned tone.
"Twi, He saved mah sister and tah other cutie mark crusaders." Applejack said trying too calm her friend.
"Its true darling, If he hadn’t done what he did, Well I just don't know how I would live without my sister!" Rarity said with a hint of worry dripping from her sentence.
"So Wing, Why did you kill Gilda and her brother?" Celestia said.
“I was doing what I believed was right, in my world doing such an act would have down right gotten you killed on the spot.” Wing said while stomping his foot down too emphasize his point.
"What you committed was murder." Celestia said flatly.
"I stopped a potential murderer. If I had not done what I did you would have 3 dead children and a griffon terrorizing everyone!
"Don't you know who they are?! Their royalty of this world!" Twilight said almost going ballistic.
“Well then, why did you not act when the fillies were falling Princesses. You have wings why did you not use them?!” Wing said in a infuriated tone as he turned and walked away.
"Why the nerve!" Rarity said with a dramatic gasp.
"Why I outa!" Rainbow said about too charge at him until her tail was caught by Applejack. "Let go AJ!" Rainbow yelled.
"No can do sugar cube, Listen ah think we may be biting more then we can chew here. Why not give him a chance? He is obviously like this cause he never had the chance too stop and enjoy life, It was obviously on going pain. Fluttershy, Can you take him in for a while?" AJ asked.
"Umm ok, I'll try..." She said in her timid voice.
"Alright. Applejack I prey your plan works, But if he crosses the line i am relying on you my faithful student too alert me." Celestia said. “I also want you too stay with him and Fluttershy till we can determine if he is trust worthy.”
"You can count on me princess!" Twilight said.
I am sorry to say it ladies and gentalmen, But i havent been playing SK in a while and therefor i havent been able to come up with new idea with this story. I also don't like how i started it and such. For now I'm gonna cancell this story, meaby I will come back to it but as of now...I just can't.
